Little Sister Becomes a Slave

[KittyCat91]

Characters:

Cathryn: Is 17, Jeremy's little sister, & James's girlfriend. Has shoulder length brunette hair, hazel eyes, 5''5, average, white/caucasian, & 40c.

Jeremy: Is 19, Cathryn's big brother, & Kaidn's boyfriend. Has short shaggy brown hair, diamond blue eyes, 5"11, white/caucasian, & slim/muscular.

Kaiden: Is 19, & Jeremy's boyfriend. Has short blond shaggy hair, brown eyes, 5"9, slim/muscular, & white/caucasian

James: Is 16, & Cathryn's boyfriend. Has (almost)shoulder length/short brown shaggy hair with blond highlights, hazel eyes, 5"9, white/caucasian, & is very slim/muscular.

[KittyCat91]

Hey,my name is Cathryn,and this is my story of how I ended up being my big brother's slave.
This story begins during the summer if June. My dad is in the military and is off fighting in Iraq,and my mom passed away last year with breast cancer,so I just live with my brother Jeremy.
I don't remember what the exact date or time was,but I do remember that it was a very hot day outside, on a Friday afternoon. Jeremy and his boyfriend Kaiden where sitting on the couch in the living room watching a movie. I was bored and alone in my room, and thought it would be fun to bugg my brother for a while,so i went to go join them in the living room.
There was a little gap between Jeremy and Kaiden, and sat next to them, making them scoot over.

Jeremy: (talking to me) Uh, exuse me.

Cathryn: Hey.

Jeremy: Leave, NOW.

Cathryn: No, its my living room too. I want to watch a movie.

Jeremy: (hands me a Barney movie that we had since we were kids) Here, go take Barney to your room and watch it.

Cathryn: (I hand the movie back to Jeremy) I'am 17. 17 year old girls don't watch Barney. Only babies like you do. What are you guys watchin?

Kaiden: We are watching American Pie Betta House Club.

Cathryn: Cool, I watched this with James once. (I see a girl exposing her breast on the screen) But I don't remember seeing that.

Kaiden: (laughing at my reaction to what I just saw) Thats because it's the X-rated version.

Jeremy: Which is why you need to leave. Your not old enought to watch this movie. Your also in my way of me being able to kiss my boyfriend.

Kaiden: Oh, I think I can fix that.

Kaiden sits on my right knee,then Jeremy sits on top of my left knee.

Cathryn: Ow, Kaiden, Jeremy get off of me. (Kaiden and Jeremy start kissing) Ewww,gross.Since when did the movie become 4-D?. Come on you guys, get off.Your squishing my knees.(My boyfriend is calling my cell,and I answer it) Hey James.

James: Hey baby. Whats up?

Cathryn: Well my knees are being pinned down to the couch, and I'm forced to watch Romeo and Romeo make out infront of me. (talking to Kaiden and Jeremy) Eugh,would you guys get a room?. Get off of me. (talking to James) Hey,can you hold on for just a sec?

James: (laughing at me)Yeah,sure

I push Jeremy off of my knee onto the floor.

Kaiden: (gets off of me to help Jeremy up, and I get up off the couch) Babe are you okay?

Jeremy: (gives me an evil look) Yeah.

Cathryn: (being sarcastic) Ooops,sorry. (I walk into the Kitchen to where I can talk to James without any distractions)

James: Cat ya there?

Cathryn: Yeah, im still here. Sorry about that.

James: Its okay.

Cathryn: So whats up?

James: Nothing much, just being bored and lonley.

Cathryn: I know the feeling.

James: Would it be okay if I could come over to your place, so we could go swimming togeather?

Cathryn: Yeah,sure. That sounds like fun.

James: K,it's a date. I'll be there in about 5 minutes.

Cathryn: K,see ya then. Love you.

James: Love ya too.

(James and I hang up our phones. I go back in the living room where Jeremy and Kaiden are.)

Cathryn: Hey Jeremy. James is comeing over for awhile, and we are going swimming.

Jeremy: Okay,cool. You two just better keep it PG.

Cathryn: (I roll my eyes at Jeremy's comment) Yeah, yeah, whatever.

Jeremy: Kaiden and I may join you guys after our movie is over.

Cathryn: Okay. Well I'm going to go put my swim suite on. James is suppose to be here in about 5 miniutes. If I'm not ready when hes here,can you please let him in?

Jeremy: Yeah,sure. Whatever.

Kaiden: If he doesn't then I will.

Cathryn: K, thank you Kaiden.

I go into my room to change.....

[zeke]

I like everything about this story except the homo-sexual couple
I love the story though

[trust-no-1]

Not bad, please continue

[KittyCat91]

Hey readers,thanks for reading my story.My second chapter may be a little late because im really busy this week. I'm having to stay up late studying,then taking graduation test the next day. I'm sorry to keep you guys waiting.I'll try to poste the next chapter soon.

[Saul]

I like everything about this story except the homo-sexual couple
I love the story though----------

I agree

[Star Shadows]

Why are you guys so against the homo couple. Just because you aren't that way doesn't mean the story will come out and hit you repeatedly till you are. I bet you wouldn't have minded if it was girl on girl either.

With that said I like this story keep it up

[Obedient_Calf]

I like how this has started, as for the homo-erotic's, why not i say...

[KittyCat91]

I'm now in my room,searching for my two piece swimdress. I finde the bottoms and put them on.I then here the doorbell ring.

Jeremy:CAT!!!!! James is here!!!

Cathryn: K,I'm almost ready!!!

I quickly find my top and put it on. I then search for my flipflopes and a towel.

Jeremy: (Answers the door to let James in) Hey James.

James: Hey, wheres Cathryn?

Jeremy: Shes in her room getting ready,shes almost done.
(They walk in the living room,an Jeremy sits back down next to Kaiden.)

James: Oh okay. Hey Kaiden.

Kaiden: Hey, whats up?

James: Nuthin much. Whatch you guys watchin?

Jeremy: American Pie Betta House Club

Kaiden: The X-rated version.

James: Oh, cool. Hey Jeremy,is it okay if I wait for Cate by the pool?

Jeremy: Yeah,sure.
(James leaves the living room and enters the indoor pool. I finally find my flipflops,put them on,grab my towel,and walk into the living room.)

Cathryn: Wheres James?

Jeremy: Already at the pool,waiting for you.

Cathryn: Oh okay. Well I'm going swimming now.

Jeremy: Okay

I leave the living room and enter my indoor pool,but I don't see James.
Our Pool is very nice. Its about 8ft deep and has alot of room. We even have 2 diving boards,and a tunnle. The top of the tunnel is made into a waer fall, also has a water slide ontop,and as a hot tub under the tunnle.
I stand on the edge of the pool,between the diving boards, wondering where James could be.

Cathryn: James?!

Not knowing that James was behinde me,he sneaks up on me and pushes me into the pool,jumping in after me. He catches me,holding my waist,and swims me back up to the surface.

James: Hey baby,are you okay?

Cathryn: (I'm coughing up water that I accidently swallowed.) You jerk(jokingly).

James: Awww,I'm sorry baby. I didn't mean to scare you. (He kisses me on the lips)

Cathryn: I've missed you. (I put my arms around hhis shoulders.)

James: I've missed you too.

Just as we were about to kiss again, out of no where Jeremy and Kaiden jumps in the pool doing cannonballs. The cannonballs made huge waves. Th scared James,causing him to let go of my waste, and making me go underwater. The waves they made were going over my head,causing me to chocke on water. I feel some one grabb my waist and swim me over to the shallow end,to where I would be able to stand.

Kaiden: (lets go of my waist) Are you okay?

Cathryn: Yeah,I'am now. Thanks.

James: (swims over too me and puts my arm around me) Are you okay?

Cathryn: Yeah,I'm fine.

James: Maybe swimming was a bad idea.

Cathryn: (mocking James) Or maybe you shouldn't have pushed me in the deep end.

Jeremy: (gets mad at James for what he just heard) Dude, you pushed her in the deep end?!?

Cathryn: Jeremy its okay. We were just playing around.

James: Yeah man,chill. I jumped in after her. I would never do anything to put her in danger. I love her.

Jeremy: Yeah?!? Well you did put her in danger. We all know that she can't swim well. Yet,you pushed her in the deep end.

Cathryn: (being sarcastic to Jeremy) Why don't you just publish that in the news paper. (I'm embarrassed that I'm 17 years old and sill can't swim well yet.)

James: Really?!? Well you seemed not to act like it,when you jumped in the pool,knowing that we were in the deep end.

Cathryn: Okay,thats enough! Stop arguing!

Kaiden: ( backs Jeremy away from James) Babe,relax. Calm down. (He kisses Jeremy to help calm him down)

Jeremy: Thanks, I feel alot better now. James, I'm sorry.

James: Its okay. I get that shes your little sister,and your just trying to protect her. But I want you to know that I love her very much, and would never mean to put her life in danger.

Jeremy: Yeah, I know. I guess I just get a bit over protective sometimes.

Cathryn: A bit? I think more than a bit. I love both of you guys.

Kaiden: Hey,what about me?

Cathryn: I love you too Kaiden. (Changing the subject) So what do you guys want to do?

James: (picks me up,carrying my like a baby) Wanna go to the hot tub and make out?

Cathryn: (James starts kissing me) Okay.

James carrys me under the tunnle,to the hot tub. We both get in the hot tub, and start making out. James trys to slide my strap off my shoulder,but I feel someone else pull it back up.

Jeremy: James, her top stays on.

Jeremy scared us a bit, so we stopped kissing. Jeremy sat down next to me,and Kaiden sat next between Jeremy and James.

Cathryn: (I was upset at Jeremy for interupting me and James.) Jeremy,can you and Kaiden please go somewhere else.?

Jeremy: No.

Kaiden: Jeremy & I were talking,and wanted to see if you two would like to play a little game with us.

James: What kind of game?

Jeremy: Truth or dare.

James: (talking to me) Do you want to play?

Cathryn: I don't know...I guess.

James: What are the rule.

Jeremy: Obviously,whatever the truth is you have to tell it. Or whatever the dare is,you have to do it.

Kaiden: If anyone backouts, they will be punished.And will be the person's slave for a year.

Cathryn: Punishment,slave? What do you mean?

Jeremy: If you back out,then you will find out.

Cathryn: Okay.

James: K,so who goes first?

Kaiden: Well since ladies always go first,Cathryn can. So Cat,what will it be, truth or dare?

Cathryn: (I'm kind of nervouse and don't know which one to choose) Uh, I guess truth.

Kaiden: Okay. Are you still a virgin?

Cathryn: Yes.

Jeremy: You better be.

Cathryn: Kaiden, truth or dare?

Kaiden: Truth.

Cathryn: Have you seen a girl or guy naked?

Kaiden: Yes.I've seen Jeremy.

Jeremy: (starts laughing) And don't forget the time you walked in on Cathryn.

Kaiden: (laughing) Oh yeah. I also saw baby picture of her too.

Cathryn: (I stop laughing,and start blushing.I'm shocked at what I just heard) What?!?! Jeremy, I could kill you.

Jeremy: Cat,I swear I didn't show those to him. That was mom's department.

Kaiden: Yep, your mom even showed me a home video of you and Jeremy taking a bath togeather when yall were little.

(I'm blushing bright red,and Jeremy stops laughing)

Jeremy: Say What? Cat,we must destroy those pictures and videos.

Cathryn: I say we burn them.

Jeremy: (laughing) Okay back to the game.

[trust-no-1]

Love it love it love it, please continue ASAP :D

[Bangin]

Looking forward to reading more of this one!

[dienathi10]

please continue fast

[KittyCat91]

Kaiden. James,its your turn.

James: Oh okay. Jeremy,truth or dare?

Jeremy: Dare.

James: I dare you to kiss Cathryn for at least 30 seconds.

Cathryn: (I'm upset and shocked at James dared Jeremy to do) JAMES.(I slap his shoulder)

Jeremy: (he grabbs my wrist and pulls me towards him) Sorry, Cat. I have to do the dare.

Cathryn: Ewww,NO. Your my brother. I'm not kissing you, I'd rather kiss a toliet seat.

Kaiden: Cat,just close your eyes, and pretend your kissing James.

Cathryn: (I give up trying to get out of the dare) Okay.

Jeremy: Don't worry, I'll get James back for this. Are you ready?

Cathryn: I guess. Lets just get this done and over with.

Jeremy: Okay.

Jeremy leans over and kisses me. I know that its kind of weird that I'm kissing my brother,but he was actually a good kisser,and he kind of made me get turned on a bit.

James: Okay,you can stop now. (Jeremy and I stop kissing.)

Jeremy: James,truth or dare?

James: Truth

[KittyCat91]

Hey readers,sorry for the short chapter. Theres a thunderstorm where I live,and I need to get off the computer,because it coming closer. I'm really sorry for the long wait,I hopfully will be posting the rest of the chapter soon.

[Sweet270]

Thanks 4 letting us know n be sure to put more in later..

[Bangin]

Really enjoying this story, can't wait for more!

[12356416514a]

its different to read about gays, keep going ;)

[KittyCat91]

Jeremy: (dissapointed that James didn't pick dare) Is it true that you use to be gay,if so why did that change?

James: Yes. I use to be,but that was before I met Cathryn,and that changed because when I first saw her it was definitley love at first sight. Shes the only girl who I ever seen to be with forever.

Cathryn: Awww,I love you. (I kiss james on the lips)

Jeremy: (splashes water at our face to make us stop kissing) Okay Romeo and Juliet back to the game.

Kaiden: Cathryn,truth or dare?

Cathryn: Truth.

Kaiden: What happened between you and your ex Justin?

Cathryn: I don't like talking about that.

James: Either you ask her a deferent question,or we leave.

Kaiden: If she dosen't answer the truth and you both leave,then you both will be punished,and you'll become my slaves.

Jeremy: Dude,thats not cool. You know she doesn't like to talk about that. Besides you know what happened,why do you need her to explain it again?.

Cathryn: Jeremy its okay. I guess since everyone in here know,then it shouldn't hurt to tell. I broke up with justin because he almost blackmailed me,and I could never trust him ever again. I found out that he never really loved me,he just wanted to use me.

Kaiden: Oh,well I didn't know that part. I'm sorry he did that to you.

Cathryn: Its okay, I'm over it. That was the past, I have a much better boyfriend now.

James: (puts his arm around me) Jeremy,truth or dare?

Jeremy: Truth.

James: Have you and Kaiden had sex yet?

Jeremy: Yep.

Cathryn: So you can have sex with Kaiden,but I can't have sex with James?.

Jeremy: Yeah, he can't get me pregnate like James can with you.

Kaiden: (changing the subject) Okay from now on we all have to do dares,no more truths.

[liltdoggy]

I L-O-V-E this!!! SO MUCH!!!!

[KittyCat91]

Jeremy: Okay. I dare James to let me give you a wedgie.

Cathryn: Jeremy,please don't hurt him.

Jeremy: Well this is payback for him making me kiss you. (Jeremy stands up and walks over to James)

James: Fine,whatever. I guess I deserve this.(James stands up and Jeremy pulls up on his swim shorts giving him a high wedgie) OW,SHIT. Jeremy,please let go.

Jeremy: (lifts James's shorts higher) Apoligize to my sister.

James: I'm sorry Cat,I love you. (Jeremy is lifting James from the groud by pulling his shorts higher)AAAHHHH!!!! LET GO.

Cathryn: Jeremy,let him go. I think hes had enough.(Jeremy lets of James, making him go under water,falling on his butt.I go over to help him up) Are you Okay?

James: (coughing up water) Yeah, I think so. I'm really sorry I made you do that. I just couldn't come up with another dare.

Cathryn: (I kiss James on his cheeck) Its okay,and I love you too.

(Jeremy is now sitting back down where James sat. James gets back up,and sits next to Kaiden where Jeremy was. And I sit back down between Jeremy and James.)

Kaiden: I dare Cat to take James's swim shorts off.

Cathryn: WHAT?!?! Kaiden,NO. Thats too far.

James: Cathryn,its okay. You can take them off. I don't care.

Cathryn: Okay. (I slide James's shorts off,and he is now naked)

When I sild his shorts off his cock immediately stood straight up. I couldn't help but to stare at it. It looked like it was about 9 inches long. I started kissing James on the lips. I couldn't help myself,he was really turning me on. I then felt someone grabbing my wrist,pulling me back away from James. It was Jeremy.

Jeremy: Cathryn,bad girl. From now on your sitting between me and Kaiden.

Cathryn: But Jeremy...Uuugh. Your really starting to get on my nerves.

Jeremy: I'm sorry,I'm just trying to protect you.

Cathryn: Whatever. (I sit down next to Jeremy and Kaiden) Can I give a dare to more than one person?

Kaiden: Sure.

Jeremy: I guess.

Cathryn:Okay. I dare Jeremy and Kaiden to strip each other.

Kaiden and Jeremy: (smiling) Okay.

They both took their swim shorts off at the same time, and I was now surrounded by naked guys. Jeremy and Kaiden's cock also stood straight up like James's. Kaiden looked like he was about 6 inches,and Jeremy looked like he could be 6 or 7 inches. What I didn't know about Jeremy is that he had a tattoo of a star on his front,in the middle between his upper thigh and the low part of his stomach.

James: I dare Kaiden to spank Jeremy's ass 20 time.

Cathryn: (laughing at Jeremy) Maybe this will teach you to be more nicer to James.

Jeremy: Wahtever, I really don't care.

Jeremy leans a bit over the side of the hot tub,and sticks his butt up in the air. Kaiden then starts spanking him. Kaiden has now spanked Jeremy 20 times, and his butt cheecks are red. They both sit back down between me.

Jeremy: Since all the guys are now naked. Cathryn, I dare you to take at least your bottoms off.

Cathryn: Okay, I guess thats fair. (I slide my bottoms off,and throw them at Jeremy.He catches them and lays them on the side of the hot tub)

Kaiden: I dare Jeremy to take Cathryn's top off.

Cathryn: Woah,wait. Can't I at least keep my top on? Please?

Jeremy: (slides over next to me) Sorry sis,but the dare must be done.

James: Unbelievable. So you can take her top off,but I can't?.

Jeremy: Well you weren't dared too.

Jeremy sits me on his lap,with my back facing his front. He then slides my shoulder straps down, I pull my arms out of the straps. He grabbed the end of my top and pulls it up. I raise my arms in the air,so Jeremy can take it off. I'am now naked,we are all now completly naked. I noticed that all the guys couldn't keep their eyes off of me,espeacially James.I didn't feel comfortable being naked surrounded by naked guys,so I thought if we could go back out to the pool then I could put my swimsuite back on.

Cathryn: I dare all of us to go back out to the pool.

(We all stand up. Jeremy and James grabb their shorts,and jump out of the hot tub into the pool. I grabb my bottoms,and start to put them back on)

Kaiden: (grabbs my wrist to stop me) Woah,wait. What do you think your doing.

Cathryn: I'm putting my swim suite back on.

Kaiden: (takes my swimsuite away from me) No,not yet. The game still isn't over.

Cathryn: (I'm trying to get my swimsuite back from Kaiden) Thats not funny Kaiden. Give them back.

Kaiden: No. (He jumps out of the hot tub into the pool,and swims out of the tunnel)

Cathryn: KAIDEN, give them back!!!! (evidently Jeremy and James have already swam back to the pool,because I was left alone in the tunnel.) Jeremy,James?!?!?

I was trying to slide out of the hot tub into the pool,but instead I end up slipping off the step,hitting my forhead on the railing, and I fall in the pool. My mine went completly blank,and everything went black.

James: Kaiden,Jeremy. Wheres Cathryn?

Jeremy: I don't know.

Kaiden: She must still be under the tunnel. She tried to put her clothes back on,so I took them from her.

James: I'm going to see if shes okay. (James back under the tunnel and sees me laying in the bottom of the pool.) Shit. JEREMY,HELP!!! (James dives in after me.He picks me up and carrys me out of the tunnel,back out to the pool)

Jeremy: (sees James carrying me unconscious) What happened,is she okay?

James: I don't know. I don't think shes breathing.Help me get her out of the pool.
(Kaiden and Jeremy quickly get out of the pool. James gives me to Jeremy,and Jeremy lays me down on the ground. James then gets out of the pool, and kneels down next to me)

Kaiden: I know CPR. I'm going to have to give her mouth to mouth. (He starts giving me mouth to mouth)

Jeremy: James,what happened to her?

James: I don't know. I found her laying in the bottom of the pool. (James brushes my hair back away from my eyes,and sees the the top corner of my forhead is turning blue.) She must have hit her head on something.

( My eyes are still closed,and I see a bright white light. Not knowing what was going on,I see a face looking down at me,and it looks like my mom. It almost felt so real,like I was with her again. I actually like this feeling,and didn't want that feeling to go away. It was the feeling of my mom's love, I can feel her hold my hand. I then hear her talking to me,and shes telling me to wake up. The fith time Kaiden gives me mouth to mouth,I start to wake up.I feel a strong force come into my throat making me cough up water,finally able to breath again.)

Jeremy: Cathryn,sweety. Please wake up.(sees that I'm waking up,and hugs me) Thank God your okay. (he kisses my cheek)

I still have my eyes close,and I see my mom fading away. I start to cry because I didn't want to leave her.

Cathryn: No. Mommy,please don't go.

Jeremy: (shakes me to wake me up) Cathryn, wake up.Open your eyes.!

Cathryn: (I'm crying,upset at Jeremy for making mom leave me) NO,I want to be with mom.!

Jeremy: (hold me in his arms,trying to comfort me) Sssshhh,clam down. Okay. Mom isn't here anymore,but she will always still be in our hearts.

James: (thinks i've gon crazy) What does she mean?

Jeremy: Do I look like Edward Cullens to you? I don't have the power to read her minde. I don't know.

Kaiden: (hands Jeremy my top to put back on me) We will stop the game for now.(Kaiden slides my bottoms on me)

(I'm so tired from crying,that I finally start to calm down. Jeremy lays me back down,and James put his arm under my head,using it as a pillow)

James: Cat? Baby,can you hear me?

(everything still looks blurry to me,and my heard is hurting really bad)

Cathryn: (I think I see James, and hear him say my name) James?

James: (kisses my forhead) I'm so happy your alive.

(I'm tired and can't keep my eyes opened anymore,and fall asleep)

Kaiden: (sees that I closed my eyes,and starts to worry) Is she okay?

James: I think so. She just fell asleep.

Jeremy puts my top back on,picks me up,and carrys me back inside the house. Kaiden and James quickly put their shorts back on and follow. Jeremy was so worried about me,that he forgot he was naked. He carried me into his room,and lays me down on his bed.James lay down next to me,and puts his arm around me.

[Cheesey]

hmmmm......this story is growing on me. Please continue.

[mentoluv]

this story gets better and better each day i just love it :D

[masterjoe]

How does Cathryn almost drowning make it better than the last post?

[mentoluv]

:D :p :) it makes it very interesting

[WedgieDareGirl]

Cant Wait For The Rest Of The Story :)

[KittyCat91]

Jeremy's room is pretty big. Since my mom pastaway,and my dad went to war, Jeremy was able to move into there bedroom. His room is a 570×379 master bedroom,the biggest in our house. The front side of the walls are painted white,the left are painted black,and the right are painted red. He has a silver ansu paltform California king size bed,with black and white bloomingdale bed spread. He has at least over a thousands different kind of guitars hanging on racks on the left side of the wall,and has alot of different kind of skateboards hanging on racks on the right. His bed is laying against the front, between two windows,and facing in the door. He also has a
400×304 walkin closet,and a 540×324 master bathroom.

Kaiden: Uh, you left these by the pool. (throws Jremy's swim shorts at him)

Jeremy: (catches his swim shorts) Thanks. (Jeremy puts his swim shorts back on)

James: It looks like she must have hit her head pretty hard.

Jeremy: Kaiden,could you do me a favor and go get the ice pack?

Kaiden: Yeah,sure. (He leaves the room,to the kitchen,to get the ice pack)

James: Is it okay if I can stay the night,plaese? I would like to stay,so I can help take care of her.

Jeremy: Yeah,sure. Thanks for taking such good care of my sister.To be honest, I do like you better than her last boyfriend.At least you actually take care of her,unlike he did. I guess thats the reason why I'm so over protective of her.

James: Its cool, I understand.

(Kaiden comes back in the room with the ice pack,and gives it to Jeremy.)

Jeremy: Thanks. (Jeremy lays the ice pack on my forhead. The coldness of the ice pack wakes me up a bit. My eyes are still closed,but I'm able to hear everything they're saying.)

Kaiden: No problem. Babe, I'm really really sorry about what happened. I feel like this whole thing is my fault.

Jeremy: (kisses kaiden on his cheek) Its okay,its not your fault. Accidents happen. (joking) His her fault for being born uncoordinated.

Cathryn: (jokingly) You jerk. I heard that.

Kaiden: (laughing) Looks like you broke the spell for sleeping beauty.

James: (kisses the top of my head) Hey baby,how are you feelin?

Cathryn: Okay, I guess. My head really hurts.

(I've opend my eyes a little bit to I could see. I couldn't open my eyes all the way,because my head hurt so bad. The ice pack was starting to make the bruise sting,so I put my hand on top of James's trying to remove it)

Jeremy: (grabbs my wrist to stop me) Cathryn,no. That needs to stay on for a couple of more minutes.

Cathryn: But its starting to sting.

Jeremy: I'm sorry.Just a few more minutes,then it can come off.

Cathryn: Okay. (I'm kind of confused at why my head is hurting to begin with,I can't remembered how I hurt it) What happened?

Jeremy: I don't know. I was hoping you could tell us that.

James: (talking to me) I don't know how it happend,but I found you laying down at the bottom of the pool. Kaiden had to give you CPR to bring you back to life.

Jeremy: If it wasn't for James and Kaiden,you could still be dead. Do you remember anything at all?

Cathryn: Not really. The only thing I remember is seeing and being with mom.
James,can you please take the ice pack off now? Its really stinging.

Kaiden: Should we take her to the doctor to get x-rays?

Jeremy and Cathryn: NO.

Jeremy: She hate doctors.

Kaiden: Why?

Cathryn: Because there suppose to help you get better. They didn't help my mom. They pratically just let her die in the hospital bed. I hate them for that,I hate that they didn't even try to do anything to help her.

Jeremy: I also don't want my dad to find out about this.

Kaiden: Oh oaky. Well, I have a friend whos a doctor. If its oaky,I can call him over.

Cathryn: I don't trust any doctors.

Kaiden: Cathryn, you need to get your head checked. We need to make sure that theres no brain damage or anything.

Jeremy: Kaiden is right. We need to make sure that your heads okay.

Cathryn: K, whatever.

Jeremy: (talking to kaiden) K,he can come over.

Kaiden: Okay,I'll be right back. I'm going to get my cell phone,and call him.

(Kaiden leaves the room,into the living room,to get his cell phone.)

[444]

Great job so far, Keep up the good work :)

[KittyCat91]

These are some of the characters that I forgot to add. :

Characters:

Bradon (Dr. Maddox): Is 23,bi-sexual, Kaiden's friend. He has light brown, short shaggy hair. Has green eyes, 6"2, white/caucasian, and is sim/very muscular.

Trey: Is 17, bi-curious. Hes Jeremy's and Kaiden's, and is Cathryn's and James's best friend. He has brownish black shaggy hair, brown eyes, 5"8, white/caucasian (very pale), and is silm/very muscular.

Logan: Is 18, bi-sexual. Jeremy and Kaiden's best friend, and James's friend. He has short brown curly/shagy hair, has crystal blue eyes, 5"7, white/caucasian, and is very silm/muscular. He loves to make fun of Cathryn,and always trys to humiliate her.

Jordan: Is 20, gay. Kaiden and Jeremy's best friend, and Cathryn's friend. He has short blond hair (that almost goes past his ears), has dark blue eyes, 5"10, white/caucasian, and is silm/muscular.

[KittyCat91]

Hey readers. Thank you so much for reading my story, and I hope everyone enjoys it. I'm really sorry that I'm keeping you guys waiting for the next chapters. I just started school last week,so its going to be hard to try to find time to write more of it. I promise I will finish it,its just that its going to have to take some time.

[equilibrium]

I'm sorry, but I can't read this story, when it hasn't be formatted properly.

the proper way is:

"This is a example." said John Smith.
Jane Doe looked surprised "Oh!" She exclaimed, " Look, proper English!"
"Look," John smith says, " I can even write action as well."
And with that statement, John smith leant in and pressed his lips to Jane's.

If you want, I could be your beta reader/mentor?
A beta reader reads through work and fixes problems.

[444]

I actually like it the way she writes it. It's different. You don't have to change it 8)

[equilibrium]

Changing it would mean a vast improvement in readability.
In certain instances changing your writing from proper English is fine, for example, when you're role playing, or in the style of the narrator, (for example, if the narrator was a little kid, then you might purposely mess up big words, like owl does in winnie the pooh, ) but this is not one of those times

[Bangin]

I'm sorry, but I can't read this story, when it hasn't be formatted properly.

the proper way is:

"This is a example." said John Smith.
Jane Doe looked surprised "Oh!" She exclaimed, " Look, proper English!"
"Look," John smith says, " I can even write action as well."
And with that statement, John smith leant in and pressed his lips to Jane's.

If you want, I could be your beta reader/mentor?
A beta reader reads through work and fixes problems.


"This is an example." said John Smith.
Jane Doe looked surprised. "Oh!" She exclaimed, " Look, proper English!"
"Look," John Smith said, " I can even write action as well."
And with that statement, John Smith leant in and pressed his lips to Jane's.


Everyone has a different style of writing and although this is less conventional and standard, it still works. I'm enjoying this story and am looking forward to more! :)

[KittyCat91]

I'm sorry, but I can't read this story, when it hasn't be formatted properly.

the proper way is:

"This is a example." said John Smith.
Jane Doe looked surprised "Oh!" She exclaimed, " Look, proper English!"
"Look," John smith says, " I can even write action as well."
And with that statement, John smith leant in and pressed his lips to Jane's.

If you want, I could be your beta reader/mentor?
A beta reader reads through work and fixes problems.



Just letting you know,I'm actually writing it the right way. I'm writing it as a screen play.

[Ozpossum]

pls continue writing

[equilibrium]

"This is an example." said John Smith.
Jane Doe looked surprised. "Oh!" She exclaimed, " Look, proper English!"
"Look," John Smith said, " I can even write action as well."
And with that statement, John Smith leant in and pressed his lips to Jane's.


Everyone has a different style of writing and although this is less conventional and standard, it still works. I'm enjoying this story and am looking forward to more! :)

Actually, A is correct, for me at least .I was always taught that An is for vowel sounds, A is for consonant sounds
I, with my accent, say x-am-ple.

It talks about it more at the end of this page http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/591/01/

Just letting you know,I'm actually writing it the right way. I'm writing it as a screen play.

Oh I'm sorry.
Please accept my apology.
I'm only used to reading plays, not screen plays, and they are a bit different,
starting with stage directions and scene setting.

[Bangin]

Actually, A is correct, for me at least .I was always taught that An is for vowel sounds, A is for consonant sounds
I, with my accent, say x-am-ple.

It talks about it more at the end of this page http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/591/01/



Oh I'm sorry.
Please accept my apology.
I'm only used to reading plays, not screen plays, and they are a bit different,
starting with stage directions and scene setting.



Well writing in accents is bad! :P Only messing, I just wanted to stick up for the story and love grammar debates (yeah, I'm a geek.) But I stand by the correct way being 'an example' because the 'e' is still a vowel sound in 'proper' English. To be honest though, our language is so varied it doesn't really matter I guess! :)

[BabyCakesxo]

I like everything about this story except the homo-sexual couple
I love the story though

Why dont you like the gay couple?

[KittyCat91]

Actually, A is correct, for me at least .I was always taught that An is for vowel sounds, A is for consonant sounds
I, with my accent, say x-am-ple.

It talks about it more at the end of this page http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/591/01/



Oh I'm sorry.
Please accept my apology.
I'm only used to reading plays, not screen plays, and they are a bit different,
starting with stage directions and scene setting.



its okay. Just have too keep in minde that there are many way of writing ;)

[KittyCat91]

Kaiden has called his friend to come over,and he was going to be here any minute. Jeremy and Kaiden waited for him to in the living room,while James an I were still in my brother's room. I was kind of nervous for it has been a year since I had to visit a doctor. I had the flue last time I was sick,and it was really bad too where I had to get a shot. Jeremy had to literally drag and carry me into the doctors office.
I look over at James laying next to me,and he has fallen asleep with the ice pack still in his hand,laying on my head. My head still hurt,but not as bad as before. I was at least able to open and close my eyes without making my head hurt.I then heard foot steps coming closer to the room. just before Jeremy, Kaiden and his friend was about to walk in, I close my eyes pretending that I'm still asleep.

Jeremy: (new that I wasn't really asleep,starts joking around) Woah,thats one big needle. I guess you should probably go ahead and stick it in her now while shes asleep. (He tickles my right arm,making me think a needle was about to be stuck in me)

Cathryn: (thinking he was actually serious, I open my eyes and start freking out) NO,DON"T!!!! ( Before I could push Jeremy's arma way,he quickly moves it before I could hit him, and makes me accidently wake James up by punching his groins)

James: (wakes up shokingly in pain) OWWW, Son of a bitch.

Cathryn: (I put my hand where his is holding his groins,trying to comfort him)Oh,baby.Im sooo sorry. Jeremy freaked me out and made me hit you. Are you okay?

Jeremy: (talking to James) The doctor is here if you need him to look at that.

James: (trying to calm himself down) I think I'll be fine. (takes the ice pack from my head) I'm just gonna borrow this. (He lays the ice pack down onto of his groins) Shit,thats cold. Could i traid this for a heat pack?

Kaiden: (inturrupts James) Anyways...Cathryn,this is my friend Dr.Maddox.

Bradon: (he gives a frim hand shake) Nice to meet you Cathryn.

Cathryn: Nice to meet you too.

Bradon: Your brother tells me that your afriad of doctors? If it makes you more comfortable,then you can call me Bradon.

Cathryn: I'm not afraid of doctors,I just hate them. No offense.

Bradon: (chuckles at my comment) Non taken. (He lays his briefcase down on Jerem'y night stand,and starts looking around in it.) Now,wheres that needle at?

Cathryn: (I start to get scared and get up from out of the bed.I try to make an excuse to leave) I'm gonna go get James that heat pack for James.
(Jeremy and Kaiden both cuff their arms around mine,and make me lay back down)

Jeremy: I don't think so,you're staying here.

Bradon: (laughing) Relax sweety, I just kidding. I won't hurt you, I'm here to help you. Okay?

Cathryn: Okay.

Bradon: How does your head feel?

Cathryn: It still hurts, but the pain has gone down some.

Bradon: How did you hurt it?

Cathryn: I don't remeber.

JamesL I don't know what happened, but I found her laying at the bottom of the pool.

Bradon: (He puts his hand on my forhed,and brushes my hair back to look at my bruise) Hmmm,seems like you're lucky to be alive.

Jeremy: Is she going to be okay?

Bradon: Yes,its just a bruise. (talking to me) If you keep feeling pain,make sure to take some Ibuprofen, and you need to put an ice pack on your bruise for a couple of minuets, each day until the pain goes away. Understood?

Cathryn: Yes sir.

Bradon: If you start to feel worse or have any questions, just give me a call. (He writes his number down on a piece of paper and give it to me) Okay?

Cathryn: Okay.

Bradon: Hope you get better soon.

Cathryn: Thanks.

Kaiden: Thanks for coming over Bradon.

Bradon: Not a problem.

Jeremy: If you want Kaiden & I are having a small party later on tonight. You can come,if you want to.

Bradon: Okay,cool. What time?

Kaiden: Starts when the sun goes down.

Bradon: Alright,cool. See ya then.

(He leaves Jeremy's room, and Kaiden walks him out. Jeremy sits down in his egg chair,and starts reading my book I let him barrow called "Secret Fire")

Cathryn: You're having a part?

Jeremy: Yeah,so?

Cathryn: Didn't dad say no parties while he was gone?

Jeremy: Listen, dad isn't here and i'm incharge. I'm an adult so I can throw a party if and whenever I want too. So if you and your boyfriend will keep your mouthes shut, daddy won't know now will he?

Cathryn: Whatever.

Jeremy: Oh, and if you do tell dad,then I'll tell him that you're on birthcontroll pills without his permission.

Cathryn: (I'm shocked at what Jeremy had told me, I had know idea that he knew about that) How did you know about that?.

Jeremy: (He took out the pack that had my pills in it out of the book) Looks to me like you tried to hide them in your book. (He tosses the pack at me and I catch it)

Cathryn: (I'm so embarrassed that Jeremy caught me) How can this day possibly get any worse?. (I'm upset and lay my head down on James's chest)

Jeremy: You're grounded for a week.

James: I think it just did.

Cathryn: What?!? Jeremy thats not fair. Theres nothing wrong with taking these pill,they just help protect me.

Jeremy: You went behinde mine and dad's back just to get those fuckin pills. How in the hell did you even get your hands on them, without having an adult with you.

Cathryn: I did have an adult with me.

Jeremy: Who?!

Cathryn: James's mom was with me.

James: This is starting to get kind of awkward,so im going to go put the ice pack up,and leave you two alone. (James gets up out of the bed,and leaves Jerem's room)

Jeremy: (he has an evil smile on his face,like he got an idea from the book or something) You know what I got a better punishment. You're going to be my servant at my party tonight.

Cathryn: WHAT?!?

Jeremy: Its either that or you grounded for a whole week.

It did seem fair too me,I guess. I would rather be a servant just for one day,rather than being grounded for a whole week.

Cathryn: Fine. I would rather be your servant,than be grounded.

Jeremy: Okay,good. Oh yeah, your not just my servant your anyone's for whom comes to the party. You'll be cleaning up after us, and getting us what we want.

Cathryn: Fine,whatever. Who all is coming over tonight?

Jeremy: Well you already know that Bradon is coming. Jordan, Trey, and Logan are also comming over.

I was disugusted to hear that Logan was coming. I hate him,as he hates me.
I don't know why he hates me. I just hate the way he always has to find some way to humiliate me.
Cathryn: Yep,my day just keeps getting worse by the minute.

Jeremy: You better be nice too him.

Cathryn: The only reason why I'm not nice too him is because he always irritates me to death. Hes the one that needs to be nice too me.

Jeremy: Whatever. You need to take a nap so you can feel better for the party.

Cathryn: K, whatever. (I was wanting to get up and take a shower, but I was so exausted that I fell asleep)

While I was asleep I had the best dream. Jeremy,my mom,and my dad were in it. We were all togeather again as a family. We were all at the beach having a fun time,playing volly ball. Even James and Kaiden were there. We were all one big happy family.
Hours have went by, my dream was then inturrupted by Jeremy shaking my shoulder.

Jeremy: Cathryn,wake up. Its almost 6:00.

Cathryn: (im groaning because I don't want to get up) I don't wanna.

Jeremy: (spanks my butt) Get up,now. You need to go take a shower to get the pool water off of ya.

Cathryn: Okay, i will.

Jeremy: (Jeremy is fed up with having to wait on me, and disrespecting him)Alright,looks like wer'er gonna have to do this the hard way.(Jeremy picks me up carrying me like a baby in his arms.)

Cathryn: Jeremy,no. Please put me down. (hes ignoring my order) I can walk ya know.

Jeremy: Fine.(We are now in in my room,and he puts me down) Go to your bathroom, and take a shower. Now.

Cathryn: (I'm annoyed from Jeremy bossing me around) Okay.
(I go to my bathroom,and slam the door shut infrot of Jeremy's face)

My bathroom is very desent.Its a 400x300 master bathroom. My mom decorated my bathroom for me by herself.On the left side of the walls where my bath tub is, she painted the walls dark ocean blue, and made it look like as if you were under the ocean.She painted dophins, sea lions, sea otters, sea horses (my favorite sea animals), clown fish, and angel fish(my favorite fish) swimming happily under the ocean.On the right side where my toliet and sink were,she decorated it Artic theme. Starting split down the middle off the walls,she painted the water,and had polar bears,penguins (my favorite artic animals), and more sealions swimming happily under the ocean. Starting at th middle and stoping at the ceiling she painted glaciers floating ontop of the water,and more penguins and polar bears playing in the snow.
I have a white marble bathtub with a silver shower head, my cabbinets, sink, and toliet are also white marble.
Minutes have gone by,and I'm now done with my shower. I step out of the tub,grabb my towel hanging from the silver rack on my wall, dry myself off, and rapp it around my body. I leave the bathroom,going into my room.
My bed room is a 500x400 master bed room. My walls are painted bright lime green,and saphire blue (my favorite colors). I have a black Espresso Contemporary Queen Size bed,with lime green and blue swirling tie dye bed spread. Just like Jeremy's bed, mine also sits laying against the front, between my window, and the sliding glas door that leads to my own private balcony,and facing in the doorway. I have an egg chair that sits over in the upper left corner (the color of outer shell is white,and the inner shell is orange.It also came with a footstool.) I have a rubik cube nightstand,that sits on the left hand side,next to my bed. On the left hand side on the middle of the wall,are two book shelves that are shaped like Mr. and Mrs.Pac Man. I have a black plasma screen t.v, the lays on the wall facing my bed.
As I walked out of the bathroom door into my room, I see laying on my bed, the long black maid's dress with full light pink apron and mop cap,that I only wore once for a school play. I was wondering why and how did it get on my bed. Jeremy without knocking,walks in my room.

Cathryn: (I was embarrassed having my brother see me with only just a towel on)Jeremy,can't you knock?.

Jeremy: Sorry,I was just coming in to see if you were out of the shower yet. (point at the dress laying on my bed) See the clothes I picked out for ya. (he gives me an evil smile)

Cathryn: What?!? No!. I'm not wearing that.

Jeremy: Yes you will. Unless you want to be grounded for a week. I'm pretty sure that if I tell dad than he might ground for more than just a week.

Cathryn: (I give up trying to get what I want) Fine, you win.

Jeremy: As I always do. Now go into your bathroom and put that dress on,I'll be waiting for you out here incase if you need help zipping it up.

Cathryn: Okay. ( I go back into my bathroom)

I can't believe that he was actually making me wear that stupid dress again. The only reson that I had to get this dress,was because I played one of the maids in the broadway show "Annie" . I know it may sound silly,but the reason I hate this dress is because, i hate wearing dresses and on top of that it has pink on it,and I hate pink (I would have bought a white one,but the pink ones were the only ones left). Eventhough everyone said that I looked cute in it,I still felt humiliated wearing it infront of a thouasand people. And know it feels like dejavu all over again.
I take my towel off and start drying my hair with my blow dryer. My hair was now dried and brushed. I put my white pantyhose on, and I slipped into the dress. I was hoping that I wouldn't need Jeremy's help,but he was right. I couldn't get the zipper to go all the way up. I walk back into my room,and see Jeremy waiting for me, sitting on my bed.

Cathryn: Jeremy,can you please help me zip it up?

Jeremy: Ofcourse. (I turn around,to have my back facing his front,and he zips my dress up,and ties the strings from the apron into a bow) You need to put these heels on. (He hands me black high heels,with white leather lace on them. Know that I was too clumsy to wear high heels,I put them on any way because I was too tired to try to fight too get what I want)

Cathryn: I feel so humiliated.

Jeremy: (he turns me back around to face him) Don't feel that way. You look adorable. ( He trys to put the mop cap on my head,but I back away)

Cathryn: Jeremy,no. Please don't make me wear that.

Jeremy: (He grabbs my wrist pulling me back towards him) Stay Still. (He puts the mop cap on my head,and tied the stings together in a bow. He takes me infront of my closet door,so I could dee myself in the mirror)

Cathryn: (I'm shocked and humiliated at what I see) Oh my god. I'am not going out there looking like this.

Jeremy: (laughs at my expression) Yes you are. (he grabbs my wrist to try to make me leave my room)

Cathryn: No,I'm staying here. Jeremy let me go.

Jeremy: Listen,theres nothing to worry about. The only people that are in the living room is Kaiden and James. Now come on. You have to be out there to open the door for them.

Cathryn: No,I'm not going. (Jeremy gets fustrated at me. He picks me up and carries me over his shoulder.I starts kicking my legs,and hitting his back to make him put me down) Jeremy put me down!

Jeremy: (He spanks my butt) Cathryn,stop it! (He raps his arm around my legs to make me stop kicking. Were now in the living room and he sits me down next to James and Kaiden on the couch)

[KittyCat91]

Hey readers! I'm sorry if I miss spelled some words in my story,Its just that when it stars to get really late,I have to hurry typing,so that I can go to bed.
Since tonight wasn't a school night, I was able to stay up all night to finish chapter4(pt.2) for yall.
I just want to thank everyon for reading my story,and I'm hoping that everyon is enjoyining it.
:)

[curious-young-girl]

wow, good story =)

[slut4use]

love this story...is there more

[KittyCat91]

The living room is a modern 600 × 362. All the wall are painted white. We have a black 347×327 recliner chair, next to the black and white 1000×666 contemporary Sectional Sofa facing a black 425×374 Sony plasma screen t.v,under the 500×388 fireplace.

(Jeremy sits in the recliner chair)

James: (hes shocked at what I'm wearing and is trying his best not to laugh) Woah.

Kaiden: (he can't help but to laugh and tease me) Awww, you look so cute.

Cathryn: (Kaiden pinches my dimples, and I slap his arm away) Shut up.

Kaiden: Well,someones a little fistey.

James: (he puts his arm around me) Just the way I like em'. (he gives me a kiss on my cheek)

Cathryn: No offense James,but I'm really not in the mood. ( I look over a Jeremy and hes laughing at me) You're enjoying every bit of this aren't you?

Jeremy: Yeah,pretty much. (the door bell rings) Go get the door.

Cathryn: Go get it yourself.

James: To save my girlfriend's humiliation,I'll go get it. (James gets up from the couch,and walks to the front door)

Jeremy: James sit back down,its Cat's job to answer the door. (James ignores him and answers it anyways) You're lucky you have a boyfriend that cares about you so much.

Cathryn: And I thank God everyday that I do.

Jeremy: You're going to let the next person in.

Cathryn: Whatever.

James opened the door to let Jordan and Trey in. Guessing that Jordan just came straight over here from work,because he was inside the Little Caesars mascot.Trey walked in behinde him carrying four boxes of pizza's,he hands them to James,and James puts them on the kitchen counter.
I was embarrassed to be seen by Trey like this. Before I met James I had a little crush on him,we tried dating once,but it didn't really work out too well,so we just stayed best friends. He is also the whole reason why James and I started dating,but thats a different story.
Trey: (He sees what I'm wearing) Was this suppose to be a costume party?

Jeremy: (laughing at Jordan) Not that I know of. Jordan,what up with the...

Jordan: I just came here from work. I had to wear this stupid thing all day. Is it ok if I can use your bathroom to change?

Jeremy: Yeah,sure.

Cathryn: Can I go to my room to change?

Jeremy: No. (the door bell rings again) Now go get the door.

Cathryn: Fine,whatever. (I go to answer the door and see Logan,waiting to come in,and he starts busting out laghing at me) Ewww,gross. (I slam the door on his face)

Jeremy: Cathryn let him in.

Cathryn: (being sarcastic) Sorry,I didn't know you invited a stray over.
(I open the door again,an Logan is still laghing at me.)

Logan: (he takes his cell phone out and starts taking pictures of me) Smile Hazel. These are going on facebook.

Cathryn: (I take his cell phone out the door) Fetch dorke. (I fix to shut the door on him again,but Jeremy stops me)

Jeremy: Cathryn,go get his cell phone. NOW!

Cathryn: No. Theres no way, that I'm going out looking like this.

Logan: (tuggs at my mop cap) Awww,is Halloween starting early this year?

Cathryn: Its hard to know when Halloween is coming,when you keep that mask on. Oh wait,I'm sorry.

Bradon: (walks up to the door) Did anyone loose a cell phone? It flew in my window,and hit me in the head.

Cathryn: Sorry.

Logan: That would be mine. (Bradon gives Logan his cell phone) Thanks.

Jeremy: Hey Bradon. This is Logan and Logan,this is Bradon.

Bradon: (He shakes Logan's hand) Nice to meet you.

Logan: Nice to meet you too.

Bradon, Logan, and Jeremy walk back into the living roo. I close the door behinde them, and follow. Kaiden is still sitting on the left end of the couch, Trey is sitting in the middle, and James is still sitting on the right end of the couch. Bradon went to go sit in the recliner chair, and Jeremy went to go sit down between Trey and Kaiden. I was going to go sit next to James and Trey,but Logan took my spot.

Cathryn: (I stand infront of Logan) Ugh, excuse me? You're in my seat.

Logan: Ugh,excuse me? It doesn't have you name on it.

Cathryn: Move your butt away from my boyfriend,so I can sit next to him.

Logan: No,I want to sit next to my friend.

James: Hey Trey,can you please scoot down some?

Trey: Yeah,sure.

(Trey scoots down next to Jeremy,I sit down next to Trey, and James switches seats with Logan. Jordan comes back in the living room,and sits down next to Logan.)

Cathryn: Thank you Trey.

Trey: No problem. So what up with the dress? I havn't seen you wear that since you played the waitress in Annie.

Cathryn: Jeremy is making me wear it.

Jeremy: Oh,yeah. I forgot to tell everyone,that Cathryn will be our servant tonight.

Logan: Cool. My day,just keeps getting better and better.

Trey: (talking to me) What did you do to make so mad,that he came up with this?

Cathryn: I don't want to talk about ti. Lets just say that it was either be everyone's servant for tonight,or be grounded for a whole week.

Trey: Oh,i see.

Bradon: Shouldn't she still be in bed?

Jeremy: She should be fine. She took a nap awhile ago.

Bradon: Cathryn, how does your head feel.

Cathryn: It feels better than it did. Although, now that Logan is here,my headaches are coming back.

Logan: Careful now, don't let your brains go to your head!

Cathryn: At least I have brians. You on the other hand, is living proof that man can live without a brain.

Jordan: Haha, dude that was a burn.

Jeremy: Thats it. You two don't say another word to each other,unless if its something nice.

Jordan: So what are we going to do?

Kaiden: (talking to Jeremy) You want to finish the game of truth or dare now?

Jeremy: Yeah,sure.

Kaiden: James,Cathrny,Jeremy and I were playing truth or dare earlier today,but we didn't get to finish it. You guys want to continue in the rest of the game with us?
(Everyone agreed except me)

Cathryn: No thanks. I don't want to die again.

Logan: To bad you... (Jeremy cuts him off)

Jeremy: Logan,shut up.

Cathryn: Thanks Jeremy. Besides its not fair for me,because I'm the only girl.

Kaiden: Come on Cat,you were already playing earlier,and you still can't back out. The only reason why we quit playing for awhile was because of your little inccident that happened. You know the rules.

Trey: What are the rules?

Kaiden: If anyone backs out of the game,or doesn't tell the truth or give the dare,then they will be that person's slave for a year.

Cathryn: Fine,but I get to give the truth or dare first.

Jeremy: K,fine. It will be me, Kaiden, Bradon and Logan,against James,Trey, Cathryn, and Jordan.

Cathryn: Okay. I dare Jeremy to let me go change into my normal clothes.

Jeremy: Fine,you can go change.

(I start to leave the living room,but Logan trips making me fall on my knees)

Logan: But wait. I dare Cathryn to strip infront of us,or I could do it for you.

Cathryn: Screw you jack-ass.

Logan: Alright,don't mind if I do.
(Logan gets on top of me,and trys to undo the back of my zipper,but I try to fight him off)

Cathryn: (I start crying from all of this humiliation) NO, STOP.! Let me go!

James: (he pulls Logan off of me) Logan,stop. Get off of her.

Trey: (he walks over to me and helps me back up my feet) Are you okay?

Cathryn: (I'm very pissed off at Jeremy, that he was actually going to let Logan do that too me.) I hate you! (I take my mop cap off and throw it at him. I run to my room,and slam the door behinde me)

[ConverseLuv]

YET ANOTHER GREAT POST!!!!! Keep postin!!!

[ConverseLuv]

:O this is 18 story jst noticed :O srry but I'm no longer gonna read this :P

[LovelyLiz]

great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

[KittyCat91]

Thanks guys. I'm sorry I havn't posted the other chapter yet,but I will soon. School has been keeping me busy.
I can promise you that I will finish this story.

[Stormwalker22]

I hope so I really like this story alot. Please continue

[phillis]

please keep writing this story

[KittyCat91]

I'm now in my room, and I walk into my closet. My closet is a 337×450 walk in closet. Since Logan helped by unzipping my dress, I didn't have any problem with taking my dress off. I slid the dress,and the panty hose down, steped out of it, and kicked it against the wall. I grabbed my old karate shorts, that I bought from my martial arts teacher, and put them on. The shorts are black,on the right side of the front leg is a picture of a girl kicking(all in red), on the left side of the front is a ninja symbol,and on the back across the butt,in white letter reads "i Ninja". I then grabbed a t-shirt that James bought me,and put it on. The shirt is white,has a heart on the front that has Jack and Sally on the middle of it, right above the heart says"Togeather Forever." on it, and on the back of the shirt reads,"Nightmare Before Christmas". I then finde my flip flops that my dad gave to me,and put them on. My flip flops are LSU Tigers, purple and gold, ComfyFlops(Indoor flip flops).
I'am now dressed into my normal clothing, and feel alot better than I did before. I unlock the door to my closet, and walk out,into my room. Because I'm still mad at Jeremy I decide to stay in my room for awhile. I did't care what to consequenses were, I just wanted some time to myself for awhile. I plugged my itouch into my ihome,i selected Owl City and started playing "Vanilla Twilight", and turned up the music.
I was just going to lay down for awhile,but as I was getting on my bed,I steped on something. I looked under my bed to see what it was, and it was a photo album that my mom gave to me before she pastaway. I never actually got a chance to look at it,so I thought that maybe now would be a good time. I grabbed the photo album, and sat on my bed,laying up against me pillows.
I opened the photo album,and the first pictures I saw was a group family photo that we took infrot of our house. It was just a couple of days before I was born, because my mom and I just came home from the hospital. As I flipped pages,there were alot of pictures of Jeremy and I from when we were just babys,and continued on as we were growing up.
I kind of started to feel guilty from when I told Jeremy that I hated him. The truth is,that I would never hate him. Hes my brother,and I should be thanking him for letting me stay with him. Remembering that my dad was going to make me move-in with my Uncle who lives all the way out in Kansas,and if it wasn't for Jeremy convinving our dad to let me saty with him, I wouldn't be at where I'am now. Eventhough Jeremy can sometimes be a pain in the ass, I will always love him no matter what. I really hope he doesn't hate me for the way I've been treating him.

[Back in the living room...]

James: Logan,why did you do that. You really went too far that time.

Logan: It was just a joke.I wasn't going to really do anything to her.

James: (talking to Jeremy) So much for protecting your sister.

Jeremy: I knew that Logan was just joking around.

Logan: Yeah,shes the one that can't take a joke. Whats her problem?

James: From the way I saw it,she thought you were serious.

Logan: Whatever, I really don't care.

Jeremy: I can't believe she said,she hated me. Shes never said that to me before. I guess I may have gone too far myself.

Kaiden: Jeremy,knowing Cat she was probably just saying that out of anger.

Trey: What did she do to deserve that?

Jeremy: Its a long story.Lets just say,that she lied to me,and to my dad.

Trey: Oh.Well,I hope shes okay.

James: Yeah,it usually doesn't take her this long to change clothes.

Jeremy: I guess I'll go see if she okay. (Jeremy gets up from the couch,and starts walking to my room)

James: Can I come?

Jeremy: No,sorry. I would like to talk to her alone.

James: Oh okay.

Jeremy: I'll be right back.

Kaiden: K.

Still in my room laying on my bed,looking at the photo album. "Vanilla Twilight" was now over, and "I'll Meet You There" also by Owl City, started playing. Just as I was wishing that I could take back what I said to Jeremy, he walks into my room,closing the door behinde him.

Jeremy: Hey, are you okay?

Cathryn: I guess.
(Jeremy comes sits beside me on my bed)
Jeremy: (he sees the photo album that I'm looking at) Where did ya get that at?

Cathryn: (The way Jeremy asked,made it seem like I wasn't suppose to have it,and it made me kind of nervous) I found it under my bed. Mom made this for me.

Jeremy: Oh okay,cool. Can I look at it?
(I knod my heaad yes,and hand him the photo album. He starts chuckling abit,as if the pictures were bringing him back good old family memories.)

Cathryn: Jeremy, I'm really sorry about what I said. I don't hate you,I love you.
(I give Jeremy a hug,and he wraps his arms around me)
Jeremy:I'm glad to here you say that. I love you too. (He kisses the top of my head) I'm also sorry for embarrassing you like that.

Cathryn: Its okay,I forgive you. Does this mean that I'm not grounded?

Jeremy: I guess you could say that your humiliation awhile ago,was enough punishment. So yes,your un grounded.

Cathryn: (I give Jeremy another hug,and kiss him on the cheek) Thank you.

Jeremy: You're welcome. Do you want to come back to the living room now? James is worried about you.

Cathryn: Okay, I guess I'll go.

I turnd off my ihome, and my itouch. Jeremy and I got up from my bed. He left my room waiting for my in tha hall way. I turn my lights off,and leave my room,closing the door behinde me. Jeremy and I now leave the hallway, and walk into the living room. I go sit back on the couch next to James and Trey, and Jeremy sits back down next to Kaiden.)

James: (puts his arm around me) Hey baby,you okay? (he kisses my cheek)

Cathryn: Yes,I'm fine. (I kiss Jsmes on his lips)

Kaiden: So are you still playing with us?

Cathryn: Yeah, I guess.

Kaiden: Okay. Then James,that means its your trun.

James: Okay. Logan, truth or dare?

Logan: Dare.

James: I dare you to be nice to Cathryn fo the rest of the night.

Cathryn: Yeah,lets see if thats even possible.

Logan: Fine, whatever.

[Camille]

Don't let this die!!!!!!! Pretty please O:D

[KittyCat91]

Hey readers,I'm sorry I havn't posted another chapter yet. My laptop broke, so I probably wont be able to be back on in a while. (The reason that I'am on now is because I'm using my friend's computer.) Hopefully I'll be able to get a new computer soon. I promise that I wont let this story die,& that I will FINISH it.

[KittyCat91]

Don't let this die!!!!!!! Pretty please O:D

Lol,don't worry the story didn't die,just my laptop. The story must go on,& will continue until I'm at the end.

[Dinosaur]

I'm looking forward to the next part ^_^

[ursoweird123]

I wish you would post soon. This is one of my favorite stories at the moment, and I can't STAND waiting for the next chapter.

[dare_devil_girl]

please hurry up with the next parts :) i really like this story !!!

[undertaker]

So it has died??

[Stormwalker22]

NO! it cant die! I love this Story!

[ithinkiwillkillyou]

This is probably the best story I've read on here, please let it continue

[KittyCat91]

Jeremy: Wait,before we continue,I got an idea. I'll be right back. (Jeremy leave the living room, to his room, and comes back with a hat and a piece of paper in his hand. He tares the pice pf paper into 8 squares and hands them,and pens to each of us.) Write your name on the piece of paper,and then put them inside this had. Besides being on a team, whoever picks your name out of the hat gets to give you the truth or dare.

(We all agreed,wrote our names down on the pice of paper,and put them in the hat.)

Jeremy:Since James already dared Logan, he gets to choose from the hat first. (Jeremy hand the hat to Logan)

Logan:Okay. (He pulls out the a paper,and shows me that its me) Cat, truth or dare.

Cathryn: I guess dare.

Logan: I dare you to stand in the middle of the floor. Everyone of us can pinch you where ever we want, and if you flinch it doesn't count.

Cat: Ummm Okay.

I stood in the middle of the floor, and all the boys came up and circled around me. Kaiden went first,and pinched my left shoulder. It did't hurt too bad because he mostly grabbed my t-shirt,instead of my jeans. James did the same on my right shoulder,and so did Bradon. Jeremy pinched the lower back part of my thigh.

Cathryn: (I accidently finch,to move away from Jeremy) Ow Jeremy,that hurt. ( Logan pushes me back into the middle)

Logan: That didn't count,so Jeremy has to pinch you again.

Jeremy: Sorry Cat.

I look back to see where James went, and him, Kaidne, and Bradon were sitting back down. Jeremy pinches me again at the same spot, and I forced myself not to flinch. Trey lightly pinched the left front of my arm, and Jordan pinches my left butt cheek.

Cathryn: (Not seeing that one coming,I flinched. I was shocked at where Jordan just touched me) Ow, Jordan!!! (I start rubbing where he pinched me to make the sting go away, and cover it hoping that he wouldn't pinch me there again.

Jordan: What? I can pinch you where ever I want. Now,move your hand. You flinched,so I have to pinch you again.

I turn back around,but refused to move my hand. He pinched it really hard, & I didn't want him touching me there. Jordan grabbs my wrist,moves it out of the way, and pinches me again. He didn't pinch me so hard this time,so I didn't flinch. Jordan goes to sit back down,and Logan starts circling around me.
Logan: So Cathryn, whats the most sisitive skin on a human body to be pinched at, and really hurts.

Cathryn: (Logan was making me nervouse from circling around me,and asking me that question) I...I don't know.

Logan gives me an evil laugh. He stops circling around me, and stands infront of me. I then feel a sharp pain on my left nipple. I look down,and see Logan pinching and twisting my nipple.

Cathryn: (I was shocked at the pain, and where Logan was touching me,that I flinched,and backed away from him) OW, LOGAN!!! (I foled my arms accross my chest)

James: Logan,come on thats not fair.

Logan: Shut up. The rule is that I can pinch her wherever I want. Cat,come back here. (He grabbs my arm and pulls me back towards him) Move your arms.

Cathryn: Logan, please. Don't touch me there. That really hurts.

Logan: Sorry,but you flinched. I have to keep pinching you there until you don't. And if you back out, then I get to punish you, and you'll become my slave.

I would rather jump off a cliff, than be Logan's slave. I definatly didn't want him to win, cause I could tell that he was trying to get me to loose,so that I can become his slave.

Cathryn: Fine.

I removed my arms,and put them by my side. I closed my eyes, and I coud feel Logan pinching and twisting my left nipple. I held my breath forcing myself not to flinch. Logan finally let go, and I went to go sit back down next to James and Trey. Logan hands Jordan the hat. He pulls out the paper, and it says James.

Jordan: James, truth or dare.

James: Truth.

Jordan: If you were stranded on a desert island, who would you want to be stranded with, and why?

James: I would want to be standed with Cathryn, because shes my girlfriend, I love her, and I don't think I could ever live without her.

Jordan hands the hat to Bradon, and pulls out Kaidens name from the hat.

Bradon: Kaiden, truth or dare?

Kaiden: Truth.

Bradon: How many boyfriends and girlfriends have you had?

Kaiden: I've had 2 girlfriends, and 3 boyfriends.

Bradon hands the hat to Kaiden, and pulls out Jordan's name.

Kaiden: Jordan, truth or dare?

Jordan: Dare.

Kaiden: Okay. (Kaiden gets up and leaves the living room. He goes to the kitchen, and gets a cup. He gos into the bathroom and feels the cup with toliet water. Hes now back in the living room and hands Jordan the cup.) I dare you to drink this.

Jordan: Okay, what is it?

Kaiden: I'll tell ya after you finish drinking it.

Jordan: Okay. (Jordan chugges the water down, not leaving a singke drop left in the cup)

Kaiden: (trying hard not to laugh) You just drank toliet water.

Jordan: I thought it taste funny. I think I'm gonna be sick.

Kaiden: You can't throw it back up, or you'll have to drink a bigger glass than that.

Jordan: Can I please go and get some gingerale or something?

Kaiden: Yeah,sure. I'am comming with you to make sure you don't throw up.

Jordan: Okay.

Kaiden and Jordan leave the living room, and go into the kitchen. Jeremy now has the hat,and pulls out Bradon's name.

Jeremy: Bradon, truth or dare?

Bradon: Truth?

Jeremy: How many people have you made out with, and who was your favorite and why?

Brandon: Too many to keep track of, and thats for me to know, and for you not to know.

Jeremy: Okay. For now on we all pick dares,no truths.

Jeremy hands the hat to Trey. Kaiden, and Jordan comes back into the living room,and sits back down. Trey pulls out my name out of the hat.

Trey: Cathryn, if its okay with James...I dare you to kiss me for 40 seconds.

Cathryn: Ummm...(I look at James to see if hes okay with it, he knodds his head yes.) Okay.

Trey leans over, as I lean over to him, and he kisses me passionatley. It felt kind of wierd kissing my best friend, but he was a good kisser. 40 seconds have went by, and we stopped kissing.

[KittyCat91]

Hey readers,I'm glad that you like my story, and hope you keep liking the next chapters I post. I'm sorry that its been along time. Its just I'am busy with school, and I'am now working at a haunted house, and I don't come back home until 12am,somtimes 1am.
I was able to use my mom's computer since mine is broken, and I was finally able to post my 7th chapter today.
I'am really sorry if I have accidently miss spelled some things. I would go back and fix them, but it wont let me.
Well once I get more ideas to write about chapter 8, it should be up soon.
I'm glad that I have fans that love my story, i like the comments that I've been reading. Thank you all for giving your time to read my story.

[Stormwalker22]

Great job Kittycat cant wait for chapter 8

[ursoweird123]

I'm so glad we got an update XD!!! I love this story. Few spelling errors, but you apologized so it's all good. Can't wait for Chapter 8 (that rhymed :D:D:D)!

[WedgieDareGirl]

You are a really talented writer, I hope this continues soon :D

[Dinosaur]

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

[KittyCat91]

As it was about to be my turn, my cell phone rings. I looked at the caller ID and it was my dad calling. Since my dad is out in Iraq, he barley ever gets a chance to call us,and we are'nt allowed to call him unless its an emergancy. I was excited to see that my dad was calling me,so I quickly pick up the phone.
Cathryn: (talking on the phone) Hey Daddy.
Dad: Hey sweety, how have you been?

Jeremy: Thats dad? (I knodd my head yes at Jeremy) Give me your phone I wanna talk to him.

Cathryn: No not yet, I want to talk to him too. I'll put it on speaker.
Dad: Huh?
Cathryn: Oh,sorry. Not you, I was talking to Jeremy, and your on speaker. I've been doing okay. How have you been? I really miss you.
Dad: I really missed you too. Everything is going great. I'm hoping to come back home to visit you soon. So anything intresting that I've missed?

I was thinking about dad's question, he wouldn't even believe at what had happened. Bingo,I thought of this to be the perfect opprotunity to get back at Jeremy,for all the humiliation he put me through today.

Cathryn: Oh yeah, you probably wouldn't even believe what has happened.
Dad: Really? Tell me some.
Cathryn: Okay. Oh,theres been something that I've been meaning to tell you.
Dad: Whats that?
Cathryn: I know this might shock you, but please don't freak out on me. James's mom took me to the gynecologist so that I could get birthcontrol pills.

Jeremy and everyone else in the room stared at me in shock of what they just heard. I even made Jordan spit out his gengeral he was abouto to swallow, and he accidently spit it all in Logan's face. I was trying so hard not to laugh at that. Trey had to get up and run to a different room just so he could laugh out loud (Since my dad was on the phone everyone had to be quiet, because Jeremy would get in trouble if dad knew that he was throughing a party). Jeremy was giving me an evil smile thinking he knew what was coming.

Dad: You and James havn't or aren't planning onto you know...?
Cathryn: (I knew what my dad was about to say and quickly cut him off befor he would say that word) Ewww,dad. No. Theres nothing to worry about. I decided on my own that it I should be on them. Besides helping me not be pregnate,the doctor said that it will help my monthly slow down, and to help me not have bad acne anymore.
Dad: Oh okay. As long as nobody is pressuring or forcing you to take the pills its fine with me. I'm proud of you for deciding that on your own. That takes big responsibility.

Jeremy's mouth droped open. He was shocked and dissapointed that dad wasn't grounding me or yelling at me. I give Jeremy an evil smile in return, and turn dad off speaker phone so Jeremy couldn't hear.

Cathryn: Yes daddy,I know. I thought I should also tell you, that I almost died today. But don't worry, Kaiden gave me CPR, and brought me back to life.(Jeremy evidently knew what I was up to and started trying to grabb my phone out of my hand.)

Jeremy: Cat, give me your phone now.

Cathryn: No. Jeremy stop. (I get up, and walk behind the couches to get away from Jeremy) Hey dad, did you know that Jeremy has a tattoo? Hes also throwing a party right now.
Jeremy: You're a dead Cat.

Jeremy then starts chasing after me. We run around in circles in the living room. I accidently trip over the recliner chair, that Bradon is still sitting in, and fall into his lap. We both end up accidently make the chair tipp over. I almost fall, rolling out of the chair, but Bradon caught me,and hes now holding me like a baby. I'm guessing that Trey must have came out of the room, and just saw what happened to me, because I saw him having to run back into the room, just so he could laugh again.

Logan: Haha, dude that was epic.

Bradon: (talking to me) Are you okay?

Cathryn: Yeah, I'm sorry. (talking to my dad) Jeremy was chasing me and I accidently fell on top of his friend Bradon. Okay. Bye daddy, I love you too. Jeremy dad wants to talk to you.(Jeremy comes over to me and grabbs the phone out of my hand.)

Jeremy: Hey dad. I know dad, shes got it wrong. Its not a party, its just a small get togeather. Yes sir. Okay. Love you too,bye.

Jeremy hangs up the phone. Bradon carefully props me over the chair, standing me back up. Bradon then does a back roll out of the chair,and onto his feet. He picks the recliner chair back up, and sits back down in it.
Not knowing Jeremy was behind me, I bump into him, and he puts me in a head lock.

Jeremy: You almost got me grounded you little brat.

Cathryn: Well it was payback for what you did to me earlier today. I thought you diserved it. (I'm trying to struugle to get out of Jeremy's head lock) Let me go.

Jeremy: Well you thought wrong. You're lucky that dad didn't ground me. If he did, you would be in a hell lot of trouble right now. (Because Jeremy wouldn't let me go, I bit down into his arm) Ow,shit.! (He let me go,and I ran back over to James and sat next to him) She bit me.

Logan: Dam I was right. She is a vampire bitch. (James smacks Loagan in the back of his neck for calling me that) Ow.

(Trey finally comes back in the living room,and he sits back down next to me)

Jeremy: (talking to me) You might have thought that you've won this round, but you're wrong. Some how, some way I will get you back for this.

Cathryn: K, whatever.
(Jeremy goes to sit back down next to Kaiden and Trey.)

Trey: (talking to me) So, what did I miss?

Cathryn: Long story. I'll tell you later.

Trey: K.

Kaiden: Can we all please get back to the game now? Cat, its your turn.

Cathryn: Okay. (I pick out Jeremy's name out of the hat.) Hmmm, Jeremy has been mean to me, then I randomly pick his name out of the hat. Karma.

Jeremy: How is that Karma?

Cathryn: You'll see. I dare you to go out side. You have to run once back and forth down the street, and then once around the house. Wearing nothing but a diaper.

Jeremy: Fine, I don't care.

Trey: Wow, this day just keeps getting more intresting by the minute.

[Cookie Dough]

Great Job! Thank you for the next installment. I love this story.

[CarolineT487]

Loving this story please keep writing can't wait for the next part

[WedgieDareGirl]

Please update this story soon!

[MeasinToday]

Please continue, AMAZING STORY!

[pedrosoyyo]

Is quite long without any update... Keep it on, the story is nice.

[KittyCat91]

We are now all outside standing in the drive way, waiting for Jeremy to start the dare I gave him. Since its now completly dark outside, its a bit cold. Jeremy finally came out of the house wearing nothing but a diaper. We were all trying not to laugh at him.

Jeremy: Shit its cold. (He hugs himself,trying to keep himself warm)

Kaiden: (Talkin to Jeremy) Wow, lookin hot babe. Maybe you should start wearing these more often.

Jeremy: Shut it.

Kaiden: Sorry.

Jeremy: (Walks up to me,and gets in my face) I'll so get you back for this. You're gonna be sorry lil sis.

Cathryn: (I give him an evil smile) We'll just see about that, big bro.

What Jeremy doesn't know is that I secretly snuk my digital cam cored from my room,and it was hiding in the sleve of my house coat. I poped the camera out of my sleve to wear just the lends were barley showing, and started recording him running down the street. He came running back up the driveway, and ran around the house. Instead of running back to the driveway where we were, he rean back inside the warm house. I turned my cam cored off, and followed everyone else back into the house. As all the guys were goofing off in the living room. I quickly went to my room and uploaded the video onto my laptop. Not knowing, James entered my room and tapped me on the shoulder. Thinking it was jeremy, I get startled and turn aroud to hide the screen of my laptop.

Cathryn: (Relifed that it wasn't Jeremy) Oh,its just you.

James: You, okay?

Cathryn: Yeah, I'm fine.

James: Watch ya hiding?

Cathryn: Promise not to tell anyone?

James: (He kisses me on the lips) I promise.

Cathryn: Okay, I took a video of Jeremy while he was doing his dare.

James: (Chuckles at what I did) What for?

Cathryn: Its just a back up plian, incase if I need it.

James: Oh okay. (He holds my hand) Well come back to the living room. We're all waiting for you to continue the game.

Cathryn: Okay.

I follow behinde James as we walk back into the living room. As we walked into the living room, Jeremy was giving me an angy/evil stare. I see that he has took the diaper off and changed back into his clothes. Since Bradon was sitting next too Kaiden, and there was now no more room on the couch. James sat in the recliner chair, and I sat on his lap.

Jeremy: Welcome back little sis. (I roll my eyes at him, and ignore him. He knows that I hate it when he calls me that.)

Kaiden: (Gets up off the couch and hands James the hat) Its your turn.

James: Okay. (He takes the hat from Kaiden, and kaiden goes sits back down next too Jeremy and Bradon. James picks out my name, he shows me the piece of paper) Looks like I picked out my lucky angel. I dare Cathryn to let me be the first to take her verginity.

Cathryn: Okay. (I stare into his eyes, smlie at him, and we both start kissing each other passionatly. Jeremy throws a pillow from the couch at us, hitting me in the face) Ow.

Jeremy: Not here, not now, and definitly not anytime in the near future.

Cathryn: (I roll my eys at Jeremy, and throw the pillow back at him) We know Jerkass. It was a joke. We're waiting for the right time.

James: (Changing the subjet) Its Logan's turn. (Hands me the hat) Can you please hand this to Logan.
(So I wouldn't have to get up,I lean as far as I can to logan, and he does the same taking the hat from my hand)

Logan: Screw the hat. (He throws it behinde his shoulder,making all the pieces of paper fly every where) I dare all of us to play a little game of basketball nude.

Jordan: Sure thats safe?

Logan: Who cares. It will be fun. Espeacially watching Cat's big juicy titties move up and down while she runs.

Cathryn: Your a disgusting little pervert.

Logan: This is the game of truth or dare babe, and we would have all seen you naked eventually.

Jeremy: Logan's right Cat. And if you don't do his dare, then you'll be punished an become his slave.

Cathryn: Yeah, yeah. Whatever, I know.(Talking to Logan) And don't call me babe.

All the guys get up, and start heading to the basment where our basketball court is. Really not wanting to do this, James lifts me up off of him. He holds my hand, pulling me behinde, making me follow him and the rest of the guys. We are now down in the basment, I stopped about 10 inches away from the entrence of the door, pulling James back and making him not go into the basketball court room.

James: (Tuggs on my arm,pulling me towards the door) Come on sweety, lets go.

Cathryn: (I don't move a muscle) No. James, I really don't wan't to do this.

James: Do you want to be punished by Logan?

Cathryn: No.

James: Do you want to be Logan's slave?

Cathryn: No. I would rather commite suicide than to become his slave.

James: (Laughing at my coment) Then get your sexy butt in there.
(He comes behinde me, grabbs my arms and starts pushing me towards the door. I start moving a bit, he then starts grabbing and tickling my waste. Because I was trying to run from him to make him stop tickling me, I accidently run into the handle bars of the right door, making it open, and fall down on my butt)

Cathryn: (The door comes swinging back, slaming right into my back really hard) Ow!

James: I'm sorry baby. Are you okay? (He pushes the door off of my back, holding it open with his right foot, and helps get back up on my feet)

Cathryn: Yeah, I think so.

James and I are now inside the basketball court room, and the doors slame shut behinde us. I see that all of the guys have already took their clothes off, the only ones left with clothes on are me and James. Take that back, now just me since James started taking off his clothes. Logan starts walking towards me, I starts backing away so that he wont be so close to me, but I accidently run into Jeremy, and he grabbs me around the waist.

Jeremy: Well, well, well. Heres my little pussy cat.

Cathryn: (I'm trying to struggle to get him off of me) Jeremy let me go. (Jeremy quickly takes my house coat off and tosses it on the bleachers. Before I could get away from him, he holds my tighter close to him, and I can feel his cock rubbing against my butt.I stay still,so then maybe he wont hold me so tight anymore)

Logan: (Is now close up to my face) You can either do this the easy way, or we can do this the hard way. (He starts to try and pull down my shorts, but I swing my left leg, kicking his hip.) Ow, shit. You little nija bitch, I was just joking.

Cathryn: I have and know alot of ninja moves and not afraid to use them. Jeremy, if you don't want me to flip you, or bite you again. I suggest you gently let me go now.

Jeremy: Okay, fine. (He lets go of me, pushing me onto the ground, making me fall to my knees.)

Cathryn: Ow! (Being sarcastic) Does anyone know what gently means any more?

Kaiden: (Laughing at me, he helps me up.) You okay?

Cathryn: Yeah.

Logan: We're giving you 10 seconds for you to take you clothes off yourself. If you don't, then you will be punished and become my slave.

Cathryn: Jeremy this isn't fair. I'am the only girl, and I'm really not comfortable being naked around a bunch of guys.

Jeremy: Sorry kido. Sometimes things in life aren't just fair. I guess you can say that this is pay back for the dare you made me do.

James: (Comes behinde me and whispers in my ear) If you would like for me too, I could help you.

Cathryn: (Knowing that I would rather have my boyfriend rather than Logan or my brother take my clothes off, I decided to let James) Okay.

James starts kissing my neck, and messaging my shouldhers to help me relax. He first slides down my shorts, I then slide my flip flops off so that I can step out of my shorts. I'm now just in my t-shirt, and panties. James turns me around to where I'm facing him, he then holds me close in his arms, ands starts making out with me. I can feel his cock against me, starting to get hard.

James: Ready for the next parts?

Cathryn: (For some reason I'm just really nrevous about this) I guess.

James: Just relax, and close your eys. Pretend that its just you and me in the room alone. Okay?

Cathryn: Okay.

I do as James says, and closes my eyes, visualising just the two of us alone. He starts kissing me again, and slides down my panties. I step out of my panties, and I now only have a shirt on. He starts slowly kissing my neck, and grabbs the bottom of my shirt. He then slowly lifts my shirt up. I lift my arms up in the air so that he can take it off.

James: (Whispers in my ear) You can open you eyes now.

I open my eyes, and see that I'm finally naked just like everyone else is. I fold my accross my chest covering my boobs, so no one can see them. Jeremy comes behinde me an spanks my ass.

Cathryn: Ow, Jeremy.

Jeremy: Put your arms down.

Cathryn: But...

Jeremy: (Innterupts me) NOW! Or I'll spank you again, but harder.

Logan: Rule number one, no one is allowed to cover any part of their body.

Kaiden: Cat, we all here have seen girls naked. The only virgins in this room is you, and possibly Jordan.

Jordan: Whats that suppose to mean? Because I'm not a virgin.

Kaiden: I was just joking, I know your not. (Talking to me) If your worried about what we think about your body, theres nothing to worry about. I don't know about anyone else, but I think your beautiful.

Cathryn: (Hearing that from Kaiden did kind of make me feel better) Okay. (I put my arms down by my side)

Logan: Since I see that we all have hairs, the winers get to shave the losers.

Jeremy: I would like to add one important rule. Do NOT put your dicks near my little sisters pussy. If I dare see any go inside her, I'll swear that I'll ripp your heads off. Although for you James, since you already don't have a head. I'll ripp you dick completly off, if you dare try to slide into my sister. Got it?

James: Yes sir.

Logan: Okay. So its still me Jeremy, Bradon and Kaiden, against Jordan, Trey, James and Cathryn. Let the games begin.

[cumslut17]

please continue. best story ever

[Stormwalker22]

I love this story

[slutpup]

Did this story or are you still thinking about what to write?

[Dare Master321]

Keep going this is the only story that i have read all!

[Isabellaslave]

Keep going this story is amazing

[KittyCat91]

We all got into possision on the basketball court. My team was on defense and Jeremy's on the offense side of the court. Since I was the only girl there, the guys decided that it would be fair if I get the ball first. So I went to go stand in center infront of Logan. Jeremy signed to me that wveryone was ready, and to start the game. So I began to dribble the ball,and running towards the goal.

Trey: Hey, Cat I'm opened!

I quickly looked up at Trey and saw that he was closer to the goal,and that Kaiden was behinde him. So I threw the ball to trey, he caught it and then threw it into the goal. Since Trey was standing at a 3 pointer line, that helped our team get ahead with 3 points.
As we kept playing the game got more intense. Whichever team got 15 points first, won the game. Jeremy's team ended up being ahead of us, the score was 12 to 10. Jeremy had the ball, but James stole the ball and passed it to me. I began to dribble the ball, running back towards our goal. Right when I was about to shoot, Logan jumped on top of me, making me drop the ball.

Cathryn: OW! Dude, this is basketball not football. Get off of me.
Logan: Sorry, I tripped.
Cathryn: (being sarcastic) On what, flat surface?
Kaiden, James,and Jeremy comes over to Logan and I to make sure that we're okay.
Jeremy: Cat,you shouldn't be talking when you do that everyday.
Cathryn: Whatever.
James: (takes my left hand and starts to help me up) You okay babe?
Cathryn: (I feel a sharp pain when James pulls my wrist) Ow! James, let go. You're hurting my wrist.
James: (lets go of my wrist) I'm sorry.
Cathryn: It's okay. I think I hurt my wrist when Logan made me fall.
James: Hey Bradon, can you come here for just a sec?
Bradon: Yeah, sure. (runs over to us from the side lines) Whats up?
James: Cat thinks that she might have hurt her wrist when she fell.
Bradon: Oh ok. Cathryn can I please see your wrist to see if it's okay?
Cathryn: Okay.
Bradon: (holds my left wrist) Where does it hurt the wrost?
Cathryn: (I pont to the right side of my scaphoid) Right here.
Bradon: (starts feeling my wrist) It does feel warm and swollen. Can you try to move it by your self?
Cathryn: (Bradon lets go of my wrist and I try to move it, but it really hurts) No, I can't. It hurts to move.
Bradon: Yeah, you spraind your wrist. I don't think that you should continue playing the game.
Cathryn: But I have too.
Bradon: I'm sorry Cathryn, but you can not play. If you do, you will end up hurting it worse.
Jeremy: Cat, Bradon is right. You can't play.
James: Will we still be able to continue the game?
Jeremy: Maybe, if someone on my team sits out with her.
Bradon: I'll sit out, so I can fix Cathryn's wrist.
Jeremy: Okay.
Bradon: Where's all of your first aid stuff at?
Jeremy: Upstairs, in the kitchen.
Bradon: Okay. Cathryn and I will go upstairs, while yall continue the game.
Jeremy: Okay.

James, Kaiden, and Jeremy went back to the middle of the court. I sart to grabb my clothes to put them back on, but Logan takes them from me.
Logan: I don't think so pussy Cat. (Evidently James must have heard Logan, because he threw the basketball at the back of his head) Ow,shit.
James: Ooops. Sorry, it slipped.
Cathryn: (laughing at Logan) So how many points does that give my team?.
Logan: (ignoring my sarcasim) Everyone has to stay nude until the game is over.
Cathryn: But I'm not playing right now. I have to sit out because you made me hurt my wrist. Please give me my clothes back.
Logan: No. You must of miss understood me. Not this game. You can't put your clothes back on until the game of truth or dare is over.
Bradon: (At the door waiting for me) Cathryn, come on.
Cathryn: Okay, I'm coming. (talking to logan) Fine, whatever.

Still naked, Bradon and I leave the basketball stadium, and we are now in the kitchen. I sit down on a stool in the kitchen, next to the counter. Bradon opens the freezer, and grabbs the ice pack. He puts a towel around it, and hands it to me.
Bradon: Let this stay on your wrist for about 20 minutes. I'll let you know when its time to take it off. Where do you guys keep you bandages and stuf?
Cathryn: (I point at the top droor thats next to me) Right there.
Bradon:Okay. (Bradon goes through the droor, and grabbs the lime green elastic compression bandage.) Lets take the ice pack off for just a sec.
Cathryn: Okay.
I lay the ice pack down next to me on top of the counter. Bradon gently takes my wrist and starts wrapping the bandage around it.
Bradon: (finished wrapping my wrist, and puts the ice pack back on) There ya go. Just leave the ice pack on for a couple of more minutes. In order to heal your wrist you will need to put an ice pack on it every day for atleast 20 minutes.
Cathryn: Okay. Thanks.
Bradon: No prob, just doing my job. Wanna go back down stairs to watch the rest of the game?
Cathryn: Sure.
Just as we were about to leave the kitchen to go down stairs, all the guys come back up.
Bradon: Never minde. So who won?
Kaiden: We did.
Logan: I call dibbs on shaving Cat's little hairy pussy.
Cathryn: (My eyes grow wide over what Logan just said) Like I would ever trust you with a razor,espeacially when using it on me. You already made me sprain my wrist, I really don't want you to end up cutting me open with a razor.
Kaiden: Alright. Cat, if you had to choose one of us to shave you, who would you choose?
Cathryn: I don't know. I don't really care who, as long as it's not Logan.
Jeremy: Is it Okay if I can? I mean, you do trust your big bro right?
Cathryn: I guess, and yeah of course I trust you.
Jeremy: Okay then. I will shave you. I'm going to my room to grabb razors, a towel for all of us to use. Kaiden can you get a bowl of water in the kitchen, and bring it out in the living room?
Kaden: Yeah, sure.
We all leave to go sit in the living room. Jeremy leaves to go to his room, and Kaiden is still in the kitchen getting the bowl of water.

[nicknick0912]

love it go on.:D :D :D :D

[apollo19]

I love this story and can't wait to read me

[KittyCat91]

Hey readers,
I'm very sorry for the long waits. Like I've said before I promise this story will never die until it's at the end. It's just that it's going to take sometime for me to finish typing it.I barley have time to get on anymore because I've been busy with school, my job,& other volunteer work. So just be patcient, & I'll have my next chapters up soon as I have the time to write them. Thank you all so much for reading my story, & I'm gald that you like it. :)

[Reluhv13]

It's hard to get me to like a story, buy you have got me addicted to this story!!

[SrattNights11]

just read the whole story right now. really good! continue please(:

[meeacaroline]

i love this story. i can't wait to read more :)

[babbies123]

Actually, A is correct, for me at least .I was always taught that An is for vowel sounds, A is for consonant sounds
I, with my accent, say x-am-ple.

It talks about it more at the end of this page http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/591/01/

Well as far as i am aware, the common grammar rules dictate, so as to avoid accent-based disputes, that the word "An" is only to replace "A" when preceeding a word with a beginning letter that is either a vowel, or, despite being often overlooked, "h".

Ergo:

An example,
A fruitful experience,
and An harrowing result.

[danrob88]

I'm not sure if I like this story or not? This poor little sister is being abused and treated like an object by all but her boyfriend and even he doesn't seem to be sticking up for her much the poor thing :(
Still an intriguing read however, please continue.

[KittyCat91]

Characters


Zacarie: Is 16, gay. Friends with Cathryn, Trey, James, Jeremy, and Kaiden. He has short dirty blond hair (to his ears), green eyes, 5"6, white/caucasian, and is very slim/muscular.


Justin: Is 18, straight. Cathryn's ex-boyfriend. Friends with Logan. He has very short brown redish hair, green eyes, 5"9, white/caucasian, and is slim/very muscular.

[KittyCat91]

Me, James, Trey, and Jordan are all sitting on the floor in the middle of the living room. Kaiden comes back in the room, and sits the blow of water infront of us. Jeremy also comes back with 4 razors, 4 towels, and 4 bandanas. He gives Kaiden, Logan and Bradon each a towel and a razor. He hands a bandana to Jordan, Trey, and James. Then comes behinde me and ties a bandana around my head using it as a blindfold.

Cathryn: (trying to keep Jeremy from blinde folding me) Jeremy, stop. What are you doing?!?

Jeremy: Cat, let go. Just calm down. Kaiden can you hold her hands down for me?

Kaiden: Sure. (Kaiden kneels down in front of me and grabbs my hands, holding them down)

Jeremy: Theres been a change of plan. No one on your team gets to know who shaves them. So your each going to be blindfold, until your each done being shaved. (Jeremys finally done tying the blindfold) Don't even think about untying it.

Kaiden lets go of my hands and I feel him walk away. I couldn't see anything, everything was pitch black. Jeremy tied it so tight it felt like the blood vains between my head and my eyes were going to pop. I try to tugg on the bandana a bit to loosen it, but someone grabbs my hand to stop me.

Jeremy: Cathryn don't touch the blindfold. If I have too I'll go get some rope to tie your hands togeather. Do you want me to tie your hands?

Cathryn: No. I'm sorry. It's just, you tied it too tight, and I was just trying to loosen it a bit. (Jeremy loosens the blindfold a bit)

Jeremy: There is that better?

Cathryn: Yeah.

Jeremy: (pushes my shoulders to lay down) Now lay down, and keep your hands by your side.

Cathryn: Okay. (I do as Jeremy says)

I'm now laying on the floor, hands by my side, and can't see a thing. I start to hear the sound of shaving cream being squirted out from the cans. Not knowing who it was, I feel someone rubb the shaving cream on top of my vagina. It felt cold, and a bit weird. I never had anyone shave me before. I never even shaved myself down there before, I only trim. I then feel the razor wiping the shaving cream off, as it cutts the hairs off. As seconds went by who ever shaved me was done. They cleaned me off with a towel, and I feel someone else come behinde me to help sit me back up.
Jeremy: Lift your butt up. (I do as he says, and some one else is holding my waste up, so I wont sit down)

Cathryn: What are you doing?

Jeremy: You are to sit on your hands until the others are finished. Should help keep you to not touch your blinde fold. (He puts my right wrist under my butt. I feel a sharp pain as he grabbs my left wrist)

Cathryn: Ow, Stop! Your hurting my wrist.

Jeremy: Oh, yeah. Sorry, I forgot. (they put my waist back down, making me sit on my right hand) Just don't move it. (He sits my left wrist down by my side)

Cathryn: It hurts to move at all, and now hurts even more thanks to you.

Jeremy: I'm really sorry. (I feel him pick my wrist back up and kiss it) There does that feel better?

Cathtryn: (couldn't help but smile. Jeremy hasn't kissed any of my booboos to make it feel better, since I was 12) Yeah, thanks.

Jeremy: Good. Now just stay still Okay? Were almost finished.

Cathryn: Okay.

I hear Jeremy walk away. As minutes went by, I finally felt someone come behinde me again, and start to untie my blindfold. I looked behinde me and it wa Kaiden, he finally took my blindfold completely off and walked away. I liked that I was finally able to see again. Evidently everyone had there blindfold off before me, because everyone else was sitting back down on the couches. James was sitting next to Trey and Jordan, so I sat down on his lap.

James : Hey babe. (James couldn't help but to stare at my vagina) Mmmm, lookin sexy. (He wraps his arms aroud my wast and kisses me on the cheek)

Cathryn: (joking) Down boy. Maybe if your good we can have some fun later on tonight. (James kiss me on the lips)

Jeremy: (talking to me) I'm thinking about taking the lock off your door.

Cathryn: (I roll my eyes at Jeremy's comment) Haha very funny.

Trey: Hey Jeremy, is it okay if Zacarie can come over?

Jeremy: Yeah sure.

Cathryn: Zacarie's coming?

Trey: Yep, I just got a text from him. He said that he'll be here in a couple of minutes.

I was glad to hear that Zacarie was coming over. He's another good friend of mine. I havn't seen him since the last day of school. We use to be neighboors, but he had to move to a different neighborhood.


Jeremy: Does he know what we've been doing?

Trey: Yeah, I told him. If thats okay.

Jeremy: It's cool. I actually meant to invite him, but I didn't have any way of contacting him.

Kaiden: Jordan, it's your turn to pick the dare.

Jordan: Okay. I dare all of us to go skinny dipping.

[T-o-m]

Amazing story I would love to hear more

[yeya(:]

Hm :/ disappointed when i saw i was at the end.....cant wait for you to write again (: i couldnt stop laughing! ^_^

[KittyCat91]

We all get up, get a beach towel from the closet, and walk out to the pool. Everyone jumps in except me, I walk over to the shallow end and sit on the bottom of the stairs.

Jordan: (swims over to me) Whats up Kit Cat, aren't ya gonna come in?

Cathryn: I can't. It's kind of hard to swim with just one arm.

Jordan: (takes hold of my right hand, and starts walking into the pool) Come on, you can atleast just stand in the shallow end.

Cathryn: I guess that's okay, but I don't want to go under the water.

Jordan: Okay. (We get half way at the end of 4ft. He lets go of my hand and I hold on to the edge of the pool)

All of the guys are still in the deep end (at 8ft), goofying off. The then all start swimming over to me.

Jeremy: (puts his arm around me) Hey sis. So we've decided to stay around where you're able to touch, so you wont be left out.

Cathryn: K, I don't care. But thanks, I guess.

Jeremy: Bradon, it's your turn to pick the dare.

Bradon: Okay. (Sees the vollyball net) I dare all of us to play a game of volleyball. And when we take our showers after this, the loosers get to wash off the winners.

Kaiden: That sounds intresting.

James: Wait, but Cathryn won't be able to play because of her wrist.

Bradon: Oh, yeah. She can sit out.

Kaiden: How about we wait until Zacarie gets here, so he can take Cathryn's place. Then know one on our team will have to sit out.

Bradon: Okay, that's cool.

Logan: Until then, how about just a fun game of chicken fight.

Jeremy: Okay.

Logan: Me and James, agianst Bradon and kaiden.

Cathryn: Wouldn't it be hard for a midget like you, to hold a giant streen bean... (I immediatly cut my self off, when I just relized I accidently called James a giant streen bean)

James: (comes close to me, almost up in my face)What were you just about to call me?

Cathryn: Nothing... I love you.

James: A giant streen bean? You know I hate being called that.

Cathryn: (trying not to laugh) I'm really sorry. I didn't mean for it to come out that way.

Logan: Haha, thats what she said.

Cathryn: Ew, you're such a perv.

James: I think I might have to get you back for that.

Cathryn: (jokingly) Oooh I'm so scared.

James: You ought to be. I think I'm gonna have to tickle you. (James holds me close around his right arm, and starts tickling me with his left)

Cathryn: (laughing) No, James. Please stop. I'm sorry.

James: (laughing at me) Say Uncle.

Cathryn: (trying to get away from James) Jeremy, help me. James, please stop. I love you.

James: (stops tickling me, and holds me close in his arms)I know. I love you too. (kiss me on the lips)

Logan: Now I know where Cathryn's tickle spots are.

Cathryn: Logan, don't you dare even think about it.

Logan: Okay. So James, are ya playin or not?

James: I don't know. (turns me around to where my back is against his chest, and puts his arms around my waste) I think I want to stay here with my kitty cat.(kisses me on the cheek)

Logan: Ew. Okay. Then Me and Jordan, against Kaiden and Bradon.


Bradon and Kaiden: Okay.

Kaiden gets on Bradon's shoulder, and Jordan gets on Logan's shoulder. They move down to 6ft deep. Just as they were about to start the the fight, our front door bell rings, causes to distract Jordan and makes him fall off Logan's shoulder.

Jeremy: Cat, can you go get that? It's probably Zacarie.

Trey: That's wierd. Zacarie said that he would come around back to that door. (points at our door, that goes out into the back yard)

Cathryn: Okay. I'll go see who it is. (James lets go of my waste. I walk up staris out of the pool. I dry myself off, and wrap my towel around me.) Logan where did you put my clothes?

Logan: There in the living room, laying ontop of the couch.

Cathryn: K, thanks. I'm just going to put them back on to answer the door. I'll be right back.

I leave the pool, and enter the living room. I see where Logan had left my clothes, and quickly put them on before answering the door. The doorbell rings again.

Cathryn: (thinking it was Zacarie, I open the door) Hey Zacarie... (In dissapointment, I see that it wasn't Zacarie, it was my ex-boyfriend Justin) You're not Zacarie. (I'm a bit confused of why he was here)

Justin: (ignoring my comment) Hey.

Cathryn: I thought you're suppose to be in prison.

Justin: I was, but I'm out now. Since I've been good, they let me out early. I'm just on probation now.

Cathryn: Oh. What are you doing here?

Justin: I need to talk to you. Are you here alone?

Cathryn: No. My brother, and his friends are out back at the pool. What do you want?

Justin: Oh. Okay. Can I come in?

Cathryn: No. You're not welcomed into my home. I think you should go. (I start to close the door, but justin stops me)

Justin: No. I'm not leaving until I talk to you.

Cathryn: I don't want to talk to you. I've been doing good ignoring you. Now, bye. (I try to shut the door again, but justin leans his hand against the door to stop me)

Justin: You can't ignore me forever Cathryn!

Cathryn: I have been for the past 2 years. After you blackmailed me, I made a promise to myself that I was done with you, and would never have anything to do with you ever again.

Justin: Look. Now we can do this the easy way or the hard way.

[back at the pool...]

Zacarie finally showed up at the back door. Jeremy got out of the pool, dryed himself off with his towel, and wrapped it around his waste. He unlocked the back door and let Zacarie in. (Zacarie came in wearing light blue skinnyjeans, a black sirt with the Batman logo on it, and black red laced converse).

Jeremy: Hey Zac, long time no see.

Zacarie: Yeah, tell me about it. It's been like since the last day of school since I've seen yall. Where's Cathryn?

Jeremy: Probably still up stairs, searching for you at the front door. Din dong ditch?

Zacarie: Haha, what? I just parked out in the back beside your fence, and jumped over. I think I did see someone else at the door.

Jeremy:Oh ok.

Cathryn: (still at the front door with justin, I yell for help) JEREMY, JAMES, HELP!!!

Jeremy: (heres me yell for help) Shit. Zac can you go upstairs with me to make sure Cat's okay? I'm going to need you to grabb at least my shorts that are laying on the couch.

Zacarie: Okay.

James get out of the pool,wrapps a towel around his waste, and goes upstairs with Zacarie and Jeremy. There now upstairs, Jeremy pokes his head out from behinde a wall, and sees me trying to keep Justin from coming in.

Jeremy: (whispers) Shit. It's Justin. Zacarie, quickly go get mine and James's shorts. Don't let Justin see you.

Zacarie: Okay. (He quickly and quietly walks over to the couch. He picks up Jeremy's and James' shorts, and tosses them to Jeremy. James and Jeremy quickly put their shorts on.)

[back to me and Justin...]

Cathryn: Justin get off my property and leave me alone!

Justin: No! Like I said before I need to talk to you. That's it, I tried being nice. Looks like we're going to have to do this the hard way.(Justin grabbs my wrist, and pulls it off the door. He opens the door to let himself in)

Cathryn: (I'm trying to pull away from Justin) No! Justin, please let me go!

Justin: No. (grabbs both of my wrists, and lifts me off the ground to where my face meets his) Just let me talk to you. PLEASE!

Cathryn: (I start crying scared. I feel just crushing my bone more in my left wrist, and it's really hurting) OW. Justin, please let go. Your crushing my wrist.

Justin: We're going to you room to talk. Now lets go. (He puts me over his shoulder and starts to take me to my room.

Cathryn: JAMES!!! JEREMY!!! HELP!!!!!!

Jeremy: (walks in the living room) You better fucking put her down! NOW! And get the fucking hell out of my house!!!

Justin: (he puts me down, but still holding on tomy left wrist) Jeremy, just please let me talk to her.

Cathryn: (I see Zacarie and James behinde Jeremy) Please help me! (Justin takes his other hand and covers my mouth)Mmmmph!!!

James: Let her go!!!

Jeremy: Justin, if you don't let my sister go and leave my house. I will call the cops.

Justin: (talking to me) Stupid bitch. (pushes me towards Jeremy. I almost fall, but James and Zacarie catches me) Fine, you win. You can't ignore me forever Cathryn! Make sure to check your text messages. (Justin left, and shut the door behinde him)

James: (holding me in his arms, im still crying) It's okay Cat. He's gone now. I promise he won't ever hurt you again.

Jeremy: You okay sis?

Cathryn: No, he hurt me. He made my wrist worse, I think he broke it. It really hurts. I wish I never met him.

Jeremy: Come on. Lets go back out to the pool, and let Bradon take a look at you wrist.

Cathryn: Okay. Can I have an ice pack for my wrist?

Jeremy: Yeah, I'll go get it. You guys can go ahead and go back out to the pool, I'll be right behinde ya.

James: Okay. (picks me up, carrying me like a baby)

Cathryn: James it's my wrist thats broken, not my foot. I can still walk.

James: (kisses my lips) Oh just hush, and let me carry my baby.

Cathryn: (laughing at James' coment) Okay, daddy.

Zacarie, James and I are now back at the pool. James lays me down on one of the recliner chairs by the pool. Jeremy is also now back at the pool, and hands me the ice pack. The others were still in the pool playing chicken fight.

Trey: Hey Zacarie, want to join us?

Zacarie: Yeah, sure. (he takes his clothes off, and jumps in the pool)

Jeremy: Hey, Bradon, we need a doctor.

Bradon: K, I'm coming. (Bradon throws Kaiden off his shoulders under water, and hops out of the pool)

Kaiden: (swims back up to the surface, choking on water) Dude?!? Couldn't let me down gently?

Bradon: Sorry. (talking to Jeremy) Whats up.

Jeremy: Clutzilla over here rejured her wrist.

Cathryn: Oh, shut up Jeremy. You know that's not how it happened.

Jeremy: Sorry, it was just a joke.

Bradon: (sits down next to me) Let me see it. (I remove the ice pack, he unwraps my bandage, and the skin on my wrist is bright red,with a bit of blue purple and black in it) Yeah, it's definetly broken now. Sweety what happened? Never through out my 3 years of being a doctor, have I seen anything like this.

Cathryn: It was my ex-boyfriend. He was here. And he grabbed my wrist. I don't really wont to talk about it any more.

Bradon: Okay, just stay here and relax. And keep the ice pack on it for about 20 (looks a my wrist again) maybe 30 minutes. Okay?

Cathryn: Okay.

Bradon wrapps my bandage back up, and jumps back in the pool. Jeremy and James take their shorts back off, and jump back in the pool as well.

[SrattNights11]

Really good. I look forward to reading more.

[meeacaroline]

eeek!!! so good. please write more and more and more. screw editing i'm so used to reading mistakes on this site that i edit in my head anyway. just write. a lot. please!!!!!

[Slushpup]

Great story keep writing. Please:)

[katebabe21]

this is really good! What do the texts say? Can't wait to find out :)

Ps. Would you possibly be able to pm me when the next part is uploaded? :)

[Silencedpoet]

Please post again I have been waiting and I dont think I can take any longer!

[devildarer]

I love your story so much!! and its been like more than a month but i really really want you to post again, please!!

[KittyCat91]

The boys start the game of volley ball. The rule was that which ever team scores 10 points first wins the game. Since Jeremy's team won the last game they served first. Considering that Zacarie is the best volleyball player on our school's team, I was glad to have him on our team for this game.
During the first half of the game, Zacarie helped lead up from 5 to 3. I was very glad that I didn't have to play, considering I hate volleyball,and I'm terrible at it. Tired of laying in the recliner, I get up to sit on the edge of the pool, & stick my feet in.
Jeremy's team supprisingly caught up 7 to 6. As time was going by we ended up with a tie at the final round 9 to 9. Zacarie spiked the ball over the net, but Kaiden luckly digs(blocks) the spike, hitting it back over to our net. James tries to hit it back over the net, but the net blocks it causing our team to loose. Jeremy and the rest of his team mates cheer in victory. The guys comes towards the edg of the pool,near to were I'm sitting.
Jeremy: Since our team won, you guys and gal gets to wash us.

James: Guys, I'm really sorry. I thought I had it.

Cathryn: It's okay James. It's not your fault. From what I saw they got really lucky.

Kaiden: Since Zacarie just got here, it's his turn to pick a dare.

Zacarie: Okay. I dare Cathryn to be my little child for the rest of the night.

Cathryn: Uh, Okay.

Zacarie: The rules are that I will pick your clothes, and you will do as I say. And you’re to call me daddy for the rest of the night.

Cathryn: Daddy? Really?

Zacarie: Yup. Oh and if you mess up and forget, there will be punishment.

Cathryn: Weird, but okay.

Jeremy: Okay. Let’s go upstairs to my bathroom so that the losers can wash us winners.

Cathryn: More like wieners.

Jeremy: Haha, very funny. You know just for that sarcasm you get to wash me and Logan,

Logan: Can’t wait to see Cat all wet and sexy.

Cathryn: Ewww. I’m sorry?

Jeremy: Too late. Now come on, let’s go.

We are all now upstairs in Jeremy’s bathroom. Jeremy’s shower is pretty big. It’s big enough to fit 6 people inside. It’s a64.1 inches X 64.1 inches rainforest 78 whirlpool steam shower with a iPod/MP3 player inside, also with a compatible steam shower with 16 jet whirlpool tub.
Me, Logan, Jeremy, Kaiden, and James went into Jeremy’s shower. While Jordan, Bradon, Zacarie, and Trey went to my shower.
Jeremy got the water started, and we all stepped into his shower. The water was set to warm temperature, and felt really good against my skin. Jeremy sets out men’s Suave body wash, and men’s Suave shampoo and conditioner.

Jeremy: (hands James the body wash) Besides using a wash rag you two have to use your hands.

Cathryn: Ewww. My night just keeps on getting worse.(before I start to squirt some of the body wash onto my hands, Logan takes it away from me.)

Logan: Wait., before you start. I want you to clean my cock off with your mouth.

Cathryn: EWWW NO! I’d rather kiss a monkey's hairy ass, then put that disgusting shitty piece of string in my mouth.

James: (can’t help but laugh, after what he just heard me say) Wow, that was like 3 burns in one sentence.

Kaiden: A tri burn. Nice.

Jeremy: Cathryn, you better watch your mouth, or I’ll clean it out with soap. Logan, you better not even thing about putting that thing any where in my sister.

Logan: Fine, whatever.

Right before we were about to start Zacarie and Trey walks in.

Trey: Hey Jeremy got any extra shampoo and body wash that doesn't smell so girly. No offense Cat.

Cathryn: (laughing at their reaction) It's okay.

Jeremy: Yeah, Go look in the closet next to my sink. It should be on the second shelf.

Trey: k.

Zacarie: Cathryn after you're done you need to meet me in your bathroom, so I can give you your shower..

Cathryn: (almost forgot that I have to pretend to be his daughter tonight) Okay daddy.

Zacarie: Good girl.

Cathryn: (mumbling) That's gonna be annoying.

Zacarie: What was that?

Cathryn: Oh, nothing.

Zacarie: K.

Trey finally found the shampoo and body wash and they leave Jeremy's bathroom.

I take the body wash from Logan and squirt some on my right hand. Not knowing who I'll be comfortable washing first, Logan grabs my right wrist and forces me to start washing him. I look over at James and hes already washing Kaiden's body.
Logan still not letting go of my wrist, is making me move down to wash his lower area. Knowing what was coming I try to back away from him,but he keeps pulling me closer. Because I was trying to struggle away from him, I slipped but luckly Jeremy caught me before I could fall.

Jeremy: Cathryn, stop trying to get yourself out of this. The faster you clean Logan, the
faster it will be over with. And yes, you have to wash every inch of our body's. Understood?

Cathryn: Whatever.

Jeremy: (fed up my attitude, and spanks me) I asked you a question. Do you understand this?

Cathryn: Yes.

Jeremy: Good. Now hurry up.

I'm hurry up with cleaning Logan. Jeremy was right, the faster I go the faster it will be done. James was already done cleaning Kaiden,and decided to help me out by washing Logan's hair so I could get started on cleaning Jeremy. Jeremy squirted some more body wash in my right hand. I started washing his shoulder, then moving down to his arms. I then moved to his chest, then washing his legs, and his feet. Before I started to wash Jeremy's cock, Kaiden grabs my wrist to stop me.

Kaiden: Wait. Since it's my turn to give a dare. I dare Jeremy to let me finish cleaning him off.

Jeremy: Okay.

James and Logan has already finish cleaning themselves off, and leaves the bathroom.I start to get up to follow them, but Jeremy stops me before I could leave.

Jeremy: Whoa, wait. Where do you think you're going?

Cathryn: I thought I was done. So I was going to wait for Zacarie.

Jeremy: Oh,not yet. You still haven't washed my back, or my hair. So you're not finished yet.

I already see that Kaiden has started cleaning Jeremy's cock by sucking it. Trying to ignore what there doing, I finish washing Jeremy's back. I squirt some shampoo in my right hand and start washing his hair. Because Jeremy is taller than me, it was hard for me to reach his head so I had to stand on my tiptoes.
Jeremy: (I accidentally get shampoo in his eyes) AAAAHHHH SHIT! CAT!!!

Cathryn: I'm really sorry. I didn't mean too.

Jeremy: That's it! I had enough of you. Just leave. NOW!

Cathryn: Okay. I'm really sorry.

Jeremy: (starts to calm down some) It's okay. Just go.

With out another word, I grab a towel to wrap around myself, and go to my bathroom.

As I walk in my bathroom, I see Zacarie waiting for me. Everyone else is in the living room.

Zacarie: There's my little girl. Now take your towel off and step into your shower.

Cathryn: Zac, I really don't feel comfortable doing this.

Zacarie: (pats my butt) That was a warning. From now on you are to ONLY call my daddy.
Mess up again, you'll get more spankings than that. Understood?

Cathryn: Yes daddy.

Zacarie: Good girl. Now. Take off your towel and step in the shower. Don't want the water to get cold.

Zacarie set the water temperature to warm,and I stepped into the shower. He steps in with me. Zacarie gets a wash rag and my squirts my favorite kind of body wash onto it (Ocean Breeze by Suave).

Zacarie: Close your eyes. I don't want to get soap in them.
I close my eyes, and Zacarie starts to wash my face. He's done washing my face, grabs my
shower head and rinses my face off so I could see. I open my eyes, and he starts washing my shoulders, an then down to my arms. It started to feel kind of a bit weird when he started washing my breast. Next he moved down toward my stomach, my legs and then my feet. He then washed my back. It also felt a bit weird when he had to wash my vagina and my butt. He was finally done washing my, took my shower head and rinsed off the soap. After he was done washing my body, he grabbed my Lavender Suave shampoo, washed my hair, rinsed off the shampoo, and did the same with the conditioner. After he was finally done washing my hair, he rinsed me all off, turned off my shower, grabbed a towel, and started drying me off. We both stepped out of my shower, and wrapped a clean towel around me. Before we could leave, he dried and brushed my hair.

Zacarie: There. Now my little girl is squeaky clean. Lets go to the living room where wveryone else is.

Cathryn: Okay.

We leave my bathroom and walk into the living room. I see James sitting on the couch, and go sit next to him.

Jeremy: Since Kaiden already took his turn while we were in the shower it's my turn. I dare Cathryn to let us all play with her little pussy.

Cathryn: (I'm in shock at what Jeremy just dared me to do) NO. I'm NOT doing that.

Jeremy: Then you'll be punished an be my slave.

Cathryn: Jeremy, Please?!? That's not fair.

Jeremy: Sorry, but it's the rule for this game.

James: Jeremy, come on. That's not fair. She's your sister, don't make her do that.

Jeremy: James unless you want to be my slave too, I suggest you shut up. Cathryn, I'm giving you one more chance. Either you do my dare I picked out for you, or you'll be punished and become my slave.

Cathryn: I don't want to play this game anymore.

Jeremy: Fine then. You're now my slave.

[KittyCat91]

Hey readers.
I'm really sorry about the late post. Right after I graduated high school, I've been really busy with searching for the right college, & jobs. Like I said before, I promise that I will NEVER leave this story until it is finished.
I just posted a new chapter for you guys, and hope that you like it :)

[SouthAmericanGuy]

Good stuff, keep it coming.

[Stormwalker22]

Awesome Chapter Kittcat I cant wait to see if she really does become his slave or not or finish the game.

[meeacaroline]

That was almost mean leaving it off there.... Thanks for the new chapter though. It was great.

[potter1harry]

okay wow the best story ever

[Tyrel]

I just found this today. I'm on page 4 and trying to catch up. It's great so far.

[SrattNights11]

Once again, great story. Don't leave is hanging.!

[KittyCat91]

Cathryn: No. I said that I wasn’t playing anymore. So I’m not your slave.

Jeremy: If you remember the rules, you’re still my slave and you’ll still be punished even if you back out of the game. So yes, you are my slave. And as punishment, you have to suck our cocks. Now go lay in the middle of the floor.

Cathryn: Ewww, NO. I’m not doing that.

Jeremy: (pulls my hair dragging me to the middle of the floor) Listen to me. I’am sick and tired of you always complaining, and not doing as I tell you to do. I’am your big brother, and it’s about time you start learning how to respect me. So from now on you have to do everything I tell you to do whether you like it or not. Is that understood?

Cathryn: Whatever.

Jeremy: (spanks me really hard) I asked you a question. Is that understood?

Cathryn: (the way Jeremy was treating me was making me scared of him. I’ve never seen him this angry at me before)Yes.

Jeremy: Good. (pushes me down to make me lay on the floor) Now since James is your boyfriend, I’ll be kind enough to let him go first.

Cathryn: But I really don’t feel comfortable doing that in front of everyone.

Jeremy: I really don’t care. Now I suggest you do your punishment now, before it gets any worse.

James: (comes over to me. He grabs my right hand to help me up off the floor) Come on Cat. Lets go to your room.

Jeremy: (grabs my hair pulling me back towards him) Where do you think you’re taking her? She still hasn’t received her punishment.

James: Jeremy it’s almost 4am. She needs to get her sleep. Now let her go.

Kaiden: Jeremy, James is right. We’re all tired. So lets go to bed and finish this tomorrow.

Jeremy: Fine. (talking to me) We’ll start your punishment first thing tomorrow. (lets go of my hair)

Cathryn: Okay.

Trey: Where can we sleep?

Jeremy: You guys are welcome to sleep upstairs in the two guest bedrooms, or down here in the living room.

We all put our clothes back on, and then said our good nights to each other. Trey and Zacarie took the guest room next to our library. Logan and Jordan took the guest room next to our recording studio. Bradon stayed in the living room sleeping on the couch, and of course Kaiden slept with Jeremy in his room.
James and I are finally in my room, laying in my bed. James puts his arms around me and starts kissing me. Knowing what might happen tomorrow, I decided that tonight should be our first night to make love.

Cathryn: James?

James: (still kissing me( Mmmhmmm?

Cathryn: I think I’m ready.

James: (stops kissing me) Really?

Cathryn: Yeah. I love you James.

James: I love you too Cathryn.

With that James and I started passionately kissing each other. We both take our shirts off, He slides off my shorts, and underwear. He then starts rubbing my clit and fingering my vagina. I never felt this feeling before, but it felt really good. Right when I was about to cum, he stops.

James: Can you suck me?

Cathryn: Yeah. I guess.

James takes his pants off. I crawl down, and stand on my knees in between his legs. I start kissing and licking his cock. He then gently grabs my hair, puts it all the way back in my throat, and guides me, pulling me back and fourth. After a couple of minutes, he pulls my head back to stop me.

James: Are you ready?

Cathryn: Yes, I’m ready.

I lay back down on my back,. James puts a towel under me, and then gets on top of me. Taking my breath away he slowly puts his cock inside my vagina. I start to feel this strange burning pain inside of me as he goes in me deeper.

James: (knowing I hate the sight of blood, he whispers into my ear) Close your eyes, and relax.

Cathryn: (trying to keep myself from screaming in pain) Okay.

James finally pops me open. I can’t help but to cry a bit because of the pain.

James: (Whispers in my ear to help me clam down) It’s okay baby. It’s okay. I’m sorry it hurts. I promise that I’ll make it feel better. I love you.

Cathryn: I love you too.

James gently starts moving slowly back and fourth inside me. The pain finally went away, and it started to feel really good. I never felt this feeling before. It’s like my vagina was begging for more and more. Minutes have gone by and I have finally came, just a couple of seconds after me, James fills me up inside with his cum. I lay on my side, and James lays down next to me, putting his arms around me.

James: Did you like that?

Cathryn: Yeah. It felt good. (I kiss him on the lips) I love you.

James: (kisses me back) I love you too.

Cathryn: (I close my eyes) Good night.

With in two seconds I fall right to sleep.

James: (Whispers into my ear) Sweet dreams baby. ( kisses my forehead, closes his eyes, and goes to sleep.

[savjack]

all in all a good story
this is jsut my opinion so don't rage mf if you disagree and if you agree kool

ok i love your story much like i love others, and much like others there is 1 thing that has now almost turned me off it.
for me it's when characters sudenly change from the way they are seen earlier on jeremy in this case. again my opinion but for the better part of the story he is umm how to put it..... he does not like people making sexual "moves" on his sister (for the most part) and often treated people who tried to (if memory serves). but in the last two segments he pulled a complete 180 and told his sister to let them play with her pussy? and after she said no she told her to suck all there cocks? (and if i remember right he said something to logan about that in the 2nd last upload "Jeremy: Cathryn, you better watch your mouth, or I’ll clean it out with soap. Logan, you better not even thing about putting that thing any where in my sister.") just saying so please don't rage me

sorry for the rant but it is late and i had to say it

all in all 7/10 (if not for feeling like i stated before 8.5/10)

P.S the last upload ending was nice tho so maybe 7.25/10

(also sorry for the few spelling mistakes again late and very tierd)

[Mater56]

This story is AWESOME. Although...i'm kind of confused on weather its real or fiction....PLEASE TELL ME OR IT WILL BOTHER ME FOR A WHILE. And if it is real, you have real courage :O

[SrattNights11]

Another great installment.:)

[roxy55]

MORE MORE
I am really enjoying this
it's ok that you've made some mistakes in some chapters
this story is great
Is it real or fiction?

[potter1harry]

wow they had sex um wow i love this wow i just love it like wow(i like the word wow)

[meeacaroline]

soooooooooo good. loveitloveitloveit!

[crossdressingwedgie]

this is amazing please keep writing and when this is over you should make more stories

[Mater56]

It's been a while since you posted anything....we're all getting anxious.

[meeacaroline]

It's been a while since you posted anything....we're all getting anxious.

I hate to break it to you, but this wait is nothing. We all had to wait months once. I'm just excited we got the last installment as quickly as we did

[cassaddee604]

Bahh I love this story! I just found it today and already can't wait for the next installment! (:

[SrattNights11]

I agree. I was happy to see the next installment so quickly!


I hate to break it to you, but this wait is nothing. We all had to wait months once. I'm just excited we got the last installment as quickly as we did

[badgirl44]

OMG JUST FOUND THIS STORY! most stories on here lose my interest pretty quickly. this is awesome!!!:p

[EmoAeden]

*Does his best Oliver impersonation*

Please, can we have some more ?

[meeacaroline]

*Does his best Oliver impersonation*

Please, can we have some more ?
Made my day so much better. Personally, I'll count that as an installment :D Thank you so much.

[KittyCat91]

I woke up feeling great. I look up at James and he is still sound asleep. Remembering mine and James’ first time together last night, I couldn’t stop smiling. Nothing else was on my mind, but James, and how much I love him. I turn over to the right side of the bed, look over at my alarm clock, and see that it’s 11:30am. Because I was in such a good mood, I decided to get up and make breakfast for James. I put my shirt and shorts back on, put my house shoes on, and quietly walk to the kitchen without waking Jeremy or James up.
I’am now at the kitchen, and quietly get out two scanpans and an oven pan out from the kitchen cabinets. I decide to make chocolate chip/blueberry pancakes, eggs, bacon, biscuits, and fruit salad, which is James’ favorite. I make two servings of pancakes, fruit salad, and two biscuits for James and I. Since I’m a vegetarian I don’t eat eggs, or bacon. Getting bored, I turn on the radio on our boom box, down on low, and continue to finish making breakfast. I go set the table for two, just for me and James. Right when I finish making breakfast, Trey walks down stairs into the kitchen.

Trey: Good morning sunshine. (sits down behined the kitchen counter.)

Cathryn: (Forgetting that Trey stayed over, he kind of scared me a bit) Good morning (I look at the clock on the boom box, and see that it’s 12:05pm) Or good afternoon. You stayed over last night?

Trey: Yeah. Zacarie is still upstairs getting dressed.

Cathryn: Zacarie is here?

Trey: Yeah. Do you remember anything that happened last night?

Cathryn: I don’t know. I only remember one thing that happened last night.

Trey: Oh. Okay. So you seem to be in a really good mood. All smiley, making breakfast. What’s up?

Cathryn: Not much. Just thought I would do something special for James.

Trey: Awww, that’s sweet. Did you make anything for your best friend?

Cathryn: Uuugh,sure. (I get a bowl, and put honey nut cheerios and milk in it, and give it to Trey) Here ya go.

Trey: (being sarcastic) Gee thanks. You shouldn’t have.

Cathryn: I’m really sorry. If I’d remembered that you stayed over night I would have made you something too.

Trey: It’s okay I’m guessing that you forgot that Jordan, Logan, Kaiden, and Bradon are here too.

Cathryn: Yeah. What all happened last night?

Trey: Because you’re in such a good mood right now, I’ll tell ya later.

Cathryn: Okay.

James: (walks into the kitchen) There’s my baby girl.(comes up to me and wraps his arms around me)

Cathryn: Hey there sleepy head. (I give him a kiss) I made brunch for you.

James: Awwww, you didn’t have too.

Cathryn: It’s okay. I wanted too. This is my way of showing you that you’re the best boyfriend ever.

James: I love you.

Cathryn: I love you too.

James: (pulls out my chair for me at the table) May my lady have a seat.

Cathryn: Yes, thank you.

James: (sits next to me) So how did you like…you know, what we did last night.

Cathryn: I liked. It was nice.

Trey: Not meaning to get into your conversation, but did I just hear that you to had sex last night?

Cathryn: Shshsh. Easy with the “S” word. If Jeremy finds out he’ll probably ground me for life. And I don’t even want to imagine what he’ll do to James.

Trey: Sorry. So did you to do it?

Cathryn: Maybe

Trey: I’ll take that as a yes. Don’t worry. Secret safe with me.

[SrattNights11]

Such a tease. I hope you have the other part soon(:

[Stormwalker22]

your a huge tease I wanna know what happens next already!

[roxy55]

To short more! But still a great story

[Mater56]

Your such a major tease XD i wanna know what happens!

[KittyCat91]

I'm really sorry. I NEVER meant for it to be a tease. It's just part of the story. I'm also very sorry for the late updates. It's summer, & I've been busy with trips & stuff like that. I also been busy with college interviews, & with finding jobs. Please be patient. Like I said before (over & over aain) I PROMISE that I'll FINISH this story.

[crossdressingwedgie]

i accept the apolagy also are you and james still dating?

[meeacaroline]

I've said it before and I'll say it again as many times as you'll let me. I LOVE this storty!

[SrattNights11]

I'm really sorry. I NEVER meant for it to be a tease. It's just part of the story. I'm also very sorry for the late updates. It's summer, & I've been busy with trips & stuff like that. I also been busy with college interviews, & with finding jobs. Please be patient. Like I said before (over & over aain) I PROMISE that I'll FINISH this story.

Awh when I said tease, I meant it in a good way. ;) so when you have the time, keep it coming! You are a great writer.

[Silvercola]

I like it! Write soon and more

[crossdressing227]

this is a amazing story you should continue soon i know all the stuff your doing and i understand why it takes i while for you to post LOVE YOUR STORY

[tiger777]

I just found this story a few days ago and I have to say that I just love it and can hardly wait.

For me it look like this is Fiction but it is not market with so just to be sure is it?

[crossdressing227]

when are you going to write more im getting bored looking you up everyday and being disappointed

[meeacaroline]

when are you going to write more im getting bored looking you up everyday and being disappointed

That was incredibly rude sounding. For one she does not live to write for you, she has things that need done outside of this story and getDare. Secondly, she is writing as much as she can and has promised not to stop until it's finished, take her at face and deal with the waiting. Thirdly, your last comment was very encouraging so I know this wasn't rude on accident. I hope she doesn't write for a very long time so that impatient and inconsiderate people like yourself have to learn how to deal without instant gratification.

In other news, as always kitty, your story is lovely. I am so glad you are keeping up with it. It is always a pleasure to read and I look forward to the next installment, but don't rush it because of jerks like him.

[crossdressing227]

i know im patient but its been like a month so i dont have much patients after a month

[meeacaroline]

She's a busy person. She does what she can. Stop being selfish and mean.

[Babey]

Arghh, i love this story!!!!!!!! Its amazing

[KittyCat91]

Jordan and Zacarie walks down stairs into the kitchen.

Zacarie: Good afternoon.

Trey: Hey. What took you so long?

Zacarie: Jordan helped me pull a little prank on Logan .

Cathryn: What did you do?

Zacarie: Might have gave im a little make over, and then rolled him in the bed.

Trey: Nice.

Jordan: Oooo yummy, I smell bacon.

Trey: Cat forgot about us, and just made it for James.

Cathryn: Sorry.

Jordan: Is it okay if I can make some for the rest of us?

Cathryn: Yeah, sure. Should someone go video Logan when he wakes up?

Zacarie: Haha, I already took a bunch of pics.

Cathryn: Good, you should send those pictures to me, so I can post those on facebook.

Zacarie: Okay.

Logan finally walks down stairs into the kitchen. Logan was wearing my blue and purple eye shadow, hot pink nail polish on his finger and toe nails, my red lip stick/ lip gloss, mascara, and had my old pink hair bow clip in his hair. He looked like a bad version of Shirley Temple. I’m guessing he didn’t even bother looking in the mirror, because he acted as if he didn’t know about it. We were all trying our best not to laugh at him.

Logan: Haha, very funny. You rolled me in toilet paper in my sleep. (threw a piece of toilet paper at Zacarie.

Cathryn: (trying not to laugh) Well at least that should have helped you from not wetting the bed.

Logan: Okay. Did I miss something? What’s so funny?

Trey: Dude, did you even bother looking at the mirror before you got up?

Logan: No. Why should I?

Cathryn: (I took a picture of Logan on my phone) Man, you make one ugly girl. (I show Logan the picture) This is so going on facebook.

James: (laughing) Awwww, it’s Logana.

Logan: You little brat. I’m so gonna get you back for this.

Cathryn: I swear, I had nothing to do with this. Anyways this is payback for posting the pic of me wearing my stupid maid costume. You can thank Zacarie for sending me the other pictures he took.

Logan: Dude, if we stay over night again. You better sleep with your eyes open.

Zacarie: Sorry. Even if we are staying over tonight, I won’t be. I’ll be leaving around 4pm for work today.

As Jordan was almost done making brunch for everyone else, Jeremy and Kaiden runs into the kitchen.

Kaiden: I smell bacon.

Jordan: I’m almost done making it.

James: (starts torturing Kaiden with his bacon) Mmmmm…Bacon.

Jeremy: (takes James’ bacon from his hand) My house, my bacon. (gives half to Kaiden)

James: He stole my bacon.

Cathryn: Boys are so weird when it comes to food.

Kaiden: (laughing at Logan) Hey Logan, you gotta little something all over your face.

Jeremy: Yeah. Did you sleep walk into Cat’s bathroom last night or something.

Logan: Shut it. Cat where’s all your remover stuff thing?

Cathryn: In my bathroom, in the cabinets under the sink.

Logan: K. Zac you get to come with me, to help me remove all this gunk off.

Zacarie: Fine. Logana & I will be right back.

Logan: Stop calling me that!

Logan and Zacarie go to my room, into my bathroom. Jeremy and Kaiden sits next to me and James.

Cathryn: Do you mind. We’re on a date.

Jeremy: Now that’s no way to talk to your master.

Cathryn: What?

Jeremy: Give me your phone.

Cathryn: No. It’s mine. Now leave me alone.

Jeremy: Do you pay for the bills?

Cathryn: Yes, I do help pay for them. Now get lost.

Jeremy: But I pay for most of it. Now give me your phone.

Cathryn: Fine. (I give Jeremy my phone)

Jeremy: Good girl. Now, that wasn’t so hard, was it?

Cathryn: Why are you acting weirder than you usually do?

Jeremy: Did you forget what happened last night?

Cathryn: I don’t know. What happened?

Jeremy: Did you get a hang over or something?

Cathryn: No. Can you just tell me what happened?

Jeremy: You backed out of my dare, so now you’re my slave. And your going to be punished later on today.

My memory from last night started coming back to me. My heart was sinking. I start panicking a little realizing that I’m now my brothers slave. I try to come up with something to where he will let me go. Bradon then walks into the kitchen.

Bradon: Hey guys, sorry I have to leave. I have an appointment for one of my patients at 3. Thanks for inviting me last night. I had fun.

Kaiden: No problem. I’ll walk ya out.

Bradon: K. Nice meeting you all. (Bradon and Kaiden leave to go outside)

Cathryn: (I remember the video I took of Jeremy that night) I’m not your slave.

Jeremy: Yes you are.

Cathryn: Not unless, you want everyone to see an embarrassing video that I took of you last night.

Jeremy: Nice try. Before I came in here, I went to your room and took all of your cameras, and your laptop. The only thing left in your room, is your bed, and your empty shelves. So now you’re mine. There’s no running away from this.

Cathryn: Wait. Does that mean you took Berry Bear? Jeremy, please let me have him back, you know that’s a gift from mom.

Berry Bear, is an old reddish berry color bear that my mom gave to me when I was first born. When I was three I named him Berry because of his color. I use to sleep with him all the time when I was little. But since he’s been getting old, I though it would be safe to keep him on my shelf.


Jeremy: Relax. I’ll give him back to you when you prove to me that you deserve him back. Right now by your attitude you’ve been showing me that you need more discipline. Now after you get done eating, I want you to go to your room, and wait for me. Is that understood?

Cathryn: Fine, whatever.

Jeremy: I said is that understood?!?

Cathryn: Yes Sir?

Jeremy: Good girl. (Kisses me on the cheek) Now don’t make me have to remind you that again. Understood?

Cathryn: Yes sir.

Jeremy: Good.

[KittyCat91]

i accept the apolagy also are you and james still dating?

Thanks. It's okay. Sadly no, James & I aren't dating anymore. I currently have a new boyfriend, whom I'm really in love with, & been dating for almost 3 month now.

[KittyCat91]

I've said it before and I'll say it again as many times as you'll let me. I LOVE this storty!

Thanks. Glad that you like it :)

[KittyCat91]

Awh when I said tease, I meant it in a good way. ;) so when you have the time, keep it coming! You are a great writer.

Oh ok. It's ok. Thank you :)

[meeacaroline]

Thanks. Glad that you like it :)
Yay! I get personalized replies :D

[meeacaroline]

Oh and by the way..... I loved it

[shogan977]

love the story just started readin today cant wait for the next part and this is the only story ive found with 5 stars good job xD

[tiger777]

A shame that you and James ain't dating any more I hope the new one are better :) Still great story, I did not think that it was real, I do fell sorry for you and I hope that you are ok. Mean brother you got just ask and I kick his ass :D

[KittyCat91]

A shame that you and James ain't dating any more I hope the new one are better :) Still great story, I did not think that it was real, I do fell sorry for you and I hope that you are ok. Mean brother you got just ask and I kick his ass :D

LOL. It's not real. Just some of the characters are based on real people. And thanks, glad you like it :)

[Rawrz12210]

I just started reading this story, and I think its great :D
I love how the big brother is getting more and more dominant :D

[KittyCat91]

Cathryn: (whispers to James) He's really starting to get on my last nerves.
James: Just please do as he says. He is your brother, and you do need to respect him.
Cathryn: Great, so now your on his side.
James: I'm not on anyone's side. I just don't want to see you get hurt. Ok?
Cathryn: Fine. Ugh...Jeremy is such a pain in the ass.

Jeremy: What did you just say?

Cathryn: (startled that Jeremy heard me) N..Nothing.

Jeremy: James,what did she tell you.

James: (lying for me) She was telling me that she loves me. I love you too.

Cathryn: Anyways, It's none of you bees guts. I was talking to James, not you.

Jeremy: That's it. You done eating. (takes my plate away from me, and puts it by the sink). Now go to your room.

Cathryn: But Jeremy...

Jeremy: (inturrupts me) Get yor ass off of that chair and into your room!

Cathryn: Jeremy,I'm...

Jeremy: (pulls my hair and draggs me to my room) Go to you room. NOW!

Cathryn: Okay. Jeremy, let go! (Jeremy, lets me go. Shoves me into my room and slams the door behinde him)

I took look around my room. Jeremy wasn't lying. He did take everything off my shelves in my room. The only thing thats left is my bed, my alarm clock and my lamp on my night stand,and my egg chair. He even took my T.V out of my room. I'm startled when Logan and Zacarie come out of my bathroom, I forgot that they were in there.

Logan: Does this mean we're locked in here with you?

Cathryn: (ignoring that comment) Zacarie may stay, but Logan (I grab Logan by his sleve and shoves him out of my room) GET OUT OF MY ROOM!!! (I slam the door infront of his face, and stomp over to lay on my bed)

Zacarie: (comes over to lay down next to me) Wanna talk?

Cathryn: (trying to calm down) What's there to talk about? My brother is an ass.

Zacarie: (laughs at my comment) Can't argue with that. (puts his arm around me) Are ya gonna be okay?

Cathryn: I don't know.(I lay my head down on his chest) I hope so. Jeremy seems to be really pissed at me. Can your parents adopt me so I can be your sister instead?

Zacarie: (chuckles) I'm sure that my mom would love to have you as her daughter. I've always wanted a sister. But even if your not adopted, you'll still always be like a sister to me.

Cathryn: (hugs him) I love you Zac.

Zacarie: Awww. I love you too Cat.(kisses my forhead)

Cathryn: I think I'm kind of scared of what Jeremy is going to do to me.

Zacarie: To be honest, I don't blame you. I'm scared for you. I know you probably don't want to listen to this right now but, I have seen you disrespect Jeremy. A lot. And more than likely he's just doing this to teach you a lesson. He want's to show you whos in charge. I bet that if you show him that you respect him more, than he will lighten up more. So I want you to promise me, that from now on you'll do as he says, so he wont hurt you.

Cathryn: But Zacarie.. (covers my mouth with his hand)

Zacarie: Eh eh eh. You have to promise me. Okay?(takes his hand off my mouth)

Cathryn: Okay. I promise.

Zacarie:That's my girl.

Cathryn: Do you think that you could stay over night again. I'll feel more protected if you did.

Zacarie: I really wish that I could. Maybe after work I can come over. Okay?

Cathryn: Okay.I've really missed you. I'm glad that you got to come over last night.

Zacarie: I've really missed you too.

Cathryn: You have to promise me something too.

Zacarie: Okay. Whats that?

Cathryn: You have to promise me that you and I will hang out more.

Zacarie: I promise. (kissesmy cheek)

Jeremy: (comes barging in my room) Zacarie can you please leave. I need to talk to my little sister. Alone.

Zacarie: Sure. Soryy Cat. I gotta go. Rember the promise.

Cathryn: Okay. I will.

Zacarie: Jeremy please take it easy on her.

Jeremy: K. I'll try.

Zacarie leaves my room, and Jeremy closes and locks the door behinde him.

[shogan977]

Absolutely love it hope u keep it up and write the next chapt soon

[Switch_Bay]

So i just read through all of this. It is amazing. I love it. Oh and dont feel rushed by jerks tellin you to hurry up with the story. (But the selfish side of me wants more. Hehe)

xx Bay xx

[tiger777]

All can see that this is a great story as it have 5 stars :)
And just take you time, love the story :)

[crossdressing227]

I'm sorry for being rude can u forgive me:(

[Stormwalker22]

Uh oH! serious time! lol

[KittyCat91]

I'm sorry for being rude can u forgive me:(


Yes. It's ok. I forgive everyone :)

[crossdressing227]

Yay thank you!!!

[small_penis2141]

I love this story. I would love to takes Cats place.

[gogreen]

omgg continue this its amazinggg:D:D:D:D

[meeacaroline]

Aww that was all cute and stuff :D yay

[crossdressing227]

I'm so confused teehee

[KittyCat91]

Jeremy: Hey there, my little sis. Like what I've done to your room?

Cathryn: (ignoring his question) Why did you lock my door?

Jeremy: Just to give us some privacy. Now answe my question. Do you like what I've done to your room?

Cathryn: No. I hate it.

Jeremy: (chuckles at me) Well too bad. Because it's going to stay like this, until I decide other wise. (takes out my ipad) I will at least let you have this back. (hands me the ipad) I typed down rules in the note pad that I expect you to follow. Do you need me to go over the rules for you?

Cathryn: I guess. I don't care.

Jeremy: Okay. (sits on my bed beside me) Rule number one should be a simple easy rule for you to follow. You are to always call me Master.
Number two. NO back talking me, or being rude to me what so ever. You have to respect me and do everything I tell you too.
Number three . Never question me. Again Always do as I say when I tell you too.
Number four. Whether I'm talking to you, Kaiden, or anyone else. NEVER inturrupt me.
Number five. Your never allowed to play with James or even yourself with out my permission.
Number six. From now on unilt this day forward you have to ask me permission to do anything. For example, If you need to use the bathroom you have to ask for my permission for you to use it before you do.
Number seven . Whenever I allow my friends to use you, there allowed to do whatever they want to you. So you need to respect them, and do whatever they tell you too.
Number eight. Every morning you are to make coffee, and bring it to my room. Then kneal down next to me, and wake me up. If Kaiden stays over night, you are to do the same to him.
Number nine. After we are done with our morning session, you are to make me breakfast. Again, if Kaiden is over you do the same to him.
Number ten. From now on your NEVER to wear any clothes, unless I pick them out for you. You only allowed to wear bra and panties, nothing else.
I may add more rules later, whenever I feel the need too. And if you dare brake any of these rules, I will punish you. Do you understand?

Cathryn: Whatever (hands the ipad back to Jeremy) I'am NOT doing this. I really don't want to be you slave.

Jeremy: (slaps me accross my face) YES you are! (pulls my hair lifting my face close to his) You are my slave from now on, until I say otherwise. I'am you master, and you will respect me. Is that understood?

Cathryn: (I couldn't help but cry for the way he was treating me. He never hit me like that before, and it scared me) Yes.

Jeremy: Yes what? You already broke rule number one.

Cathryn: Y...y...yes M...master.

Jeremy: (still grabbing my hair, he drags me out of my bed, and on to my feet) Take your clothes off.

Cathryn: But Why?

Jeremy: Because your my slave, and I want to inspect you. Now take your fuckin clothes off, and NEVER question me ever again. (spanks me)

Cathryn: (I didn't want to argue and make Jeremy angry than he already was, so I quickly obeyed him) Yes master.

I felt so humiliated being treated this way by my brother. I quickly take my shirt, shorts, and underwear off. I really hope that he won't be able to tell if im a virgin or not. I know that if he findes out then I'll be in worse trouble than I already am. Jeremy starts circling around me, making me nervous. He sits on the edge of my bed, and pulls me infront of him.

Jeremy: (looks at my vagina) Are you still a virgin?

Cathryn: (I freez and start to panic a bit. I really don't want him to find out so I lie) Yes, I..I'am.

Jeremy: Lets just find out if your telling the truth or not. (he starts rubbing my vagina)

Cathryn: (I back away before he starts to put a finger in) No. Jeremy, please.

Jeremy: (grabbs my right wrist and pulls me back infront of him). You better stay slut, and never back away again. (starts rubbing my vagina again, and slides a finger in) You better not be lying to me, because if you are then you will be punished. (he slides his finger all the way in. He looks at me very angrily) James poped you didn't he?

Cathryn: (I look down in shame and in embarrassment) Yes master.

Jeremy: (takes his finger out) You dirty little filthy slut.(he leans me over his knees)

Cathryn: (I'm trying to fight him, to let me go) NO. Jeremy. Please let me go. I'm sorry. (He holds me down with his left arm,and starts spanking me very hard with his right) Oooowww! NOOO!!! Jeremy, please stop! I'm really sorry.

Jeremy: (keeps on spanking me even harder) Shut up! Stupid slut.

I didn't dare say a single thing. He kept spanking me so hard that I couldn't help but to cry. He finally stops, picks me up over his shoulder, and carrys me into his room. I'm guessing everyone went home for now even James, because I didn't see or hear anyone when I peeked threw the hall way. The only person that was still hear is Kaiden. He was in Jeremy's room sitting in the egg chair reading a magazine. Jeremy lays me down on his bed. I curl up in a ball so that Kaiden wont see me like this, and hoping that it would keep Jeremy from hitting me. I've been trying to think of ways of how I could escape,so I wouldn't be abused anymore.

Cathryn: (still sobbing from the spankings) Jeremy, please. I'm really sorry.

Jeremy: I said to shut up!

Kaiden: What's goin on?

Jeremy: Cathryn has been a very bad girl,so she's being punished.

Kaiden: (he puts the magazine down, gets up out of the chair, and walks over to me) Oh. What did she do?

Jeremy: Tell Kaiden what you did to get punished.

Cathryn: I...I had sex with James.

Jeremy: No. You LIED to me about having sex with James.

Kaiden: Uh oh. That was a very bad thing to do Cat.

Cathryn: I know. And I'm really sorry.

Jeremy: (gets a belt out from his closet and hits me with it a little) Lay down, and keep your arms to your side.

Cathryn: Yes Master. (I lay on my back, and put my hands by my side)

Kaiden: Mind if I take a look?

Jeremy: No, not at all. She's your slave too.

Cathryn: (I cover my vagina with my right hand) No,please.

Kaiden: (grabbs my hand to move it, but I refuse) Cathryn, let me see.

Cathryn: (Jeremy whips my left boob with his belt) OW!!!

Jeremy: Cathryn, I told you to keep your hands by your side.

Kaiden moves my hand back to my side and makes it stay there. He then starts rubbing my vagina with his left hand. I couldn't help but to moan a little. He kept on teasing me by rubbing it, then finally stook three fingers in. It kind of hurt a bit as he was stretching it out more, and putting it in deeper.

Kaiden: (chuckles at my reaction) Hmmmm... I think she's enjoying this. She's really wet. (I shake my head no, and try to pick my right hand back up to stop Kaiden,but he pins it back down) Ah ah ah. Stop, and stay steal.

Cathryn: Y..yes Sir. I'm sorry.

Kaiden: (finally puts his fingers all the way in) Hmmm. Well, looks like you have been a very bad girl. (takes his fingers out and puts them near my mouth) Suck em clean. (I tightin my lips together, so he wouldn't put them in. I try tunning my head the other way, but he grabbs my hair) Open your mouth. Now.

Jeremy: Cathryn, Open your mouth.

Cathryn: (Jeremy whips my rigth foot with the belt) OOOOW!!! NO...(Kaiden forced his fingers inside my mouth) Mmmmmph!!!

Kaiden: Lick my fingers clean. (the taste of my own cum was was making me gag. I managed to do as he said, he cleaned his fingers) Good girl. (finally takes his fingers out of his mouth)

I was sick of this. I really didn't want them doing this to me anymore. When Jeremy went back into his closet, and Kaiden went into the bathroom, I decided to quickly make a break for it and run to my room. I would rather be locked in my room forever than to be put through this torture. I quickly crawl off of Jeremy's bed, and start running towards my room.

Jeremy: (sees me running to my room) Shit. Kaiden help! She's trying to escape. (he starts running after me. I luckly make it to my room, slame the door in his face, and lock it) Cathryn Annabell Tracey Summors!!! You better open this fuckin door right now! (starts banging on my door to get in)

Cathryn: No. Leave me alone!

I'm guessing that Jeremy stopped trying to get himself in, because the banging had stopped. It was quiet for a minuet,but then I start to hear and see the bolts comming undone on my door. Jeremy managed to take my door apart, and Kaiden puts it in the hall way.

Jeremy: For that, you now will never have a door ever again. (Jeremy trys to grab me,but I run away)

Cathryn: (Jeremy starts chasing me, and I end up running into Kaiden, and he grabs my waste) NO. Kaiden, please let me go.

Kaiden: Shut up. Where do you want me to take her?

Jeremy: (grabbs my legs) Lets take her back to my room.

[Stormwalker22]

WoW! didnt see that coming. Great Job Cat cant wait to see what happens next

[crossdressing227]

Wow if u were my slave I would put u in a hanging wedgie for a week no offense

[erick92]

Great addition! I really feel sorry for Cat, but then again if it wasn't harsh then she wouldn't learn..

[KittyCat91]

Wow if u were my slave I would put u in a hanging wedgie for a week no offense

Non taken, I guess. LOL :P

[shogan977]

Nice chapt but WRITE SOoNER!!!!!!!

[crossdressing227]

Non taken, I guess. LOL :P

Well that's kind of embarrassing lol wedgies turn me on :D

[crossdressing227]

Nice chapt but WRITE SOoNER!!!!!!!

Calm down dude she's doin slot of work and is to busy

[SrattNights11]

Another great chapter. Its getting intense!

[KittyCat91]

Well that's kind of embarrassing lol wedgies turn me on :D

LOL. It's ok. ;) :)

[KittyCat91]

I'm now back in Jeremy's room. Jeremy lets go of my legs. Kaiden shoves me back down on the bed, making me lay on my front. I'm trying to struggle to get away, but Kaiden pins his knees down on my leg muscles, and lays on top of me pining my arms down. Jeremy walks into his closet, then comes back out bringing a small black duffle bag.

Cathryn: (crying in pain from Kaiden putting his weight on my legs) Kaiden, please get off of me. Your hurtting me.(I see Jeremy walking towards me holding a pair of handcuffs) Jeremy, No. Please let me go. I'am really sorry.

Jeremy: Oh, I'll make sure that you are very sorry.

Kaiden grabs my hands putting them above my head, Jeremy takes my shirt off, and handcuffs me. Jeremy then takes a long piece of rope. He ties one end to the chains on the hand cuffs, and ties the other end to the railing of his bed. Kaiden finally gets off of me, and just pins down my legs with his hands, so I won't be able to kick them. Jeremy takes My shorts off. He then gets another long piece of rope, he ties one end to my right ankle and the other end to the bottom of the right leg post, and then does the same with my left ankle. I'am now tied to my brother's bed. The ropes tied to my ankles were a bit loose, so I was still able to move my legs some. I really hate being tied up, and was scared at what my brother was going to do to me next, so I'm at least trying to struggle to get the ropes untied.

Kaiden: Cathryn, Stop moving.

Cathryn: No, Please let me go! (Kaiden spanks me really hard with a paddle) Oooow!!! (I immediately stop trying to struggle and stay steal)

Jeremy: (lays his belt on my back) Now Cathryn, I'm gonna let you choose. If you don't then I'll choose for. Would you rather be spanked with a paddle, or whipped with my belt? I'm giving you 10 seconds to choose.


Cathryn: Neither. Jeremy, Please let me go. (Jeremy whipps my butt with his belt) OW!!!

Jeremy: 5 seconds!

Cathryn: Okay, okay. I choose the paddle.

Jeremy: Fine. Since you've been such a very bad girl, you will be getting 100 spankings. I'll do 50 with my hand first, then the rest with the paddle. You are not to speak, until your punishment is over. Is that understood?

Cathryn: (I knod my head yes) Yes Master.

Jeremy: (takes the paddle from Kaiden and lays it down next to my butt) Good. Your punishment is now begining. So you better keep your mouth shut.

Kaiden: (gets a ball gag out of the duffle bag) This should help her to keep her mouth shut. (He comes over next to me trying to put it in my mouth) Cathryn, open your mouth.

Cathryn: No. (I tighten my lips together, so he couldn't get the ball gag in. Jeremy spanks me really hard with his hand) Ow! (Kaiden quickly pushes the ball gag in my nouth, and fasten it really tight around my head.) Mmmmmph!!!!! (I start kicking my legs,and squirming around so then it would be hard for Jeremy to spank me)

Jeremy: Cathryn, stop! Kaiden hold her legs down.

Kaiden: K.

Kaiden grabs my legs and holds them down. Jeremy sits on the edge of the bed, wraps his right arm around my waste, making my butt stick out, and starts spanking my really hard with his left hand By the time he was done spanking me 50 times with his hand, I was already in tears. I couldn't help but to cry because of this pain he was putting me through.He then takes the paddle and spanks me. The paddle hurt way worse than his hand. He kept on striking me exremly hard. I felt like my butt could possibly turning purple by now. He suprisingly kept on going after he reach 50, and finally stops at 65.

Jeremy: (puts the paddle down,and starts rubbing my ass to comfort me) I'm really sorry Cat, but I had to give you 20 more because you kept on disobeying me.

Cathryn: Mmmmph.

Jeremy: Kaiden, can you take the gag off her now?

Kaiden: Yeah,sure. (Kaiden comes behinde me and take the ball gag out of my mouth)

Cathryn: (crying from pain) I...I'm really sorry.

Jeremy: (kisses my right butt cheek) Shsh. I know, it's okay. Your punishment is over for now. (spreads my butt cheeks,and starts rubbing my whole with his finger) Has James fucked you ass yet? You better tell me the truth, or I'll punish you more.

Cathryn: No. I promise you that he hasn't yet.

Kaiden: (grining at me) Oh. So your still a half virgin.

Cathryn: Y...Yes

Jeremy: Good. Your ass will definitely come in handy for Kaiden and I to use. (he pushes his middle finger in me a little)

Cathryn: (feels Jeremy's finger starting to go inside me) No. Please don't. It will hurt.

Jeremy: (laughs at me, and takes his finger out) Don't worry. We won't play with your ass until later. (gives me a playful spank, and makes me squeal a bit) I'm going to give you a little break.You may use the bathroom, go get a drink of water, or do whatever you like. You just better be back in my room in 10 minutes. Understood?

Cathryn: Yes Master.

Jeremy: Good girl. Kaiden, can you help me untie her?

Kaiden: Yeah.

Kaiden starts untying my right ankle, while Jeremy unties my left. Kaiden then unties the rope off of the chain of the hand cuffs, and Jeremy gets the key and uncuffs me. I try to sit up, but it hurt to sit because it was still very sore from when Jeremy spanked me,so I got up off the bed, and stayed standing next to his bed.

Cathryn: Jeremy, can I please have my phone back, so I can call James?

Jeremy: I guess you can for a little while. (walks in his closet to get my phone)

Kaiden: What's wrong Cat? Why can't ya sit down.

Cathryn: Because it hurts to sit. (mummbles) You should know why moron, you were here.

Kaiden: What was that? (come stands infront of me) You never mummble under you breath at me young lady, nor to Jeremy. Is that understood?

Cathryn: Whatever. Leave me alone.

Kaiden: I said is that understood? (pinches my left nipple, twisting it)

Cathryn: OOOOWWW!!! Yes. Kaiden, let go! I'm sorry.

Jeremy: (walks out of his closet) Kaiden, what's goin on?

Kaiden: (lets go of my nipple)Your little brat of a sister, back talked me.

Cathryn: (I fold my arms over my chest, so he wouldn't be able to hurt me there any more) No I didn't. Anyways, you started it.

Kaiden: Shut up. (pushes me down forcing me to sit down) You better be lucky that Jeremy is your brother instead of me. I wouldn't care how much in pain you are, I would fuck your ass so hard to where you wouldn't be able to sit in days.

Cathryn: (my butt was really hurting from sitting on it, so I was trying to fighting Kaiden to let me go) Ow. Please stop. I'm sorry. (I kick Kaiden in his shin)

Kaiden: (lets me go, holding his leg) Ow. Shit. I'm so going to punish you for that. (he gets back up to his feet, grabs my arm with his left hand, and fixes to slap me with his right)

Jeremy: (grabs Kaiden's wrist before he could slap me) Alright, that's enough. Kaiden, let her go. Now.

Kaiden: (pushes me down to the floor) Stupid bitch. (starts to walk away from me)

Cathryn: Jack-ass.

Kaiden: What the hell did you just call me? (starts to walk towards me again,but Jeremy backs him away) Stupid little slut.

Jeremy: Kaiden, stop. Just leave her alone. (kisses Kaiden) Calm down, okay? I'll let you punish her later for that. Okay?

Kaiden: Fine. (he walks off out of Jeremy's room)

Jeremy: Get up.(helps me up to my feet) I'm really not happy about the way you treated Kaiden.

Cathryn: But Jeremy, he...

Jeremy: (inturrupts me) No buts. (hands me my phone) This will be the last time you ever get to have your phone back. It better be back laying on my nightstand in 5 minutes. Understood

Cathryn: Yes sir.

Jeremy: Good. Now go leave and do whatever you want to do, but be back in my room in 10 minutes. I'm going to make sure that Kaiden is okay.

Cathryn: Okay.

[meeacaroline]

I feel like Kaiden's character has changed but I would have to go back and clarify if I really cared. Fortunately, I'm too lazy, and it's too good for me to care. Good job.

[crossdressing227]

Nice story so far

[Stormwalker22]

Very nice cant wait for more Cat :)

[shogan977]

Calm down dude she's doin slot of work and is to busy

Haha I'm tht I just get a bit ancy lOl I still love the story tho keep it up

[KittyCat91]

Seth: Is 22, and James' big brother. Has brown shoulder length shagy hair, green eyes, 6"5, white/caucasian, and is has a slim/ very muscular body.

Xavier Is 21, Logan's best friend. Jeremy snd Kaiden's aquantence. He use to be best friends with Jeremy when they were kids. Has brown blondish short hair, blue eyes, 6"1, white/cacasian, and has a slim/muscular body.

[shogan977]

Onus like fun can't wait for the nxt chpt it is honestly impossible to know what's next

[crossdressing227]

So it has died??

Onus like fun can't wait for the nxt chpt it is honestly impossible to know what's next

I know what's coming next because I help just a small bit on the next chapter :D

[Gem_]

arghhh... not it stopped no more to read =(

[erick92]

After reading some comment a question popped into my head that may have already been answered: Is this story real?

[KittyCat91]

Jeremy leaves his room, going into the living room where Kaiden is. I go back into my room, into my closet, and lock the door. I see like a 100 text messages from Justin, but I ignore them. Knowing that Kaiden was going to do something to really hurt me, I really didn't want to stay to find out what he was planing. So I decided to call James for help. He didn't pick up. I finde my pink bathrobde, and my sandals, and put them on. Running out of time, I decide I better start walking to James' house. I quietly sneak out of my room, I peak my head out of the hall way and see Jeremy and Kaiden sitting on the couch,making out. I quietly leave the hall way, and make it out back to our indoor pool. I then run out of the back door into our back yard. I walk out of our fence door quietly closing it back. James only live about 7 houses down from me, so it's not that far of a walk. I do have to be careful about beng spotted by Jordan and Logan. Jordan lives right across from us, and Logan live right next to James.
I run down the street awway from our house, I carfully cross the street, and hide in a big oak tree. I stay in there for a couple of minutes to take a breath, and to call James.

James: (pick up his phone) Hi baby.

Cathryn: (trying to calm down) James, are you at home?

James: Yeah. Why, what's up?

Cathryn: Okay, are you alone?

James: Yes. Babe, are you okay? What's goin on?

Cathryn: No, I'm not. I need your help. Can you meet me in your back yard?

James: Yeah,sure. Where are you right now?

Cathryn: I'm hiding in the oak tree. I'm almost at your house,

James: Okay.

Cathryn: I should be there in about 2 minutes.

James: Okay. See ya. Be safe.

Cathryn: I will. Love you.

James: I love you too.

James and I hang up. I run out of the oak tree, to James' house. I finally mae it to his drive way, and run to his back yard. I already see him waiting for me on his back pourch. He walks towards me, and I run towards him and hug him.

Cathryn; (trying not to cry) Please don't tell Jeremy or Kaiden that I'm here. I really don't want to go back.

James: Come on. Lets go inside and talk, okay?

Cathryn: Okay. (I hold James' hand, and he leads me into his house)

[KittyCat91]

I'm now in James' house.Just like my house, his is a 3 story house (the basement, the main floor, and then the upper floor).
Because I've been here so many times, I know exactly where everything is. While James went upstaris to turn everything in the game room off, I was already in his room sitting on his bed waiting for him.
James' room is about the same size as my room. His walls are painted a navey ocean blue color. He has a king size bed that lays on the side of his wall (so it kinda looks like a huge couch), & black sheets. He had alot of shelves hanging on his walls, filled with teenis, gymnastics, baseball, and soccer trophies. He had some U.S.A. Opened, and U.S.A soccer posters signed by some of the players. Also had posters signed by the player's of the Colts, Atlanta Thrashers, L.A. Lakers, the Pirates, and the Atlanta Braves on his wall. (Because his dad is a coach assistance, he got moved around from different sport teams alot, so that's how James has all this stuff. His parents are now divorced, and his dad lives in New York, but he still mails him alot of sports stuff). James is now in his room, and comes sits next to me on his bed.

James: (puts his arm over my shoulder) So what happened? Are you okay?

Cathryn: I don't know. I don't know how to explain this situation I'am in. It's really complicated. (I lay my head down on James' shoulder). How has everything in my life changed so fast?

James: I don't know babe. I ask myself the same thing. The only good change that has happened in my life is that I found you. (kisses my head) Did Jeremy or Kaiden hurt you? I really wanted to stay, but they made me leave. I'm really sorry I left you there.

Cathryn: It's okay. I kind of blame myself for all of this. And yeah, they kinda did. I really pissed Kaiden off, and I'm scared at what he's going to do to me. That's why I don't want to go back.

James: (hugs me) You can stay here with me as long as you need too. Okay?

Cathryn: Okay. Thanks. I love you.

James: I love you too. Would you want to have some fun at the mall today?

Cathryn: Yeah, I would love that. But before we go, have any clothes that I could borrow?

James: (joking) Awww, why? You look so sexy in that pink robe.

Cathryn: (couldn't help but laugh some at James' comment) Because. I have no clothes on underneath.

James: (starts looking at me up and down) Well happy early birthday to me. (starts to lay ontop of me, and kiss me)

Cathryn: (he grabs my knee, and tickles me) James. (playfuly pushes him off of me) Stop it.

James: (gives me a puppy dog face) Okay. I'am sorry, I love you.

Cathryn: I love you too.

James goes upstairs into his brother's and his mom's closet, to finde me something to wear. Because James is small, his shirt size is a small, and sometimes medium. I wear a large.

James come back in his room, holding(hands me the jersey,and skirt) a Colts jersey, and a black mini skirt..

James: Here ya go. The jersey might be a little bit big on you. It's the only thing I could find that's clossest to your size.

Cathryn: It's okay. It will be fine for now.

James: (hands me a pair of his boxers) You can wear this under you skirt for now. I'll buy you new clothes to wear at the mall.

Cathryn: Okay. Thanks.

James: What size shoes do you wear in mens?

Cathryn: Seven. Why?

James: K. You can barrow a pair of my convers to wear. Be right back. (goes into his closet)

Right when I was about to take my robe off, my phone starts to vibarate like crazy. I take out my phone and look at the ID. It was Jeremy. I immiditley ignor it. I had about a 100 text messages from Jeremy, Kaiden, Jordan, and Logan. I'm guessing they must be having a search party to finde me. I read the first one from Kaiden, "You are in so much trouble when we find you!". A new one from Jeremy poped open and read, "Just letting you know, I put a GPS app in your phone. Which means I'll finde out where you are". I turn my cell phone off completly, and take my battery out then lay it on James' night stand. Maybe now Jeremy won't be able to finde me.
I quickly take my robe off, and put on his brother's jersey, his mom's skirt, and his boxers. James comes back out of his closet handing me ankle socks, and his red/white laced converse. I quickly put them on. Right before we were about to leave his doorbell rings, I go back running to his room to hide in case if it was Jeremy. James opens the door to see who it is, and it's Logan.

James: Hey man, what's up?

Logan: Dude, I've been tryin to call you. Why didn't you pick up?

James: (takes his phone out of his pocket, and sees Logan's missed calls) Oh. Sorry. My phone was on silient.

Logan: K. Well, I have some bad news for you.

James: What's goin on?

Logan: Cathryn is missing. She ran off some where and we can't finde her.

James: (knowing I was in his room, he had a confused look on his face) No she's not...(I hear James about to blow my cover,I finde a tennis ball in his room and throw it at his back to get his attention) Ow. What the heck? (he looks back, and see's me. I give him a sign to not tell Logan)

Logan: What was that?

James: (lying) Nothing. It was my cat.

Logan: Is someone else here?

James: No. I'm alone. Seth, and my mom are both at work.

Logan: Oh. Okay. Can I come in.

James: No. Sorry. I was actually about to leave to go job hunting. I'll look for her while I'm down town today.

Logan: Alright. Fine. Well I'm going to go back to Jeremy's house. Call us to let is know if you finde her.

James: Okay. I will.

Logan finally leaves. James closes his door back. He picks up the teenis ball that I threw at him. He is now back in his room, and sees me sitting on his bed.

Cathryn: Sooo, what did Logan want?

James: I think you already know. By the way, smooth move throwning my championship teenis ball at me.

Cathryn: Sorry. I had to cut you off. You were about to blow my cover.

James: I'm sorry too. I didn't know you actually ran away.

Cathryn: (changing the subject) So can we go to the mall now?

James: Yeah,sure. Lets go.

I made sure to leave my phone at his house, just incase if Jeremy could still tack me on it. James and I leave his house, now into his garage, and got into his car. James' car is a 2010 black Ford hummer. He presses his garage button in his car to open the door, backs out of the garage into his driveway, closes the door back, and leave his driveway, heading to the mall.

[crossdressing227]

Nice job with using some of my idea

[Dangerous]

This is a good story. Keep it up. :D

[SrattNights11]

Super chapter!(: i hope she makes it okay!

[roxy55]

i love it
more more!!!!

[small_penis2141]

I want her to be caught by kaiden and he keeps her locked in his house and rapes the hell out of her and beats her like made. one daye when jermey is with him he finds her and they make up and have gross sibling sex.

[Charmie]

Right, well, I love this. Just found it today and it's super duper fantastic. It's one of my new favourites and has been bookmarked. Can't wait for more. :)

[naked_dare_girl]

I can't belive I've never posted on this thread, I've read every chapter and loved every word of it. Keep up the good work kitty and take your time to write your next part to this amazing story.

[shogan977]

Love it keep it up

[nauticalmonster22]

:):) Yaay! Love this story! Keep it up! :):)

[play-toy]

great story I cant wait for more

[crazy<3]

When's more gonna come out I love this story

[KittyCat91]

Hey guys,
I'm really sorry about the long wait. I've been having some problems with my laptop. Once I get the internet problem fixed, I should have the next chapter posted.

[KittyCat91]

James and I are finally at the mall. Without making any stops to any other stores first, we took the escalator to the second floor, headed towards our favorite store Hot Topic. Right when we were about to cross to enter the store, James' brother Seth stops us making me almost run into him. He finally stops circling us on his segway. and pulls up infront of us.

Cathryn: Watch out Paul Blart.

Seth: (ignoring my comment) Excuse me Miss, but I'm afraid I'm gonna have to arrest you for stealing my jersey. Oh. And for running away from home.You're so busted.

Cathryn: Reminder, your just a mall cop. And how did you know about that?

Seth: Your brother texted me. He's really worried about you. And being a mall cop is just one step away from being a real cop.

Cathryn: Sure. Whatever.

James: Seth, just leave us alone. And you better not tell Jeremy where we're at.

Seth: Or what? You have nothing against me, little bro.

James: K. How about this. If you promise not to tell, then I'll do your chores for a whole month.

Seth: Fine, that's a deal.

James: Alright. Now if you don't minde, I would like to spend time with my girlfriend.

Seth: Okay. (backs up his segway to let up by) But wait... (pulls in front of us again).

Cathryn: (I almost get ran over by him, but James pulls me back) Dude, will you stop doing that?!?

James: What do you want now?

Seth: Why is she wearing my jersey in the first place? And Mom's skirt?

James: Because I had to give her clothes to wear.

Cathryn: Yeah. It was either this, or me coming to the mall naked under my robe.

Seth: Oh okay. Well if anything happens to my favorite jersey, you'll be paying me $110.

Cathryn: You paid $110 for this piece of cloth?

Seth: No. Dad bought that for me, at the first Colts game I ever went to. (brshes my hair back) Even worth more, for having the players autograph on the back.

James: Look. I'm really sorry. We were in a hurry, so I didn't realize that was the one with their signitures on it. I'm going to buy her a new outfit, so I'll give you're jersey back before we leave.

Seth: Okay. After you're done, meet me down stairs by the water fountain.

James: K. I'll text you when wer're done.

Seth: K. (backs up to let us by) See ya. (drives off to the right towards the elivator).

James: Really sorry about my brother.

Cathryn: It's okay. I feel like it's my fault for sneaking out. If I didn't you wouldn't of had to take cover for me. And...(James interrupts me by giving me a suprise kiss) That's a very nice way to tell me to shut up.

James: (laughs at my comment) Weren't those your first words after our very first kiss?

Cathryn: Yeah, I think so. Except, I got nervous & accidently vomited on your shoes a little.

James: Oh, yeah. Please don't do that again.

Cathryn: Don't worry, I won't. That was so embarrassing.

James: And anyways, it's okay babe. Whatever it takes to spend my life with you. It's worth it.

Cathryn: (I give him a kiss on the cheek) You really are an amazing boyfriend.

James: (holds my right hand) I love you.

Cathryn: I love you too.

We walk our way into Hot Topic, and we're now inside the store, and go over to the girls section to look around.

James: So see anything you like?

Cathryn: Yep. If only I had the money to buy the whole store.

James: (laughing) Yeah, I know right.

Zacarie: (comes over to us) Welcome to Hot Topic. May I help you too with something?

Cathryn: Hey Zacarie. I thought you didn't have to work until 4.

Zacarie: Well turns out they needed me earlier. So what brings you two here?

James: (wraps his arms around me) I kidnapped Cathryn from Jeremy so she can have some fun. (kisses my cheek)

Zacarie: Oh, I see. I gotta get back to work. Let me know if you two need anything.

Cathryn: Okay. We will.

[em52388]

Love it. Keep up the great work.

[naked_dare_girl]

That was a bloody good update. Why am I talking with a British accent? I feel so gay.

[Kito]

I'm sorry, but I can't read this story, when it hasn't be formatted properly.

the proper way is:

"This is a example." said John Smith.
Jane Doe looked surprised "Oh!" She exclaimed, " Look, proper English!"
"Look," John smith says, " I can even write action as well."
And with that statement, John smith leant in and pressed his lips to Jane's.

If you want, I could be your beta reader/mentor?
A beta reader reads through work and fixes problems.

he's writing it out like a script for a play. Are you going to tell me Shakespeare was wrong as well?

[fullofsecrets]

Please continue! :D:p:);)

[Stormwalker22]

Very nice chapter and nice save by James haha

[SrattNights11]

he's writing it out like a script for a play. Are you going to tell me Shakespeare was wrong as well?

Agreed!

Anyway, great installment, keep up the great work!

[KittyCat91]

James: How about I pick out your clothes?

Cathryn: Okay. I guess you can if you really want too.

James: I do. (pulls me over next to the cash register) Hey Zac, can you babysit Cathryn for a couple of seconds?

Zacarie: Do I get paid? (laughs) Just kidding. Sure, I will.

Cathryn: Babysit? I'm not a baby.

James: You're my baby. (kisses me) Now stay here, and I'll be right back.

Cathryn: Okay. (James goes back over to the girls section and starts picking out my clothes)

Zacarie: (talking to me) If I'm not mistaking, I thought you were grounded.

Cathryn: I was?

Zacarie: I don't know. That's what Kaiden told me.

Cathryn: Oh. Jeremy never told me that I was grounded. But I did kind of sneak out. So Jeremy or Kaiden don't know that I'm here.

Zacarie: Cathryn, I thought I told you to behave.

Cathryn: It's not my fault. Jeremy and Kaiden were taking it too far. They found out that James and I you know, did it. And now I'm in a lot of trouble.

Zacarie: So can you tell me what happened?

Cathryn: Not here. Too many people around. When and if I get my phone back, I'll text you everything that happened. I left my phone at James' house, so I don't have it with me right now.

James comes back standing in line at the cash register. He bought me a purple t-shirt that had Reptar from Rugrats on it, and read "Rawr means I love you". He also bought me a turquoise ruffle skirt, a pink thong, and a black bra.

Zacarie: (starts ringing up the clothes) So are these for you? (holds up the pink thongs)

James: Haha, very funny. Could you go ahead and take the price tags off? Cathryn is going to change into them.

Zacarie:Sure. (done ringing up the clothes) That would be $38.98.

James. K. (hands Zacarie his credit card)

Zacarie: (done cutting the tags off, puts the clothes in the bag, and hands it to James) Here ya go.

James: Thanks.

Cathryn: James, I promise that I'll pay you back.

James: It's okay. You don't have too. I want to buy this for you.

Cathryn: Are you sure?

James: Yes. I'm absolutely positive. (hands me the bag) Now go into the dressing room, and change your clothes. I'll be waiting right here for you. Okay?

Cathryn: Okay.

Zacarie: I'll go with you to unlock you a room.

I follow Zacarie into the back of the store. He unlocks a dressing room for me, and I go in there locking the door behinde me. I carefully take off Seth's jersey, and then take off his mom's skirt. I first put on the bra, then the shirt. I then take off James' boxers, slide on the pink thongs, and lastly I put on the tourquoise skirt. I loved the shirt and the skirt James bought me. I put the clothes he let me borrow in the bag. I walk out of the dressing room, and Zacarie locks the door back behinde me.

Zacarie: (pinches my dimples) You look so cute.

Cathryn: Thanks. (Zacarie playfully spanks my butt, I jumped because it still hurt from when Jeremy spanked me) Ow. Please don't touch me there.

Zacarie: I'm sorry. I didn't mean for it to hurt.

Cathryn: It's okay. Can we go now? (I start to leave, but Zacarie pulls me back)

Zacarie: Wait. Cat, what happened?

Cathryn: It's nothing. I just want to go now.

Zacarie: Cathryn, stop trying to avoid this. I know that something is wrong, or you wouldn't be acting so jumpy. Now, please. Tell me what happened.

Cathryn: I don't want to tallk about it right now. (unlocks the dressing room, pulls me in there with him, and locks the door behinde him) Zacarie, what are you doing?

Zacarie: We aren't leaving this room until you tell me what happened. (sits down on the bench)

Cathryn: I don't know if I'm suppose too, I don't want to get into anymore trouble.

Zacarie: Well. Jeremy, is just gonna have to get over the fact that I'm your best friend. And as your best friend it's my job to help protect you. Now, what did Jeremy and Kaiden do to you?

Cathryn: I want to go be with James. (I try to let myself out, but Zacarie grabs my waste, making stay, and turning me back towards him)

Zacarie: Cathryn, please. I'm just trying to help you. Why did they do to you?

Cathryn: (trying to hide my tears) They hit me.

Zacarie: (grabs the end of the back of my skirt) Is it okay I can see?

Cathryn: I don't know, I guess. (he comes behinde me,and lifts the back of my skirt up)

Zacarie: (shocked at how brusied my butt is) Oh my god. (puts my skirt back down,and turns me back around,and hugs me to comfort me) I'm really sorry. I swear I'm so going to get Jeremy back for this.

Cathryn: No. You can't. It will just make things worse.

Zacarie: Well I'm at least going to talk to him about this.

Cathryn: Thanks, but you don't have too, I don't want you to get into any trouble because of me.

Zacarie: I'm not afraid of your brother, I'm just afraid at what he's going to do to you next. He doesn't need to be treating you this harsh. All I'm going to do is just talk some sense into him to lightin up a bit. Okay?

Cathryn: I guess that's okay.

Zacarie: Can I have his phone number?

Cathryn: I don't have, but James has it in his phone. He can give it to you.

Zacarie: Okay.

Cathryn: So can we go now? I don't want James to start worrying.

Zacarie: Yes, we can.

Zacarie unlocks the door, and finally lets me out of the dressing room. I walk back into the front of the store, Zacarie locks the door back and follows me. I see James waiting for my by the entrance of the dressing room.

James: Hey baby, lookin sexy as always.

Cathryn: (I couldn't help but to blush and giggle at James' comment.I give him a kiss) Thank you for my new clothes. I espeacially love the shirt and the skirt.

James: You're welcome. I'm glad you like them.

Zacarie: Sorry,if we kept you waiting. I had to talk to her in private.

James: It's cool. Is everything okay?

Cathryn: Yeah,everything is fine. Is it okay if Zacarie can see your phone to get Jeremy's cell number?

James: Yeah, sure. (hands Zacarie his iphone)

Zacarie: Thanks.

James: Your not going to tell him where Cathryn is are you?

Zacarie: No. Of course not. I just need it, so I can let him know that I'll be coming over after work.

James: Oh okay

Zacarie: (done adding Jeremy to his contact list, and hands James his phone back) Here ya go.

James: (puts his phone back in his pocket) I guess we might see ya later.We have to go meet my brother downstairs.

Zacarie: Oh okay. Hug? (has his arms opened for me to hug him, but instead James hugs him first)

Cathryn: (jokingly pouts like a 5 year old) James, you stole my hug.

James: (laughs at my reaction) I love ya man.

Zacarie: I meant for Cat, but okay. Love ya too. (James stops hugging him) Come here Cat, you're next.

Cathryn: Yay! (Zacarie comes over to me and gives me a big bear hug. I couldn't breath through my nose because he pressed my face against his chest) Zac?

Zacarie: Yeah?

Cathryn: I can't breath.

Zacarie: Oh. Sorry. (lifts my head up from his chest)

Cathryn: It's okay. And thanks for being such a good friend.

Zacarie: Awwww (kisses my cheek) No problem. It's what best friends are for right?

Cathryn: Of course.(I give Zac a kiss on the cheek in return) Love you.

Zacarie: Love you too.(stops hugging me) Hey Jame, Promise to keep her safe?

James: Yes. I most definitely will. (holds my right hand) Well gotta go. See ya later.

Zacarie: K. Bye.

Cathryn: Bye Zacarie.

[fullofsecrets]

Ohhh!!! Dont stop now! Its so good!

[naked_dare_girl]

Badah dag dah I'm lovin it.

[cassaddee604]

I want moooree.<3 hehe this is my addiction.

[shogan977]

love it the stories def make up for the long wait

[xXScarlettezXx]

i really love your story its one of my favs...so i noticed that back a few pages ago you said something about not being with james anymore...so was this a true story? Sorry you probebly have been asked this...but im new here and i was just curious...especially since it seems that zacharie well....seems to like you...i mean maybe its just me...but wow...i wouldnt mind a best friend like that...your really good at writing..i feel like i am living your story..:) If this is a true story..well..did you end up dating zac?

[KittyCat91]

Hey readers,
I've recently been getting asked alot if this is a true story or not. Just letting you all know, it is NOT a true story. But some of the characters are based on real people. Those characters are James, Jeremy, Zacarie, Logan, and Justin. I decided to make a little list and discreption, of the characters that are real.

1.) . James:
- I really did have a boyfriend named James,but we sadly broke up. I'm now currently in new happy relationship. Things just ended up not working out between James and I, so we had to brake up. But we are still good friends.

2.) . Zacarie:
- Zacarie is really my best friend in real life. No, he's not my boyfriend. Just like me, he is also in a happy relationship. So the dares and stuff we did in the story isn't real, but our relationship between each other is real. He's like a brother to me.

3.) . Jeremy:
- Jeremy is based on a best friend of mine. So in real life, Jeremy isn't my brother. But we really do act like we could be brother and sister.


4.) . Justin:
- Justin did use to be my boyfriend, and he did almost blackmail me. I do regret ever meeing him. Maybe after I complete this story, I can write a story of what happened between Justin and I, and how I met James.

5.) . Logan:
- Logan is actually based on 13 frenemies of mine (Yes, I know. 13 is a lot. I just happen to have alot of guys that like to irritate me for some reason). I took all of the annoying stuff they did to me through out my life, and put it into Logan's character. Example, some of them really did cause me to sprain my wrist, they have done some digusting sexual pranks on me, and just done alot of perverted stuff to me that still haunts me.


* So just remember, only those characters are based on real people. The rest is fiction (which means NOT real).
I'm really sorry I havn't posted a new chapter yet, I'm still in the prosses of writing the next chapter. I've been really busy with getting settled into college (will be moving in about 3 weeks), and celebrating a lot of birthdays with my friends and family.
Thank you everyone who's been reading, and comenting my story. I'm glad you all like it. It really means a lot to me. :)

[lucy x]

carry on with the story i realy like it:cool:

[SubBabyDoll]

Uber hot story. I wish this all happened to me. cept I would react the same as you...Lol until you said it was fiction I believed it and was jealous :p

[shogan977]

dead story? plz continue

[I need punishing]

Great story! Please write more and sooner :)

[meeacaroline]

dead story? plz continue
It's not dead. She just wrote a couple weeks ago. Also, she promised she wouldn't let it die. Please keep up.

[Teacher]

I love this story so far I'm gonna hit the thank button

[em52388]

Please don't let this story die. It's too good to go unfinished. I understand that you have a life off of here and I'm certanly not asking you to rush the next part out but a status update would be nice at this point. I hope all is well in your life and that nothing has happened to end this story before it is finished.

[Undead]

Please don't let this story die. It's too good to go unfinished. I understand that you have a life off of here and I'm certanly not asking you to rush the next part out but a status update would be nice at this point. I hope all is well in your life and that nothing has happened to end this story before it is finished.

It to be mean but I agree I atleast want a status update........ Please

[Undead]

Please don't let this story die. It's too good to go unfinished. I understand that you have a life off of here and I'm certanly not asking you to rush the next part out but a status update would be nice at this point. I hope all is well in your life and that nothing has happened to end this story before it is finished.

Not to be mean but I agree I atleast want a status update........ Please

[darebunny22]

Is it still alive? I liked this story :(

[KittyCat91]

James and I finally leave Hot Topic. James texted his brother to let him know that we're coming downstairs. We take the esclator back down, and see his brother sitting by the water fountain flirting with some girl.

Cathryn: Looks like Paul Blart has a girlfriend.

James: Cathryn, be nice.

Cathryn: Yes,sir. I know.

We're now off the esclator. Seth sees us, & walks over to us.

James: (takes the jersey out of the bag, & hands it to Seth) Here.
.
Seth: (takes his jersey from James) Thanks.

James: Agian, I'm really sorry for taking it

Seth: It's cool. Just remember to ask before taking my stuff.

James: Alright, I'm sorry.

Seth: (being sarcastic) Cute skirt Thumbelina. Get that at Baby's R' Us? (laughs at his joke)

Cathryn: (he knows that I hate being called that,and pushed it teasing me about my hight) So who's your girlfriend?

James: (giving me a warning) CAT!

Seth: She's not my girlfriend, yet. Anyways that's none of your business.

Cathryn: Sure about never? No offence, but she's way out of you league. If you even have one...(James inturrupts me by covering my mouth)

James: We will be leaving now. Come on Cat, lets go. (he pushes me infront, to make me start walking the other way, away from Seth)

Seth: See ya home.

James: K. (we're now far from Seth so he uncovers my mouth) I thought told you to be nice.

Cathryn: I know. I'm sorry. He started it, and was practically asking for it.

James: You're right. Knowing him, I think he was.

Cathryn: So what should we do now?

James: Hmmmm. How about we got to the beach?

Cathryn: Okay. Sounds good to me.

James: Alrighty. (stands me next to the escalator) I need to go back upstairs to use the rest room real fast. Do you need go?

Cathryn: Yeah,

James: Okay. After we're done, lets meet back infront of Hot Topic. Okay?
Cathryn: Okay.

James and I went to the restrooms upstairs, to take care of our business before we left. The girls is on the right end of the mall, and the boys on the left end. I suprisingly beat James, waiting for him infront of Hot Topic. I thought it was kind of odd, when usually he's the one always waiting for me.

Zacarie: Well hello again.

Cathryn: Hey. Should'nt you be at work?

Zacarie: (joking) Okay mom.Yes, I just got off my break. So where's your prince charming?

Cathryn: He's using the rest room.

Zacarie: Oh okay. Well I gotta get back to work, If you need anything, I'll be at the cashier as always.

Cathryn: Okay.

Zacarie went back to work, and I was alone once again. Or at least I thought I was. I feel someone grabb my left wrist and turn me around to face them. I was shocked and suprised to see who it was.

Justin: Hey, Cathryn I told you, you couldn't ignore me forever.

Cathryn: Let me go. (I try to pull away to make him let me go, but he holds me tighter)

Justin: (ignoring my comand) Logan told me you ran away from home. So are you here alone?

Cathryn: No Dumbass. James is here, and Zacarie is right in there (points to Hot Topic with my free hand). Now let me go, or I'll scream.

Justin: Oh, I don't think so. (shows me his pocket knife hding in his hand) Unless if you want to get hurt, and I really don't want to have to do that. Even though you already have hurt me.

Cathryn: You're the one that actually hurt me phisicly and emotionly first. So I think wer're even.

Justin: (gives me a little evil laugh) I would think of all people, you should know that I don't play to get even at all. I get what I want. (pulls me closer to him) And I want you.

Cathryn: (I'm struggling to get free) Well sometimes you can't always get what you want.

Justin: But I always do. Now. I'm giving you a second chance. We can do this the easy way or hard way. The hard way seems to always be more fun. (laughs at his joke)

My heart was pounding at what was happening. I knew that I never wanted to go any where with him. I hated him. So I decided to make a risk to get a way from him whether it meant making it out alive or not. I didn't care, I just wanted to get far away from him as possible.

Cathryn: Let me go Jack-ass, and go to hell!

With that I stomped on his foot, and kick his shin with all the strength I had. Justin let go of me, hesitating in pain. I run from him while I have the chance. I start running down the stairs. I accidently miss a step, and fall. As I was tumbling down the stairs, the railing catches me. I try to get back up, but feel a sharp burning pain in my right knee. I look at my knee, and is bright red from grtting a carpet burn. I feel soneone behinde me pulling my hair, forcing me up to my feet.

Justin: Fine will do this your way. The hard way it is. Hmmmm. I wonder if your brother might reward me for bringing you back to him. Maybe I''l get him to earn my trust back.

Cathryn: Let me go. (I spit in Justin's face, and he slaps me accros my face) Ow!

Justin: Stupid little bitch. (Pins me against the railing of the stairs. Puts his pocket knife next to the right side of my hip) Listen to me. You better not cause any more attention than you already have. ais that understood? (I shake my knod my head yes) Good. Now all I want to do is just talk to you. Okay?

Cathryn: Okay. (I'm scared out of my minde. I never had any kind of knife pulled on me before. Trying to stay strong and not cry, I was frozen in fear.) Can you please put that away? I...I promise not to run from you anymore.

Justin: Fine. Better keep your promise. (he puts the knife away,back in his pocket)

Cathryn: What is it that you want?

Justin: I already told you. I want you. (puts his body closer to mine) I've missed you. And I'm sorry for blackmailing you. Okay. I'm really sorry. I was going through a tough time then, and never meant to put my anger out on you. I still love you. (he leans in to kiss me, but move my head away to make him miss.)

Cathryn: No. I can't. You know I'm in love with James!

Justin: (chuckles at my comment) Does it look like I give a rats-ass who you're in love with. I will tell you what to do, and you will do it. You're going to break up with James. I don't give a fuck how, but you better do it. And you better not tell anyone about our little conversation. I really don't wanna have to hurt you. Okay? (he pulls my hair, forcing me to meet his face, and kisses me)

(I was disgusted of what Justin was doing to me. I bit down on his tounge, so he would stop kissing me)

Cathryn: NO! STOP! I hate you! I will never love you again! I HATE YOU!!!

Justin: Son of a bitch! (slaps me across the face again for biting him)

Cathryn: Owww! (I can't help but start to shed tears.)

My minde was racing with thoughts. I wanted to be with James again. I was starting to worry that I might not ever get to see him again. I would honestly rather be back home with Jeremy, instead of being here in danger with Justin. Wondering what I should do. I was wanting to scream for help, but was terrifired to find out what Justin would do to me if I tried. I could already tell that I made him more angery than ever.

Justin: Fine. If I can't have you, then know one can.

Cathryn: W...what do you mean?

Justin: (grabbs my arms, and starts lifting me from the ground abit) Hmmmm. What a tradgic it would be if you "accidentlly" fell over the railings. No one is here around us to wittness what happened. I would get away easy.

Cathryn: (feeling him push me more over the railing,I fight back for him to stop) NO! Justin, Please! Don't do this! PLEASE. I'm sorry.

Justin: Awwww. It's too late for an apology. (sits me on the railing) One push back and off ya go. Don't worry heres one last kiss good bye. (kisses me again. I did't fight him this time, knowing that if I did, I would fall over the railing.)

Zacarie: What the hell is going?!?

Zacarie scared both me and Justin, to where it made me jump back, and fall over the railing. Justin quickly grabbed my right arm before I could fall all the way down to the main floor. I start panicking and screaming for help.

Cathryn: (screaming on the top of my lungs) AAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! HELP ME! SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME!!!

Justin: Shit! I got you. (puts my hand on the railing to hold onto.he looks into my eyes and whispers) I'm really sorry. I have to go. (he runs off,leaving me dangling above ground,)

Cathryn:HELP!!! ZAC!!!

Zacarie: (comes to grab both of my arms, to try and pull me up) Cathryn!!! Don't let go!

Cathryn: WHY ON GOD'S GREEN EARTH WOULD I LET GO!?! HELP ME!!!

Zacarie: (looks behinde and see people staring and walking by by) Don't just stare at us you idiots! We could use some help here.

A guy walking under me looks up, and sees me dangling in mid air. He runs up the staris to where we're at, and helps Zacarie, by pulling me up. I looked up at him. He had short blond hair, blue eyes. Wearing a white shirt,and black pants. He awkwardly greeted us, and said his nname is Xavier. He seemed kind of fimilar like I knew him, but couldn't come to mind where I seen him before. I was too concetrated on whether I was going to make it out a live or not. Zacarie starts to pull me up, but makes me slip instead.

Cathryn: (freaking out,because I'm starting to slip). I believe I can fly. I believe I can fly. I believe I can fly... I really wish I could fly. Oh, why couln't I be born with wings?! Really could be useful at this moment.

Xavier: No! No. Don't do that yet. We have to pull her at the same time.

Zacarie: I'am sorry. Cathryn, just calm down.

James: Cathryn!!! (runs through the crowd of people, and over to me. Grabs left arm to help keep me from falling)

Cathryn: James!!! Help Me!

James: I got you. Don't worry. Seth is on his way to help. Just don't let go.

Cathryn: I think we're all pretty much on the same page here! Stupid gravity!!! Can you please pull me up now?!? I would love to be standing on ground,intead of air!

Xavier: Okay. Since there's three of us now, lets start trying to pull her up. We pull her up at the same time on three.

Cathryn: (to myself) Great there's math? Why can't it just be 1? I'm dangling in mid air peoples. I need help!

Each time Xavier counted to three, they lifted me over the railing pulling me in.
Seth finally comes to help. Since him and Xavier were the strongetst out of Zacarie and James, they were able to pull me back up in five seconds. I was finally pulled back over the railing, able to touch ground. James and Zacarie both hug me at the same time, glad that I'm okay.

[KittyCat91]

Hey readers!
I finally had time to finish part 3 of chapter 16. I'm really sorry for the long wait. I just been busy with college, burried in homework 24/7 of the day. I made a promise. Doesn't matter how long it takes me, I promise to finish this story.
I hope you enjoy reading this next part.

~Cat~

[I need punishing]

thanks kitty! amazing update, are we gonna see more soon?

[em52388]

Glad to see the quality has not suffered by such an extended absence. Great job.

[shogan977]

awesome i love the story keep it up

[KittyCat91]

James: (kisses me) Thank God you're okay. What happened? You had me worried sick when I couldn't find you.

Cathryn: I'm really sorry. It was Justin. But it was an accident, me falling over.

Zacarie: Why were you and Justin kissing?

James: You kissed Justin?

Cathryn: (I start to panick a little, not wanting to hurt James) No... I mean yes. I mean he kissed me. I didn't want to kiss him, but he forced me too. I'm really sorry. James, I love you, and you only.

James: It's okay. I believe you. It's not you're fault. I love you too. (kisses me)

Xavier: Is everything okay now?

Cathryn: Yes. Thank you for helping me.

Xavier: No problem. Well, I gotta go now. Stay safe.

Cathryn: K. Thanks. I will.

(Xavier leaves, and Seth comes over to check me for injuries)

Seth: You're knee is bleeding.

Cathryn: It's not bleeding that bad. I't just a carpet burn. (Seth touches my left wrist to make sure it's not broken, and then my left.) Ow.

Seth: (touches it again) Does that hurt?

Cathryn: Ow. Yes, it hurts. Can you please stop touching it!?

Seth: Sorry.

James: Her wrist has already been broken since last night.

Seth: Oh. Ok. Well, us pulling on your wrist probably made it worse. Come with me to the First Aid Clinic, and I can fix that up for ya.

Cathryn: Okay.

Zacarie: Well, I gotta get back to work. Can you promise me that you'll stay out of trouble?

Cathryn: I'll try my best.

James: I might stop by the pet store, just to get a leash for her.

Zacarie: (laughs at James' joke) Good idea. Or you could put a GPS in her.

Cathryn: Haha, very funny.

Zacarie: (kisses my cheek) Please, don't get inro anymore trouble.

Cathryn: Yes sir, I know.

Zacarie: Call me or text me if you need anything. Okay?

Cathryn: Okay. I will.

Zacarie left, going back to work. James and I follow Seth downstairs to the First Aid Clinic. Wew walk through the security door, back into the mall. We're now finally inside the clinic. It's just basically a tiny room with first aid supplies. Has a skin, two chairs, a large cooler, and a twin fold out bed layin folded up in the corner. James sits down in one of the chairs. Seth picks me up and sits me ontop of the counter top, next to the sink,and cabbinets above me filled with the supplies.He opens the cabinet door behind my head, and accidently wacks me in the back of my head with it.

Cathryn: Ow! (I put my right hand over my head, where it was hit, snd rubbed it so it woldn't get bruised)

James: Heads up? (trying to hide his laugh from his joke)

Cathryn: Seriously. You should call this the First Aid Shack.

Seth: Sorry. Need an ice pack for that.

Cathryn: (i give Seth an evil look,knowing that was sarcasem) No thanks, I think I'm fine.

Seth: Okay. (he takes out an ice pack from the cooler, an gives it to me) Need one anyways to put on your wrist.

Cathryn: Fine. (i take the ice pack and place it on my left wrist)

Seth then takes out a wash cloth, hydrogen prioxide, and some bandages. He goes over to the sink, turns on th cold water, and wets the wash cloth.

Seth:This might sting a bit.

Cathryn: (being sarcastic) Great. More pain is just what I need. (he places the wash cloth ontop of the carpet burn, and cleans my knee. I imideatly felt a burn as if my knee was on fire) Oooow! More like a lot a bit. (i try to move Seth's hand off my knee, but he grabbs me with his other hand to stop me)

Seth: I know it hurts. I'm really sorry, but it has to stay on. I need to clean the germs off so it wont get infected. Just relax. I'm very sorry, but the next part might hurt even worse than this. (he takes the wash cloth off for a while, and soakes it in hydrogen prioxide. Then places it beck ontop of my carpet burn, on my knee)

Cathryn: (trying to hold in my screams) Please take it off, it really hurts.

Seth: I'm almost done. Need to let it soak in. (he finally takes the wash cloth off, and wrapps it up in a bandage. Later on today, you need to clean it off with water, and put antibiotic oinment on it.

Cathryn: Okay.

Seth then puts the hydrogen prioxide up, and takes out pain relief cream. He takes the ice pack away from me, and unwrapped the bandage that Bardon has put on it last night.

Seth: (hads me the pain relief cream.) Rub this on your wrist. It will help it to heal.

Cathryn: Okay. (take the cream from Seth)

I look down at my wrist, and is now only a little swollen. It has a light red color all around it. With purple, green, blue, and some black streeks aound it.I rub the pain relief cream all around my wrist I'm now done, so I hand it back to Seth, and he puts it back into the cabinet. He takes out bluee elastic wrap, and another bandage. He first wrapps the bandage, and then wrapps the elastic bandage around it. .

Seth: Okay. You're ready to go. (he lifts me off the countertop, back onto the ground.

Cathryn: Thanks.

Seth: No problem. Just doing my job.

James: (takes hold of my right hand) Ready to go babe?

Cathryn: Yup.

James: K.

Seth: Where ya kids headed?

James: Going to the beach, and then back home. Cat will be staing over with us tonight.

Seth: Oh. Okay. See ya later.

James: See ya.

James and I walk back out to the front of the mall, leaving Seth behind the security doors. We enter Sears, heading back outside to James' car. Before we were about to walk out the slide doors, I accidently run into Xavier, causing him to dropp his bags.

Cathryn: I'm so sorry.

Xavier: It's fine. (looks up at me) Oh. Well hello again.Cathryn, right?

Cathryn: Yes. I didn't break anything of yours, did I?

Xavier: No. It's fine. Nothing breakable in these bags.

Cathryn: Oh okay. Do you need any help?

Xavier: Sure. Thanks. (hands me to big bags of clothes)

Cathryn: (carries the bag in my right hand) No problem. It's the least I could do. You helped save my life. (thinking that his car was near James I start to walk the opposit way, following James)

Xavier: Hey, Your not stealing my clothes, are ya?

Cathryn: (confused at his question, I turn around, and see him walking the opposite direction of us) Oh. I'm really sorry. I thought that youmight have been parked near us.

Xavier: (chuckles) It's okay. I'm parked on the other side of you. All the way down on the right hand side. Just follow me.

Cathryn: Okay.

James: (walks back to the front of the mall.) I will wait at the front for ya.

Cathryn: Okay. I will be right back.

James: Alright.

Xavier and I have been walking for about 10 minutes now just to get to his car. The baggs were heavy, and kind of hard for me to carry with just one hand, so it was a bit hars for me to keep up.

Xavier: Wer're almost there. So is that guy waiting for you your boyfriend?

Cathryn: Yes. His name is James.

Xavier: Oh ok. How old are yall?

Cathryn: I'm 17, an he is 16.

Xavier: Oh. Ok. Cool. I'm 21.

We are now finally at Xavier's car. It is a black 2010 GMC Yukon. He puts down some of his bags to get his car keys out from his front left pocket. He has his car keys and unlocks the trunk. I put help put his bags in his car, laying behind the back seat. We're now done loading his car.

Cathryn: Anything else I can help with.

Xavier: Nah. That's about it. Thank you.

Cathryn: You're welcome.

Xavier: Can I give you a ride back up to the front?

Cathryn: Yeah, sure. Thanks.

Xavier: No problem.

He opens the back door for me to sit behind the drivers seat. As I was starting to get in, I see someone laying across the seat,sitting up. It was Logan. My heart started to pund once again in fear. I was confused at what was happening.

Logan: Hey Cathryn.

Cathryn: Second thought, I will walk back. Or run back. (i try to run to go back to James, but Xavier grabbs my waist)

Xavier: I don't think so. Get in the car.

Cathryn: No! Let me go. JAMES HELP!!! (Xavier covers my mouth with his hand) MMMMMPH!!!

Xavier: Shut up, and get in the car! Now!!

Logan grabbs my legs, and they carry me, forcing my inside the car. I'm sitting in th middle seat, between Xavier and Logan.

Logan: Don't worry Cathryn, I'll go get James. I'll be right back.

Xavier: Okay. Hurry back.

Logan opens the door behind the passenger's seat to get out. He leaves us, shutting the door behind him. He walks to the front of the mall, and sees James standing there, waiting for me.

Logan: Hey James. Still job hunting?

James: (suprised to see Logan) Logan? What are you doing here? I mean, um. Not anymore, I'm about done for the day.

Logan: Oh ok. You should try applying to the job called Lying to Your Best Friend. I'm pretty sure that you will be good at that one.

James: (confused) What do you mean?

Logan: You remember Xavier, right?

James: I guess.

Logan: Evidently he's still the only true best friend I have.( grabbs James' by his left arm, pulling him) You're coming with me.

James: What the fuck dude?!? Let me go!

Logan: Shut up! If you want to be with you're precious girlfriend, I suggest that you come with me.

With that James didn't say a single word. He just kept following Logan, to Xavier's car.

[Back in Xavier's car]

Xavier had handcuffed my hands together in the front, duct tape across my mouth, and my seat bealt fascened. He was now in the driver's seat, ready to go, waiting for Logan to return. The car door behind the drivers seat opens. Logan is finally back with James.

James: (sees me bound) Logan please, just let her go. Take me, and then let her go.

Logan: I'm sorry, but I can't do that. Jeremy has requested to have you both. Now get in the car.(pushes James down to sit down next to me.)

James: Cat, Baby. (He trys to take off the duct tape, but Logan stopps him by grabbing his wrist)

Logan: Don't touch her. (He handcuffs James' wrist tight together behind his back,and buckles him in his seat.)

James: Fuck you!

Logan: (chuckles at James' comment) Maybe later.

Logan shuts the door on James' side, and walks around the car. He opens the door on my side, and sits next to me, behind the passengers seats. He shuts the door, and Xavier locks them.
Xavier starts the car, pulls out of the parking lot, and starts driving towards my house.

[KittyCat91]

Xavier starts the car, pulls out of the parking lot, and starts driving towards my house.
I was frightened at what Jeremy is going to do to me when I get back home. I really didn't want to go back. I also felt terrible putting James in this situation. I never meant for any of this to happen. I wanted to have a normal life again. Wishing that my mom was still here. If she was still here us, non of this would be happening. I can't help but not to think about the images of what Jeremy is going to do to both me and James. I really don't want James to get hurt because of me. I try to hold back the tears of horror that was running through my mind.

Logan: (sees a tear trickle down my cheek, and wipes it off with his humb) Awwww. What's wrong Cat?

Cathryn: Mmmph! (not wanting Logan to touch me, I scoot over closer to James and lay my head on his shoulder)

Logan: What was that? (grabs my hair, pulling me back towards him) Rude bitch! (grabbs hold of my neck putting my face close to his)

James: Don't fuckin call her that! And let her go!

Logan: (chuckles) You can't tell me what to do anymore. Now that I found you two, and taking her bak to Jeremy, I'm allowed to do whatever I want to do to her. I could kiss her. (kisses my cheek) Or...(starts taking the duct tape off of me) I could make her suck me.

James: Don't you fuckin dare!

Logan: Whatch me.

(After I heard those words, I start freaking out, trying to move away from him. But he just grabs on harder to my neck, choking me.)

James: (he starts to get very angy at Logan) You Fuckin BASTERD!!! Let her go! (he struggles, trying to see if he could break the handcuffs)

Logan: I should have put duct tape on your mouth. (takes the duct tape off my mouth, covers my mouth with his free hand, and then puts the duct tape over James' mouth) There. That should shut you up.

James: (starts trying to get out of his bonds, and makes the car shake a bit) Mmmph!!!!!

Xavier: Will you kids settle the fuck down? Break anything in this car, and I'll fuck your ass up. (James gives up and sits back in his seat)

Logan:Sorry. (talking to me) If you dare scream, or talk rude to me or Xavier, I'll shut you up with my dick. Got that? (I knodd my head yes and he lets me go.)

Cathryn: Can you please unlock my handcuffs? My wrist is hurting.

Logan: Sorry, but I'm not that stupid.

Cathryn: (mummbles to myself) Sure about that?

Logan: What did you just say?

Cathryn: (scared hoping he didn't hear me) N...n,,,nothing. I didn't say anything.

Logan: Whatever. Anyways. I don't have the keys. Jeremy has them.

Cathryn: Oh. Well I wasn't trying to out smart you or anything. My wrist is broken, so it really does hurt.

Logan: Oh. I'm sorry, but your gonna have to wait until you get home. Okay?

Cathryn: Okay.

We've been driving for some time now. As Logan was staring out at the window, and Xavier being too focused on the road. I lift my arms, and take the duct tape off James, and throw it down on the floor board. James didn't speak a word, for he didn't want to get himself or me into anymore trouble than we already were in.I lay my head down on his shoulder, and he lays his head ontop of mine.

[KittyCat91]

Hey Readers! Hope you enjoy reading my last two parts of Chapter 16. I'm currently working on Chapter 17, and hope to post it up soon. As I said before. This story will NEVER die, because I PROMISE to finish it.

Love:
~Cat~ :)

[I need punishing]

great update, I hope he punishes her good >.<

[zsa1990]

omg best thing I have ever read, thank you for the entertaining story. can't get enough of it haha.

[fullofsecrets]

More more!!! Please!!!

[lucy x]

please update im dieing for more info :p
:clap::clap:i love this so fucking much

[KittyCat91]

Several minutes have gone by now, and we are finally driving into our neighborhood complex.

Logan: (takes out his cell phone and calls Jeremy) Hey Jeremy. We just drove into the neighbor hood, and almost there, Alright. See ya. (hangs up the phone and puts it back in his pocket)

Xavier now pulls in my drive way and parks his car. My stomach is tossing and turning as I can't help but to think about what is going to happen. I'm really nervous and frightned at what Jeremy is going to. I really hope that Zacarie will show up soon. Xavier the first one getting out, opens the left door, unbuckles James, pulls him out of the car, and shuts the door back. Logan then unbuckles me, and gets out of the car. Not wanting to go inside I grab onto the arm-rest of the passengers seat. Logan trys to pull my arm to make me get out, but I don't move,

Logan: Cathryn! Get your ass out of this car. Now!

Cathryn: No! I don't want to go home. I would rather live in here for the rest of my life.

Logan: If you don't get out, then I'll go get Jeremy and Kaiden to drag you out.

Cathryn: No! Please don't make me.

Logan: Fine. (logan grabs my waist with one hand, and starts tickling me with the other)

Cathryn: (can't help but to laugh, from Logan tickling me) No! Logan, stop.

Because tickling is my weakness, I wasn't able to hang on to the arm-rest anymore. Logan lifts me carrying me out of the car. I was kicking in panick, not wanting to go in.

Logan: (I accidently kick his knee) Ow! Shit! (hesitating in pain he accidently dropps me)

Cathryn: (I fall flat on my butt onto the concrete, and feel burning on my butt cheeks) Ow! You dropped me, moron!

Logan: (mocking me) Maybe because you kicked my knee, brat.

James: (still waiting for us on the other side of the car, he rushes over to me) Cat! Baby, are you okay?

Cathryn: I think so. My butt broke my fall.

Xavier: (comes over to help me get up onto my feet) Logan you okay?

Logan: Yeah. I think she just made me have my most powerful reflex ever.

Cathryn: (thinkig that's a good thing) You're welcome? (Logan gives me an evil look) What? I thought reflexes were a good thing.

Logan: Not when you about blow my knee cap off.

Cathryn: Oh boo hoo, you big baby. I didn't kick you that hard.

Logan: (mummbles to himself) Stupid ninja bitch. (walks infront of me, grabs the chains of my handcuffs) Come on! (he practically drags me, forcing me to keep up with him)

We're now a tmy front door. Logan rings the door bell, and Jeremy answers it.

Jeremy: (sees me behinde Logan) Ah. Welcome back home, little sis. (I ignore him) Take them into the living room.

Cathryn: (Logan stars dragging me by the handcuffs again) Ow! Can you stop pulling, you hurting my wrist. (we're now in the inside my house,walking towards the living room. Jeremy closes the door behinfe us)

Logan: Shut up, and get in the house.

Cathryn: We are already in the house, genius.

Logan: (sees Jeremy walk by us) You should clean your little sister's mouth out with soap. Need to wash all the sarcasem out!

Jeremy: Good idea. If she continues, then I will.

Cathryn: Whatever.

Jeremy: You really should watch you mouth. You're already in a whole lot of trouble. Now get your ass in the living room.

Jeremy grabs my hair, pulling me behined him. He lets me go as we enter the living room. James is already sitting down in the couch next to Kaiden. Xavier is sitting in the recliner chair, and Logan goes sits on the very end of the couch next to Jordan.

Kaiden: Well, look who's back. (i ignore him)

Jeremy: Sit!

Cathryn: I don't know if I should.

Kaiden: Why's that?

Cathryn: I think I might be bleeding.

Kaiden: Then go put a tampon on!

Cathryn: It's not that. (I look down embarrassed.) I think my butt might be bleeding.

Jeremy: Bend over. Now. (I do as he says, and he lifts my skirt up.) You are bleeding a bit. but not too bad. What happened?

Cathryn: (points to Logan) Einstein over there dropped me.

(Kaiden and Jeremy are trying not to laugh)

Jordan: Dude, you dropped her?

Logan: She made me. (being sarcastic) Thinking scientificly, ever heard of gravity? Because you kicked my knee, gravity force is what made me drop you.

Cathryn: Wow. Shocking. Didn't know your brain could comprehened that much knowledge.

Jeremy: We will fix that later. I'll go get a towel for you to sit on.

Cathryn: Okay.

(Jeremy leaves the living room, going to his bathroom to get a towel. He's now back in the living room with a light blue towel. He keeps it folded and sits it next to Kaiden and Jordan.)

Jeremy: Sit there.

Cathryn: (I go sit by Kaiden and Jordan.) Ow. (I try to avoid the stinging pain)

Kaiden: (notices my new clothes) Cute outfit, where did ya get it?

Cathryn: James bought it for me at Hot Topic.
(Kaiden puts his hand up my skirt,snd starts feeling around. I scoot over closer to Jordan, so he wouldn't be able to reach me.)

Kaiden: (chuckles at my reaction) Cute.

Cathryn: Jeremy, can you please unhandcuff me now?

Jeremy: I don't know. Promise that you will be good?

Cathryn: Yes. I promise I wont try to run anymore.

Jeremy: Alright. You better keep your promise.(takes the key out of his pants pocket, and unlocks them, taking off my hancuffs. Sees the bandage wrapped around my knee) How did you hurt your knee?

Cathryn: I... (considering Justin did apologize to me, and it was partly an aaccident me falling over, I decide to take cover for Justin) It was just an accident. I tripped down the stairs at the mall. (part of it was true, so technically I wasn't lying) It's just a little carpet burn. No big deal.

Jeremy: Oh okay.(puts the key back in his pocket)

Cathryn: What about James?

Jeremy: (walks over infront of James) I don't know. What about James, Cat?

Cathryn: Aren't you going to let him go too?

Jeremy: Oh. You mean unhandcuff him. Nah, not just yet. (starts to walk off back into his room)

James: That's it!!! Listen here you fag! You better fuckin unlock my handcuffs, and leave Cathryn alone!!!! Fuckin Bastard... Ass-hole!!!!!!!!!

We all stare at James, waiting for Jeremy's respons. He turns back around, walking towards James. I was a bit suprised that James yelled, cussing out my brother. I can definitely tell that James is really pissed off at Jeremy, for if he wasn't then he wouldn't have yelled at Jeremy liked that. The only times I have ever witnessed James yelling and cussing someone out like that, was when he got pissed off at his brother Seth, and at Justin and Logan (happend at school during our freshmen year). This was also the first time he actually cussed at my brother. I was kind of a bit frightned at what Jeremy was about to do to James. I couldn't stand to watch him get hurt because of me.

[fullofsecrets]

Omg omg continue continue!!!!!!

[I need punishing]

Bravo!! I neeeeeed more!

[dare me firosa]

please continue this story is getting exiting

[dare me firosa]

please continue cant wait for more

[shogan977]

love the story cant wait for the next!!!

[KittyCat91]

Jeremy: (is now standing infront of James, cloes to his face) What the hell did you just call me?

(guessing that James has just snapped back into reality, he was also shocked at what he just said. He froze, trying not to say a word)

Logan: (answers for James) He called you a fag. Then a fuckin bastar ass-hole.

James: (talking to Logan) Dude, shut up..

Jordan: Well, look at the time. I got a go. I have a schedual thing, that I have to go to. Might be back later. See ya. (guessing that this was gettibg too awkward for Jordan, he got up, and left, going back to his house)

Cathryn: (trying to change the subject) Jeremy...

Jeremy: (interrupts me) Shut up!

James: Don't yell at her! (Jeremy slapps him acrross his face. He moves his face away buried in the corner of the couch) Ahhh, Fuck! (Jeremy pulls James hair, making him meet his face)

Cathryn: Jeremy,no (I try to run over to make Jeremy let go of James, but Kaiden grabs me forcing me to sit back down) Jeremy, please don't hurt him. I love him. Please...

Jeremy: I told you to shut up! (talking to James) You better listen. You never, fuckin tell me what to do. One, I'm older than you. So you should respect me! And two, she is my baby sister.It's my responsibility to look after her, so I'm allowed to do whatever I want to her.

James: But you can't treat her this way.

Jeremy: Like I said, I'm her big brother, and I'm in charge of her. So I can treat her however I think she should be treated.

James: I swear, I could kick your ass.

Jeremy: (chuckles at James' comment) If I were you, I wouldn't. It's only going to put you in more deep shit if you do. You took my little sister's virginity, and I'm going to be punishing you hard for that.

James: You can't punish me, I'm not your brother.

Jeremy: No. But you are now my slave.

James: What the hell?

Jeremy: You fucked my little sister. So I'm gonna fuck you!

Cathryn: (my eyes grew wide at what Jeremy just told James.) NO! ( I had to try and stop him, I didn't care what the consiquences were) Jeremy, it wasn't James' idea. It was mine. I told him that I was ready. Please, punish me. Not James. (Jeremy lets go of James, and starts to walk towards me)

James: Cat! No, Jeremy! Please don't punish her. She's just trying to take cover for me.

Jeremy: Cathryn, are you telling the truth?

Cathryn: Yes. I promise, I'm telling the truth. It was my idea, not James.

Jeremy: Well baby sis, I'm vey dissapointed in you.

Cathryn: I know, I'm sorry.

Jeremy: You will be getting a real extream punishment, because you have broken so many rules today. I really hate punishing you, but I have too in order for you to learn right from wrong.

Cathryn: (wanting to just get this done and over with) Ok, so whats my punishment?

Jeremy: Well for starters you will be grounded for 6 months.

Cathryn: 6 months? But Jeremy...

Jeremy: (interrupts me) Want to make is 10?

Cathryn: No.

Jeremy: Alright. Then you better accept the punishments I give you without complaining.

Cathryn: Okay.

Jeremy: Xavier will be staying to help me punish you. He gave me a lot of great ideas. But don't worry, that wont happen until later on today.

Cathryn: So does this mean that you will let James go now?

Jeremy: Nope, not yet. (walks over to James, and stands infront of him) James, truth or dare?

James: Truth.

Jeremy: Did you at least use a condom when you fucked my sister?

James: N...no.

Jeremy: Why not, don't know how to use one? Maybe Kaiden and I need to teach you how to.

James: She's on the pill, I thought I didn't have too.

Jeremy: Well you thought wrong. 50% of girls can still get pregnate, even when there on the pill.

Cathryn: (I'm sick and tired of Jeremy treating me like a baby, as if i'm not suppose to have a love life) Why do even care what James and I do? We've been going out for a year and 3 months now, and I love him. I'm 17 Jeremy, I'm not a baby anymore. I'm growing up.

Jeremy: Because I don't want to see you suffer going through hell at a young age.

Cathryn: (mummbles) I think I've already been going through hell.

Jeremy: What did you just say?

Cathryn: Nothing, nevermind. You never care about what I say anyways. So what matters?

Jeremy: (ignores my comment) Logan, Xavier. Since you two found Cathryn and James, you can do what ever you want to them for a whole day.

James and Cathryn: (at the same time) WHAT?!?!

Logan: Cool. I'll be back tomorrow to pick them up. I''m going home. See ya. (Logan leaves going back to his house.)

Cathryn: Jeremy, please. You can't leave us alone with Logan.

Jeremy: Don't worry. Jordan is going to be there to make sure he doesn't go too far.

Cathryn: Oh okay.

Jeremy: Now it's time for your punishments. Xavier, you can take Cathryn to my room and get her ready, while I stay hear to discuss the rules with James.

Xavier: Okay.

(Kaiden lets me go, and Xavier grabs my right arm. He pulls me infront of him, pushing me into the hall way. I now despite Xaviar for tricking me into helping him. I would rather have Jeremy or Kaiden punish me than him. For I don't even know him, and don't feel comfortable with this.)

Cathryn: (getting aggravated of him pushing me) Can you please let me go? I can walk on my own without you shoving me! (he lets me go, and we continue walking to Jeremy's room.)

(we're now in Jeremy's room, and I sit on the edge of his bed)

[fullofsecrets]

Omg Im in love keep going please!!!

[I need punishing]

yeeees! its cooooming!

[xXScarlettezXx]

this story is soooooo awesome...i feel like im cathyrn and its all happening to mee...its so real ....like im watching a movie...you are a very good story teller...:p

[lucy x]

please continue i love it :clap:

[WedgieMonkey]

Wow amazing story I wish my story was great like yours bravo :clap:

[lola12363]

i love it i started reading at 5 pm till 1 am and i had school the next day im hooked please keep writing.:o

[KittyCat91]

Hey readers!

I'm terribly sorry form the late update. I'm still in the process of writing the next part to Charter 17.
Again, I've been busy with college. Swamped with home work every day. I've recently have been sick, so I haven''t been able to get on because I have to bee in bed right after class (still have to attened my classes even when I'm sick).
I'm hoping to have the next update posted by the weekend. If not this weekend, then I promise to have it posted by sometime next week for sure.

Thank you so much for reading my story, & I'm glad you ya'll are enjoying it.

Love:
~Cat~

[SrattNights11]

we dont rush yourself. and also get better! :)

[em52388]

we dont rush yourself. and also get better! :)

I agree your health is far more important than your story. I hope you are feeling better.

[Nakedmaster911]

Get better Kitty!;)

[lola12363]

love your story:p

[lola12363]

please continue
i love it

[em52388]

Hope you're feeling better and your classes are going well. I also hope this story is forming nicely in your mind and on the page. Keep us posted when you can.