GetDare Progressive Story - Discussion

[KansasRush]

You can find the story by itself here (http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=76808).



I don't know if this has been done before and I don't much care if it has.

Basically this is going to be a 'truth or dare' story that I will write but it the characters it features will be GetDare members.

So if you want to be a character in this story just leave a post (at any time) stating a few things. I will give an example:

My character's name is Dr Kansas Rush (like my username) he is a psychiatrist specialising in fetishes who occasionally dabbles in his patients' extreme obsessions.

Thus Dr Kansas Rush would appear in the story in that capacity. Get it?

I will write the first chapter as soon as I have two or three characters.

If everyone ignores this thread I will weep slowly into my cereal... :(
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OFFICIAL CHARACTER LIST

Dr Kansas Rush(KansasRush)- a psychiatrist specialising in fetishes who occasionally dabbles in his patients' extreme obsessions.

Mikey 'Madman' Blank(Blank)- One of Rush's patients, a hero fire-fighter with a penchant for being spanked.

Richard K Vexus(Vexus)- A sociopathic serial rapist who's also an expert at evading the law.

The Almighty(AlmightyElemental)- A delusional escaped mental patient who believes himself to be God and commands women with that misplaced authority.

Nerdy(MR.Not To Nerdy)- A computer hacker who sometimes works with the authority but sometimes uses his skill for his own perverse reasons.

Rachie Wright(Rachie)- A sweet and innocent young girl who, desperately searching for her missing father, falls in with a rough crowd.

Zac Shield(Zac)- Teen heartthrob who, at the age of 17, has developed an insatiable sex addiction.

Sammi 'Dangerous' Deneuve(Dangerous)- A female police officer noted for her no shit approach to catching the bad guys (and girls).

Sonia Kaylawski(~~Kayla~~)- Fun loving girl who harbours a secret obsession with going to the nightclub for illicit thrills.

Bear(DancingBear)- Exotic dancer at the nightclub, despite looking young and sweet Bear's a real man-eater.

[Blank]

Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee =D

[Leopard]

Moved to Author's Cafe.

[KansasRush]

Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee =D

Could you provide me with a teeny weeny bit more information about your character? Or are you literally a blank? :p

[Blank]

Urm I have no idea =) surprise me =)

[KansasRush]

Urm I have no idea =) surprise me =)

Consider it done! ;)

More please!

[AlmightyElemental]

I am a man who simply refers to himself as "The Almighty". He believes himself to be a god and therefore, expects women to do absolutely everything he commands or they will "FEAR HIS HOLY WRATH". The result is usually as unrewarding for him as you'd expect.

[MR.Not To Nerdy]

you can call me nerdy, and just use your imagination on my character :D

[KansasRush]

CHAPTER ONE

‘I just wanted to feel her hand on my flesh. It wasn’t anything crazy, Doc, trust me. I just liked the way it felt.’ Slowly his eyes found their way from the floor to the face of the doctor who he was paying $70 an hour to see.

His name was Mikey Blank and his friends knew him as ‘Madman’. Last year alone he had rescued seven children from fires where it seemed impossible that they would escape. To celebrate he visited hookers who would beat his ass until the marks were more prominent than the burns that he wore as patriotic badges of his profession.

Dr Rush looked as his patient through his scratched old spectacles and sighed. There was nothing to be gained here, he thought. I might as well fix this deluded freak. The previous evening Rush had enjoyed an hour of mercilessly beating one of his former patients, a woman who loved the sensation of blood in her mouth. It had been a fantastic hour and the culmination of months of pointless treatment. I’d get no satisfaction out of spanking this creep, he thought to himself glumly.

‘Alright Mikey, let’s hook you up to the machine.’

_ _ _

Sonia is beautiful. Sonia is young. Sonia is full breasted and endlessly desired by men.

But Sonia is being followed by two men. These men don’t know each other, don’t know how linked their stories will become but they both want Sonia and consequently follow her.

She pauses at the corner of her street, convinced she heard a noise. There’s nothing more to hear but the sound of the drunks and vagrants which carry in the night air. She moves on and the two men follow her.

Her key jangles in the lock of her front door and all of a sudden a man is upon her.

‘I am The Almighty!’ he shouts, ‘Kneel before me!’

Sonia looks around in terror and, in a flash, withdraws a can of mace from her handbag. This withdrawal takes places just as The Almighty removes his penis from his trousers and in the shock of this sight Sonia finds the mace pointed towards his genitals. She sprays.

From the shadows the second man watches. Sonia was lucky that the delusional mental patient approached her first. This second man is dangerous. His name Richard K Vexus and the police call him ‘Dirty Dick’. He’s the most dangerous rapist in the city, having played a game of cat and mouse with the cops for five years. He watches in silence as The Almighty falls to the ground clutching his reddened balls. Sonia, his prey, slips into the safety of her home.

He turns and walks off. He’ll get her soon.

_ _ _

‘Hello?’ Nerdy picks up the phone whilst using his free hand to stuff another slice of pizza into his mouth.

‘Is this Nerdy?’ Says a deep, gravelly voice.

‘Yep’ he says, his mouth scolded by the hot cheese, ‘who’s this?’

‘That doesn’t matter. You work for a fee don’t you?’ Silence. Nerdy closes his eyes and thinks for a second.

‘I could do. Depends what the job is? You’re not the police are you because I’m through working with you guys. You didn’t even offer me a proper pension plan!’ He declares with the confidence of righteous indignation.

‘No pension plan here. I need you to find out everything you can about a certain girl. I’ll make sure you’re rewarded for your time, better than those filthy coppers could reward you.’ Nerdy sits up straight and grabs a notepad and pen.

‘Alright. Tell me everything you know about her.’

‘Her name’s Sonia.’

[MR.Not To Nerdy]

i like this so far :)

[Blank]

hahahahahahhahahahaha I love it =D

[KansasRush]

Cheers guys! I'll write a second chapter soon...

Would be good to get some more people involved... ;)

[Rachie]

I think you may require a young SWEET & INNOCENT girl called RACHIE.

very nice idea so far

Keep writing

[Leopard]

I think you may require a young SWEET & INNOCENT girl called RACHIE.

very nice idea so far

Keep writing

But then the sweet and innocent girl would have your name o.o



Also note that I did move this to Author's Cafe as it's discussion - you may want to post the actual story in a new thread in the fiction section.

[zac]

this is sucha great idea :') hmm if it's not to late....you can have a 'Zac' who is obviously amaazzinnngggggg handsome :P hmmm and get's lots of hot girls ....has lots of sex.....few more girls.....a bit more passionate sex. that's about it really :O xx :P

[KansasRush]

Rachie and Zac added. It's never too late. Some characters will come, some will go, the whole thing will be one giant web of intrigue.


Also note that I did move this to Author's Cafe as it's discussion - you may want to post the actual story in a new thread in the fiction section.

That sounds difficult/confusing :p

[Dangerous]

Heh. I liked it.

[Dangerous]

Add me as a character. Go insane with mine :).

[KansasRush]

CHAPTER TWO


‘You look like you could do with a drink, sweet cheeks.’

‘I’m fine, thank you.’

Rachie looks around. The nightclub is packed full of sweating, gyrating bodies but none that she recognises. The man who, moments ago, had been offering her a drink is now distracted by a different woman. She is, momentarily, alone.

She stomps over to the bar, her plimsolls slapping inaudibly against the dancefloor. She catches the bartenders eye.

‘A Coke please!’ She says. The bartender nods and begins pouring out her drink. Seconds later that same drink is being slid across to her and the bartender leans over so that she can hear him speak.

‘You from out of town?’ She nods and sips her drink. She splutters and looks up at the bartender.

‘What’s in this?’ She says.

‘Vodka and Coke, like you asked.’ He smiles at her. In a different light, she thinks, he would be really very pretty. But right now she is full of fear at what the alcohol, that forbidden substance, might do to her. Her eyes fill with tears and the bartender jumps back in alarm.

‘I just wanted a Coke’ She sobs.

Suddenly a man, older, greyer and more bespectacled than she will ever be is by her side pushing the drink back to the bartender and pulling up a stool for the weeping teenager. She looks up at him, her moon round eyes brimming with unshed tears.

‘Don’t worry, I’m a doctor’ Rush says.

_ _ _

14 year old girls hump his legs as he stalks across the stage. His white jacket reflects the blue and orange lights that are shining on him. The odour of hairspray has become part of his life, he cannot remember a time when the smell of it did not haunt his nostrils.

‘BREAK!’ The director screams and Zac bounces off the stage and out the back door where he can be alone. He sighs and pulls out his phone, tapping in some long memorised numbers and waiting.

‘Hello?’ Says the voice at the other end. Deep, gravelly.

‘Vexus. It’s Zac. I need tail tonight. Honestly my cock is about to fall off if you don’t get me someone.’ As if in response to his own words his hands shifts south to readjust his crotch.

‘You’re in a room filled with jailbait who would die to get a shot at you and you’re asking me to hook you up?’ The voice snarls back at him.

‘You know what I like man. I like the older chicks, MILFS, whatever. I have all the girls my own age I could ever want. You owe me as well dude, so hook me up tonight!’ There’s the ghost of an angry retort in the air but Zac hangs up before he can hear it.

_ _ _

ACCESS DENIED

Nerdy squints at the computer screen. Something doesn’t at up. He runs the program again. This time, this time it must work, this time he’s sure he’ll crack it. Zeros, ones and unrelated words flash along the screen in a ticker tape.

ACCESS DENIED

‘Fuck!’ Nerdy curses, grabbing a bag of Doritos before filling his face and setting off to work again.

[~~Kayla~~]

I'm Kayla, the fun girl everyone likes.....but no one knows of her secret obsession with "getDare"......

[Leopard]

I MOVED IT BACK AGAIN LOL

>.> carry on

[KansasRush]

I MOVED IT BACK AGAIN LOL

>.> carry on

...and I created a dedicated story thread. So now we have two threads in the same area!

What a mess, what a damn fine mess... :rolleyes:

[Leopard]

Oh woops. MOVED IT BACK AGAIN AGAIN LOL


I updated your links linking the two back and forth and renamed them a bit :3

[KansasRush]

New characters have been added and a new chapter is online!
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CHAPTER THREE


‘Her name’s Sonia Kaylawski. Second generation Polish immigrants. She works at Sun’s-Up Insurance Company and seems, according to staff assessments, to be very good at her job. A couple of boyfriends since college, nice clean cut type- no route in there. I’m led to believe that all the partings have been amicable. I don’t think I’ve ever looked in to someone so uninteresting to both police and criminals. She’s a little ray of light it appears’

Vexus clenches his first. This isn’t the news he wanted to hear. He likes a difficult game but there needs to be a way in.

‘Fine. I want you to get me a security pass for her workplace and a key for her home.’ He says before making a move to hang up the phone.

‘Wait a minute!’ Nerdy says tensely, ‘That’s just not possible. I mean, do you understand the hours I’d have to put in in order to get you those things?’

‘Just do it. I know where you live, don’t I?’ He hangs up.

Nerdy gulps.

_ _ _

The music is still pulsing and Rachie feels a little sick but is glad to have respectable company. Rush leans over and whispers in her ear.

‘So, Rachie, where are you from?’ She smiles at him, her mind drifting back to the days she spent up north, outside of the city.

‘I’m from the north. Little town, little house, little family. It was lovely. I’m going to head back as soon as I’m done here, it’s too busy and,’ She puts a hand to her ear, ‘noisy for me!’ Rush stares her straight in the eyes and nods.

‘So why are you here in the first place?’ He asks. He has to repeat himself so that the message gets across but, eventually, Rachie understands.

‘I’m looking for my father. He came down here for work a year ago and I haven’t heard from him since. He used to call every day and write once a week but a couple of months in the calls and letters dried up. No word from him since. I called his office and they said he had quit and that no one had heard from him. The only place, other than at the office, that people seemed to ever see him was here. So I thought I’d start my search here.’ Rush frowns at this story. This level of psycho-melodrama is neither what he expected nor wanted.

‘This city can be a bitch, Rachie. Don’t get your hopes up about finding him. I come to DARE every night and I’ve never spoken to an office worker from up north. They’re mostly bandits and rapists in here.’ Rachie’s pupils dilate in shock.

‘I need to use the toilet she says’.

As she enters the loos she realises two things. First how filthy they are and secondly that there’s another girl in there, fixing her makeup in front of a mirror. The girl looks about 15 to Rachie’s eye but is wearing nothing but a thong and bra. Rachie moves to the sink next to her and washes her face where the makeup has been dislodged by tears.

The scantily clad girl looks down at the intruder with a look of knowing sympathy on her face.

‘Are you ok?’ No reply, ‘Was it one of the guys? Don’t worry if they try and cop a feel. If you let them use their hands it’ll stop them using their dicks.’

Rachie looks up at the girl and frowns, her face still covered by water. But the girl just smiles back at her and extends a small, delicate hand.

‘I’m Bear, or you can call me B. I’m a dancer here at DARE and, by the looks of things, precisely the friend you need.’ Rachie splutters a little but shakes Bear’s hand and introduces herself, ‘So,’ Bear says, ‘Have you met anyone nice here yet? If you’re looking for a sugar daddy then this is the wrong place. That said, ‘She raises her eyebrows, ‘I did see Zac Shield in here a couple of nights ago. Nah, they’re mostly lecherous drunks in here but they’re alright for a bit of cash and half an orgasm,’ She looks down at Rachie confused by the lack of reaction, ‘Unless you’re look for a girl?’

Rachie looks up, ‘No, not really looking for anyone. Well, actually I am but it’s a long story.’

It’s Bear’s turn to frown, ‘Well I’ve got to get back on stage, little Lolita needs to work her curves, but if you’re still around afterwards you can tell me everything. You look like you could use a friend. And, ‘She adds, walking to the door, ‘Don’t talk to anyone who looks to clever to be a drunk!’

She exits and Rachie lets out a brief smile.

_ _ _

‘Hey bud! What up?’ Zac smacks the palm of a man he has never met but who is queuing patiently for the nightclub. When he gets to the bouncer the smile at one another and bump fists.

‘Come on in Zac my man!’ He explains and Zac takes a step forward, intending to enter DARE. But a hand grabs his shoulder and pulls him back. The hand belongs to a woman and, to Zac’s eye, a very attractive one with shoulder length blonde her and a crooked, knowing smile.

‘Hi there! Want an autograph?’ He says with a grin, showing off a perfect set of white teeth. She smiles back at him.

‘I was wondering if I can have a word with you. In private.’ She adds as if it needs to be said.

‘Of course you can, I’ll never deny that to a fan. Can’t we go in the club and talk there. I could really use a drink after the day I’ve had.’ He smiles again but this time it is not reciprocated.

‘I think you’re a little young to be going to nightclubs,’ She says and opens one half of her jacket. Zac sees a glimmering silver detective badge pinned to the side.

‘Fuck!’ He says scampering away with her out of earshot of the queuing patrons, ‘I can’t get nicked right now. I’ve got a promotional tour coming up and my publicist would literally cut my ball sack open.’ He winces at the mere thought of it.

‘I’ve got no interest in arresting you. You didn’t even go inside. No, Zac, I want to talk to you.’ She smiles at him and takes out a cigarette. She offers him one and lights them both. She takes a long drag from her cigarette, ‘That’s right. My name’s Detective Deneuve but you call me Sammi if you like.’

‘Sure’ He says, nervously.

‘I just want to talk.’

[Embii]

Oooh, if there's any more room I'd like a character? Nice story by the way. Umm, someone sweet and innocent but surprisingly ferocious and feisty when she meets someone she doesn't like/respect? That sounds a bit like me, :L

[princessjessie]

this is sucha great idea :') hmm if it's not to late....you can have a 'Zac' who is obviously amaazzinnngggggg handsome :P hmmm and get's lots of hot girls ....has lots of sex.....few more girls.....a bit more passionate sex. that's about it really :O xx :P

ZACX!!! whats this? where am i? xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[KansasRush]

Probably not going to write another chapter until Monday because I'm away for the weekend with only my iPad and that's a totally bitch to write on (or at least write anything longer than this post...).

[daremaster 1]

Probably not going to write another chapter until Monday because I'm away for the weekend with only my iPad and that's a totally bitch to write on (or at least write anything longer than this post...).

Well I cant wait till then!

[Dangerous]

I like my hard core role :)

[Blank]

I like the fact my character is such a badass then he goes and pays hookers to bash his ass in hahahah

[submissiver]

Can I be in it? *Raises right eyebrow*
Please? *Oliver Twist impression*
You can make me anything, thanks in advance.

*Wins the award for first on page*
"I'd like to thank the academy, my parents and my girlfriend Lily in believing in-"
*Faints*

[KansasRush]

Can I be in it? *Raises right eyebrow*
Please? *Oliver Twist impression*
You can make me anything, thanks in advance.

*Wins the award for first on page*
"I'd like to thank the academy, my parents and my girlfriend Lily in believing in-"
*Faints*

Sure ;)

I apologise for slow updates but I'm really busy at the moment. I will find time as soon as possible.

Hold your breaths.

[Blank]

lol, its been a while now =)

[submissiver]

I smell an abandoned post, tut tut tut.