3 Boys and a game if tord, the sequel!!!!!

[angusnbrian1]

Hi guys I'm currently thinking about different ideas for the sequel to my first story I want to make it alot better than the story so does anybody have any ideas? So far I think I am going to set it 6 months later and it will writtern in the 3rd person. Ryan and Craig play tord often and are in a secret sexual relationship ( the end of the first story hinted towards this happening) and Ryan and Craig both have gfs now and the four of them have a game of tord. That's basically where I'd like it to go. Please reply with suggestions.
Thanks

[angusnbrian1]

Sorry about the type o in the title it's meant to say of tord not if tord and I don't know how to change it. If any moderators can change it that would be really helpful. Thanks

[angusnbrian1]

Hi guys here's chapter 1 again sorry about the type o in the thread title not sure how to change it ( if any one knows how to change it please let me know). So here's part one please read the intro.
Chapter 1:
Introduction- This Is the sequel to 3 boys and a game of tord. It is set 6 months later and the main characters are still Rysn and Craig. They now often play dares together and are in a secret sexual relationship. They both now have girl friends (who you will meet) and have been keeping their games of tord a secret from them.

Ryan ejaculated. Him and Craig had just been watching a porno together and had been jacking it other off. They had been doing this quite often since that game of truth or dare 6 months ago. Craig ejaculated too "I don't think we should be doing this any more Ryan, what if someone finds out?"
"You always say that but we still do it no one will find out, anyway it's just a bit of fun." said Ryan whilst redressing. He was going out with his girlfriend Jess later that day and was going to head home to get ready. Jess was a athletic girl with blonde hair and blues eyes. Ryan still couldn't believe he had got with a girl so hot. "Me and Jess are going to the cinema, we are gonna sit on the back row if you know what I mean Craig" Ryan said with a smile as headed out the door. Craig led Ryan to the door and they arranged to meet again soon. Craig loved it when Ryan came round, sometimes they would play dares, maybe have a wank but sometimes they would do it. That happened rarely but when it did Craig was normally on top. His girlfriend was coming round later and he hoped to get lucky as his parents were away. His girlfriend was called Emma she had long brown hair and hazel eyes. Craig loved her ass and they often played tord together but nothing sexual ever happened like when he played with Ryan. She was coming round in an hour. Just enough time to get changed and have a game of halo he thought.

Thanks for reading please comment!

[angusnbrian1]

Hey here's part 2:
chapter 2:
Emma turned up just as Craig finished his match halo. They watched tv for a while until they both got bored "let's play truth or dare Emma"
"Ok but only if we play extreme dares, like getting naked n stuff!" Craig had always wanted to play these kinds of dares with emma but he didn't know if she would be in to it. Normally they dares like tobasco sauce on your younger and stuff, Craig found those kinds of dares pretty boring. Craig went first and dared Emma to strip for him. She stood up and slowly started removing her t shirt. She then took off her bra to reveal her breasts. Craig's hand was down his trousers at this point, he never missed the chance to have a wank.Emma continued to strip until she was completely naked. "my turn, I dare you to strip as well!". So Craig stood up and removed his t shirt to reveal his well tonned body. He then took of his trousers to reveal his White boxer briefs. Emma could clearly see his boner but just smiled she relised her strip must have really turned her on. Once naked Craig sat down again. Emma stroked his dick, he got harder still. Next Craig dared Emma to lick his ball sack and she did so quite willingly. But she didn't stop there she started sucking his dick. Craig felt her hot ass and smiled. This was awesome he thought.

[Mr Very Daring]

good start but a few major errors
on your younger and stuff
k.Emma (should be a space here)
d. "my (should be a new line here)
her strip must have really turned her on. should be him on

[angusnbrian1]

Thanks for the comment I'll try not to it again lol!

[angusnbrian1]

Here's chapter 3 hope you enjoy it!
Chapter 3:
Craig was just about fuck Emma when the doorbell rang. "shit who's that?!" Craig exclaimed, " you go and get it!" said emma. Craig slipped on his jeans and t shirt and to the door. He opened and Ryan was stood there "hi Craig can I come in and play dares, Jess had to cancel."
"sorry, Emmas here we just about out as well!"
"oh sorry didn't mean to interupt I'll come back later cya" Craig closed the door and headed back into the front room where Emma was waiting. Craig lied and said it was someone looking just encase she asked why Ryan wanted to dares with him. Emma unbuttoned Craig's trousers and pulled them down, his dick was still hard and she started shagging him. Sex with Emma was also awesome and Craig always wished it would never end. Craig started fingering her, emma groaned, she feeling craig fingers up her ass. Emma also loved spanking, she lay over Craig's knees and he started spanking. Every time he hit her harder she screamed louder. After and fantastic hand job Craig ejaculated all over Emma's chest. She looked at her phone to check the time and she started getting dressed "see you tomorrow Craig" she said as she kissed his fore head. Craig couldn't wait for tomorrow. After Emma had left Craig text Ryan and said he could come round now. Craig was in the mood for sm so he got out his collar, whip and lead...

[glasssbottle174]

This is a good sequel, keep up the good work

[Mr Very Daring]

playing with fire lol
very much improved

[angusnbrian1]

Chapter 4:
Around half an hour later Ryan showed up. They both headed upstairs and stripped down to their underwear. Craig was wearing White boxer briefs whilst Ryan wore a jockstrap. They first flipped a coin to decide who would master that evening. Ryan won and so he put the collar on Craig " from now on you must call me sir, is that understood?"
"yes sir"
"good now bend over" craig did so and ryan started lubing up his ass hole. Then he began to fuck him. Ryan started pounding his ass faster and faster whilst Craig moaned with delight. After Ryan had finished fucking craig he took a length of rope and tied craigs hands above his head to the chin ups pole where Ryan himself had once been tied. Ryan then picked up Craig black whip and began lashing at Craigs buttocks. Craig screamed every time he was hit but Ryan just laughed. Then to Craigs suprise Ryan stopped whipping him and started jerking him off. Just before Craig ejaculated Ryan held a glass to craig's penis to catch his cum. "this cum craig, i want you to eat it" with that craig opened his mouth and Ryan poured in the cum and held craig's nose so he had to swallow "good boy" Ryan said. Ryan picked up his clothes and started getting dressed " what are you doing sir?"
"I'm leaving you here"
"what but you haven't untied me?!"
"I know I haven't I come back and untie you tomorrow!"
"no wait wait!!!"
but it was to late Ryan had gone leaving Craig tied up naked and helpless...

[Demon Thief]

Interesting twist..
I'm sure you're pretty tired of hearing this, but please try to work on your spelling? It would make your story a lot better.

[glasssbottle174]

I like this twist! i can see that this is going to get very good

[Duck]

Nice, good story want to hear more

[marlow]

Great story - more please!!!

[WedgieDareGirl]

Amazing story.. Cant wait for more! :D

[nuddydudedares]

It's a good story. looking forward to the next part, and I enjoyed the twist. But I think the parts are a bit short and fast.