Tapout93
01-01-2010, 11:23 PM
First time posting would like comments on how to make it better or if I need to change a few thing just don't be to harsh plz but if I get good feedback I will continue and pm me with any ideas.
Chapter 1
Hello my name is shane I'm 16, 6'2", black hair, brown eyes, I have a some what athletic body with a nice tan from football and this is what happend over winter break last year.
It was a nice sunny afternoon but boring as fuck so I just sat on my bed and played modern warfare2 on xbox live. The game was tied and as I was about to get the final kill of the game my cell phone rang so when I turned to grab it I got shot in the head and lost. Well after I loged out and turned off the xbox I looked at my phone and read the message from my friends big sister Nina the text said "Truth or dare". Alice is 18 and my best friend Eric's older sister she is 5'4", long blond hair that comes down to her shoulders, nice clear blue eyes, and really nice rack 34C's. It took me awhile before I text her back asking if she was just playing around and I was really hoping she wasn't.
After an hour of waiting she messaged me back telling me to open the front door if I wanted to play so being me I ran down stairs to open the door and just as I hoped she was there waiting but wasn't alone she was standing with June, Bella, Kim, and Brian. I let them in and we all walked in to the living room where we sat and picked kim to start then alice, me, june, brian and then finally bella.
"Ok, alice truth or dare?" kim ask quickly
"Umm...truth I guess." Answered alice
"What is the naughtiest thing you have ever done? Where?" kim replied with a strange look on her face
"It was a few weeks before break at school I was dared by you kim to wear my tightest button up shirt and shortest skirt, with no bra, and at school you gave me wireless vibrating panties to where the whole day."kim said with a nasty glare diracted to kim
I just couldn't believe what I had just heard and was scared of what alice would ask me or dare me to do.
Chapter 1
Hello my name is shane I'm 16, 6'2", black hair, brown eyes, I have a some what athletic body with a nice tan from football and this is what happend over winter break last year.
It was a nice sunny afternoon but boring as fuck so I just sat on my bed and played modern warfare2 on xbox live. The game was tied and as I was about to get the final kill of the game my cell phone rang so when I turned to grab it I got shot in the head and lost. Well after I loged out and turned off the xbox I looked at my phone and read the message from my friends big sister Nina the text said "Truth or dare". Alice is 18 and my best friend Eric's older sister she is 5'4", long blond hair that comes down to her shoulders, nice clear blue eyes, and really nice rack 34C's. It took me awhile before I text her back asking if she was just playing around and I was really hoping she wasn't.
After an hour of waiting she messaged me back telling me to open the front door if I wanted to play so being me I ran down stairs to open the door and just as I hoped she was there waiting but wasn't alone she was standing with June, Bella, Kim, and Brian. I let them in and we all walked in to the living room where we sat and picked kim to start then alice, me, june, brian and then finally bella.
"Ok, alice truth or dare?" kim ask quickly
"Umm...truth I guess." Answered alice
"What is the naughtiest thing you have ever done? Where?" kim replied with a strange look on her face
"It was a few weeks before break at school I was dared by you kim to wear my tightest button up shirt and shortest skirt, with no bra, and at school you gave me wireless vibrating panties to where the whole day."kim said with a nasty glare diracted to kim
I just couldn't believe what I had just heard and was scared of what alice would ask me or dare me to do.