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06-19-2010, 04:02 PM
First off, hello. This is one of my first stories, so I don't know if it will be good. So I need your help with feedback, suggestions, ext. The two characters in it are Danny and Marrissa. They are both about 16. And the main character is Danny. Oh, one more thing, they are on summer break. So, that's taken care of.. let the story begin!
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Chapter I
Ugh. Another Friday night of nothing. Just being bored. I'd been on the internet for about an hour, and was about to close the browser when I received an IM Message from Marrissa. She was one of my best friends, and I will admit that I like her, but making one thing clear: I am not dating her.
Marrissa -From: xxmarrissaxx - hey danny what's up?
Dylan - dylanator16 - hey. nothing, i'm bored out of my mind..
From: xxmarrissaxx - that's lame. hey i have an idea!
dylanator16 - what?
From: xxmarrissaxx - you could come to my house and we could play a little truth or dare! since it's summer break and our parents are on a vacation!
dylanator16 - sure! i'll be right over!
Me and Marrissa have played truth or dare quite a few times, and by that I mean a lot, so it isn't that new, but still fun! We have seen eachother naked and did things like that before. It was only 7:00 PM, (19:00) and it was already getting dark! I'd better hurry, I thought. She lived only a couple blocks away, so I decided I'd just ride my bike over. A couple minutes later I was at her house.
Right when I got to her house, she opened the door up and said "Come on, hurry," in a not strict tone but anxious. She had a really nice house. Inside, the lights were dimmed and a couple of candles were lit. There was some music playing, too. She even had a small indoor pool. "Have some snacks or something," said Marrissa.
"Nah, no thanks, I'm good," said Danny. At first, for about 15 minutes, we just talked about normal stuff. "So, is anyone else gonna be here? asked Danny about 20 minutes later.
Marrissa smiled at me with a naughty smile. "Nope. Just me and you. So, Danny, here's the one million dollar question for you.. truth or dare?"
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Okay well that's all for Chapter one. Feedback, suggestions, or questions would be appreciated. You can either post it, or send me a PM with suggestions. So, is it good, and should I continue? Oh, and if you were wondering, the bet part will be later, maybe in the next chapter.
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Chapter I
Ugh. Another Friday night of nothing. Just being bored. I'd been on the internet for about an hour, and was about to close the browser when I received an IM Message from Marrissa. She was one of my best friends, and I will admit that I like her, but making one thing clear: I am not dating her.
Marrissa -From: xxmarrissaxx - hey danny what's up?
Dylan - dylanator16 - hey. nothing, i'm bored out of my mind..
From: xxmarrissaxx - that's lame. hey i have an idea!
dylanator16 - what?
From: xxmarrissaxx - you could come to my house and we could play a little truth or dare! since it's summer break and our parents are on a vacation!
dylanator16 - sure! i'll be right over!
Me and Marrissa have played truth or dare quite a few times, and by that I mean a lot, so it isn't that new, but still fun! We have seen eachother naked and did things like that before. It was only 7:00 PM, (19:00) and it was already getting dark! I'd better hurry, I thought. She lived only a couple blocks away, so I decided I'd just ride my bike over. A couple minutes later I was at her house.
Right when I got to her house, she opened the door up and said "Come on, hurry," in a not strict tone but anxious. She had a really nice house. Inside, the lights were dimmed and a couple of candles were lit. There was some music playing, too. She even had a small indoor pool. "Have some snacks or something," said Marrissa.
"Nah, no thanks, I'm good," said Danny. At first, for about 15 minutes, we just talked about normal stuff. "So, is anyone else gonna be here? asked Danny about 20 minutes later.
Marrissa smiled at me with a naughty smile. "Nope. Just me and you. So, Danny, here's the one million dollar question for you.. truth or dare?"
__________________________________________________ _______________
Okay well that's all for Chapter one. Feedback, suggestions, or questions would be appreciated. You can either post it, or send me a PM with suggestions. So, is it good, and should I continue? Oh, and if you were wondering, the bet part will be later, maybe in the next chapter.