Private Tutoring

[openinvizion]

Hey guys.

So, I've been thinking.. Many stories are just one, or a collection of parts from different angles, but here I am presenting a twist

The Series of stories is:

Private Tutoring

The Series consits of 10 "episodes"
These are:
Freedom [Part 1]
New Kid [Part 1]
Risk
Freedom [Part 2]
Lockdown [Part 1]
Freedom [Part 3]
New Kid [Part 2]
Lockdown [Part 2]
Adventure
Hero

The episodes with more than one part may overlap other episodes, but there will be a two line recap at the start of each episode sequal.

There will be 6 main characters, fixed to the story line of nearly all episodes.

The characters are:
Karl, male, 17, omnisexual
Sean, male, 16, heterosexual
Laura, female, 17, bisexual
Zöe, female, 19, lesbian(married to Sharon)
Sharon, female, 18, lesbian(married to Zöe)
Tomas, male, 18, homosexual


The following basically shows what characters are in what episodes

In Freedom, parts 1, 2 and 3 are:
- Karl
- Sean
- Laura
- Zöe
- Sharon

In New Kid, parts 1 and 2 are:
- Karl
- Sean
- Laura
- Tomas

In Risk are:
- Karl
- Sean

In Lockdown, parts 1 and 2 are:
- Karl
- Sean
- Laura

In Adventure are:
- Karl
- Sean
- Tomas

In Hero are:
- Karl
- Sean
- Laura
- Zöe
- Sharon
- Tomas

Please feel free to comment on what you think

[momo]

Sounds good so far (:

[~~Kayla~~]

I would like to see where this is going! Please post more!

[Blue Water]

I look forword to episode 1 :)

[openinvizion]

Episode 1 will be up later today

Thanks for all the positive feedback

[openinvizion]

I would like to point out, that may the parts be small, the overall parts add up to a lengthy story.

As an added extra, when the series has finished, I will scan and post "master copies" of the written stories, so you all can see how things have changed from first writing, to final posting.

Without further ado:

Private Tutoring
Freedom: Part One

"Ok Sean, truth or dare?" Karl asked the handsome youth opposite.
"Truth" he casually replied
"Damn, why do you always pick truth when I ask?" Karl questioned, "But before you think that was the truth.. Are you seriously a virgin still?"
Sean looked into his lap, his cheeks turning a shade of pink
"Yea" he mumbled, loud enough for the others to hear.
Sean looked back up.
"Laura" he said, startling the others, "Truth or dare"
"Hmm... Dare me big boy" she said with a cheeky wink
"Ok, er.. I dare you to.. strip to you underware until the end of the game
Laura giggled, and answered by removing her top, and to the boys' suprise, she wasn't wearing a bra, and her perfectly round c-cup breasts bounced joyfully.
"Oh my... ungh!" Sean said, gaping at Laura's natural beauty
"Seany, you gonna close that mouth, or are you gonna dribble all over the new carpet?"
Sean slowly closed his mouth as Laura removed her tight jeans, revealing a near see through thong, giving a good view of her pussy, but not a hair in sight. Both Sean and Karl's faces displayed confusion.
"I shave, weekly" Laura said, asking the silent questions
The game continued for a couple of hours before Sean finally plucked uo the courage to pick dare, but at Karl's hands.
"So, your dare.." Karl slowly said, building tension, "I dare" Karl paused every couple of words as Sean's facial emotion changed, "you to" anxiety "eat" fear and bewilderment "my" shock and horror "dear friend Laura out"
Sean let out a loud sigh of relief, as Laura edged her way towards him. He moved onto his back, beneath the beatiful girl, and began moving his tongue in and out.
"Oooh" Laura moaned, with pure ecstasy, "Jesus boy, your even better than Zöe!"


TO BE CONTINUED IN FREEDOM: PART 2...

So, what did you guys think?

[JIMBUK2]

A little short. But I do like the writing style. As long as the episodes are a bit longer per post and you keep writing the way you are, they are going to be fantastic.

[openinvizion]

New Kid Part One will be up either today or tomorrow, and a lot longer. The original view of Freedom Part One was an A4 Sheet of handwritten text (see attachment)

As said above, New Kid Part One is, and will be, alot longer

[Roll,ova,and,beg]

This sounds interesting and I know they are short but maybe add a bit more to them

[openinvizion]

After a long wait, part 3 will be up tonight!!