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TheDare
02-01-2010, 02:37 PM
Jenna was a young girl of just 13. She had no great adventures or great stories to tell. Or rather, that was until tonight. Something was about to happen that she would never willingly forget.

AlmightyElemental
02-01-2010, 02:38 PM
"Grate Adventures", huh? Riveting...grating cheese can be HELLA exciting, I'm glad she gets to try it!

TheDare
02-01-2010, 02:52 PM
I knew somthing was wrong with my grat.

TheDare
02-01-2010, 02:53 PM
I mean grate, rather.

TheDare
02-01-2010, 02:53 PM
Jenna awoke with a start, her alarm was deep into its buzzing phase. It Hissed with frustration of her ability to sleep threw it. Jenna gently steeped to the floor. She had a good dream. A very good dream. She was horny from it still. Though she did not know she was horny. She had never watched porn, or talked about sex, or even seen it on TV. She never masturbated. She knew she wanted something, something was missing from her life, a feeling maybe? But no, she could not identify it. She followed her daily routine. She got dressed, ate, showered, and was off on the buss in 15 minutes flat. She was walked on the buss ready for a daily dose of insults.
“Oh its Jenna” said a girl
“Look at her clothes, they sooo don’t match” said another
“Look at her short shorts, trying to show off our legs aren’t we? Ha” said the first
Jenna proceeded down the aisle without a glance and either girl. She had taking this before, she could take it again. The girls couldn’t really make fun of her body, was beautiful, perfect. The girls made fun of her because of it. Though Jenna was humble and always thought of herself as average. However, she did fall into the “cute” side rather than the “hot” side, even to a 13 year old boy.

TheDare
02-01-2010, 03:03 PM
Jenna made it to school drawing little to no attention, on average, this was a great start to a new day! She was sadly not welcome to talk to any of the other girls, since half the time they were talking about sex. Here all the girls talk about sex as much as the guys, and maybe love it more. The just aren’t as open about it. Here this was entirely the case. She was not welcome.
She stepped into her classroom with books in hand, her chosen seat, far off from all the others in the corner. Here she would sit, day after day. Focusing on nothing but her studies. Because of it she was a straight A student, and the others only hated her more for it.

TheDare
02-01-2010, 03:04 PM
If I dont post for a while please, sombody who likes the story, continue it for me.

TheDare
02-01-2010, 03:05 PM
And sorry for the short chapters.

firenight
02-01-2010, 03:39 PM
go on make it longer k

CollaredBlondie
02-01-2010, 03:46 PM
Here all the girls talk about sex as much as the guys, and maybe love it more.

This insinuates that 13 year olds are having sex. This is wrong.

person on get dare!
02-01-2010, 03:47 PM
im really liking it... i feel like helping but ive never written a story like this and have a feeling id b bad at it... so please continue!... im subscribe and see where it goes

BettyBoop
02-01-2010, 03:50 PM
This makes me uncomfortable that she is so young. Why are the characters in stories getting younger and younger?

pranadevil
02-01-2010, 04:47 PM
This makes me uncomfortable that she is so young. Why are the characters in stories getting younger and younger?

At this rate they'll be having sex before their conceived XD.

Dicedarefan666
02-02-2010, 02:45 AM
At this rate they'll be having sex before their conceived XD.

Reminds me of a Chuck Norris joke...

But yeah, I completely agree, I think we should impose a lower age limit of 15 or something for fictional stories.

Well... I don't know, maybe not, I don't like censorship too much, but this is getting a tad ridonkulous with the young ages.

greatsayaman
02-02-2010, 09:14 AM
Reminds me of a Chuck Norris joke...

But yeah, I completely agree, I think we should impose a lower age limit of 15 or something for fictional stories.

Well... I don't know, maybe not, I don't like censorship too much, but this is getting a tad ridonkulous with the young ages.

It's fiction.
People have lots of fetishes, like "lolicon."

As long as you know the boundaries between real life and fiction, then you're fine.
It's like a guy who likes the idea of being humiliated by cross dressing, and a guy who goes out of his way to cross dress because he likes it. Some people may accept the first, but not the second.

In the end, it all comes down to acceptance.

And I'll have you know, I speak to a lot of "children" around 12-14, and quite a few of them either have had sex, or masturbate/do oral. =)

Also, the legal age of sexual consent in The Vatican is 12, so... Go hate religion, and anyone who believes in it, if you're gonna hate his story. =)

AlmightyElemental
02-02-2010, 09:27 AM
It's fiction.

Also, the legal age of sexual consent in The Vatican is 12, so... Go hate religion, and anyone who believes in it, if you're gonna hate his story. =)

REALLY? I seriously had no idea. O.O Hmmm....personally, I think the age of consent should be a tad lower everywhere just because "kids" become sexually aware A LONG TIME before they actually have sex. Or at the very least, implement a rule like in Canada where, starting at 12, they can have sex with other people within a certain age range.
I'm not admitting to being a pedophile or anything so DON'T BASH ME FOR SAYING THIS(that's just rude :P) , it's just what I think should happen for the youngun's sake. I've always hated how "kids" opinions aren't generally accepted in every day society because the "adults" know better or some such thing...

greatsayaman
02-02-2010, 09:58 AM
REALLY? I seriously had no idea. O.O Hmmm....personally, I think the age of consent should be a tad lower everywhere just because "kids" become sexually aware A LONG TIME before they actually have sex. Or at the very least, implement a rule like in Canada where, starting at 12, they can have sex with other people within a certain age range.
I'm not admitting to being a pedophile or anything so DON'T BASH ME FOR SAYING THIS(that's just rude :P) , it's just what I think should happen for the youngun's sake. I've always hated how "kids" opinions aren't generally accepted in every day society because the "adults" know better or some such thing...

Yep, I was surprised as well. I had to go check a few places to make sure! :P
And I agree. You can't even vote 'til you're 18. It's moronic.

And yes, kids are sexually aware at younger ages. BUT I believe it's better to keep the limit at 16. Otherwise, I'd have had sex a few years ago, but I now wanna save it for the girl I love. ^^

Perhaps making it legal for mutual masturbation and oral. Then people would have sex less, because they're ALLOWED to release their sexual frustration through other means.
And by showing that masturbation is natural, and outlining the health benefits of such an act. Rather than making people believe that it's wrong or shameful. :P

CollaredBlondie
02-02-2010, 04:50 PM
Perhaps making it legal for mutual masturbation and oral. Then people would have sex less, because they're ALLOWED to release their sexual frustration through other means.
And by showing that masturbation is natural, and outlining the health benefits of such an act. Rather than making people believe that it's wrong or shameful. :P

^ This is probably the best idea I've heard all year.

But yes, back to the story. I'm sorry but reading about 13 year olds doing sexual things, like serious sexual things... I think it's wrong.

misspiggy7
02-02-2010, 06:20 PM
since it's been along time since u updated, I'll continue it for u
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The bell rang for lunch and Jenna dreadfully walked to the cafeteria, alone. Her mother had suggested she throw a slumber party to make new friends, she sent out invitations a week ago, no one replied.

Jenna passed a group of girls giggling in the hall
"h-hi guys." Jenna stuttered, trying to make conversation. "Is anyone coming to my sleep over? It's this Friday..."
All the girls smiled slyly
"Of course Jen!" said Tiffany, who always seemed to be the leader
"Wouldn't miss it!" said Melly, who was always either hanging around Tiffany, or gossiping about her in the bathroom.
Michelle just smiled, Jenna wasn't quite sire how Michelle had landed a spot in the "cool" group, being so shy.
"Wow. Cool." Jenna said, she had expected them to blow her off. "well, I'd better get to lunch before the line's too long..."
"Bye" Tiffany and Melly said, and, of course, Michelle just smiled.

Once Jenna was well out of ear shot Tiffany turned to the other two girls.
"Remember the plan?" She asked, sweeping her Red hair behind her ear.
"Duh" said Melly
"how could i not?" Michelle asked, just above a whisper
"good" Tiffany replied "let's just hope he does!"
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How do you like it?

misspiggy7
02-02-2010, 07:06 PM
just describing new Characters:
Tiffany: pretty red hair, b boobs, medium height (about 5')
Melly: okay Black hair, A almost B boobs, a little taller (5'3)
Michelle: shortish (4'10), pretty brown hair, AA boobs
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On Friday about 9 Jenna heard the doorbell ring.
"I'll get it!" Jenna's little sister, Ruthie (I've been watching "7th Heaven") yelled.
"Are you Jenna's friends?" she asked
The three girls smiled at the five year old.
"you could say that" said Tiffany
"Did you know she's boring?" Ruthie asked.
Jenna stepped in front Ruthie and laughed nervously.
"Sorry, you know how little sisters are." she said
"And by that you mean better?" Ruthie asked
"MOM" Jenna yelled
"Sorry Jenna" Her mother said hurrying down the stairs. then she looked at Ruthie.
" How would you like to see a movie tonight, sweetie?"
"I'd rather spy on Jenna."
"Really? That's a shame, and all your friends will be talking about 'The Princess and the Frog' on Monday!"
"on second thought..."
"Yeah, I thought so. Jenna, Your father, Ruthie and I are going to the movies, there's money for pizza on the counter, and we'll call when we start to come home, plus when we get home we'll be going straight to bed!"

When her parents car was out of the drive way, Tiffany announced
"The game is truth or dare"
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seth18
02-03-2010, 07:38 PM
I liked it up until this post.

maxim
02-03-2010, 08:41 PM
I think that the age is sickining and I will not continue to read this.

seth18
02-03-2010, 08:46 PM
I think that the age is sickining and I will not continue to read this.

You kidding?

Goto ANY middle/grade school.
Guys ar ealways horny, but 13-14 girls in middle school, it's true, they're having sex or giving bj's, atleast a good handful.

AlmightyElemental
02-03-2010, 10:11 PM
It's true. My sister was forced to stay in her home room at her middle school the other day because they caught two kids doing it under the stairs. Makes me wonder if this kind of thing was going on when I was that age and I was just nieve.

seth18
02-03-2010, 11:20 PM
It's true. My sister was forced to stay in her home room at her middle school the other day because they caught two kids doing it under the stairs. Makes me wonder if this kind of thing was going on when I was that age and I was just nieve.

10+ years ago, of course, except I'm guess back then rape was included, now alot of girls are easy but underage? ;)

misspiggy7
02-04-2010, 04:55 PM
I liked it up until this post.

sorry...
this is my first story.
I had writer's block and as soon as i got it in my head i wrote it... i probably should have reread it and brainstormed (i know dorky word) a little

TheDare
02-06-2010, 12:16 PM
Yes Im back but only for a short while, please move on with the story.

About the age, yes I know its young, It was all part of "My Grand Master Plan" that would make you all happy. She wasent exactly going to be the main point of focus on the story but a indipendent character whose actions would affect the storys begining. But anyway I can't continue. Continue in any wah possable. An idea to save this story for those who think of it as sick.

Rough draft, edit till content
You will need to expand this into a chapter

Jenna suffered horribly at the hands of the other kids for the next two years. Her ego, self-image, and determination were beat down to nothing in the first month. However, remarkably she maintained her good grades and beauty. This was both a gift and a curse. She had still not been accepted. They cursed her and called her names. They lied and tattle tailed on her. She was emotionally defeated, they now made fun of the fact that she hadn’t even dated, or taken on the new styles. Her family however fared better, they grew rich and richer. But this just made things worse of Jenna.

Mr Very Daring
02-06-2010, 04:44 PM
I think that the age is sickening.

how they-re only a year younger than you and the most daring thing that has happened is the grating adventure at the start- sorry for being rude but a bit confused at that.

about the story- pants boring and nothing is happening- going nowhere fast