My Week as a Slave [FICTION]

[Tony12]

Hi this is my first time writing a story on getdare.
Tell me if my story is any good and if i should continue after im finished.
It was late in the lunch break on Friday afternoon. I was walking around bored when three girls from my year asked me to join them in a classroom they broke into. So I said I would go with them. Once we got to the classroom they asked if I wanted to play truth or Dare. I said “Em ok I’m up for it”. The girls names were Arlene, Kelly and Claire. So I started off with some truths Kelly was first to pick a dare. I dared her to get to her bra and panties. She agreed and did the dare I thought she was sexy because I had always fancied her. We knew we wouldn’t get caught playing because she did it in a part of the classroom only we could see her and we locked the door. So all the girls had done a little dare or two and Arlene said to me “don’t be such a pussy and keep picking truth” so I picked a dare. They huddled up and discussed what they would dare me. I was guessing what it might be. Claire said “Ok We dare you to be our slave for the week”. I was shocked I wasn’t expecting this seeing as they all got simple 2minuet dares. But still with the unfairness I accepted. I didn’t know what I was in for or I probably wouldn’t have accepted. Kelly said “meet us outside the school at 6:30pm Slave”.
I was waiting at the school for 10minuets when they finally arrived. They were carrying baseball bats and Arlene had a bag on. I wondered what the baseball bats were for. Arlene said “Follow us”. So I followed them on what was about a 5minuet walk and we were at a small forest next to the park. I didn’t think much was going to happen but I was wrong.
This is where it all started going downhill for me. Kelly said “Take of all your clothes slave”. I said “what no way”. Claire said “you have to your our slave”. I still refused. Arlene said “ If you don’t we’re going to beat you to a pulp with the baseball bats”. I was nervous and was wondering what to do. I knew I couldn’t outrun them because I wasn’t very fast. I had no choice but to agree. So I stripped down to my boxers. Arlene put the clothes in her bag. Claire said “ and the underwear “. I had no choice so I took them off and gave them to her. I saw them all staring at my penis and because I fancied Kelly my penis went erect. They were laughing at me. Kelly takes a camera out and takes a picture of me with her digital camera. I said “ What are you doing don’t take photo’s!”. Arlene pulled a blindfold out her bag and told me to put it on. So I put it on and then they made me lie on the ground face down. 10minuets later Kelly said “Get back up slave. I noticed Arlene’s bag was empty. I said “where’s my clothes. All three of them grinned. Arlene said “Hidden somewhere Have to go find them”. So they all ran off and left me naked in the woods. 1hour later I managed to find my talk I was humiliated and agitated at what had happened to me today. To my horror it started to rain this made things much worse. Eventually after being soaked to the skin I found my trousers. So I went home in my t-shirt and trousers embarrassed. Luckily my parents never noticed…
To be continued
Do you think this is any good i will continue if you do if not well then i won't.
Not much action just a beggining.

[JohnC15]

really good please continue as soon as possible

[Tony12]

Thanks i may continue tonight if i get a few more Ok's. If not ill check back tommorow and maybe write then :)

[bball]

sounds good please continue

[darelova55]

continue now i wana reed the nzt chapter

[Tony12]

On Saturday the girls phoned me they seemed to be together. I didn’t know how they got my number they told me to meet them at the school again. I said “no I’m not going to be your slave anymore so just get lost”. Claire said “ Oh ok I guess we’ll just come to your house and show your parents the pictures. Do you think they’ll mind?” I said “What no don’t ok ill come!”. So I headed of to the school it was 1pm in the afternoon. When I got there they started walking away and Claire told me to follow. We arrived at Arlene’s house. Arlene said grinning “my parents are away for the weekend we’re going to have a lot of fun!”
Claire frowned at me and said “ Well first you shall be punished “. They discussed what they where going to do. Kelly said “take of all your clothes slave”. So I took off all my clothes hoping it wasn’t the same as yesterday. Arlene handcuffed me and blindfolded me then made me bend over half lying on her bed. Then they opened my mouth and threw what I thought was a pill in. Then forced my mouth shut and made me swallow it. A minuet later I realised it was viagra. My penis was erect. Then spread my but cheeks and rubbed something on it. It started to burn. I knew it wasn’t toothpaste because it didn’t have the feeling. I think it was pepper. The burn started to get more intense. They left me for 5minuets while the burning was making me very uncomfortable. One of them came up and took the blindfold off then I saw it was Kelly. My Penis was still erect from the viagra. Kelly rubbed my penis a bit and rubbed my balls it felt good. Then she slapped me. Claire was holding a thong and said “this is the underwear you will wear for this weekend”. Arlene put the thong on me while I was handcuffed. She pulled it down again a bit. Kelly said to me “ if you ever disobey us again it will be much worse “. Then Claire pulled out a massive purple dildo out of Arlene’s bag. Kelly said “Will it fit?”. Claire replied “It’ll have to”.
I knew what was coming after it. Claire came up to me and started to force the dildo up my ass. It was unbelievable painful. As she forced it in and out. She put it in again then pressed a button which made it turn. It was very painful and uncomfortable and to add to it they all started laughing. Arlene took out her camera and took some pictures. It was extremely painful because the pepper was still burning and it was embarrassing because my penis was still erect and they were taking pictures of it happening. I was scared about what they would use these photo’s for. Then Claire stopped and pulled the dildo back out. I had a tear running down my cheek which added to my embarrassment. They simply just laughed at me more. Kelly took the handcuffs off. I looked at the clock it was already 2pm. I told them I had to go home at 3pm they said ok but I want you back later we will phone you. For the next our they made me be they’re dog walking me around. At one point I needed the toilet and they made me go in her backyard. It was degrading but at least neighbours couldn’t see.
At 3pm before I was about to go home I started to take my thong off. Claire said “what are you doing?” I said “ I’m taking it off to put my normal clothes on”. Claire said “no wear that under your normal clothes and from now on call us mistress”. So I left the thong on put clothes over it and started to go home. I felt a little embarrassed in the thong though nobody else could see it... To be continued
Tell me if this chapter is any good :) If i get enough posts ill continue later today. Thanks for reading

[JohnC15]

great need more.
my post is too short?

[Tony12]

At 4pm I got the call to go to Arlene’s and ask if I could stay the night. So I asked my mum and dad they agreed. I headed off to Arlene’s Not knowing what to expect. When I arrived at Arlene’s house the girls were waiting for me. Claire said “We’re going to do some more anal with you”. I groaned unhappily knowing that pain was probably ahead.
I took my clothes off and the girls started off slowly by fingering me up the ass. Then they used bigger objects. They were all taking turns at putting things up my ass. I think starting off small helped the pain a little because when they got to a their purple dildo it didn’t hurt as much as last time. They also took some photo’s while they did it.
After it Kelly came over and made me take viagra. After I took the pill she started wanking me. I enjoyed this and it didn’t take long for me to cum. They were videoing it which made me feel uneasy. Arlene scooped the cum into her hand and put it into a shot glass. I saw what was coming I was terrified. Claire said grinning “ Drink the cum Slave “. So I drank it it was disgusting but not as bad as I expected. I felt a bit sick after it and the girls were joking with each other.
I spent the next 2hours serving as their footstool naked while they watched T.V. Then after it they ordered a Indian. When it was being delivered they made me go collect it with no money. They told me to say I’ll pay for it in another way and tease him. I was horrified as I walked towards the door knowing what I had to do. I opened the door and the delivery guy was standing there with his mouth wide opened. He was shocked I immediately went bright red. I took the Indian off him and said I didn’t have any money. I said “I can pay for it in other ways”. The delivery guy said “Na mate just leave it have it free”. Then he ran to his car and drove off. I closed the door and the girls came out the living room rolling about in laughter. I was moody with them after this. I hadn’t been saying anything much to them all evening.
They decided they were going to make me go to the supermarket in girls clothes and a wig. I protested. Kelly said “ No slave you SHALL obey”. So they were about to pick a outfit for me they decided first they would shave me. They got a shaving kit out and started with my legs. By the time they were done my legs were red raw. Then they made me take my thong off. I knew they were going to shave my pubes so I said “No please anything but that mistress’s”. They ignored me and set the wax on. They ripped it off slowly. A few tears went down my cheeks from the pain. I was also worrying about the time that was to come. Then came the picking of the outfit. They found a miniskirt and a top that stopped before my bellybutton. They made me put on a bra and stuffed it with tissue. Then they sent me out to go to the supermarket…
Continue to tell me if it's good please or if its getting worse or whatever!

[the Bean]

keep going its getting better

[2doctor]

keep it going it rocks
im hungry for it more more

[2doctor]

please hurry its good but i need more

[the Bean]

hurry up its been ages. i want more story its goood...:(

[Tony12]

Sorry Ive been thinking of Idea's Maybe when i have more time
Or maybe tommorow if your lucky!

[Truthgu]

That last one was very good. The better the grammer the better the story.

Tess

[25rob1985]

please cary on it is great

[Tony12]

Before I left to go to the supermarket they had gave me a sheet of paper and £20. They wrote a list of things to buy. Also they wrote they would be at the supermarket waiting for me. On the list of things to buy there was: Adult sized nappies, A Extra large thong, Ice cubes and some food. Below the list it said I was to bend over and give a worker at the shop a clear view of my ass. So I was walking along on my way I say the girls drive by in a taxi. Then I was passing a bunch of older guys. They knew I was a guy and started laughing at me one of them pushed me and they were threatening me. I ran away not very fast as I was wearing high heels. As I entered the supermarket it was near closing time. A lot of people going out stared at me. My cheeks were as red as my legs when they were waxed. I felt like I was going to suffer eternal humiliation. So I walked into the door picking up a basket on my way. I saw the three girls as soon as I went in. I pretended I didn’t know them and walked on to buy the items. They followed a bit behind. I picked up some milk and a few other foods first. Then I went for the babies nappies. I felt as if I was being watched by everyone I had never felt so nervous and vulnerable in my life. I picked up a packet of adult sized nappies and headed on. As I walked by one of the workers was laughing he was trying to stop himself but couldn’t. I decided I would bend over to him. So I dropped the nappies and bent over to pick them up. He was watching then he saw my ass and ran away laughing probably to tell his workmates. So I went and picked up the thong and headed for the checkout. At the checkout it was really embarrassing when I was buying the items. The women at the checkout was staring at me as she scanned the items. I paid for it and walked outside. A few minuets later the girls joined me. They were laughing hysterically. So we got a taxi home to my relief. It didn’t really get better from there…
Again continue to tell me if better worse e.t.c...
I think this one is a little short but i didnt have much time!

[sxcm]

I agree it was fairly short but a great story nevertheless! keep up the good work!

[25rob1985]

keep the good work up it is great

[2doctor]

keep it up its one of the best i have ever seen

[the Bean]

just wen i thought it was closed, u gave us another great part. I'm really wanting to know wot happens, so kep it up

[COOLCAT44]

Come On I'm Waiting!

[anonimousbob]

don't be so demanding, and don't type all in capitals which makes it seem ruder (I can tell because most forums now change complete capitals to just caps at beginning of each word)

[COOLCAT44]

OK NOW I'M IN CAPS MAN MORE STORY PLEASE IT BEEN 2 DAYS!
MABYE HE GOT A GF AND FORGOT?:eek:
NO W8 IT'S BEEN THREE DAYS

[anonimousbob]

stop demanding people write the story, they write when they feel like it, and rushing them will ruin it

[Big_Joe]

stop demanding people write the story, they write when they feel like it, and rushing them will ruin it

I completely agree. They have chosen to write this story, you should be grateful that they wrote it in the first place. They could have just decided to keep it themselves.

[daremaster1]

next part of the story best be good and hurry

[Collared_Slave]

next part of the story best be good and hurry

didnt u read the last few posts

[2doctor]

stop demanding to see more it rude adn rember he is writting a story for all of u be gratefull

[Tony12]

:) Hah thanks for the support!
I shall continue shortly
I havent been on getdare in a while Sorry!
And next part may be last part for a week or so because im going on holiday for a week

[Tony12]

So here's the post you've all been waiting for!
Part 5
The taxi got to the house and the girls paid the taxi man. I got out and went into the house. So Claire said “Go into the living room and wait”. So they took the shopping I bought and went into the kitchen. I heard them discussing but I couldn’t make out what they were saying. I just patiently waited. After what seemed forever the girls came out and told me what they were going to do for the next day. Claire explained “ Your going to be our baby until tomorrow at 6pm”. Kelly said “ There are rules”. Arlene said “ Rule 1. You cannot talk you may only make sounds a baby can make you may not talk to ask for food or even anything. You can cry to indicate you want something. Rule 2 You cannot use the toilet that’s what the nappies are for. Rule 3 You must wear this dummy”. Kelly pulled a dummy out of her pocket and gave it to me. Arlene said “Rule 4 You cannot walk only crawl.” So they stripped me of all my clothes and put the nappy on me. Kelly put the dummy in my mouth. I got down on the floor and started crawling. I crawled up and sat on the floor and watched T.V. This was one benefit I got from being a baby but it didn’t last for long. Kelly came up and pulled me away from the T.V. They said it was feeding time. Claire took out her breast and squeezed breast milk into a cup then put a lid with a dummy out the end. ( Like a baby bottle). Claire gave it to me and told me to drink. I took my dummy of. I reluctantly put the bottle to my mouth and started sucking. The milk wasn’t the nicest of tastes it was sour but I bared it. It was hard to drink the whole bottle though. I finished it with a nasty aftertaste. After that they sat down and watched T.V. I crawled over and sat down. They turned me to face them and said I’m not allowed to watch T.V. Foolishly I said “why not”. Arlene shouted at me “WHAT DID I TELL YOU IT WAS RULE 1!” I put my head down and looked to the floor. They discussed how I would be punished. Arlene ran upstairs and came back down with a leather whip. I gasped. I was wondering where she got the whip from. Arlene said “ We’ll let you off lightly since your only a baby. They pulled my nappy down put me lying down over a chair and said they would each whack me once. Arlene was first with a sharp crack it hit my ass. The pain not as bad as I expected. I went red. Kelly stepped and there was another crack. Pain suddenly flushed through me. It was a shock from the last crack and a few tears went down my cheeks. I was embarrassed from the crying. Arlene took a picture. Then Claire stepped up and there was another sharp crack. The pain was unreal nothing I expected from being hit on the ass. So after that they pulled my nappy back up Arlene put the whip away upstairs. I lay down crying from the pain. I was embarrassing but the crying helped. Well I thought it did anyway. After I had finished crying I went and sat next to them facing away from the T.V. Claire went into the kitchen and came back with a pint of water. I realised what was going to happen. She gave me it and told me to drink. I drank slowly 10 minuets later the water had went down. After 2hours of T.V. they decided it was time for my bed. I was bursting for a pee by that time. When I went into bed they tucked me in and kissed me goodnight like a real baby. I spent half an hour trying to hold my piss in. Eventually I gave in and did a pee in the nappy. After it I felt a bit itchy but I just put up with it. I didn’t like the wet sticky feeling either. It wasn’t very pleasant as you can imagine. Luckily I don’t think the nappy leaked. I went to sleep after another half an hour sitting in piss.
I hope you enjoyed this as much as you appeared to have enjoyed the previous posts!
Again tell me if this was better or worse than the last few :)

[slave boy]

Only getting better and better:D

[Powerstrip]

Only one complaint....Paragraphs Please :o

[rachel_daring]

this is great plz carry on

[2doctor]

this is the best part so far keep it up

[Smexii_Gangsta]

gets better an' better... CARRY ON!

[Tony12]

Back From my Hols :)
Had fun
Ill get back to writing soon...!
Until then you'll have to be patient.

[Tony12]

Here it is! Part 6 has arrived
Sunday morning I woke up uncomfortably. I got up remembering the rules I crawled into the living room. I pointed at my nappy to Claire. She laughed at me and said “ Go change your nappy in the kitchen”. So I went into the kitchen and changed. Not much happened for the rest of the day I just sat and acted like a baby.
At 6pm I was told to phone and ask my parents if I could stay again Monday was a bank holiday. I was wearing my normal clothes again with a thong underneath. My parents agreed I could stay again. That night they decided they would play a little game with me. They had itching powder which Arlene had bought one Holiday to trick her mum and dad. She had a packet left. Claire, Arlene and Kelly all took a pinch each they pulled my trousers and thong down and rubbed the itching powder onto my balls and ass crack. They told me I couldn’t scratch it with my hands or I would be punished. As you can imagine the itching powder was quite unbearable in these area’s and I had to try hard not to itch. Kelly asked if I would like to be handcuffed so it’s impossible to itch myself. I agreed and was handcuffed for the rest of the night. I was uncuffed when the effects started to wear off. It was 10pm and the girls told me I was to get up early and to make them a English cooked breakfast. They showed me where all the ingredients were and sent me to bed. I fell easily asleep in my clothes.
On Monday I woke up early with a alarm. I went downstairs and made them breakfast. In there breakfast I made for them: 2 pieces of bacon , a portion of beans, 2suagages, a fried egg and mushrooms for each of them. When I was getting there breakfast I realised when shopping they got some of there own items. I woke them up after I cooked the breakfast. They all got up and ate there breakfast while I sat on the floor. Arlene put out a dog bowl for me and filled it with dog food. (This was the item I saw they got on there own) I looked disgusted and I said “No thanks I‘m not hungry mistress‘s“. I was actually very hungry but that didn’t matter because Kelly said “ No we’re not giving you the choice”. So I put my head down and took a bite. It wasn’t the nicest thing I’ve tasted nor the worse but it was the texture that made me feel sick. It had jelly in between the meat. I eat it all and felt sick. I went to the toilet and puked. The girls didn’t seem to care. They allowed me to rest for a while to recover.
I woke up 2hours later it was 12pm. The girls had woke me up I felt much better. They had a bikini for me. They told me to take off my clothes and put it on and put my clothes under it. So I put it on and then I put my clothes back on. They told me we were going to the beach. (The country we’re in is England). Not the warmest of places to go to the beach. I was thinking they were going to make me swim. I was right. Claire, Arlene and Kelly all got into there bikini’s. It was a hot day and just warm enough to be warm in bikini’s. The beach was not a popular beach and we had it to ourselves to my relief. Arlene said “ Take off your clothes “. I took them off down to my bikini. Kelly opened arlene’s bag and pulled the packet of ice cubes out. She filled all the ice cubes into the bikini I was wearing. It was instantly freezing. And a bit of ice was stuck to my balls. The coldness was painful. Claire pumped up a Float. The type you lie on. Then she put it in the sea and walked in a little. Then she got on it because she was so light no water got in apart from her ankles which were wet from the start of the beach. Claire said “ Come here slave and push me out into the sea until I tell you to stop. I got in and started pushing. The ice cubes were very cold but the sea made it 10x worse. I was in pretty much agony of coldness. My teeth were chattering like made. I was only in up to my thighs at this point. I then got in fully and I was freezing. My feet went numb soon after I got in I pushed her quite a reasonable distance and she said to push her back. Back at the beach Arlene was filming this. When I got back I was shivering like mad. Arlene said “ Drop onto the ground and roll in the sand”. I obeyed and did so then got back up. As you might guess the sand stuck to me all over my body because I was wet. This was very uncomfortable. Then they took my bikini off for me. I was then forced to lay on my stomach. One of them then took a handful off sand and forced it up my ass. This was itchy and irritating. Arlene then flipped me over. She had the itching powder and poured the rest of the packet on my balls. Claire said “ You can itch as much as you want slave”. Kelly then took a photo. I started itching on my balls while they sunbathed. 1 hour later they finished sunbathing. My balls were red raw with cuts from me itching myself. Kelly said “ Don’t wash the sand off yourself just put your clothes on”. I did what I was told. Then I followed them to the taxi rank. When I was walking it was almost unbearable. The sand was irritating me and felt sore on my feet. The Sand in my ass was standing out above the sand in my body. But what I felt most off all was my balls. Every time I took one step my balls were agony the scratches were very painfull and sensitive. I then got in the taxi and went back to Arlene’s house. They were starting to push me to my limits.
To be continued…
Please give me some comments and your advice
Ill also take some Idea's if your willing to suggest :)
Thanks for reading

[Bored]

very good story i like it alot keep up the good work. but try to write more often now that you are back form your vacation.

[Tony12]

I'll Try to write as much as i can. But i mainly just write in my spare time which is every couple of days! So it isn't that long a wait...

[Random]

carry on its great and interesting

[molten man]

it is great. pleaze write more often!

[SlaveBoy]

i love u guys who write the story it make me not borning

[Tony12]

Will edit this into story later

[Tony12]

:) After we got back I was allowed a cold shower. I happily took the cold shower. It didn’t give me much pleasure but at least it washed the sand off. I was more used to the cold after today. After my freezing experience I thought I would get frostbite! After a 30minuet cold shower I put my clothes on and went downstairs. It was 6.30pm almost time for dinner I was absolutely starving. I was hungry in a weird way it made me feel sick in my stomach. It’s like when you miss breakfast in the morning. That’s what it feels like to me if I miss breakfast. Kelly said “We’re being generous to you tonight! You can have a full tin of baked beans”. I said “ Thanks Mistress’s”. They cooked the baked beans for 3mins in the microwave and then put it in the dog bowl. I eat my dinner very fast and I eat very much like a dog! I was to
pre-occupied eating that I didn’t notice what the girls were having. Yes I was THAT hungry.
So at 7pm they watched T.V. for a couple of hours. Then they decided they would have some fun with me. They told me to take off all my clothes. I obeyed and stripped off. Then they took me to the door and threw me out and locked the door. I panicked there might be people around and my face went ruby red! They told me I was to spend the night outside. I was practically scared to death.
So I decided I would go to the woods. That would be my best option. I headed to the woods and picked some leaves. It was almost pitch black so I couldn’t see much. I decided to lay down in a bush. Then I fell asleep.
Sorry this part is rather short.
But i was only finishing off the day!
From now on i'll take a few Idea's :)
See your idea put into the story!

[slave boy]

I like this it's getting more interesting by the story.

[2doctor]

keep it up one of the best storys i have ever read

[TrekBoy008]

Very good. Just curious, will the baked beans have any bearing on the rest of the story?

[molten man]

welll that was intresting as hell!

[Tony12]

Thanks for the support :)
Will continue soon!

[Charlieisme333]

This is so good. I absolutely love reading this story, because a lot of the ideas are very original.
(NOTE: Charlie is short for charlotte...I am a girl)

[molten man]

hey tony.. where are u man.. its been long since you wrote!!

[Tony12]

Emm Sorry I have been awefully busy...
I've still been looking about the site though :)
Noticed there was new getdare staff!
Will try to continue soon but i can't promise!

[Leblonk]

please hurry up this stories is good!!!!!!

[the Bean]

let him take his time leblonk. the longer it takes him the better it will be

[Tony12]

Ok at last im posting the 8th part. Sorry for the very long wait!
But thanks for your patience and i hope you enjoy it!

Morning I woke up to sniggering sounds near me. There was a couple of kids standing by a tree laughing at me. I went red. I was freezing cold from the night. My head was spinning quickly thinking what to do. I knew it would be a risk going back to Arlene’s knowing her parents would be back today. But after a moment of deciding it was my only option. I got up and sprinted through the streets. As I passed people either gasped, laughed or growled at me in disgust. The journey was fairly long I was foolish to sleep so far away. I passed some people about my age they were chavs and they started mocking me and one of them threw a bottle at me I jumped out of the way and ran past them. To my surprise and horror they started chasing me. I was mortified I couldn’t go to Arlene’s house with a gang of chavs chasing me I realised I’d have to get away from them first. I sprinted and jumped over someone’s fence into their garden the chavs climbed up and looked over then went away. I soon relised why they didn’t follow me. There was a huge dog approaching me. I was thinking it was just my luck! The dog ran at me and snapped at my leg. It missed and I vaulted over the other side of the fence. I ran the rest of the way to Arlene’s house.

When I arrived at Arlene’s house thankfully her parents weren’t back yet which was my one bit of luck! I knocked on the door. Arlene answered. Arlene said “Ha Slave you survived the night! My parents will be back at 4pm. You’ll go at 3pm I don’t want to take any risks”! I nodded in agreement. I went in and I was given a pair of briefs. I put them on and then Kelly and Claire saw me. Kelly went into the kitchen and came out with a large tub of worms. I was wondering what they where on earth they got it! But more importantly what were they going to do with it! Claire tugged the front of my briefs forward and Kelly then poured half the worms in. Then pulled the back of my briefs and poured the rest in. It made me feel sick I felt the warms going around. It was a weird sensation but to me it wasn’t pleasurable! Then They gave me more baked beans for breakfast. I eat breakfast at a steady pace. My hunger was distracted by the worms. I only got half the tin. They then poured the other half in with the worms. Which didn’t make things much better! The beans were in tomato sauce and that was itchy. Claire said “ your not to touch under your briefs if you do you will be punished”. The itch was pretty much unbearable and the worms made me feel sick and disgusted. But still I dealt with it as best as I could. When I was finished breakfast Kelly took me outside. Claire and Arlene were standing with a hose. They told me to lay on the grass and keep rolling back and forwards. I obeyed and when I started rolling they hosed me. The water was freezing and the beans and worms where crushing! The worms were moving about like mad. I felt very sickened. The girls were of course laughing at me.

In the afternoon I was allowed to take the briefs off and put on the thong. They took out a packet off pins and scattered them all over the floor. Arlene told me to lie on them. I was dreading doing it. But I felt I had to obey so I did. I lay down the pins went from my bum to the top of my back. In Pins sunk into me a bit as they were spaced. I couldn’t help giving a whimper and a tear as the sunk into me. I was then told to stand up. I stood up and most of the pins fell off me. But some remained. Arlene then picked the pins out one by one. Being careful to inflict as much pain as possible removing. I was bleeding a bit out the back. The girls didn’t care though and left me. I was then sent up to Arlene’s room and Claire read a book while watching me. I was told just to lie until they were ready for my next task. I was dreading when I was going to be told what I was to do…

Please leave me some comments on what you think about the story or any idea's etc...

[Leblonk]

that was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Linia]

good story I'll happily await another chapter.

[Tony12]

Thanks for your continues support guys and i hope to continue soon!

[profoundslave]

man u rock...keep it up.....u r very creative man...cant w8 for the next part...and pls try not to put cliff hangers man the w8 is not bearable:P

[animal]

I am looking forward to your next part tomorow it was very good:D

[rachel_daring]

dis is 1 of the best storys i have read

[Tony12]

Hope you enjoy this part as much as the others
Arlene and Kelly came up soon after. Kelly said “ This is your very last few
tasks. We will cut Tuesday to Friday you only have to be our slave for the rest of today”. I looked in astonishment and Happiness I was dreading being they’re slave in school. So this was a great relief for me. Arlene said “we’re not going easy on you until then with a grin”.
I was took downstairs, Claire handcuffed my hands behind my back. I was told to take my thong off. Which I of course did. They had a tub of peppers they rubbed it all over my body. It burned instantly. I saw how cruel and sadistic the girls were from actually enjoying seeing me suffer. The got a packet of itching powder and rubbed it on me. Which combined the burning and itching together it was hell! The girls then stuck a huge dildo up my ass. It was very uncomfortable and painful with the pepper and itching powder. Claire then scratched all over my balls making them bleed. I was almost crying from the pain. They got out a permanent marker and wrote slut across my chest. Then they got out a shaver and shaved my hair off so I was badly. I was in shock! What would I tell my parents? This made me angry but not at the very moment I was so distracted with the pain and the itchiness!
After this the girls showed me one bit of decency they gave me all the pictures and video they took. They said I did well and I was the most obedient boy they had ever had. Which then made me not feel alone… I feel sorry for all the other boys they did this to. As I have been there slave as well. What do you know maybe next it could be you!

Thanks for reading. I'm thinking about making a revenge story as a followup as this. If 10people give me comment that they want a followup story then i'll write one if not well i'll leave it from there!

Oh and sorry final part isn't very long!!

[Bored]

you should write a follow up, just a suggestion, him getting back at them during school days.

[Tony12]

Yeah... I'm thinking about that Did any of you guys like the last part though?

[Leblonk]

yeah it was ok. but you should realy make him get them back. start anothere story and have him get some bad pics or somthing then mmake them be his slaves for a month! that would make for a good long story

[countrygal25]

I liked it i would love to see a follow up.

[jyINTER]

definitely ... a revenge story wud make an awesome follow up to this

[the Bean]

he has got a revenge story people, its right at the top of the story list.

[Tony12]

:p I hope you enjoyed this story for the revenge Story
this is the link
http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=3760
I would appreciate rep if anyone wants to give it for the story :p

[molten man]

a revenge story would be great!!

[grab_my_underware]

even if you dont get 0 replies, please do it!!
you are such a good writer, i like failed my english class