Hell [FICTION]

[Trystaan]

This is based on a true story but I have jazzed it up a lot.
If any one has any Ideas they would like to see in the story i would be happy to try and involve them in


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Part 1




I read the invitation Claire had given me, it was your straight forward party invitation my house, sleep over that sort of stuff. While at home my Mum said it was ok and on that night I set off to Claire’s. My first mistake. When we arrived I was greeted normally and entered the house to see Claire looking beautiful and my two friends Jack and Marcus. Within half an hour or so all the guests had arrived. There were 3 girls Lauren, Claire and Bridie. The guys were Jack, Ben, Marcus and I. Lauren was a stunning girl who had a model contract. She was 5, 6 with long flowing blonde hair and curves in all the right places. Claire was quite a bit shorter with brunette hair wasn’t so well endowed as Lauren but still looked very nice. Bridie was about 5, 4 and had the biggest breasts of them all; I would love to get a bit of action on them.

So here we are. Claire’s back garden. No parents home getting drunk out of our heads when Claire decides we should probably go to the room where we would be sleeping that night.

The rest of the night became a blur. I vaguely remember Truth or Dare and quite a few more drinks but as we grew drunker and drunker we got more tired and eventually we went to sleep. Mistake Number 2.


When I woke up everything around me was dark and it was hard to see anything in detail, as I focused though I could see more and I appeared to be in some dimly lit basement with strange objects and shapes surrounding me. Suddenly to my right I heard a cruel laugh, a laugh full of hatred and evil. The lights turned on and burned my eyes when I opened them I saw something I had only read about on the cruellest of sites and I thought to myself.


OH SHIT

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Part 2 coming soon if people want to read more.

[ManicD]

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[Lucifer87]

good start, it has potential, the only thing i dont like is the end "I saw something I had only read about on the cruellest of sites" whereas it seems like yoru either skipping to the end of teh story to fast or over dramatising whats gonna happen next.

also you might concider adding some information about the character, m/f age? description? etc

[Kitty]

did you copy this story or it written by you

[Trystaan]

That was to try and leave it on a cliffhanger so people would want to read more but whatever any one else says goes so thanks Lucifer


Kitty this was written by me and it is based on MY real life experience except it will be jazzed up alot.

[Isabell]

Interesting, this has quite a bit of potential. Keep it up. I look forward to reading more.

[Trystaan]

Yay someone part from Lucifer kinda likes it

Part 2 should either come tonight or tomorrow morning

[Trystaan]

Sorry just had no insparation.

There was a vast room before me, very dark and dusty. Racks on the walls holding evil looking objects. Then i saw them: Claire Briddie and Loren standing about 10 feet to the side of me boy they looked stunning. Claire from head to toe in black latex, Briddie with a crop and riding boots. The loren with a short sexy black skirt and a matching tank top. The sight of her gave me a raging hard on. I looked over so had Marcus and Jack. I could't see Ben anywhere. I turned back and asked them 'Wheres ben?' Immeadiatly briddie walked up to me and slapped me in the face. 'Who the fuck do you think you are you dirty fucking slave' ' Ben's gone' she added 'He's Lucky'. 'What the hell are you doing' Briddie had started to walk away she turned back sharply and walked towards Marcus unlocked him then the same with jack. They were given back there clothes and Claire escorted them out of the room.

'From now on you will call us Miss' she spat at me 'Do you understand'. 'What the hell' I reapeated in a stunned voice.

'Rite that's it Loren punish him and make it hurt!'


Loren walked up to me with a cat'o' nine tails in her hand. She whipped me viciously for what seemed like an age. When she drew blood 'STOP!' i screamed. 'Stop what Slave' Stop Please.... miss' I added with a tinge of humiliation in my voice'

'Good' Briddie said 'Stage 1 complete'





What do you guys think. PLease give me positive criticism and any ideas you would like incorporated in the story

[Ciandon]

This is a pretty good story. I'm no author myself, but this looks like it has some potential.

[Trystaan]

Thanks man ( anything I cuould do to improve)

[tissue13]

pretty good-has potentail for an amazing story :D

[Pikachu]

great potential great story if you need any help jsut ask....please keep it up

[molten man]

Keep it going!!!!!

[Trystaan]

Rite part 3

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The 3 girls left turning the lights off. I was left alone in a dark musty ‘dungeon’. How I wished I wasn’t in this mess. I thought about escape but how would I. I was tied up and nude I wouldn’t make 10 feet without being spotted. As I carried on thinking into the night I fell into a deep sleep and curled up on the cold stone floor.

‘GET UP SLAVE NOW’ a shrill voice screamed above me. There was Lauren standing above me with a riding crop and cowgirl spurs. She prodded me a couple of times to make sure I got the idea. She threw some clothes at me and said ‘ I want you in the front room in 5 minutes, Late and you’ll be punished again’

I quickly scrambled to reach the clothes, to my embarrassment they consisted of a thong and French maid outfit. I hurried over to the front room where Briddie and Claire were standing looking as evil and sexy as usual. Then I heard some snaps behind me Lauren was their and she had taken photos of me. ‘You do anything rash and these go everywhere Your parents your friends and over the internet’ ‘Do you understand slave’’Y..yes miss’ I replied stuttering

‘Now you are going to clean the house using only this toothbrush’ she held up a strangely familiar toothbrush’ ‘ Wait that’s mi.. Yes miss Claire’.

Throughout my torment of cleaning the house they took more pictures of me bending over and standing high. I’m going to get them for this I said to myself under my breath.

‘WHAT WAS THAT SLAVE’
‘nothing miss’

‘Rite then lying we don’t take that easily, time for punishment’


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Please as ever any ideas or ways to improve are greatly appreciated

Btw twist in the next part...

[Davros]

Delicious story ;):D

[Trystaan]

Never thought of delicious as a decsribing word for a story but thanks.

Btw if you guys wouldn't mind could you rate the thread

[Davros]

Voted: Deliciously 5 stars!

[Kitty]

best in the earth story lol

[Trystaan]

Part 4 I think you'll enjoy this one.

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They dragged me down to the dungeon where Briddie put on a 4 inch dildo. She introduced this into my virgin ass, using no lube, I screamed in agony. Briddie laughed ‘were only just starting’.

Over the next hour she and the others introduced many objects into my ass. They included a large variety of dildo’s covered with different condiments then the worst a fist.
I cried like a baby, the mixture of chilli and toothpaste burning in my ass and my asshole had been stretched like a common slut.

They left for a bit and I thought of the mess I was in. I wondered whether I would leave this place. Throughout the remainder of the day I was forced to clean and model their slutty outfits many more pictures were taken and I was humiliated further. They left me in the dungeon until I slowly drifted off filled with kinky nightmares ringing through my head.

During the night I was aware of someone moving towards me. I awoke when a gentle hand touched my shoulder. ‘Claire’ I said in astonishment. ‘Shhhh you’ll wake them’ .I understood. She slowly undid the rope. ‘Claire’ ‘I told you to be quiet’
‘But Claire I think you should know’

‘Yes Claire you should have Listened to Trystan here’

Briddie stepped through the shadow followed by Lauren wearing just a lacy black thong and matching Bra.

‘Who has been a naughty girl then’


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Please offer me ideas and positive criticsm as always

xTrYsTaNx

[Pikachu]

great story keep it up :p

[Trystaan]

Sorry for not posting for a while I had a general plot of how I wanted the story to go but i lost it:mad:

So if anyone has any serious ideas please pm me

[Trystaan]

Sorry for not posting for a while.
But here is the next part

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It had been a couple of hours since Claire was caught helping me, now she was strung up naked next to me on a similar bar. Her breasts and pussy were red from where Briddie and Loren had dripped hot wax and played with clothespins while I was made to watch.

Loren came in with a menacing posture she walked over and roughly undid our bindings. 'It is time for you two to give us a show'.

We were led to the front room where Briddie and a few other girls were waiting. we were told there was going to be a competition. We had to give oral to every other person in the room then the judges would decide our fate.

I looked around, 7 stunning girls, Might not be to bad I said to myself. The doorbell rang. Loren went and a few seconds later, after some greeting, 7 big, built guys walked into the lounge. I could see my fantasies falling before my eyes. I knew I could win whatever we were holding and I hoped that it would be a ticket out of this hell.

We started working around the room. The guys all had 8 plus inch cocks and seemed to revel in slamming them into the back of mine and Claire's throats. The girls were much nicer but on a couple I discovered it wasn't so nice, 2 girls were on thier period, and you guess what happened. After we had sucked everyone to orgasm the Judges revealed that I had won the contest. They announced that I would now be private oral to anyone who walked in this house, even Claire, I would also be the lowliest slave of all. Claire had some control over me and she wasn't tied up when we went to living quarters. This experience was getting worse and worse. I decided to cuss the girls behind thier back to see wether I could release any anger. The next morning I was awakened by a sharp stinging blow to my backside. 'You think you can bitch about us you twat. W-what miss. We have this whole place bugged so you are not going to have a pleasent couple of nights scum.

With that she kicked me and left me curled on the floor needing some sleep

[Kitty]

nice story xD wish you would go on soon

[Trystaan]

Ok as I have returned I will be finfishing this story.

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The morning arrived, I woke up and the sunlight burned my eyes. I struggled to get up but my wrists were tied to my ankles. Wait, I recognise this place, this was the local park and I was lying naked about 3 feet away from the main path! ‘Ahh so our slut has woken up then’ Briddie chuckled behind me. ‘Please no Briddie what if my dad or friends see’ SILENCE BITCH. ‘Today you have a choice to make, you can become our lowliest slave ever, service us in every way possible or we leave you here, its up to you. Ok, ok whatever miss I’ll be your bitch please just get me away from here. First you will make me orgasm by using only your tongue. Now this wouldn’t be so bad as Briddie is a good looking girl but it was still in public. I made my way towards her pussy but as I got there she turned around. Go on then slut worship my asshole with your nasty little tongue. I began but the taste was revolting. Meanwhile Lauren as always was taking pictures and laughing while Claire was worshiping her feet. After at least half an hour of performing my disgusting task Briddie finally came and I was made to lick up her juices.

Later back in the house I was forced to cook and clean in a very revealing maids outfit. A few visitors came along and I gave them all oral until orgasm. Then Claire called me in to the front room. I went and the 3 were sitting there. We want you to phone your parents and tell them you’re staying over for half term. So after making my calls they lay down a few more rules. O.k. for the rest of the week you will be wearing a tight white thong and matching bra. Every morning you will fill the bra cups one with chilli sauce and the other with toothpaste. The thong will be full of unwrapped chocolate bars which you will eat at the end of each day. You must go to the toilet in your clothes and clean them using only your tongue at the end o each day. We will give you a mattress to sleep on if you pleasure us all before you go to sleep. You will drink a shot of your cum every morning and evening. Every time you break one of these rules you shall be punished by dildo’s being introduced into your ass each one bigger than the last. You will start tomorrow. Do you understand. ‘Yes Miss’. Good. See you tomorrow.

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Ratings, Rep and suggestions are always appreciated.

xTrYsTaNx

[Bebe_Gurl]

This is really good. +rep I like the daily routines!

[cheesy dude]

great story, i love it. Keep it up. well deserved rep+ :)

[glue]

this is a brillaint story which gets better and better, i think it has great potentual and is brillaint a shining star for storys to follow

independant glue rating 10/10

[Trystaan]

Thanks Guys the Next Part should Be Up tomorrow

[Masters_pet]

i love this so much... great story

[Trystaan]

Right I am very sorry for the long delay in my story . The reason is As my dad used a copied version of Xp for my comp all the office programmes went. So I had to buy a new one. Next part should be up within the hour then I will be looking to post a part every day or 2 days. Always if you have any ideas you want incorporated i the story or maybe youself entering the story. Send me a pm.

[Trystaan]

Ok here it is.

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That night was a rough one. I was having all kinds of devil some nightmares. I woke up in a cold sweat. Claire was still asleep. She looked so good lying there on the floor nude. I softly crept towards her. My cock stirring. I slowly inserted a finger into her tight vagina then two. She was beginning to stir and get wet. I was going to stop but I couldn’t. It had been so long since I had touched Claire. We had being going out a year back. We were an unlikely couple. She was popular I was not within her group. A lot of her friends didn’t think I was good enough for her. That’s what crushed me. She had publicly humiliated me. Just because she cared what people thought. At that moment, I swore revenge. Revenge on her my captors and everyone who had ever embarrassed me. Trystan was about to become a new person. Starting right now.

The Alarm went but I was already awake. Loren and Briddie came in with our breakfast. It looked like runny oatmeal. They took great delight in telling me it had been up their ass while I was eating. I didn’t know if they were joking. They took me upstairs and I was made to put on a white a thong and bra... As promised they put toothpaste in one of the cups and chilli sauce in the other. It burned within minutes. How would I survive for a day? The chocolate bars were put in my thong. 12 in total. Briddie then gave me something I had never experienced before. An anal orgasm. She used 2 heavily lubed fingers and also put one of my fingers in her pussy. When I came Lauren caught it in a jar. It was whisked and I drank it. Claire then made a comment. ‘Miss I think you would like to know what Trystan was doing to me last night’ she said with an evil smirk on her face….


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Please comment rate and give ideas.

Thanks xTrYsTaNx

[52977]

Great story, I really loved the oatmeal bit! +rep

[Trystaan]

As promised a new part. This contains a meaning. To see that meaning read between the lines. The girls ( if any read this apart from Bebe_Girl ) should be better at understanding her point of view. So here it is.

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‘YOU DID WHAT’ Briddie screamed at me her face one of anger and hurt. Almost as If she was holding an emotion inside. HOW DARE YOU. She looked so upset. I didn’t know why. She immediately grabbed a belt and started smacking me relentlessly. She was slapping me round the face and kicking me in the genitals. They blindfolded me and dragged me painfully across the floor and down some stairs. I was thrown onto a table and strapped on face down, my whole back exposed. She started relentlessly whipping me while the others went off to fetch equipment. My head was tied so I was constantly looking forward. The others came back with a row of rather mean looking dildos and strapons. Loren put on an 8 inch 2 inch width strap on and Claire did the same. Loren inserted it up my ass and I felt an instant burning pain. Claire came round and shoved hers down my throat. Briddie carried on with her unfaltering whipping, occasionally pausing for breath. I was being brutally tortured and I was crying heavily by now. Soon the pain had become too much and I had fell unconscious.

My ears came accustomed to the sound before I could open my eyes. I heard crying and Moans. I heard someone whispering ‘It’s going to be ok’. Another teary voice sobbed ‘I thought he wanted me’ ‘He’s waking up come on stop’. When my eyes opened I saw the three girls looking down on me nervously. ‘Are you alright, I’m so sorry’ cried Briddie.
I tried to sit up but as I did pain flared through my back. ‘Not now just lie down and rest’ spoke Claire softly. I fell back to sleep just as Briddie was saying ‘Look we have been unfair. Now its your turn. Then I blacked out.

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Next part up On Thursday.

Please Pm me Ideas and anything you want incorporated in the story. Please also rate the story. Thanks

xTrYsTaNx

[Pingu]

Pretty good. 16 characters.

[Trystaan]

YES PINGU U replied

[dared to perfection]

ahhh no it ran out.... keep going MORE i want MOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE <---- well not that much but i really want to know what happened next :) please

[Trystaan]

As promised I have put the next part up. Thanks to StoryTeller for an idea incorporated within. Please read it all so that you don't get confused.


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Later that day, after I had come round the girls explained to me what Briddie had tried to earlier. Basically I had had the punishment and the humiliation so now it was my turn, and I had all 3 of them as my sexy slaves. I started by ringing Marcus and when he arrived I explained the situation. He seemed more than happy to help. To start with I made the girls all dress up in maid’s outfits and tend to my still heavily bruised body. I had an oil massage from Claire while Briddie was feeding me grapes. Loren was off somewhere with Marcus. Who was obviously enjoying himself by the noises. While the girls were tending to me I was taking many pictures of them and had also deleted the others that the girls had taken of me. I chuckled to myself as I thought of how this was only just the beginning. Soon I would have the perfect Revenge and there would be many encounters after this one as well.

Briddie’s POV(Point of View)

I had waited for this for so long. The desire and the want to be dominated by him. I had only been so harsh to make him want to completely dominate and humiliate me. I was slowly becoming wet as the breeze from the open window was coming up under my skirt and through to my pussy due to my lack of panties. I wanted him to do so much to me. In the meantime he was calling me. I ran over to see him naked lying on the bed. ‘Come here now and get nude slag’, my heart tingled just from his voice and my nipples were also reacting. ‘Yes Master’. He wanted me to orally pleasure him. I was delighted. I began slowly teasing him and slowly getting him in the mood. Suddenly he took over and forced me to my knees. He began ramming his cock into my mouth. It hurt and made me want to cry but I would not let him down. After half an hour of abuse and deep throat he came. I swallowed willingly. He chained my arms and legs together and left me on the floor. ‘You know your crap you are bitch’ ‘You call that head, you’re a failure I’m going to get Loren she be better than you, you worthless whore’. Before he left he taped a vibrator to my pussy. I felt hurt, I cried for a long time, I had so wanted to please him and now I was determined to. Whatever the cost.

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Next part would be up Saturday but as I am in wimbledon I will put it up sunday and monday.

Please give me ideas and ratings.

Also rep is kindly appreciated.

xTrYsTaNx

[Pikachu]

Great story well done...


You deserve a hug but I unfortunately can't give it to you sigh*

[Trystaan]

Sorry about not posting for a while. I have been very tired and busy. Hopefully you'll like this.

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TRYSTAN’S POINT OF VIEW

I chuckled to myself. I was slowly breaking her down. Soon I would keep Briddie as my full fledged slave. As I walked over to Marcus’s room I stopped. Claire was in the lounge and as she was not aware I was there she was fucking herself with a long thick purple dildo. I seized the opportunity and pulled out my phone. When Claire came I walked in and whispered ‘I think you’ll be pleasing me for a while now, if you don’t want your sister to see this anyway’. ‘Yes Sir’ she trembled.


I started by making Claire crawl over to me and made her suck my toes erotically. I then dragged her outside and soaked her with the cold high pressure hose. She was almost crying by the end of that. But I wasn’t finished yet. I made her put on a sandpaper thong which I had made earlier. I then gave her a hanging wedgie from the top of the trampoline enclosure while I was bouncing. She was fully flowing now. I took her down and ripped off little pieces of sand paper from her underwear. I then started to grate her nipples very softly moving up to a rigorous grind. The skin from her tits was red and peeling. She was screaming In pain. I took her down and tied her up. I was now in an unstoppable mode. I got naked and started banging her right there. ‘THIS IS FOR ALL THAT SHIT YOU DID TO ME’ After about half an hour I came and let it dribble out then made her catch it and suck it off her hands with a straw. ‘That’s enough for today but one more thing, You’ll sleep out her tonight tied naked to a tree’. With this I tied her up and left her.


When I walked to Marcus’s room I called him out. ‘Hey mate umm I need Loren for a bit. Briddie is still crying and tied up in my room if you want her: oh and Bro be nasty’.
‘Well hello there beautiful’ I kinkily spoke to Loren, ‘I’ve always wanted to get back at you for all those times you embarrassed me in form and during lessons, Now its my chance I’m not going to waste it’. I pulled out a few chains, belts and whips. I saw the look of fear in her eyes and grinned. Tonight was going to be fun.


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Please give me ideas ratings and reop if you think I deserve it.

xTrYsTaNx

[kirby66]

man that is really good u should have something with bending down with only the thong on and nude

[kirby66]

wow really good u should make more

[oreo_is_back]

Wait...Did you say all this happened IRL? >_> Worrying!
Anyway, good first person narrative, boo.
Last time I read a first person narrative was the 'Kushiel Legacy' by Jaqueline Carey(Still nead to finish the fifth book and start te sixth! Might buy it for my birthday!. =]
+ Rep!!!!
Ehm..Yeah.

[Damn! Need to spread the lufffff-rep around first boo. Hm. Strange. I will try again later! <3]

[Trystaan]

The bit that happened was the first post lol. My life isn't that interesting. My next part will be up inthe next quart of an hour.

xTrYsTaNx

[jjjj]

Wait...Did you say all this happened ILL? >_> Worrying!
Anyway, good first person narrative, boo.
Last time I read a first person narrative was the 'Shielding Legacy' by Jaquelin e Carey(Still dead to finish the fifth book and start te sixth! Might buy it for my birthday!. =]
+ Rep!!!!
chm..Yeah.

[Damn! Need to spread the bluffly-rep around first boo. Hom. Strange. I will try again later! <3]

what?

and pretty good story

[Trystaan]

Here it is. Part Something have fun

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I started by walking to the kitchen and getting chilli sauce and Ice from the fridge. Loren was hogtied nude in her room. On my way back I fetched some toothpaste and the toilet brush. I walked in and Loren was whimpering a cold despairing look in her eyes. I felt nothing for her anymore. My head was clear and I was angry. I started by applying toothpaste to her nipples and my fingers. I started slowly paying with her pussy. Slowly massaging, every now and then slowly sliding a finger into her. The toothpaste was working she was becoming uncomfortable and was blinking back tears. More of rage than pain. I taped the toothpaste inside her pussy so when she sat down it would squeeze inside her. I untied her and lay her on the bed. I sat her down and sat on her lap. I made her toss me off: all the time more toothpaste entering her. She finished her job and I came on her face, making her leave it on their. I next took the chilli sauce and coated a vibrator with it. I taped the vibrator to her ass.

I told her to wait while I went to the toilet. When I came back I made her take the end of the toilet brush in her mouth and made her crawl and clean the toilet, which I hadn’t flushed while holding the toilet brush between her teeth. I watched as she struggled only pausing to melt ice against her nipples making them cold to intensify the pain of the toothpaste already burning into her. When she was finished I gave her a swirly and made her crawl back to the room.


When there I applied more chilli sauce to her pussy and then put 6 clips on her pussy 8 on her inner thighs and 2 on each nipple. I hogtied her again and pulled out a studded metal belt. I whipped her ass so hard she began to rock so she was swinging even harder into the next one. By now she was crying and her ass was slowly turning purple.

With a shock I realised this had gone way too far. I felt horrible. I was so up myself I didn’t care about them. I let Loren go and she slapped me and retrieved her clothes then ran away still sobbing as she passed the door she whispered coldly ‘I am going to get you Trystan and you are going to wish you never touched me’. I felt terrible to see what I had done to these girls. I felt a sudden hate against myself. I paced and punched the wall numerous times leaving my fists bloody and bruised. I fell asleep.

Later I deleted the videos of Claire and also set her free. She also slapped me. Briddie however was different. She didn’t run away or hurt me she was the one who looked hurt. I said my goodbyes and left the house wondering what was going on with Briddie.

Later that week I received a threatening phone call. I didn’t know the caller but I had my suspicions. The call told me to go to the school 10:00 Monday night If I did I would be punished if I didn’t I would be punished even more. It was Sunday. I knew whether I went or not the next week would be an eventful one.
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Comments, ratings, ideas, critisicm and rep are all greatlu appreciated.

xTrYsTaNx

[oreo_is_back]

ANd there I thought my dear boo,Trystan, was innocent to such things like these! -Giggles.-
Mmm, Nice.

[Trystaan]

So this is the last post of this particular story. I would like to thank all who rated, + rep'ed, commented and gave me Ideas. I hope you enjoy.

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I was not looking forward to meeting the girls but I knew I had to go. If not I would be taken by force. So sure enough 9:00 Monday after school had finished I got ready to go out, made my excuses to my parents and set off to the school. While on my walk I wondered what I had got myself into. Three of the sexiest girls from school wanted to abuse me. I knew something was wrong when I walked through the gates. The quad was empty no one was to be seen. Then every thing happened quickly. I saw people jumping at me and tying my hands together before I was finally lumped onto a chair set out on the field. In front of me were Loren and Claire looking evilly pleased. I noticed Briddie wasn’t there. ‘You made us cry and scream, Now we are going to get back at you every way we can and you are going to hate it’. ‘We have so much planned for you, School finishes for the year on Sunday so you are going to have a summer you will remember for the rest of your life’.

I heard a commotion behind me. Three figures were brought out in front of me by boys I could only assume were much older as I had never seen them before. The figures masks were revealed one by one. First was Briddie I wondered why she wasn’t with the others but didn’t have time to think as the second hood was removed. I gasped. It was my girl Anna looking frightened and scared. The last was then revealed I almost screamed. It was my sister. She was 16 and had a look gazed on me which could kill.

‘Yes I think you 4 will know each other very well by the end of this summer’


To Be continued....

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The sequel should come soon.

xTrYsTaNx

[Zeromus]

The sequel should come soon.

xTrYsTaNx

Lets hope so, or you'll never see your dog again?

[erick92]

Lets hope so, or you'll never see your dog again?

Yes, we will take your dog. Also, we will step on your foot. :D