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01-02-2010, 02:37 PM
This is my first story but dont go easy on the comments. If the characters seem a little young for you then by all means pretend they'r older. Any tips will be apreciated. Oh and if I dont post for a long time somthing may have happened (like if I fell off a cliff) the sombody please continue the story for me.
Lucy was happy, her parents had just goten here a new laptop for her thirteenth birthday, that was nice. But the fun part was that she was going to have a sleepover tomoro night with her friends from school. She was sad though that they would not be there to help her have a fun party. She just remembered them saying "your a teenager now Lu dear", "You need to learn responsability". Lucy went up to bed exited, tomaro was friday and she would be having her birthday party. She just wondered what on earth she would do after the party. Her parents would be gone for a entire week! She thought here parents had already aranged somthing with one of her friends parents. She had no siblings so that was good for her parents. She got into the shower and noticed somthing "Hmm, ya know, I look kinda hot" she said aloud, then giggled. She washed herself and payed special atention to her tiny barly developing "hills" and "Pee Hole". She wondered why washing her privates felt better then washing the rest of her body. As she got into her PJ she brushed her teeth and got ready for bed. Just as she was turning the lights off she noticed her laptop and dicided to have it charge as she slept. Some dust went up her nose and she let out a sneze. She got into bed and noticed somthing wet between her legs, she reached down and felt somthing sticky. "Ewwww" she said aloud, "My sneze came out my Pee hole". Nevertheless, after much tossing and turning she ignored it and got to sleep.
Lucy was happy, her parents had just goten here a new laptop for her thirteenth birthday, that was nice. But the fun part was that she was going to have a sleepover tomoro night with her friends from school. She was sad though that they would not be there to help her have a fun party. She just remembered them saying "your a teenager now Lu dear", "You need to learn responsability". Lucy went up to bed exited, tomaro was friday and she would be having her birthday party. She just wondered what on earth she would do after the party. Her parents would be gone for a entire week! She thought here parents had already aranged somthing with one of her friends parents. She had no siblings so that was good for her parents. She got into the shower and noticed somthing "Hmm, ya know, I look kinda hot" she said aloud, then giggled. She washed herself and payed special atention to her tiny barly developing "hills" and "Pee Hole". She wondered why washing her privates felt better then washing the rest of her body. As she got into her PJ she brushed her teeth and got ready for bed. Just as she was turning the lights off she noticed her laptop and dicided to have it charge as she slept. Some dust went up her nose and she let out a sneze. She got into bed and noticed somthing wet between her legs, she reached down and felt somthing sticky. "Ewwww" she said aloud, "My sneze came out my Pee hole". Nevertheless, after much tossing and turning she ignored it and got to sleep.