The Velvet Web

[Slenderman - Doctor]

I've yet to write and complete a full getDare story, so here's another attempt. With any luck, this will be seen right through to the end. It isn't going to be the best story on getDare so don't expect it to be fantastic. It's just for a bit of fun and entertainment.

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HIM & HER
Gabriella Milligan, 17

Dazzling shoulder-length brown hair, sparkling blue eyes, the perfect figure, perky breasts and an ass every guy would accidentally trip over to glimpse. She has a name. Gabriella Milligan. But call her Gaby. I do. It’s easier, and she prefers it. Seventeen years of age and just finishing her first year of college, single and intelligent. Proof that it is actually possible to be good-looking and fit. She had a large group of friends and loved her life. However, she wasn’t afraid of shying away for her own private time. (Not in a rude way!) Gaby was just Gaby and that was that.

Tom Sparks, 17

Tom was Tom and that was that. But a bit more about that. Tom Sparks was also seventeen and attended the same college as Gaby. However, he hadn’t spoken to Gaby once since the college year began. They were just in two different groups of friends and had no need to chat. And there was no time for passing comments as the two had lessons at different sides of the building. Tom was your typical teenager. Except for the fact he didn’t like football and hated drinking. So, really, he wasn’t a typical teenager. But, really, he was. Yeah. I’ll leave you, dear reader, to do whatever you want with that description.

MONDAY MORNING
College was over. School was out. Holidays began. Friday, 25th June. But Gaby worked weekends.

College was over. School was out. Holidays began. Monday, 28th June. 7am. Gaby woke up. Her alarm went off and Lady Gaga blared out of the speaker. Awful music, in my opinion, but she liked it. Just like every other single girl in college liked it. It was trendy and fashionable. Or, as I like to call it, a bandwagon. But I’ll stop rambling and get back on track. Half-way through track two, she rolled over to the edge of her comfortable double bed and failed to stop. She rolled out of bed and hit the floor. Facing the ceiling, eyes wide open, she giggled to herself. Not because she’d just hit her head on the floor, no. That would be weird. She was smiling because she’d had a ... well, a dream she liked. I shall say no more. Okay, fine. It involved a guy. (And because this is a story, you can probably guess which guy it was.)

(Ignore the bit in brackets. That’s a red herring. Her dream was actually about the guy from Twilight. You know the one. The other bandwagon.)

Clambering to her feet, she stretched and pulled the pink knickers from between her cheeks. (Not her face cheeks – why would she wear knickers on her head?) Raring to go for her first day off, she headed to the bathroom for a refreshing shower. Now, I’d go into detail about this beautiful girl showering her naked body but, for health and safety reasons, I can’t. I mean, if I’d walked into her bathroom to write down the happenings, I might’ve been distracted and slipped on the floor. That, and she probably would’ve hit me several times before screaming and phoning the police.

Back in her bedroom some twenty minutes later, she dropped her fluffy white towel and examined herself by the mirror. Everything was in perfect working order and condition (God, I make her sound like some sort of robot), so she pressed on to the wardrobe beside her. The clothes for this sunny Monday consisted of a tight red thong, white socks, a red bra, white t-shirt and a knee-length skirt. She headed back to the mirror and reached out to open her window’s blinds. Perfect. Her bra was just about visible through her t-shirt. She wasn’t a slut or anything – she just liked teasing guys. No harm in that.

Her plan for the day was to chill out, sunbathe and go for a walk, maybe. Nothing much. She just decided she deserved a day of doing fuck-all. Good on her. She was right. She did deserve it.

Monday, 28th June. 7am. Tom’s mobile phone alarm buzzed on his bedside table. He grunted and smacked it on to the floor with his hand and turned over.

Monday, 28th June. 8:30am. Tom’s mobile rang and blurted the Star Wars theme tune at maximum volume. It was his mother, ringing from work purposefully to wake him up. And, because his phone was out of his arm’s reaching-capability range, he slumped out of his cosy quilt and cut her off.

He might’ve been lazy but he was good. He wouldn’t go back to bed and his mum knew that, so she refrained from calling again. His penis brushing his legs, his hair scruffed up to high heaven, his eyes groggily half-open, he shuffled himself to the bathroom for a shower. Being a guy, you’d expect him to beat the girl’s time. But it wasn’t to be. Gaby’s shower lasted twenty minutes. Tom’s lasted thirty. Mind you, Tom decided to wake himself up with an extra addition to his shower routine. But I think that’s best left to your imagination.

Half past nine came around and he was dressed, sorted for the day ahead. He, too, had very few plans. In fact, he didn’t have any plans. He was a last-minute kinda guy who just did whatever happened to come up. The sun belting through his window, he made the conscious decision to take his laptop out into his back garden. He wasn’t a geek or a computer freak, but it was his main source of entertainment. And there was one website, in particular, he wanted to log on to. No, not Facebook.

getDare.

[BettyBoop]

I always love how you write, brilliantly and always with added humour, do carry on Sonic.
I quite like it and I'll be reading, though I don't usually read stories. :D

[Slenderman - Doctor]

I always love how you write, brilliantly and always with added humour, do carry on Sonic.
I quite like it :D

Thanks for a great first comment, Bella!

I felt like the narrator butted in too much here so there's less of him later (but he still interrupts every now and again so don't worry if you're a fan of him xD).

I've got more on the way. The way this is gunna work is I'll probably write a new "chapter" every 2-3 days and then wait 2-3 days before posting, allowing me time to keep writing in advance so I'm able to satisfy your needs for a story.

:)

[Bubblegum]

hehehe... That was the best thing I have ever read. I want you to write a book. That would be so cool, its like someone is there telling you a story that would be great anyway. I love the narrator, is s/he like you?

[Slenderman - Doctor]

hehehe... That was the best thing I have ever read. I want you to write a book. That would be so cool, its like someone is there telling you a story that would be great anyway. I love the narrator, is s/he like you?

Thanks for the kind words ^_^

I figured most narrators just do their job and I wanted to add a different edge to my story. So I've made my narrator almost one of the characters. It also works on a metafictional level. Note where he talks about being able to walk into Gaby's bathroom. Depending on how you read and understand the narrator, different people will get different enjoyment out of the story.

In a way, yeah, the narrator is me because I plan to make him subtly sarcastic later on. I like to mock everything and so I'll probably, at some point, mock this very story. Somehow. We'll see how it goes :)

[Star Shadows]

I love it, It made me giggle lots. :)
and the narrator rocks

[Slenderman - Doctor]

I love it, It made me giggle lots. :)
and the narrator rocks

Glad it made you giggle :D

[Cuffed]

I love the start of this story, almost as much as I love you :p
Continue, if you do not continue I'm pretty sure everyone who comments on this thread will have punishments for you ;)
Wait.. is that a good thing? ERM, no punishing if you don't continue! x

No really... its pro.

[Slenderman - Doctor]

I love the start of this story, almost as much as I love you :p
Continue, if you do not continue I'm pretty sure everyone who comments on this thread will have punishments for you ;)
Wait.. is that a good thing? ERM, no punishing if you don't continue! x

No really... its pro.

Thankyou. Don't worry. I'll post more within the next few days :)

[thedaring1]

Im going to be very honest here so brace yourself.

Ive always hated it when writers describe whats happening in brackets. Which leads to my question, why did I like your story so much!?
I loved your humor you use, its rare I laugh at stories, but I laughed at yours.
So many people make grammer mistakes on here like teh instead of the, but you, made me waste my time looking for grammer errors because there arent any!

Before today, I wouldve easily said I have never read a perfect story on here in my 2 years. But, dammit, because of you, soon I wont be able to say that.

So, all I can say is, Thanks for writing this story.

[Slenderman - Doctor]

Im going to be very honest here so brace yourself.

Ive always hated it when writers describe whats happening in brackets. Which leads to my question, why did I like your story so much!?
I loved your humor you use, its rare I laugh at stories, but I laughed at yours.
So many people make grammer mistakes on here like teh instead of the, but you, made me waste my time looking for grammer errors because there arent any!

Before today, I wouldve easily said I have never read a perfect story on here in my 2 years. But, dammit, because of you, soon I wont be able to say that.

So, all I can say is, Thanks for writing this story.

Brackets is my style. I love it. I love adding in extra details just for the lulz. Part of my narrative voice ^_^

Really happy now I've read your comment too. I'm so glad you (and others) are enjoying this and I hope you continue to :)

[Slenderman - Doctor]

WHEN GIRLS GOSSIP
Gaby wasn’t a gossip, but her friend Kate was. And, conveniently for this narrative, she was on Facebook at the same time as Gaby on this Monday morning. Also conveniently for this narrative, she was a member of getDare just like Tom. In fact, she’d been on the site a lot longer than Tom had been, he having only joined up two months ago. For the last month, Kate had been talking to Tom through the getDare forum and had started daring him. Kate, too, was 17 but attended a different college to Gaby and Tom. Tom suspected nothing. He knew nothing of Kate, only having access to her age and username, “MistressK”.

Kate wasn’t a mistress, by the way. She just liked that title and went with it and, besides, it automatically gave her some power over guys which was fun.

Tom logged on and viewed his thread.

“17/M seeking dares to cure boredom” – four stars, two replies. One was Kate and the other was a freakshow, “WedgiePoop”. He ignored that one. I’m not even gunna say what his dare was. Ugh. Anyway. Kate’s dare was thus:

I dare you to go for a walk in a nearby woodland. Five minutes in, stop and strip completely naked. Leave your clothes in a white carrier bag and walk onwards for five minutes. Then, head back and re-dress before heading home for more dares.

Simple.

However, behind this simple dare was a trap. Kate had planned this. She knew today would be the day she’d get Gaby and Tom together. But not as boyfriend and girlfriend, oh no. A twinkle in her eye, Kate logged into Facebook at 8am. Tom was still in bed at this point, but Gaby was awake and sorted. The two began chatting. However, not knowing when Tom would be performing his dare, Kate took no time at all to start at the beginning and she began revealing her plan to Gaby. Gaby, having seen Tom a few times across the college refectory, knew he was alright-looking and laughed at her friend’s little revelation.

“But how do you know which woodland he’ll go to?”
“Come on Gabz, he’s lazy. He’ll go to the one by Green Grass Park coz it’s nearest!!”
“You’ve got this all worked out, haven’t you?”
“I have and dya know what i didnt think youd believe me but you havent questioned it yet..”
“Wasn’t going to.”
“So are ya gunna go down there, see if you can spot him?”
“If I do though, what next?”
“Gab, use your imagination. I have to go tho bcoz im at work in ten, text me what happens x”

And before Gaby could respond, Kate logged out.

Gaby just stared at her screen in awe. She didn’t know what to say, what to think, how to react. She glanced at the clock to her right. Half past eight. She hadn’t a clue, but Tom was headed down to Green Grass Park at half nine. She had an hour in which she’d decide what to do. If anything. It all sounded mad, but she trusted her best friend and she knew this was something Kate would be capable of. The idea did a few laps of her mind before settling down and reaching a decision. As the clock hit 8:43am, she slipped into her shoes and flew out of the door. She still had no plan and still half-wondered whether all this was real or a crazy story, but she headed out with the hopes of catching a half-decent guy getting naked.

[Slenderman - Doctor]

CALCULATING THE PLAN
9:15am. The sun had hidden itself behind the clouds, allowing for a gentle breeze to sweep the park’s playground. A smile on her face, her hair brushing her face as she ran past the swings, she focused her route to the wooded area of the park. It was rather secluded and covered in with the fully-bloomed trees and plants all around. She looked around in search of a suitable spying spot, a place in which she’d be able to hold a view of the complete woodland area.

But what to do? Merely watch and observe? Have a giggle? Take a photo? No. How about robbing his clothes? Thinking back, she worked out Kate’s intentions. The dare would involve Tom walking away from his clothes for a few minutes and this was her chance. Not having any idea why, she decided that was it. She was going to steal his clothes and head back to a small hiding place. Lodging herself between two bushes and lowering a tree branch above her head, she peered out and waited.

There was no knowledge of whether Tom would even turn up. For all she and Kate knew, he’d do this dare tomorrow and render this entire narrative build-up useless. Luckily, though, he appeared in the gateway to the park a few minutes later.

She took a moment to notice him but, once she fixed upon him, her eyes never diverted. He looked slightly suspicious, dubious, turning around every other second to check his privacy. This was his second outdoor dare but his first beyond the boundaries of his safe back garden. Once he was happy he was alone, he sat on a fallen tree branch and kicked his trainers off.

Gaby stared in amazement. The first day of her summer holiday and she was suddenly spying on a guy stripping off in the middle of a park. If she’d had a touch more room, there’s no doubt her hand would’ve gone for a wander downstairs somewhere. Instead, her hand merely reached inside her bra and pulled out her phone. Millions of thoughts swirled her mind and she just went where the moment took her.

The boy slid his jeans to the ground and released his ankles, rolling his pants up into a small ball. Next, his t-shirt rose from his chest and rested with his jeans. Tom was half-naked, his only protection being his boxers. Gaby kicked and a few leaves rustled. Suddenly, Tom froze and stared, wide-eyed, all around. Two or three extremely long minutes passed before Tom gave himself the all-clear and continued. He wasn’t one to chicken out of dares. Turning around so his backside was facing Gaby, he slowly edged his undies to his knees and then to his ankles. Gaby blushed. She was also shocked for a moment, asking herself whether she ought to be spying or not. But then, he didn’t suspect a thing so there was no harm done. However, her morals didn’t stop her from pressing the camera button on her phone and snapping a cheeky shot (pun intended).

Bending over further to grab his boxers, Gaby caught a glimpse of what she saw to be his balls. Without thinking, she happily licked her bottom lip. She also noticed her downstairs bathroom leaking slightly as she grew ever more excited. The plan was set, the boy was naked and the waiting had paid off. Watching and planning her moves carefully as Tom set off on his little walk deeper into the woodland, Gaby made her move and crept to the white bag a few metres in front of her. For a moment, she wondered whether she should do this or back out, but the devil within her took hold and she snatched the bag.

[Platypus]

i love the narration. keep up the good work.

[Anita Black]

I read your story. However I prefer not to comment. :)

[Slenderman - Doctor]

I read your story. However I prefer not to comment. :)

I love the irony. Thanks for reading though :)

i love the narration. keep up the good work.

Thankyou ^^

I'll probably post the next part on Thursday or Friday :)

[Star Shadows]

Yay this is awesome.

[Slenderman - Doctor]

Yay this is awesome.

*is glad the Star approves*

:)

[Slenderman - Doctor]

HONESTY PREVAILS, ADVENTURE BEGINS
Upon his return, Tom’s face changed with the wind from a daringly happy portrait to a shocked, horrified horror movie. Staring at the spot in which his clothes once lay, he started to panic as he frantically looked around, dashing to the edge of the woodland in the hope of catching the culprit. No such luck. His face started to glow red and his mind started to race (and won the 100m gold medal it was that fast).

Meanwhile, a cheeky devil in the nearby bush was smirking to herself, carefully watching this little lost soul dive around for anything to save him. Nothing. She had a nosy into the bag for a moment before realising her actions and the consequence. Tom was a nice guy. They’d never even spoken before. Yet here she was clutching his clothes in the middle of a park in broad daylight. Him being caught would be horrific and he’d never live the shame down. She suddenly felt cruel and decided to put him out of his misery.

She slowly stood up. If she’d had an arts and crafts bag, she’d have delicately created a little white flag to signal surrender. But, alas, she didn’t. The bag held in one hand, she took to her feet and faced Tom. For a brief moment, he failed to spot her. However, his eyes soon fixed upon this devious girl.

His response was that of some nervous laughter, a touch of anger and the odd tear rolling from his eye. I’d recount the spoken part of this story but it was muffled and full of swear words, so I better not. All you need to know is that Tom was pissed off, but more relieved at this happening. And, sure enough, Gaby felt much happier, calmer in fact. For a moment, she paused. She knew this was what Kate had probably planned and, so far, it’d gone quite well. So far so good.

“Gaby,” he stuttered, quickly whipping his boxers around his waist.

“Hey Tom,” she giggled.

This was their real first conversation of importance and so the atmosphere was quite awkward. Also, do remember they were in the middle of a park in daylight and one of them was stood in his undies. Not exactly the best first date. Well, it might be. Depends how you look at it really. The way Kate looked at it was, well, erected. I mean, erm, yeah. Sorry.

Tom glanced down and realised the display of excitement within his lower regions. Diverting his eyes back to Gaby’s, he swiftly moved a hand to cover his ever-growing ... man-bump.

“Nice –”

“Oi,” he interrupted, half-laughing.

“Look, this wasn’t my idea at all, Tom, I promise. My friend Kate set this up.”
She decided the truth was the best policy.

“Kate who?” Tom demanded.

“Well, put it this way. She said you’d understand better if I told you she was called Mistress K.”

Tom’s eyes widened and his face, once again, dropped.

“getDare?” Tom whispered, looking down for a second.

“That’s the one. This morning, I had no idea such a site existed. Believe me. Then Kate told me all about this dare and how could I resist a sneak peek? And anyway—”

“I’ll kill her!”

“I rather think it for the best if she remains alive and well, to be honest. But seriously. You’re stood there in your undies when you could’ve gotten dressed. Shock, or are you quite comfortable?”

She had a point.

Tom wasted no time in grabbing the clothes from the plastic bag and replacing them back on his body. Gaby released a small, innocent giggle as he bent down to slide the pants around his knees. Oh, how she was tempted to give him a cheeky spank. But she didn’t want to push it, so she stopped herself. A minute later, and Tom was dressed. Apart from the blushing face he held, you’d never think anything dirty had happened. It looked like any ordinary meeting of friends. And this gave Gaby an idea.

“Like doing things in secret, eh, Tom?”

“Honestly? Gives me a buzz,” he replied, casually ruffling his hair back into shape. “Why?”

For a second, Gabriella said nothing. Her eyes gazed into Tom’s and the silence was bliss. However, the next four words pivoted the story in a very new direction.

“Fancy coming to mine?”

[balderdash]

This story is BEAUTIFUL! :D I also love your narration style, adding in a outsiders perspective on the events of Gaby and Tom.

Just one thing I'd like to say - Don't stop writing! :D

[Platypus]

I read your story. However I prefer not to comment. :)

that doesnt make much sense. whats the point of commenting only about the fact that you dont like to comment?

[Slenderman - Doctor]

that doesnt make much sense. whats the point of commenting only about the fact that you dont like to comment?

Irony is beautiful.

This story is BEAUTIFUL! :D I also love your narration style, adding in a outsiders perspective on the events of Gaby and Tom.

Just one thing I'd like to say - Don't stop writing! :D

Thanks. Glad you're enjoying it!

[Slenderman - Doctor]

STAIRWAY TO HEAVEN
Twenty-four minutes and five seconds later (I counted), Tom’s left foot stepped over the threshold of Gaby’s house and through her front door. With her mum at work and her brother at his friends for a couple of days, she happily allowed him public entry and guided him to the kitchen. Gaby offered him a seat and a drink. As she poured two glasses of water, she read the note her mum had left her. A free house until 6pm. Handy. But what would she do until then? (Stopping the tap would’ve been a start as she over-filled the first cup.)

Tom remained silent, still a little stunned and unknowing of what exactly he should do. He knew one thing though; he wouldn’t be complaining.

“So,” started Gaby, breaking the silence.

“Nice house,” he said, awkwardly diverting his mouth to take a sip of the fresh cool water.

“Thanks. Best bit’s upstairs,” she giggled, realising what she’d just suggested moments after.

“I’m like that – always speaking before thinking,” he comforted her slightly.

She laughed.

“To tell you the truth,” Gaby began, “I don’t, like, have any plans. I thought I’d get to spy on you and then come home. Just a bit of fun. Dunno.”

“Well, seeing as we’re here now and what’s done is done, how about we both chill for a bit and I’ll introduce you to getDare a bit more?”

“Sounds like a plan,” she said, placing her cup on the side. “This way!”

Teasing as she did so, she slowly walked upstairs with a slightly excited Tom close behind. However, he kept his distance so as to catch a brief glimpse (I apologise if I overuse that pun, but it’s so hard not to use) of her unmentionables. Sure enough, the skirt waved a little and allowed his eyes to catch sight of the little red thong but, before he could process this image into a kinky thought, he was at the top of the stairs and back to eye-level with Gaby.

Turning to her left, she directed Tom into the pinkest room in the house. The dwelling place of an angel.

[Slenderman - Doctor]

EMBRACE AND ACCEPT
She threw herself on her bed and plugged her laptop power cable in, flicking the switch to turn it on. He stumbled in, gawping at the amount of cuddly teddies and pink items around the room. Over a good ten minutes or so as she flicked into her Internet connection, they started to bond more and they clicked almost instantly (like two correct jigsaw pieces, or like two incorrect jigsaw pieces after applying a good amount of glue).

They decided Gaby should sign up to getDare, so Tom helped as she did so. Her username, in the end, “MissGaby”. Cheeky. As she entered her username to confirm, she gave a slight knowing look to Tom who raised an eyebrow slightly. Immediately, she clicked into Tom’s profile.

“Four hundred and fifty posts?”

“I get bored.”

She giggled and sifted through them, eyeing up anything that might tickle her fancy. Truths, truths, game postings, website suggestions, truths, the SM forum. Ah, now. Interesting. Obviously, due to being under getDare’s age restriction, he couldn’t post in the SM forum. But he was perfectly allowed to post in the SM Lounge/Ideas section, and he had done. Several times. Tom grabbed for the laptop but Gaby flung it away and turned to face him.

“Nuh-uh!”

She giggled her cheeky giggle with a cheeky grin between her blushing cheeks.

Five minutes of dead silence. Then, as Tom looked around carefully studying Gabriella’s abode, the laptop lid in front of him began to close downward, Gaby’s face appearing above the rim. His eyes turned to fix upon her and her ever-enhancing grin.

“I see,” she began. “You’re a submissive, eh?”

“Well, erm,” he mumbled.

“No need to be shy. Just a question. And besides, I’m totally new to all this so I’m hardly able to, like, do anything.”

“Then, well, yeah. I’ve always sorta liked it and this site’s opened up the chance for me to be a ...”

“A slave,” she finished for him.

Tom nodded, his eyes narrowly avoiding hers.

“Tell me more,” she said, shuffling up to Tom and placing her arm around him. “Don’t be shy.”

He told her. The whole story. From the day he was dared to show his 13-year-old penis to a group of girls, right through til the present moment being sat upon Gaby’s bed. She embraced every word, understanding his desires and learning as she went along. She wasn’t stupid – she had an idea of what SM was and how it worked, but she wanted to know from Tom’s point of view specifically.

Prior to this conversation, Gabriella had no idea that the attractive guy across the refectory at college was into such kinky acts. Nobody else in college knew either, except her now. So, the obvious happened.
“How would you feel if I offered to explore SM with you?”

No faffing. She gave the question.

[Archon]

You have such a talent for writting like The Doctor, I can acually hear Matt Smith's voice in my head

[Slenderman - Doctor]

You have such a talent for writting like The Doctor, I can acually hear Matt Smith's voice in my head

I'm not trying to write like the Doctor but I'll definitely take that to be a compliment :) I think the narrator is a little similar in that he's a little wacky and always butting in though.

[SubliminallyYours]

Brilliant story, the pace and characterisation are perfect!

[Slenderman - Doctor]

Brilliant story, the pace and characterisation are perfect!

Thankyou. Glad you like it ^^