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pothuthic
04-08-2010, 07:37 PM
This is my first ever story so wish me luck!


This story is about 14 year old boys Kieran,Ollie and Bobby.

Now Kieran was popular black spiked hair tanned and all the girls adored him,
His parents were out for the weekend so he had to stay on his own, So he invited Ollie and bobby round for a sleepover.

Bobby wasn't very popular he also had black spiked up hair and was brownish,everyone had always thought he was gay even though he had relationships with lots of girls who were quite ugly.

Ollie was very similar. a loner and had very little friends even though he was straight everyone thought he was gay aswell.

Now Friday wizzed round so quickly and Ollie and Bobby turned up at 7 oclock prompt.

Ollie: Hello we are not to early are we
Kieran: Sure your not come on in.
Bobby: So what we doing this weekend?
Kieran: Well my mum and dad are going to be back monday lunchtime when we are at school, so we have all the time in the world.
Bobby: What Xbox Games have You got Kieran?
Kieran: Well I Have Fifa 10, PES and the usual.
Ollie: How about a game of Truth Or Dare.
Bobby: There are no girls here so that would make it gay wouldnt it?
Kieran: No We are only having fun
Bobby: Okay If you insist.

Now Ollie Has always had a bit of a crush on both of Kieran and Bobby, But they Don't know that! Yet...
Then They got started!

Kieran: Bobby Truth Or Dare
Bobby: Erm Truth
Kieran: If you had to pick out of me and ollie to passionatley kiss who would it be.
Bobby: Ollie He would make less fuss out of it!
Ollie: Thanks I suppose!
Bobby: Ollie Truth or dare.
Ollie: Lets get this party started now haha DARE ME BABY.
Bobby: Take off your shirt.
Ollie: What are you Gay or something
Bobby: No Its just we are having fun REMEMBER?!
Ollie slowly took off his designer shirt to reveal a toned body.
Ollie: Happy Now?
Bobby: Im sure we all are.
Ollie: Kieran Truth or dare?
Kieran: Dare I suppose.
Ollie: Let us tie you to your bed and do what ever we want to you for 30 minutes.
Kieran: Ok fair enough.
Kieran got tied up to his Bed and was blindfolded and Ollie and Bobby Begun Glory Hunting!

Plz comment and rate me I will post some more soon.

glue
04-09-2010, 01:27 AM
this is a good start, even though no one commented does not mean stop, its great keep going for it

:D

8/10

pothuthic
04-09-2010, 11:13 AM
Previously!:

Kieran: Dare I suppose.
Ollie: Let us tie you to your bed and do what ever we want to you for 30 minutes.
Kieran: OK fair enough.
Kieran got tied up to his Bed and was blindfolded and Ollie and Bobby Begun Glory Hunting!

Chapter two!:
Ollie: Now don't worry nothing that bads gonna happen to you no permanent damage.
Bobby: For every order you do wrong you get Punished and believe me it will not be nice!
Kieran: OK sirs!
Ollie: Turn around were not interested in doing anything to your ass yet!
Kieran: No I'm Too Embarrassed.
Bobby: Why you embarrassed, You look quite hot from here you have an ass to die for!
Kieran: Sorry Mate Im not gay Unlike you!
Ollie: Just turn around for god sake.
Kieran: Whatever
Kieran turned round and showed his fit body and his 3 inch flaccid penis.
Kieran: Does this satisfy you?
Ollie: Nope get an erection
It took Kieran 10 minutes to get an erection, by that moment huge tents had grown in bobby and ollies boxers.
Bobby Got a measuring tape and secured it to kierans Penis and started measuring his erected Dick
Ollie: 6 inches god thats soo cool!
Bobby: I would like to suck that
Ollie: Go on then
Kieran: Bobby stop sucking me off, Oh fair enough just carry on This feels good.
Bobby did it like a pro he must of done it before.
Kieran cummed into the air and it landed right on a picture of his girlfriend.
Ollie: Now kieran Pick up your phone and call alice NOW.
Kieran: What do I say
Bobby: You're Dumped sorry but it hasn't worked out
Kieran: Thats Just cruel
Ollie Pulled out scissors and moved them to kierans finely grown pubes.
Kieran: OK I will do it.
Kieran rung alice up and dumped her.
Ollie: Now turn round and Show us your ass.
Kieran turned round with his ass in Ollies face as Bobby pulled out a permanent marker and Wrote " I am a Poof" On Kierans Ass.
Kieran fumed and kicked Ollie.
Ollie then spanked Kierans ass with a sharp belt.
Kieran: Times up.
Ollie: You got lucky this time.
Kieran: Ollie Truth or dare?
Ollie : Dare,
Kieran: Give me a blow job, But first Bobby Pee on it please.
Ollie was shocked he was about to do something that would change his sexuality forever.

brandon
04-09-2010, 12:56 PM
Nice. Keep going.

pothuthic
04-09-2010, 03:18 PM
Just realised Bobbys already sucked off kieran lmao!
Change that to Ollie lmao!

Previously:
Kieran: Ollie Truth or dare?
Ollie : Dare,
Kieran: Give me a blow job, But first Ollie Pee on it please.
Ollie was shocked he was about to do something that would change his sexuality forever

Chapter two
Ollie stood still for a while until kieran shoved his cock down ollies mouth!
Kieran: Oh yeah this feels good lmao
Bobby: God you've got a great cock!
Kieran: Cheers my dare after this!
Kieran cummed in ollies mouth and made ollie swallow it!
Ollie: Yuck! kieran Truth or dare
Kieran: Dare
Ollie: Make out naked with one of us!
Kieran: Ok Ollie come on!
Ollie got up his plan was working!!


Sorry short chapter will write some more once i change laptops.
Bye xx

pothuthic
04-09-2010, 07:04 PM
Previously!:
Kieran: Dare
Ollie: Make out naked with one of us!
Kieran: Ok Ollie come on!
Ollie got up his plan was working!!



Chapter Four


Ollie and Kieran stripped naked and started to make out in the wardrobe.
Kieran: God ollie i didnt realise you were that fit
Ollie: you can speak.
Kieran: I know we hardly know each other but I love you
Ollie: You too.
Kieran and ollie then passionatley kissed each other and jerked each other off.
Ollie then kissed kierans nipples and explored kierans body.
Kieran: Do you know what we could get a secret relationship going here
Ollie: are you serious, surely your not gay
Kieran: I am and I have been for years, Mine and charlies friendship got ruined because I told him I fancied him.
Ollie: I was never gay but believe me now I am cos of you.
Kieran: Can you turn it on like that
Ollie: for you I can!
Bobby: TIMES UP!
Kieran: OKAY times up now what a shame
Ollie: Believe me I will spice up this game!


If anyone has any ideas plz dont hesitate to pm me. It has to be used for something!

maxim
04-10-2010, 10:12 AM
I feel this is rushed.
But it is hot
more?

Rickyotk
04-12-2010, 06:14 PM
Wow. Like I said I just found this site, but it is awesome. Your story is great and Keep it going!

pothuthic
04-13-2010, 05:58 PM
Previously
Bobby: TIMES UP!
Kieran: OKAY times up now what a shame
Ollie: Believe me I will spice up your life and this game.


Part 5: Say you'll be there
Kieran: ok lets use this name randomizer and only do dares from now on.
Bobby: ok here we go, oh dam its me.
Ollie: You have to take a Bath with one of us
Bobby: Ollie come on I pick you.
Kieran: Have fun Ollie! Dont get too wet.
They reached the bathroom, They got undressed but stopped a their boxers which were identical.
Bobby: Can I tell you something?
Ollie: What is it.
Bobby: I have always fancied you.
Ollie was thinking how could this of happened.
Ollie: Same here.
Bobby: Lets guess how big each others penis' are.
Ollie: Ok I Bet yours is 2.0 flaccid and 4 erected
Bobby: I bet yours is 3.0 flaccid and 6.0 erected
Ollie: Dont get your hopes up.
Bobby: Was going to say the same as you!
Ollie: I do love you.
Bobby: You too! Lets hop in.
They slowly peeled there Boxers off, Bobby was shocked to see that ollies penis was 2.5 flaccid and 4 erected
Bobbys was 2.5 and 4 the same!
They got in the bath and run the taps while they were in there.
Bobby: Do you fancy kieran
Ollie: Erm... Sorta
Ollie: I have the feeling you do too
Bobby: His Penis is scrumptious.
When the bath was filled they got dressed and came out.
Kieran was sitting there with Reece who ollie also fancies.
Kieran: Is it ok If Reece Joins In.
Now reece has quite a nice body and Has never said no to being gay but never said yes.
Once ollie had caught him in the p.e changing rooms getting out his penis and showing it to all the other lads around him.
Bobby: First hes got to be naked and he is our slave for 30 mins.
Reece: Ok that is ok.
Reece got naked confidentley and revealed hardly any pubes.
Everyone started laughing.
Kieran: Ok Bobby Get me some wax and razors please reece is in for a shock...

pothuthic
01-03-2011, 09:34 PM
The 30 minutes started.

Kieran started chopping and shaving Reece's pubes which he didnt have many of anyway.

Reece Had always enjoyed being played with by other people, It was his turn on point.

Kieran and Reece hardly ever spoke before but they started going to the local nightclub with seperate mates and started talking and then started getting close to each other.

"Kieran I hardly had any of those anyway!"
"No Loss then!"
"Kieran can I have a kiss."

Kieran took one look at Ollie "Ollie Will do it!"
Ollie straight away looked at Kieran and said "Thanks for asking me"
"Thats ok, And for being sarcastic you can do it in your birthday suit.
"Thats Out of order Kieran."
"Not really, You tied me up and Spanked me."
"Just shut up I'll do it" Ollie agreed

Ollie had a crush on about everyone but Reece was the most Gorgeous Bloke he had ever met, He was Hunky, Sporty, Cool everything an Ideal man should be.

Reece had always found Ollie hilarious whilst ear wigging into his conversations, He never spoke to Ollie but always wanted to.

"You ready Ollie for the time of your life" Reece automatically got Ollie Hard.
Ollie laid on top of Reece and kissed him, Kieran and Bobby Left the room whilst the action was going on with Ollie and Reece.

"Your enjoying this Reece arent you!"
"Obvious! You must have experience."
"I wish, Do you know how hard it is to come out."
"This is like an easier way for you isnt it mate."
"Well I suppose, Cheers Reece."

Ollie and Reece had 20 minutes of peace until Bobby and Kieran called, They said they had cooked something for them.

Ollie and Reece walked downstairs into the Dining Room where there was a candle lit dinner prepared with Candles, and flowers everywhere.

Bobby appeared with a Fake Plastic Moustache from a Christmas Cracker pretending to be a waiter, except behind his apron there was no clothes!

Bobby welcomed them.

"Table for two?" Bobby Asked
"Yes please." Ollie swiftly replied
"There are Drinks Menu's on the table, Call us over when you need us, Your starter is just cooking."

Ollie and Reece could be the couple after all.

Dylan xX
01-04-2011, 06:06 PM
MUUUUCH BETTER on this last chap.

I'm glad you took my advice :). Not quite there yet but a hell lot closer

Well done

-Dylsterr