far

[endofspoon]

far far away
alittle light shines,
but for now
it is dimmed
and no longer can be seen
no light means
darkness settles in
depression takes over
the light is gone
surely it will come back?
perhaps not.
anyone out there
help?

[sjsully06]

That is a beautiful peice of work...but it also wants me to ask if you are ok or is it just a poem for the hell of it?

[endofspoon]

shit go's down
and no one even cares
or so it seems
even so called "friends"

[insanehuman455]

nice i guess, though i prefer poems to rhyme cause non rhyming poems seem to take no skill at all.

Ex

a hopeless soul lost in wilderness
cries for help only answered by the soul crows cry
the dark moon casts a shadow
brightening the lost soul one last time

that took me all of 15 seconds to come up with

[TheLittleStrawberry]

nice i guess, though i prefer poems to rhyme cause non rhyming poems seem to take no skill at all.

Ex

a hopeless soul lost in wilderness
cries for help only answered by the soul crows cry
the dark moon casts a shadow
brightening the lost soul one last time

that took me all of 15 seconds to come up with


I so agree with you... For some reason most poems annoy me, cos they seem like people just do them for the heck of it... or.. To seem like they are sensitive.. ooh.
I've only read few poems that I like.

PS: No offence to the OP.