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glue
01-06-2008, 11:05 AM
This is my first fictional story on getdare so will you please tell me what you think of it and how I could improve

Adam was a quite boy who got along with most people he enjoyed school and found it easy to make friend. Apart from this one crowd of friends he just could not get into. They were around 17 and Adam was only 15. He had always wanted to be friends with this one guy peter. He was straight and knew this but he had always loved peters strong “grown up” body and his huge muscles. Once he had gym at the same time peter and he knew peter waited for everyone to go before showering so Adam waited behind (he never quite knew why) but he sat on this small ledge above the showers and watched peter strip off slowly revealing his tight abs and lean body then his huge lower area was exposed and Adam went very hard very quickly. He saw him wash and rub which was a huge turn on. Adam was able to strip naked himself and rubbed himself until he too cummed all over the ledge he was on. At this point the felt dirty as he could not move as peter would see him and he was laying in his own cum…

But that was months ago and Adam still wondered what it would be like to see the same thing again so he though to himself “right I am going to do it again” so he waited until he had a free period (Tuesdays), he hid himself above the showers on the ledge and waited. To his surprise a group of the football team came in and most of them left there were only 5 left he could over hear them saying. “Ready then?” followed by “ok truth or dare” Adam like truth or dare. It was one of his favourite games to play but he had only played small game but now was his chance for a big game so he crawled out of the ledge and walked into the changing room like he had no idea what he was doing. He came in and bravely said “I hear your playing truth or dare let me play or I am going to tell Mr wallman of you” Mr wallman was the had and a horrible person the group sat and laughed at Adam saying things like little kid and tell tale. Adam felt like running away but stood his ground. Ok they said you can play on the condition that you dare first then we dare you

“Ok” Adam said this was it his big chance….

Adam sat on a bench and said “right peter I dare you to go to the door and say to the first kid you see I like dr pepper”. The group could see that he was not up to there standard of playing. So peter went to the door and did the dare. When he returned he said “right a… Adam that’s it I dare you to strip down to your boxers”. Adam was taken back never had he had to do something like this. The blood ran though his body like a train. He was panicking should he do it or not. He knew no one else would be there in that afternoon but could he would he…..

Part two

He said he would do it if the group did the same they said they would if they were dared to. So Adam striped down to his boxers. It was summer so it was warm so Adam did not mind sitting there with only his boxers on. It was his turn now so he turned to peters friend Chris and asked tord he choose dare Adam thought now like a 17 year old what was kinky yet not weird. He decided. “I dare you to strip down to nothing” but not to sound weird said to cover his cock over with a sock. Chris smiled and did the dare.

A few more turns flew by pushing Adam to his limits (which to be honest where not that high) peter had just receive the dare to run around the changing room naked when he dared Adam to suck Chris’s cock.

Adam was stuck back again. By now Chris had got dressed again and Adam had to undress him as well. So Adam said he would do it as he was sure they would tell him to stop just before plus it was fun. So he walked over to Chris and took off his t-shirt revealing his slightly fatter stomach but still clearly visible 6 pack. At this point Adam went hard. He had never done this before and under his thin boxers the group saw this and giggled. He continued onto Chris’s trousers undoing them and then fell down. Chris was hard at this point and Adam realised that his cock was much smaller than this guys and started to panic as there was no warning to stop. He got to the boxers and he slowly pulled them by the waste catching Chris’s erect penis. He pulled them down ho his ankles and now the others were saying “Do it. Do it. Do it” chanting away. Adam froze…

StylishKidInTheRiot
01-06-2008, 04:09 PM
is a quite boy like a hermaphrodite?
the bad spelling and grammar ruined it for me.

sxcm
01-06-2008, 04:22 PM
i think it was meant to be "quiet" and i really enjoyed the story, some parts seemed a bit rushed but please continue.

molten man
01-06-2008, 09:58 PM
Good story!! Waiting for the next part!!

glue
01-07-2008, 03:23 PM
i am so sorry for the bad spelling and grammer
the next part maybe the same but you judge yourself

Part three

He knelt down to Chris’s penis hight and opened widely when suddenly the others pulled out a camera and took pictures. They told Adam to stop and that he must suck every one in the groups Adam could have cried 5 cocks when he was straight
He pleaded to them saying that it was wrong and that he normally did not do this stuff he turned and run towards the door when peter said “I saw you that day… Shall I tell every one” Adam stopped dead and agreed to comply as he would be kicked out of school for spying at people showering and his parents would think he was gay. It would ruin his whole life. So he bent down and sucked and suck his mouth became saw with the sucking and he was almost sick with all the cum in his mouth. All the other guys loved it though.

After he had finished he sat down looking at the 5 guys which he had just sucked cock of and felt like dieing. Peter said to him “mate, were not finished with you yet” he had become there slave he had to do strip for them naked now revealing his hard cock when another one of peters pals chained him to the wall with a basketball hoop chain. Were going to make you plead for forgiveness they slapped his arse, his chest and his cock which was rock hard and harder than it had ever been before in his life. He hurt all over. When Peter said you need a drink to continue Adam was quite thirsty and drunk and fell into a deep sleep. He could feel himself being moved but was too sleepy to realise where he was….


Part four

He woke up with a fright. He was lying on a bed, fully dressed and with a note above the bed reading

“Hello slave man
You are in a secret location. Your mum and dad have been told by “the school” that you have gone on an educational weekend trip to Paris. They did protest but realised that it was expectable.
You will be a slave for us this weekend we will arrive later to give you some details of what to do but in the mean time with have left you some food and drink

Have fun

J”

Adam panicked and tried to escape but all the windows were blocked and the doors locked even the chimney was blocked. He was trapped. So he sat and eat his food as he had had no dinner and drunk the drink. Almost immediately his cock got redder and redder harder and harder. The drink was watered down viagra. He ran his hands down to his penis to relive himself and found a cage around it he could not get to his own penis. The pain in his head throbbed as he wanted to wank so much he tried everything to get it off. Finally he gave up to tired to try and he was about to cry when he heard a car pull up out side. He heard two people exit the car and walk inside it was peter and Chris. “Morning slave” they said “what the f**k have you done to me” Adam cried out in anger.
How dare you slave you call us master or sir. After realising he was never going to leave under pleading he gave up and let them control the situation. “Right, the clothes will have to go as we want a naked baby not a grown up”. So peter stripped Adam and took of the cage around his cock.

random53
01-07-2008, 06:06 PM
wow this is a great story

wedgiewanter91
01-08-2008, 10:22 AM
cant wait fo the nexxt part

molten man
01-08-2008, 10:12 PM
cant wait for the next part!!

glue
01-11-2008, 07:40 AM
Part five

Adam was now chained to a wall with his hands behind his back and his cock for all to see. Peter and Chris took pictures of this and told him if he moves or disobeys the picture was going on the internet and worst of all to the headmaster’s desk. Adam gulped and complied. Peter had brought a bag with him and inside was lots of goodies for a good weekend. First of all he gagged Adam so there would be not more speaking. He stuck his girlfriends dildo up his arse and set it on vibrate. Adam wailed in pain but still they continued. They gave him 2 more viagra pills and Adam was bone hard and sweating. Chris rolled his hands down Adams body though his hair, over his face, down his body and he circled around his penis. AAdam was dieing to cum now but instead of helping out Chris moved his stroking to his arse where he turned the vibrator up to turbo speed.

It was another 10 minutes before Adam analy orgasm ed and this was the weirdest experience he had ever had he felt ashamed but could not do anything about it. Peter got a whip out his bag and whipped Adam off the wall and made him jack himself off. Adam was so relieved and cummed all over peter. He was not happy peter turned to Adam and…

nuditydudity
01-25-2008, 12:14 AM
Come on...finish the story!!!!!

ILOVEDARES
02-23-2008, 11:06 AM
finish the story

glue
02-24-2008, 11:33 AM
spanked him with the whip,
peter told adam if he ever did that again he would be in big trouble. the next job for adam was to "clean" the floor where he had cum. so there adam was licking the floor of all the cum (and there was lots) when chris suggested they should all go into town for some shopping. adam thought it was only peter and chris going until they pulled a dog lead and some rope out of the bag. "are you ready to go" adam said no and resisted moving until the pivtures were waved in front of him and he ecepted he had to go.

they pulled up out side of the supermarket, it was mid saturday so many people were there "we leaving you here tyed to the chair as its illegal to be out naked, but not in a car (this was flase) but adam had been blindfolded and bond and could not respnd

it was another 10 minutes until adam heard some noise
"this car, this car"

he heard

smash went the windows and then the car started...