brownie
10-23-2007, 05:39 PM
Hey this is my first story, i read a lot there all about slaves, i wanna mix it up a little. To be onnest, im doing this as im going along, just say when and ill stop, no need for turture. O ya please forgive my spelling mistakes
She was Hot. Everyone wonted her, but that was the problem. She was.. well pefect. Smart, hot, populer, and had big boobs. But like the old saying goes, Dont judge a book by it cover.
"Ding!" the bell rang to go to lunch. As i waited in lunch i saw her, in front of me. I was speechless had no clue what to do. Do i talk to her, Of course i said to myself. But what to say. I decided to play it easy. I droped my fork and ask
"Excuase me, can you hand me that."
She quikly picked it up, and replied, "Hello im Carly, whats your name."
I stodered, M-M-Ma-matt.
I knew i had to keep the conversation up or i had no chance.
"Hey, how are you, anything new going on." i said.
Anything new i said repeated in my head, Gosh i just meat her what a stupid question.
" well i just go dumped by my bf."
Omg, what the hell am i sopose to say to that.
I qukily blirted out, "im sory is there anything i can do for you?"
Right there is what change me, i new there was no way to get out of it, right then and there she took her pocket book out, took a pen, and teared off a piace of paper, and wrote her # down. It was the best moment of my life.
Untill the lunch laddy YElled "NEXT!" and spoiled the moment.
Later that night.... I had my cell in my hand, and dialed, 555-57 as my finger hesatated to press the rest,but i maniged to get the 69 in it. It was ringing. OMG, i was think to myself, this isnt a reguler girl, this is Carly Mcpoper. The hotest girl if not just school but state of Florida. I was hoping for the anser mesion. but nope she ansered.
"Hello, " she said.
"Hey its matt"
"O well i see you got your name right," she giggled
"Hey im learning," i said in a lauphing manner.
"Well, Matt, i wanna get right to the chasse no loop holes...
To be continue....
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What will happen next
A. tell matt she hates his guts
B. Carly will tell matt that she is dieing
C. carly tell matt she is intrested in him
Keep on reading to find out the anser
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I wont be so mean ill finsh this part
I like you, you treat me like no one else does, you dont just see me, but you care about me, you are a good lissener, your not a reguler guy, you unquie.
To be continue....
Aouthers note: Sorry about the lovy love love thing at the end, I know! i should have pick B
I did not make up this conversation, i had this with a girl i meet.
i make it more intresting post your thoughts and comints, any improvement, do u wont me to go on. I promise i wont Make it Lovey, unless u really wont be to.
She was Hot. Everyone wonted her, but that was the problem. She was.. well pefect. Smart, hot, populer, and had big boobs. But like the old saying goes, Dont judge a book by it cover.
"Ding!" the bell rang to go to lunch. As i waited in lunch i saw her, in front of me. I was speechless had no clue what to do. Do i talk to her, Of course i said to myself. But what to say. I decided to play it easy. I droped my fork and ask
"Excuase me, can you hand me that."
She quikly picked it up, and replied, "Hello im Carly, whats your name."
I stodered, M-M-Ma-matt.
I knew i had to keep the conversation up or i had no chance.
"Hey, how are you, anything new going on." i said.
Anything new i said repeated in my head, Gosh i just meat her what a stupid question.
" well i just go dumped by my bf."
Omg, what the hell am i sopose to say to that.
I qukily blirted out, "im sory is there anything i can do for you?"
Right there is what change me, i new there was no way to get out of it, right then and there she took her pocket book out, took a pen, and teared off a piace of paper, and wrote her # down. It was the best moment of my life.
Untill the lunch laddy YElled "NEXT!" and spoiled the moment.
Later that night.... I had my cell in my hand, and dialed, 555-57 as my finger hesatated to press the rest,but i maniged to get the 69 in it. It was ringing. OMG, i was think to myself, this isnt a reguler girl, this is Carly Mcpoper. The hotest girl if not just school but state of Florida. I was hoping for the anser mesion. but nope she ansered.
"Hello, " she said.
"Hey its matt"
"O well i see you got your name right," she giggled
"Hey im learning," i said in a lauphing manner.
"Well, Matt, i wanna get right to the chasse no loop holes...
To be continue....
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What will happen next
A. tell matt she hates his guts
B. Carly will tell matt that she is dieing
C. carly tell matt she is intrested in him
Keep on reading to find out the anser
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I wont be so mean ill finsh this part
I like you, you treat me like no one else does, you dont just see me, but you care about me, you are a good lissener, your not a reguler guy, you unquie.
To be continue....
Aouthers note: Sorry about the lovy love love thing at the end, I know! i should have pick B
I did not make up this conversation, i had this with a girl i meet.
i make it more intresting post your thoughts and comints, any improvement, do u wont me to go on. I promise i wont Make it Lovey, unless u really wont be to.