The Stopwatch (Fiction)

[Tony12]

This is my second story on getdare. Excluding the one I didn’t continue, I did not continue this as I could not think of a story! But I have fresh idea’s in my head and I hope you’ll enjoy this story ( First few paragraphs a bit slow but then it gets JUICY!)

It was a normal Saturday, like any other Saturday but this, this one was different. John, now in preparation for his GCSE exams, was about to have his own unique adventure.
John walked down the path on the way to the local newsagents to get the morning paper for his mum and dad. He stopped to find a old tramp on the street where he was walking asking for change. John said “Hey there” he said casually and dropped twenty pence into the cup. The tramp looked with solemn eyes and jumped up quickly. He slowly put his hand into his pocket and pulled out a simple stopwatch. It looked ordinary like any other. The tramp said “ You wannar buy this “ In his slurred voice. John shrugged he thought it looked like a decent stopwatch and he though the tramp needs the money more than I do anyway. John asked “ how much?”. The tramp replied “ For you ma boy! Nothing!”. John looked suprised as he thought the tramp was after money. The tramp said with caution “ this ere ain’t no ordinary stop watch”. John asked “What do you mean?”. The tramp ignored him. He reached for the stopwatch but the tramp snatched it away. The tramp said “ Be cautious with this and don’t let it fall into the wrong hands”. John then took the stopwatch and looked at it and said to himself “ What a load of rubbish! “. He put the stopwatch into his pocket not knowing what awaited him…
Monday morning, John slumped out of his bed yawning. The morning was a blur to him as he got up at 7.00am. He slipped the watch on and got on his uniform. He then ate some toast for breakfast. He combed the door and half asleep walked out the door. He dreaded going into History as it was his least favourite subject! A whole hour of it to. He talked to his friends outside the school where they usually hung about. His friend tim said “Nice watch” Wondering how I afforded it. Still have asleep he grunted “ thanks “. Then some of the boys in the year above me came up to him. They threw him against the wall clearly stronger than me. They said to give them the watch. I didn’t want to lose the watch so I offered them money. They took it and walked away grinning. Then the dreaded bell came hundreds of grunts and sighs all around John. * ( The next paragraph changes to first person)
I walked into history slumping into my seat. Next to me sat a boy named Martin he was a ok guy although he had a attitude problem. I then looked at my watch the time was wrong. I looked up at the school watch and started to set the time. To my amazement when I looked round everything was still, nobody talking, No noise! I wondered if this was a illusion or if I was sleeping. I pinched myself, Nothing. I then clicked the watch into place and everything started again. My mouth practically hung open. I got a bit aroused as I imagined the mischief I could get up to! I then pressed the button to change the time again and again everything stopped. I then punched Martin in the balls. I then started the watch again and then Martin fell over winging over his balls. I laughed and so did a few others around me.
The teacher walked in, the noise stopped. I then pushed the button on my watch and time stopped. I went up to Caroline, a ok looking girl and started feeling her boobs while time was stopped. I got aroused and my penis went erect. I then had a idea. I put my hand up her miniskirt and took her panties off. I then sniffed them, they had her beautiful scent. I then put them in the teachers pocket for my amusement. I then sat down and pressed the button. Everything started again. The teacher sat down at his desk not knowing what was at his desk. I then looked to Caroline yet to my surprise and amusement she hadn’t noticed yet. I stared for a second then she started to go red. She realised what was happening. She then slipped her hand down her skirt to feel if what she was feeling was really happening! She went bright red after she felt. She crossed her legs to cover up her miniskirt. My penis was erect though I didn’t notice. The teacher was then starting the lesson. I couldn’t wait until he found out and what would happen with poor Caroline…

I can't remember where i got idea from i think it was a T.v. show! :)
anyway post any comments on advice or if you liked or disliked it. I want to hear about it. Whether i should/shouldn't continue this story

[anayguy]

i like this keep it going

[Bored]

really good idea

[molten man]

Awesome. Add more mischief and let the watch stay with John only!!

[YoureAmazingMe]

I really like it. It's got a creative story base & could move into a very good story. Keep it up.

[Davros]

I remember a show where a kid called Bernard had a watch that did this. Does "Bernard's Watch" ring a bell? Loved that show!

And love this story!

[admireu4ever]

Reminds me of a book I read called "Things Not Seen"...only the stupid kid didn't do stuff like this...

[admireu4ever]

I hate to double post, but this story is so good. Please Continue for the sake of me...

[infernal]

always wondered about a story where u can stop tima and do watever you want

[JMOB]

Awesome story, i've been wishing for something like that to happen to me for years. It would be the awesomest thing ever. Keep going man! *remembers time-stopping fantasies*

[HSsportsstar 1]

yea i always thought about this. Great story please continue it, cant wait for next segement

[dared to perfection]

i hope this story is continued, i've had dreams about time control and i am pretty sure this story will cover some of my fantasies.

[Looking4somename]

This is a great idea. I am trully looking forward to see what's gonna happen next.

I wish I thought of writing a story about time control. This is just an amazing prospect.

[molten man]

i does not matter where u got the idea as long the story is nice!!

[Pikachu]

i does not matter where u got the idea as long the story is nice!!

i agree keep it up

btw it was the simpsons where the idea came from i think treehouse of horror whatever it is lol

[Simple_me]

acrually, it more sounds like bernards watch, as the simpsons was a one off thing about it, allthough the concept of time control has been on our screens for a while.

Back to the future anyone!? *breakdances*

[zeketheorc]

back to the future is a great series of movies and I own them all! just dont go forgetting the time machine!

[weehq]

this story is great so far
keep it up

[DareByrd]

great story man...it reminds me of this movie i saw, i think the name was clockstoppers(yea corny name but its a wicked awesome movie)

[Tony12]

I haven't continued my story due to illness i have had lots of infections and not posted any further into the story because of it i plan to continue as soon as possible!

[Collared_Slave]

Ive allways wondered why bernard didnt do these things - probally as it was a childrens show.

[anayguy]

please keep going when you can

[Davros]

please keep going when you can

He's already said he will. So, why ask :confused:

[Tony12]

At break I followed Caroline. I noticed she tried to say secluded; this only brought more attention to her. Unfortunately, some of the more, “rowdy” boys as I’d call them were near her. They were laughing at each other and flirting, cheaply, to her. She just smiled and looked at the ground. Then one boy was getting cheeky towards her. She said “piss off” close to tears. Just at that moment the wind blew , to her horror, the boys got a good look and saw her naked parts. Some wolf whistled others laughed. I briskly laughed to myself. I was feeling a little conscious that I could be caught. I knew it would never happen; what if it did? I abandoned my thoughts as she ran to the girls toilets. At this point I clicked my watch again. I went into a vent, whoever created the venting system must have been thick, above the girls toilet there was a vent which gave a full view of the toilet. Caroline had her head bent over a mirror, she was sobbing to herself, then her boyfriend came in. I thought this was awkward as this was the girls bathroom; I let the thought slip.
“Wha’s the matter babez” he whispered comfortingly into her ear. She went red. I could almost hear her brain ticking as she wondered what to tell him. She decided to come clean with him and whispered into his ear. He sniggered a little. Then, when he looked up at her face, he saw how upset she was; then he said “Ok, calm down, calm down. All give you ma boxers for today”. This took a weight of her chest, she gave him a brisk kiss on the cheek. She knew her boyfriend was wanting to take their relationship further for ages and in his act of kindness she decided he had earned the right. I was loving this it was like watching a soap! Except much more juicy. She told him to come into the stall. I stayed silent and my eyes followed them into the stall. She took her skirt off in front of him. I saw him with his eyes almost glued. Her boyfriend however was a little shy and turned around while giving her his boxers; then he put his trousers on quickly, careful not to revile anything. Before she put his boxers on she put his hand to her pussy. She whispered something to him. He started rubbing her pussy, she groaned a little, someone entered they stopped and Caroline put his boxers and her skirt on and they left together hand in hand. I then crawled out of the vent. I headed off to see my history teacher.

Sorry i took so long with it. I hope you enjoy it; i didn't have enough time to make the next paragraph. Sorry.
Comments will be appreciated

[Naughtybaby]

wow thats good i realy like it i realy realy like it its a great story please continue!:)

[Tony12]

Just average im hurt :(!

[zeketheorc]

who said just average?

[Tony12]

Ill Edit this post into the story next saturday (Hopefully)
Just to let you know i've not forgot about this story :P

[HSsportsstar 1]

Yea this is awesome, u need to keep writing

[molten man]

Ecxellent story!! Just too good!!

[Tony12]

Oops double posted

[Tony12]

Trust me, i caught the flu! Sorry about the wait... I hope to continue tommorrow

Senior Member Woop (This is post 100)

[pimpdaddy]

this is a really good story i enjoyed it alot

continue please if it is possible

[tissue13]

great story-im loving it! keep it going-no rush though. :D

[molten man]

Please Continue dude!!

[Tony12]

My history Teacher was in the classroom after thinking about it I decided to remove them from his possession as he hadn’t noticed yet. I clicked my watch, I removed the panties from him, and then I put them in the bin and clicked again. I had been thinking; my teacher could have go into serious trouble for that; maybe even fired. I decided I wouldn’t do anything like that to my teachers again. I spent the rest of school imgaining what I could get up to with the watch.
The next day, I had thought some ideas overnight, I decided I was going to have some fun with the hottest girls in school. They were in my class first period. I waited patiently in the yard smiling mischievously although I don’t think anyone could tell! Tim started talking too me. I was thinking about letting him in on the watch but he’d probably think I was crazy! We talked for a while until the bell rung.
First period, biology, my excitement grew and my penis started to get erect a little. There was a tired mood around, everyone was at a party but I decided not to go, I was active. While I was sitting I looked over at the hottest girls in our school: Kim, Kate and Megan. My penis out of my control started throbbing. I decided now was the time. I clicked my watch, the fun began.
While silence was around me, I crept up to the girls gingerly. I decided to strip the girls. I began with Kate. I took her shirt off slowly, I had a feel off her nice big boobs while doing so. Then I unclipped her bra and let it fall. Her boobs were a decent size, though I noticed she stuffed her bra a little. I sniggered at the thought. I played with her boobs for a while, licked them, rubbed them. I then unclipped her skirt, slowly sliding it off of her. I peered down, my penis throbbing violently. She was wearing a black g-string. It looked so good on her tight little ass. I rubbed her panties feeling the beautiful pussy which was underneath. I then slowly slipped the thong off, leaving her completely naked. My penis throbbed as I looked at her pussy. I began to lick it, Finger it. I finished off by cumming into her mouth. Then I undressed the girls had some fun with them and redressed all off them. When i reclicked the watch i turned around and i saw Kate, with a wierd expression on her face, licking her lips. I went about the rest of the day as normal.
I decided I was going to do something big with the watch. I didn’t know what yet. I browsed the internet looking for porn and things I could do. And then I came across it, a website with all the great things I could do getdare. I read up on the website and I decided I was going to enslave some girls.

Don't think im just going to change it into a Slave story, i will make a short story about it, i will make 3-4 posts about it. Then i have a few more twists up my sleeve!

[thumper]

holy freakin crap...keep going.

[guywc]

absolutely fantastic story so far!

[thumper]

FRICK!!!! Keep this story going!!!!

[Davros]

One of the best stories on here and very original. I love how you've included getDare, nice touch :D

[Ciandon]

Continuing the tradition, FRICKING AWESOME!
No, but seriously. This is a really good story.

[SluttyStacy]

good idea keep it up because i wanna know more

[Tony12]

Patience is a Virtue my friends :)

[Ciandon]

Patience is a Virtue my friends :)

My patience and virtues died in 1998, but this story brought them back to life, so I'll wait.

[Tony12]

Im sorry if this isn't allowed, i know this thread has been dead for a long while now but i wish to continue this story...

I had the idea implanted in my head, I wanted to enslave some girls. I didn’t know how yet though. I knew with the watch I could easily get a girl somewhere secluded but I thought about the consequences; if she saw me and knew who I was she could tell people, go to the police. All of this was racing through my mind. As time went by I became more tired in my bed, I decided if I was going to enslave a girl I’d do it tomorrow after school.

I woke up the next day, Friday, with a plan sorted in my head how I was going to enslave a girl. I packed his bag with a few extra things. This included: rope, a mask, masking tape, toothpaste and other various things. I made sure my stopwatch was secure in my pocket. I then set off for school.

As well as pack things for the girl which I planned to enslave for a while after school, I brought various items to amuse me during the day.

Fourth period. My excitement grew with my imagination. I imagined the girl I would enslave, the things I would make her do, the fun it would be. I grew bored as my imagination declined and my curiosity increased. I knew it would happen sooner or later; that’s why I packed lots in my bag to keep my amused. Then the thought crept into my head “time to have some fun”. I reached into my pocket and clicked my stopwatch. I then rummaged into my bag, searching. I pulled out chilli powder. I looked around at my frozen classmates and grinned.

I walked up to a girl called Fiona; she was the smallest girl in our year, she used to have a crush on me. She had blonde hair of a medium length, she had fairly small tits but she was ok looking. I put my hand up her skirt and pulled her panties off. I looked curiously up her skirt and saw she had a shaven pussy. I was surprised at this as I didn’t think she would be the sort of girl to shave her pussy.

I laughed shortly at what I was about to do to her though I was a little guilty at the same time. I put some chilli powder in my hand. I then stuck my hand up her skirt and rubbed some of it onto her pussy; then the rest onto her ass crack. I removed my hand from her skirt and put her panties back on her. I noticed there was a little chilli powder left on my hand. I then opened her mouth and rubbed the rest onto her moist tongue. I then kissed her on the lips and went back to my seat. I looked round one last time before clicking the stopwatch and letting the scene fall into place.

I only wrote a short snippet as i'd like to know if reviving this thread is acceptable before continueing ths story

[cheesey923]

this is a awesome story that i enjoy keep going

[profoundslave]

awesome story...please do continue :-)

[wicked]

Awesome story =)


except....

the person at the beginning just randomly slammed him onto the wall for no reason. What was the motivation? Was he a bully or what?

At first, apparently there was no reason for a breeze in a school hallway. And I doubt any vent in a school has the power to do that.

There are some other things, but those two bugged me the most.


This story is really creative, but could be more original. I was thinking he could pull pranks on some girls in the school before he makes any slaves.

[cheesey923]

come on dude cut him some slack its a well thought out idea and you need to relax a little bit and just enjoy the ride

[wicked]

come on dude cut him some slack its a well thought out idea and you need to relax a little bit and just enjoy the ride


dude, i wasn't flaming him. I don't mean to sound rude or anything.

[cheesey923]

yah im sorry i went off on you its been a long day i apoligize

[Tony12]

Ill edit a few things, i was only 13-14 when i started writing this so im sorry if it's a little unclear.
The bully comes into the story later i plan.
At what point did i say they were in a hallway, outside during a break !

[Phoenix_blaze]

I think its a great story! Keep going XD

[Amelie]

I love you, this is such a huge fantasy for me. As for the thread revival, there is absolutely no reason why not if you have new content.

[wicked]

At what point did i say they were in a hallway, outside during a break !


well, I guess I missed that =)


but great story. I'll read every part you make. I've seen several time stopping stories (including TV), and I always wanted to see one where the person stopping time did stuff to people like the way you are doing it

[wicked]

Great story man, I recognise the idea from a film I saw once, but this is much better. ;)

Please continue! And as far as the rules go, it's only if an old thread is bumped with no new ideas, so you should be fine :D



yeah, it's only against the rules to bump a thread if there is no new information

[Kerithanos]

I remember a Twilight Zone episode with a stopwatch that did this -- although, I'm pretty sure the main character didn't do this sort of thing with it. = P

[seth18]

nice story, please continue.

[fun-dave]

great story keep it going i think the enslavign a girl is taking it a little far maybe making stopping time and putting them insituations and seeing how they would react like putting two girls in a closet naked and trapping the door shut with a webcam and other things like that during the day then putting them back in class after theyve got up to things in there as if theyd fallen asleep and were dreaming.


would changing the time, like turning it back or forward like you would to set it . make him jump back or forward in time ?

that could be fun and could get him outta some awkward situations!

[omega]

This reminds me of that Adam Sandler movie, "Click"(1 (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Click_(film)))(2 (http://www.sonypictures.com/homevideo/click/index.html?&ref=http%3A//www.google.com/search%3Fhl%3Den%26client%3Dfirefox-a%26rls%3Dorg.mozilla%3Aen-us%3Aofficial%26hs%3D8hf%26pwst%3D1%26q%3Dclick+mo vie%26revid%3D1190383778%26ei%3Dclynsdmsepwksaob9u dddw%26sa%3Dx%26oi%3Drevisions_narrow%26resnum%3D4 %26ct%3Drevision%26cd%3D1))(3 (http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0389860/))

[Tony12]

I have realised that enslaving a girl is a little farfetched and unrealistic. Im going to go back on it and make him "chicken out" on doing it. I will then continue the story as planned. As from now im going to make the boys characteristics as normal as possible.

P.S. i got the idea from Bernards watch and Click

Next part coming up - Definitely before the end of the weekend

Fun-Dave thanks for the advice - I partially had it in my head already enslaving a girl was farfetched though i didn't know if anyone else thought this. Im not going to allow the watch to go back in time as that would complicate things a little too much

[Missy Carly]

Im not going to allow the watch to go back in time as that would complicate things a little too much

only for the simple minded :rolleyes:

[cheesey923]

i think you should still continue with the pranks because anybody would do that

[batman]

i love the idea of a watch that stops time, i just think its a briliant idea.

[wicked]

hope the next part comes soon =)

[cheesey923]

tony do you plan on adding more to the story because i think you should and its been awhile

[wicked]

He stopped time, and accidentally broke the watch. He is stuck in the still world forever. He cannot update the story or do anything else.


but he must be having a good time stripping every girl he sees =)

[Yossarian42]

Why is it that when a good story comes along, it almost never is finished?

[BettyBoop]

This is awesome. You do not even get how badly I want a watch that stops time.

[Yossarian42]

Go oooooooon....

[wicked]

yes... go on....


Yossarian42, you can get banned for bumping topics

edit:

oh wait... you're an alt

[milkdat]

Stories great ive fantasized alot about what Id do if I controled time!

[storyboy]

This is awesome. You do not even get how badly I want a watch that stops time.

i've thought about it before i read this. there was an old kids movie about it, i forget the name. sort of dumb, loved it at the time. about 3 teens and 1s dad who invents a watch that makes you move faster then time so it looks like everything is still or bla bla. *ehem* anyways, great story!!

[molten man]

Waiting for the next part!!

Plz dont stop this time!