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pothuthic
06-18-2010, 03:06 PM
Characters from my old story but on this one two:
Ollie.
Kieran.
Bobby.
Reece.

Kieran decided to host a competition "alternative big brother" and invited
Ollie p, bobby and reece to take part, he asked his brother shaun to voice over as "big brother"

They got into the house which had 3 beds and an office as the diary room,
As there was only 3 beds two people had to share, after a major decision Kieran said he would sleep on the floor
"Housemates this is BIG BROTHER Would Kieran come to the diary room"

To be continued

Slugger
06-19-2010, 10:48 AM
This could actually be a really cool story.

pothuthic
06-19-2010, 03:43 PM
Previously:
They got into the house which had 3 beds and an office as the diary room,
As there was only 3 beds two people had to share, after a major decision Kieran said he would sleep on the floor
"Housemates this is BIG BROTHER Would Kieran come to the diary room"

CHAPTER 1
"Yes Big Brother" kieran said
"Kieran you are not allowed to sleep on the floor, you must sleep with someone else"
"Ok I pick Reece."
"No Kieran I will Pick Ollie for you!"
"Do I have to."
"Yes you have been a very Naughty Boy Kieran Very Naughty."

They got a couple of nights sleeps

They were really Bonding,

Ollie And Kierans relationship was growing further.

Well they were all Getting on recreating some of Ollies Favourite Stories;
"Sleepover with the suspected" "Sisters Sleepover the sequel" and "an amazing weekend for 4 boys"

"Hello House This Is Davina, You will be joined by three NEW housemates, if two of you volunteer to do the opening task for two of the three we will give you 2 new beds."

Kieran And Ollie agreed to do it.

"Please welcome your new contestants Cody Ollie M and Luke!"

TO BE CONTINUED

nuditydudity
06-20-2010, 09:59 PM
It'll be interesting to see where this goes...still waiting for where the truth or dare comes in, but it's different enough to catch my interest and hold it.

Keep writing. This sounds like it could be really great.

Slugger
07-02-2010, 08:51 PM
Are you going to write more?

redneckman
07-05-2010, 01:23 PM
this could be a really good story but you need to write more at a time :-/