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andrew_b
12-15-2009, 08:53 PM
Which do you prefer?
andrew_b
12-16-2009, 06:58 PM
Hmm actually surprised people liked the sequel more
Demon Thief
12-20-2009, 12:08 AM
I'd have to say I like the first one better. The sequel seemed a little rushed although it was pretty good.
andrew_b
12-20-2009, 02:13 PM
I'd have to say I like the first one better. The sequel seemed a little rushed although it was pretty good.

yeah my big problem with that was their were massive gaps in writing but i am taking my time with my next one and trying to correct the problems i had in previous stories