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Officelover
01-01-2009, 06:55 PM
This story is a continuation of the story http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=16441 (Pam's Story)

Recap: Pam has been blackmailed into slavery by Daniel, a cruel sadist. After a grueling two weeks of torture, training, and changing opinions, Pam has finally truly submitted. She is allowed to leave Dan's house, and live her normal life. After a sudden burst of sadness, she finds new hope, and her life seems to be better. This is the twighlight of the metaphorical day of the Story (has nothing to do with zones or vampires:)). Now, the night grows darkeras she pluges into the cold... Well, I won't give it all away.

PART 1

Pam is happy, for once after a long time. She'll see her parents, she realized that she isn't a bad person, and she is temporarily rid of that evil Daniel. She shudders at the thought of his face, slowly breaking out into a menacing grin.

It is 11:30, and Pam says to herself, "Just a couple more minutes."

Finally, two people burst into the house.

"Mommy! Daddy!" She cried, and ran over to them. She tackled them with a huge hug, and they laughed. "Honey, honey, stop..." her mother, Elmira, says laughingly.

This moment was so pure that it took a couple of seconds for it to be jostled away. "Why haven't you called? We've been worried sick!" asked her father harshly.

"Um..." said Pam, "The phone was down for a while."

Her mom seemed convinced, but not her father. "Does it wok now?"

"Yeah," guessed Pam, "It's fine now. Someone came in to fix it."

"Who?"

"Some repairman. Didn't catch the name. Awfully nice, didn't charge me a cent."

She breathed a sigh of relief when he dropped the subject. "So, how was Italy?" asked Pam, sincerely interested in their trip.

Her mother gushed, "It was wonderful, right Hank!"

"Yes." He simply stated.

"How were things here? Any problems, apart from the telephone?" asked her mom.

"Great!" Pam lied, "There weren't any problems at all. I caught up on some reading, excersized, and wrote some more in my book." (Pam was trying to write a novel.)

"That's great, sweetie." said her mother, "I hope you ate right though."

"Mom!"

"What? It's important to keep a healthy, balanced diet. Isn't that right, Hank?"

"Mmmm?" he mumbled, "Oh yes. Listen to your mother. Whatever it is that she said."

"You could stand to lose some weight youself!" she chided.

"Mom, Dad," Pam started.

"What is it, angel?"

"I love you."

Her father said, "And we love you too."

Pam meant it; when she was near them, she forgot all about her miserable last two weeks. In fact, she even forgot about the chastity belt that she wore.

The rest of the night they spent talking, laughing, playing board games.

That was the last day before she was to go to school again.

Pam went to bed that night, thinking happy thoughts. It was like a glurge, but she felt a spiritual joy that only exists in family. Pam didn't think about what was going to happen tomorrow.

She just blinked her eyes, fell asleep, and dreamed...

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Sorry everyone! That doesn't seem like something belonging in Mature Sections, I know. That was just an intro. It was, and will be, the single sappiest peice of writing I've ever posted on getDare.

Apart from that, though, how was it?

Comments please!

Naigan
01-01-2009, 07:22 PM
To be honest there's not really to much to comment on, but as an introduction it's good.

Officelover
01-01-2009, 07:24 PM
I know. It's boring. It's sappy. It's an introduction. Wait till she get's to school; it gets better.

ty_la
01-01-2009, 08:57 PM
Very nice, introductions are nessecary. I say it's just the ride up to the top of the rollercoaster, everyone hang on :P .

nightmare09
01-02-2009, 09:45 AM
its great so far go on

Officelover
01-02-2009, 02:55 PM
It may be darkest before the dawn, but it's also the most beautiful before the night.
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Pam woke up, and got dressed. She ate a quick breakfest, brushed her teeth, and got ready to go to school. Pam's morning started out uneventfully.

She got on the yellow school bus and rode to her high school, Sherman High. The ride was full of buzzing about the vacation. Pam listened to her friend Laura talk about her trip to Mexico. When Laura asked her what she had done over break, Pam had no answer.

Pam was not too popular. She was not a cheerleader, though she could have been. She was involved in the Art Elective at her school, and had a number of good riends there. Pam mostly got good grades.

Pam rode laughing and talking, but part of her wondered how she confront Daniel today. She remembered his commandment, "You'll act as if I'm your boyfriend."

She wondered what tht meant.

As she stepped out of the bus she decided to forget about it, and to just focus on classes.

***********

Lunchtime came with a flourish of hunger. The cafeteria line moved like a well oiled machine, but the food just seemed greasy.

Pam sat down at the table that was "hers". It was where the Art Elective always sat. In it was Laura, and her friends Samantha, Josie, Abby, Tom, Luke, and Martha.

They ate and talked. Although she liked her classes, this was the best part of her day. It seemed perfect to Pam. She hadn't seen Daniel all day. Maybe he was sick...

Then the unthinkable happened. Daniel walked down the lunch aisle. Lo and behold, he sat down at Pam's table. He said, "Hi Pam! Hey I missed you last night. You were supposed to be online."

"Crap! I forgot!" thought Pam.

"I think you owe me a kiss." He said jokingly. With that, he leaned over and gave her a good long, pssionate kiss. She was disgusted, but knew better than to resist.

Pam eyed the look in her classmates' faces. Sheer shock, and disbelief.

"Just remember to be online tonight." He said. Then he turned to her friends, "Do you mind? This is kind of private."

"I love you, honey." She said, as the words spilled off her tounge like mollases. This was disgsting. This was wrong. Her classmates would have tons of qestions...

"Hey, I have a present for you." He pulled out a medium red and white gift-wrapped package.

Pam wanted to run away, hide her face in a paper bag, and hide away forever.

Daniel said, "Okay I'm going to go now, Pammy. Remember, be on at 11:00." He walked away, back to his table where he ate alone.

Pam could tell that her classmates were freaked out. Mind-blown. Shocked. Astonished.

Laura broke the ice. "What the hell was that about?"

As much as Pam hated to say it, she did anyways. "We're... We're dating."

Martha said, "Yeah we can see that."

"I think it's fine," said Luke, "if Pam wants to evil weirdo freaks who hate us then okay."

It was true. Daniel was a mean person. He often bulied them, and clearly loathed their artistic nature.

"It's not okay. Pam why do you like him?" Samantha asked.

"Er, um, um..."

"Why?" pressured Abby.

"Um, well," answered Pam, "He can be sweet. It's kind of hard to explain."

"Sweet?" asked Tom, "In middle school he made my life a living hell."

"You're telling me." mumbled Pam.

Josie asked, "What was that?"

Pam said, "Well, I'll let you in on a little secret."

Strangely, there is a natural law that when someone talks about how they'll share a secret, everyone leans in. This happens even when people can not hear the people discusing the secret. And this happened with Pam and her friends.

"I don't like him, either. Dating him, it's, it's just somehig have to do."

"Why?" asked Laura, concerned.

"Well - I'd rather not get int it."

The subject changed.

Tom asked, "What did you get?"

Pa opened the package, and pulled out a webcam.

"What's that for?" asked Josie.

"I - I don't know." said Pam.

With that, the lunch bell rang.

kitkat
01-02-2009, 03:18 PM
Awesome, stories looking good, although it's weird that they're back at school. Puts me on edge more I guess.

molten man
01-02-2009, 04:22 PM
Picked up from just where u left it!! Nice. Keep it going!!!

nightmare09
01-02-2009, 05:56 PM
go on i want to know what happeneds next

ty_la
01-02-2009, 07:34 PM
Very nice detail, looking forward to the next addition :)

Officelover
01-03-2009, 02:26 PM
Pam lay down in her bed at 10:30. She waited to see the light in her parents room down the hall click off. Eventually, it did. Pam was ready to go online. She closed her door, and turned the volume on her computer all the way down. She started it up, and turned on the Internet. Then she went to her account. Daniel was already there. They began to chat:

Pamela7: Hello, master.

DHuge19: You're early, slut.

Pamela7: Yes. Are you angry?

DHuge19: No. I think, before we should decide on something. You have the webcam I gave you?

Pamela7: Yes.

DHuge19: Plug it in. But I don't think we should talk on them. I think all orders and questions should be done by text. So that you don't wake up your parents.

(She plugged it in)

Pamela7: Thank you, master.

DHuge19: You're welcome. Now, to buisness. You were stupid enough to not go on yesterday; first is your door lockable?

Pamela7: Yes.

DHuge19: Lock it.

Pamela7: Won't that raise suspicion?

DHuge19: Everyone is asleep, slut. Do it.

(Pam locked the door)

DHuge19: Now, you realize, that you didn't go on yesterday.

Pamela7: Yes, master.

DHuge19: Well you'll be punished for that. First, go get six cups; 5 of them filled w/ water.

Pamela7: What if I wake my parents up?

DHuge19: Then it's your own fault.

Pam unlocked the door, silently opened it, and went to the kitchen. She got two cups each filled with water. Then she came back to her bedroom, one in each hand, and placed it on the desk.

She did this two more times.

DHuge19: I see you've got them all. Good. Re-lock the door.

(Pam didn't need to be told again.)

DHuge19: Are you thirsty? Hope so, cause you're going to drink all five cups of water.

Pam downed the first two easily. But soon it became hard to drink. She forced herself, and managed to drink all of them.

DHuge19: Strip, slut!

Pam delicately removed her nightgown, and took off her underwear. Pam's cheeks turned red, even tough this was far from the first time Daniel had seen her naked.

DHuge19: Okay, slut. Do some jumping jacks. Don't stop till I tell you to.

Pam moved the computer so it tilted to the free space of her room. Pam was in pretty good shape, but she was still somewhat tired from her swim practice that day. Pam shuddered at the memory of swim practice.

After about three minutes, every bone in her body ached. Suddenly she saw a new message on the screen. She stopped, and went over to the screen, to read the new message. It said:

DHuge19: I didn't say you could stop.

Pam inwardly cursed herself and Daniel for this, and went back to doing the jumping jacks. It was tiring and treacherous, but Pam knew better than to stop, when she saw a new message.

Only when she saw a second message, did Pam stop. The two read:

DHuge19: You can stop now.

DHuge19: I said you can stop now!

Pam wrote back:

Pamela7: Was that my punishment, master?

DHuge19: Not at all! There is still a lot left.

Pamela7: Like what?

DHuge19: You ask too many questions. My turn to ask some. How do you feel right now?

Pamela7: Tired.

DHuge19: Lol. BTW, why don't you wear a bra to sleep?

Pamela7: Um, I don't know.

DHuge19: Well, I think you will. But from now on, no shirt.

Pamela7: Yes master.

DHuge19: Anyways, do you have to got the bathroom?

Pamela7: Yeah. From all that water.

DHuge19:That's what that sixth cup is for.

Pamela7: What?

DHuge19: You understood me. Piss in the cup!

Pam still remembered that party, in whch she had to masturbate in the wine glass. This should be much easier.

She put the cup btween her legs, right below the tiny hole in her chastity belt for her urine to escape. She began to piss.

DHuge19: Good. Now dset it aside. What in this room will easily fit in your ass?

Pamela7: Umm... Maybe some pens.

DHuge19: No butt plugs? too bad. Anyways, guess what I'm going to ask you to do?

Pamela7: Put it up my ass?

DHuge19: The slut catches on fast. Do it, and then shake your ass on cam.

Pam took some pens that didn't work anymore, and stuck them up her ass. It hurt! Well, it didn't hurt as much as Pam expected to, but it did feel uncomfortable. She shook it on cam, with much humiliation.

DHuge19: Good! Now, put your nightgown back on. Go to bed, right away.

Pamela7: Okay. How long do you want me to leave these pens in for?

DHuge19: All night. Good night.

Pamela7: Good night, master.

DHuge19: Wait! You forgot your midnight snack! Well, more of a midnight drink. Drink the piss!

Pam took the the glass in her hands, and, revolted, held it up to her lips. She drank it with a pang of disgust.

She then went to bed. Daniel did not.

He had big plans to think about; big plans involving Pam. He had always realized his sadistic nature. But, he was not a good person. In true BDSM, a master and a slave can eachbe good people; who just have a kink for this sort of thing. Well, that's not how Dan felt. He was a true egotist, and hated pretty much everyone but himself.

He had a lot to think about.

nightmare09
01-03-2009, 02:48 PM
go on please its getting good

molten man
01-03-2009, 04:43 PM
go on please its getting good

This is getting awesome!!

Officelover
01-04-2009, 06:03 AM
For the next three days, Daniel made Pam go on every day at eleven. He would give her the same routine, tell her to close and lock the door, and then force her into strange positions or difficult physical challenges.

Miraculously, Pam's parents never heard a thing.

On this fifth day, all went as usual. Pam got on at 11:00, closed and locked the door, turned on the webcam, and began to chat.

Pamela7: Hello, Master.

DHuge19: Hello, slut.

Pamela7: I have already locked the door.

DHuge19: Good. You're learning.

Pamela7: Painstakingly.

DHuge19: Lol. Okay, I've sent you an e-mail with a link. Follow it.

Pam went to check her e-mail and saw a link. At the top of te page, it said, "Pam - Click on this link. I think you'll enjoy it; or rather, you would enjoy it. Remember, you have to watch."

Pam clicked on it; it was a link to a porn video. She had never seen pornography before. She watched, and the more she watched the more turned on she was.

Pam wanted to masturbate right now. She wantd to cum. Her hand subconciously moved to her clit, only to touch cold metal. Her chastity belt!

She wrote to Dan:

Pamela7: Can I stop watching now?

DHuge19: Why? I thought you would like it.

Pamela7: That's the problem! Because of the chastity belt I can't cum.

DHuge19: Didn't you think that was the intent? Wow, you are a stupid cunt. Now then, keep watching.

It was long; she watched for about two hours until it finished. By the end, she was so turned on that she tried fingering hersefl with the belt on, but it was no use.

DHuge19: Is it over?

Pamela7: Yes, master.

DHuge19:Good. Well you need your sleep; but before you go, I have something to tell you. This is the last time that you'll have to come on cam for me. I will, from time to time, send you "special" instructions.

Pamela7: Thank you master.

DHuge19: You're welcome. Now, there is a catch.

Pamela7: What's that?

DHuge19: You'll always sleep naked form now on. Can you handle that?

Pamela7: Yes, master.

DHuge19: Good night, slave.

Pamela7: Good night, master.

This time, they both went to sleep.

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Sorry it as short and kind of boring, but this is what happens when two charcters aen't always together.

Comments please!

kitkat
01-04-2009, 07:08 AM
To tell the truth I'm still a little confused about the chastity belt thing, she wears it to swimming practice? And if she's wearing it doesn't that mean shes not naked when she goes to sleep?

It's still good, I also don't really see where it's going. You had so many great cliffhangers in the last part.

nightmare09
01-04-2009, 12:08 PM
i agree but please go on

Justamale
01-04-2009, 12:26 PM
nice story very intresting

Officelover
01-04-2009, 02:32 PM
To tell the truth I'm still a little confused about the chastity belt thing, she wears it to swimming practice? And if she's wearing it doesn't that mean shes not naked when she goes to sleep?

I know it's a stretch. But when he said that she could sleep naked that meant that someone could see a) 'other' parts of her b) the belt. And about swim practice, well, it could be a water-proof, minimlaist chastity belt:o. Okay I'm "Gasping for air" (:)) here. You just have to have some suspension of disbelief.

It's still good, I also don't really see where it's going. You had so many great cliffhangers in the last part.

Thank you, and btw, I'm not giving away all the details:D

nightmare09
01-04-2009, 02:51 PM
go on please go on

ty_la
01-04-2009, 03:23 PM
Very nice, can't really suggest much for the future since it's so indefinite at this point :P but i'll sure keep reading!

molten man
01-04-2009, 04:33 PM
To tell the truth I'm still a little confused about the chastity belt thing, she wears it to swimming practice? And if she's wearing it doesn't that mean shes not naked when she goes to sleep?

It's still good, I also don't really see where it's going. You had so many great cliffhangers in the last part.

such small things can and should be ignored!!

kitkat
01-05-2009, 06:25 AM
Thanks, it was just starting to bug me, I love this story, at the moment I'm only logging onto getdare just to check for updates in it.

I don't know much if anything about chastity belts and wanted to know if there was something I didn't understand. Molten Man, I'm sorry, I didn't know if it was something I should ignore or if it was something I didn't understand about the story. My knowledge of chastity belts pretty much ends at what I saw in a Robin Hood movie.

I think its a fantastic story and this is the only thing I've not really gotten.

Can't wait for the next installment.

nightmare09
01-05-2009, 02:39 PM
please go on i like it

Officelover
01-05-2009, 03:15 PM
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Daniel Huge to you three hours ago, at 4:47, on Monday, May 6, 2009.

Dear Slave,

How are you? I told you a while ago that I would be sending you e-mails with your tasks? Well, here is your first one: Operation Swim.

As I know, you are on the swim team at the community center. Good. Hopefully, it keeps you in shape. I realized that I have a friend on the opposing team in Friday's meet.

What you will do is this: go on Friday as always. In the changing room, I have rented a locker. At locker 42 I have placed a towel (you will use it), a two peice swim suit (I don't care, you will wear it), and a box. It will have a lock on it. Find the key in the locker. Then, open the box. Inside you will see another key; the key to your chastity belt.

It is up to you to get your parents to let you sleep over with this girl; Julie. She'll have some 'fun' with you.

Anyways, take off the chastity belt. Put it and the key to it in the box. Place the key on top of the box. Don't try any funny buisness here; if I see that you've doen somethig to make a duplicate of the key, or something like that, I'l release all the photos. I'll also do that if you don't sleep over with Julie.

At the swim meet, you will 'accidentally' lose your top in the water. Don't worry; I'll be in the audience, cheering you on. You'll go back to the room, and take a long shower. Brings back memories, doesn't it?

Julie will meet you in the locker room. You'll take her to your parents, and let her drive you to her house. Lie to your parents in any way.

Have fun!

Master Daniel
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Sorry, I'll post more soon. I just made this one short because of the fact that it's just an e-mail. You'll have to wait for more:)...

ty_la
01-05-2009, 03:59 PM
Ah, curse you and these god damn cliffhangers! :P Better get another addition ASAP x]

molten man
01-05-2009, 04:28 PM
cant wait for the next part!!

Officelover
01-06-2009, 05:34 AM
"Please, Mom! I know this girl, Julie!" pleaded Pam

Her mother interogated, "Then why have I never met her or heard of her before?"

"I told you already," Pam explained, "She was at my camp two years ago. Then she moved away, and I forgot about her. Now, she moved back nearer here, and she remembered me. So she called, and we talked. We found out that we had a swim meet together, and agreed to sleep over at her house. What's so hard to believe about that?!"

"Only everything about it! I don't know her; I don't think you even know her! What's her last name?"

"Uhhh... Andrews?"

"Right. Julie Andrews. Come on, Pam. I had a whole night planned for us here."

Pam used her last resort; the puppy dog eyes. She glanced at her mother in a way that said, "Please, mommy. I really need this."

"No, I can't." stuttered her mother.

"Please, mom." Whispered Pam.

"Fine." Sighed her mother.

"Thank you!" cheered Pam.

She walked away and said to herself, "I did not think that would work."

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The swim meet wasn't til five, and most people arrived at 4:30 or so, so Pam arrived a half hour earlier. She found locker 42. She opened it, and saw a little post it note that said, "Smile! You're on camera!"

She took out the swim suit and the towel. The suit was skimpy. She couldn't wear this to a swim meet!

She knew that she had no choice, so she decided to wear it. But first, muttered Pam, I have to get this chastity belt off.

She found the box. Locked. But where was the key (not the the key to the belt, the key to open the box that holds the ket to the belt.:))?

She saw a string, and pulled it, revealing a small brass key. She took it, and undid the lock. She pulled off the top anxiously, and inside all there was a small silver key.

She undid the lock in the back, and took off the belt gladly. She knew that she would obviously have to put it back on soon, but she was glad to have it off for a bit. It was an uncomfortable thing.

Now, Pam put on the swim suit, took the towel, and headed for the pool...

Officelover
01-07-2009, 05:22 AM
Pam entered the pool room, and saw the audience. Lo and behold, who was in the corner, sipping a soda? Daniel. He gave a little wave. Soon a girl with short black hair, and a black swim suit came out of the door. She talked to Dan.

Pam walked over. Her parents weren't there yet, so she could associate freely with them.

"Pam, this is the girl I was telling you about." said Daniel, with no greeting.

"Hello, Pam." said Julie.

"Hi!" greeted Pam.

Daniel said, "You girls better get in the pool. And, uh Pam, remember to do my 'assignment'."

Julie and Pam dove into the pool. Within a couple minutes, the meet was ready to begin.

After a couple laps, Pam thought to herself, "Well, I might as well get this over with now."She jerked her arms akwardly, and soon enough, her top began to slip off.

Her tits were in full view, but Pam was thankful that not many people would be able to tell unless they were specifically looking. Daniel, she knew, did see.

She decided to swim on, and retrieve the top after her next lap. She swam back to the other end of the pool. Now she turned and tried to get the top back. Unfortunately, do to a miscalculation in weight, the top was sinking.

"Fuck!" Thought Pam. She remembered that the top seemed heavy. There must have been something stitched into the lining.

It was the deep end, so it would be hard to go get it. It was sinking, and certainly wouldn't float anytime soon. She had two options.

She could either not get it until later, but then the top would be at the bottom of the pool. Or, she could get it now, and cause attention.

She decided to dive. She forced herself down with all her might, but it was no use. There was far too much pressure. Uh-oh. She was popping back up!

She surfaced, topless, exhausted, in the middle of a swim meet, with everyone watching. As you coukld tell she was humiliated. People saw her boobs, an dshe could here people taking pictures with a camera phone.

She swam on, cursing pools and cameraphones. They had gotten her into this mess, hadn't they? Well, now she was watery erself, as tears rolled down her cheeks, right back into the pool.

Pam was stopped by the refferee at the end of the pool, who quickly handed her a top. She thanked him, multiple times, and swam on. She realized that not only had she no chance of winnin this meet, but that she would probably quit the swim team.

She lost, and was in klast place. Unfortunately for Pam, Julie had won...

kitkat
01-07-2009, 07:09 AM
Wow, that was great!
I feel so sorry for her! Poor girl!

ty_la
01-07-2009, 02:02 PM
Wow, you really created a mood there! Very nice description. I can't wait for the sleepover :)

ps118jlg1
01-07-2009, 05:39 PM
this is very good. (*growl* cliffhanger!!!!)

Officelover
01-07-2009, 05:40 PM
Pam got out of the pool, defeated. She wore a mismatched gray top. She brushed past member of the audienc, and felt their sick smiles on her back as she walked away. She was not in the mood for anything to do with Daniel, but she knew that she had an obligation. She took her towel, and went to the locker room. She took a shower.

This wasn't too strange; in fact most other girls on her team did too. They were just not used to seeing Pam take one as well. They said nothing, Pam believed it was out of respect. Most of them liked her, and she liked most of them.

However, Pam knew that she could not come back here. This was one of the first parts of Pam's life that Daniel totally ruined.

Pam knew that she had to stay in the shower until Julie got there. Soon enough, Pam was all alone in the locker room. All of the other girls had already left, probably thinking, "Why is Pam still in the shower?!"

Soon enough, a smartly dressed Julie ambled into the room. She had a dominanant feel, but Pam seemed to like her. At least, Pam did not know Julie's plans.

"Hi, Pam," said Julie, "As Danny probably told you, you'll be coming to my place today."

"My- my clothes." Pam stuttered.

"Yes, put them on."

"The swimsuit and towel that Dan gave me-"

"Put it back in the locker. Locker 42, right." Answered (ha ha) Julie.

"The chastity belt, what should I"

"Taken care of." said Julie, "Let's go meet your folks, and be on our way."

Pam put on her clothes, and they exited the uncomfortable locker room. Outside near the pool, her parents stood in anticipation to meet this Julie, and to congratulate (and comfort) Pam.

"Sweetie!" cried Pam's mom, "Are you okay?"

"I'm fine." replied Pam, trying to be nonchalant.

"Really?" asked her father.

"Yes. Really. I'm good." Pam said, nervously, and anxious to change the subject.

"Hello, Mr. and Mrs. Jones."

"And this must be Julie." said Pam's mom, sounding more like the hostess of a party than the mother of one's friend, "Pam has told me so much about you! Isn't it great that you happened to move back here?"

"Yeah." said Julie.

"So girls," said Pam's father, "why don't you leave now som that you'll have extra time to catch up. Pam, are you staying one or two nights?"

Julie shot her a look that said, "Make the right choice, or else."

"Umm... Two nights would be god actually."

Pam's mom said, "All right. Well you girls have fun. Pam, you should call us tonight. Eat well. And don't do anything dangerous. Oh, and get enough sleep. Oh, and,"

She was cutt off. Pam's father said, "For God's sake, let them have some fun. You girls have a good time. Bye."

With that Pam's parents left, and Pam realized that she loved both of them terribly. But something else that was 'terrible' was about to happen.

Julie said, "Okay, Pam. Let's go to my car."

They went out to the parking lot, and entered Julie's cool new car.

They began to drive...

ty_la
01-07-2009, 07:06 PM
Two additions in one day! =] Very nice, the two nights thing was a good twist. You've still got me on edge for the sleepover x]

kitkat
01-08-2009, 03:03 AM
I'm really impressed, this story is abit different, while the last one was kind of scary to think of Pam doing all these things, this one is so full of emotion!
I'm looking forward to her getting away from her parents, so nervous and feeling so sorry for her though!

I love the way you just keep adding little bits in everywhere to make us feel sorry for her. This is the FIRST part of her life he's ruined? Makes it sounds like shes in for a tough time!

Just a question, this is set in America right? so if they've just had summer hols then graduation is about 5 months away?

Officelover
01-08-2009, 04:30 AM
Just a question, this is set in America right? so if they've just had summer hols then graduation is about 5 months away?

Yes, it's set in America. But she had just been on Spring Break, so she has about five, six weeks left of school.

Officelover
01-08-2009, 04:52 AM
Pam and Julie sped down the highway.

"So," asked Julie, "I assume you know what's going on?"

"I think so. You're going to act as my mistress, right?" answered Pam.

Julie said "Pretty much right. But, there will be some suprises. However, before we start, I just want to remind you that with me it's just a game. I know you're being blackmailed by Danny, but I am not going to do that. I just love control."

Pam felt that she almost liked this woman. It was as if she was being friendly.

"Why are you being so... amiable?"

"You want it some other way, sweetie?"

"No! I mean, no. It's just that, well never mind."

"Okay, Pam," said Julie, "here's what I'm planning on doing: for this ride I'll be your friend. But when we get to my house, you'll be my slave. If your nice and follow all my commands, then we should get along famously. If not, then you can expect repurcussions. But for now, let me ask you this, what's going on? What is new?"

Pam answered, "Not much. Do you still go to high school?"

"No, I'm in my second year of college. University of Connecticut. Why do you ask?"

"No reason. What are you majoring in?"

"Psychology. What's your favorite class?"

"Math."

"Ew. So, do you have any crushes at school."

"Not really. Well, there is this one boy in my Art elective, Luke. He's so kind and funny."

"I see. Are you dating him."

"No. No. I, I could never get enough courage to ask him out." Why was she confidng in Julie?

"You should date him."

Eager to change the subject, Pam asked, "How do you know Daniel?"

"Daniel; He used to be my neighbor. And my friend. Then, you know, his parents threw him out."

Memories started coming back to Pam. She remembered how Daniel took her to New York, where he met his Uncle Tom. Hadn't Tom said somethig about how Daniel had been kicked out?

"Why was he thrown out again?" asked Pam.

"Easy. He practiced BDSM with me."

"Really?! Wou;dn't that make you a slave..."

"Nah, I'm a switch. It got me into a lot of trouble too."

"I'm so sorry."

"It's fine."

"Soooo... do you have any crushes on boys?"

"No," said Julie as she pulled into the driveway of a small house, "I'm a lesbian."

To Be Continued. (Soon)

ps118jlg1
01-08-2009, 05:18 AM
Cliffhangers are NOT my friend. :( hahaha

ty_la
01-08-2009, 09:48 AM
Wow, I must say OL (If i may use that time-saver :P) For an addition that didn't really do much, that was amazing! Very nice detail, I feel more and more like im reading something that i paid for! :P

molten man
01-09-2009, 05:01 PM
Way to good. Keep it going!!

Officelover
01-09-2009, 08:24 PM
Pam and Julie got out of the car. There was a silence. Pam was still a sweet girl; nothing anyone did could change that. She didn't want to offend Julie.

But then again, Julie was a lesbian. And her temporary dom. And they were alone. For two nights. Far away from her parents and their protection. And she had removed her chastity belt. Yikes.

They entered the house, and Julie said, "From this point on, you will not know me as Julie, and I will not know you as Pam. I will cll you 'slave' or 'slut' or something like that. You will call me "Mistress Leia"."

"Why mistress Leia? Why not mistress Julie?" Pam asked.

Julie, oops, 'Mistress Leia' smiled a sickly sweet smile, and said, "Because I said so." (This is the Bare Asseration Fallacy, key word: Bare:) (sorry, I couldn't resist))

"Yes, mistress Leia." obeyed Pam.

"Good, slave. Now, I want you to know someting. Your chastity belt was lost for a reason. You'll see in good time slut, just what's going to happen. But I'm here to release your inner whore."

"But," objected Pam.

"Silence!" Boomed Julie, "You will not interrupt. You will not disobey. You are my little slut for the next two days to do what I want you to. My dear friend, and your master, Daniel, signed you over to me for a couple days. I hear you are a good little slave. I don't want to ruin your reputation, now do I?"

"No, ma'am."

"Now, I will show you to you quarters."

Julie led Pam down a flight of stairs. "Why are these quarters or dungeons or whatever in the basement? Why are they never in the attic?" Thought Pam.

Pam entered a room painted pich black. There was a dim flourescent light that shone upon six cabinets.

Julie said, "These cabinets are for only me to open. Inside there are tools for pleasure, tools for pain. I suppose I can give you a little tour."

Julie walked to the first cabinet, and opened it up. There were a glut of dildos. Many shapes and forms, many diferent functions and features.

The second cabinet had vibrators in it.

The third cabinet had whips and floggers.

The fourth cabinet had butt plugs.

The fifth had paddles.

The sixth had miscelaneous gear.

This was far to extensive. It seemed to Pam that Julie must have gotten these over years, and years. So many savings must have gone to purchasing all this stuff.

"Shall we try some of this out?" asked Julie...

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I apologize for how mind-numbingly boring this part, and last part must be. I am, of course, leading up to something. Don't worry.

Please keep reading, and comments are always allowed, nay encouraged.

nightmare09
01-09-2009, 08:49 PM
go on i like this please go on

kitkat
01-09-2009, 11:34 PM
Just when you think there couldn't be much she hasn't done she's made to hang out with a dominant lesbian, I think this could be really interesting!
She seems really different to any other dom Pams had so far.

Officelover
01-12-2009, 05:32 AM
I am so sorry I took so long posting. :o

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"Shall we try some of these out?" asked Julie, "I see that slutty look in your eyes. You think that maybe you can use one of these sex toys. Well, if you are going to, you'll have to earn it."

The last cabinet was filled with all sorts of miscelleneous things. First, Julie pulled out two nipple clamps. "Sit." she ordered with a certain level of raw authority.

She removed Pam's shirt, and pulled off her bra. Then she put the clamps on Pam's tits. Instantaneously, they hurt. They burned. Pam just wanted to take them off. Immediately.

Then, Julie said, "Now, bitch, in order for you to get something good or pleasurable in this house, you will have to do something good for me. Now, I command you to eat me out. If you do a good job, maybe I'll be nice."

Julie stripped off her clothes, and Pam, though disgusted by the thought knew that she had to do it. She knew that at any minute Daniel or Julie could release pictures of her and her life would be ruined.

She leaned forward, and put her lips on Julies pussy. She began to eat her out, using varied techniques.

Very soon, Julie's pussy became very wet. Pam thought that Julie was purposely delaying orgasm so that Pam could take a longer time. Eventually, Julie finally came, and she moaned with pleasure.

"You are done." said Julie.

"Thank you, Mistress Leia."

"You've done a superb job."

Pam disn't take that as a a compliment, but nevertheless she politely replied, "Thank you so much, mistress."

"I might just give you a reward."

Pam's thoughts were elsewhere. This was her second time giving a woman oral. She had done it once before, the third day she had been Daniel's slave, actually. She hated doing it.

"Slave! Pay attention!" Julie had in her hands a small spherical object. "Take off your pants, and put this deep in your pussy, slave."

"Yes, ma'am."

She took it in her hand, and put it in. Then, Julie held out a roll of plastic wrap. "Put this all around your vagina so that none of it is uncovered."

She did so, and taped it down. Almost instatntly, a huge HUGE amount of pulsations. Greater than anything she'd ever felt before. A shock of pleasure rushed through Pam's senses. Within moments her pussy became wet, but this time all the juices were trapped in the wrap. That only added to her horniness.

After a couple of minutes, Pam had cum twice. It was pleasurable, but she was starting to get tired. "Um, mistress," she asked, "Can we stop now?"

"We will stop," answered Pam, "When I tell you to stop."

Soon, it became more a chore than a privelege. After fourty five minutes of constant vibrations, Pam's pussy was sore. Then, they stopped.

"Stand over this bowl, slut."

She did, and then "Take off that plastic wrap.

She did and all her jusices fell into the bowl.

It was already late. Julie said, "I'm going to leave you hear all night. If you get thirsty, I believe you poured yourself a drink..."

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Okay, short post I know. Sorry!

ty_la
01-12-2009, 02:02 PM
Short, yes. But very good :) hope you post more tonight or tomorow!

nightmare09
01-12-2009, 03:11 PM
go on please i want to hear more

CheshireCat_13
01-12-2009, 03:39 PM
A good installment, but I think you meant:

"We will stop," answered Julie, "When I tell you to stop."

ps118jlg1
01-12-2009, 06:18 PM
this is still very good. keep it up.

Officelover
01-13-2009, 05:34 PM
Pam lay down on the hard concrete floor. She was cold, naked, and uncofortable. To add to the problem, she was thirsty. She did, however, not drink the 'drink' in the bowl.

Pam was conflicted. On one hand she was horrifed and degraded by what she had just done. On the other hand, part of her was turned on.

On one hand, she was afraid. On the other, she was anxious to see what would happen.

On one hand, she felt guilty that she had been acting like a slut and enjoying some of this. On the other hand, it felt good to know that her chastity belt was off for a while.

Pam was extremely conflicted.

And Pam fell asleep.

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"Well, well, I see we didn't drink up like we were ordered too." said Julie.

Pam's mouth was being held open. The bowl was held perched above her lips, and Julie tilted it. Slowly, Pam's own juices dribbled into her mouth. It tasted vulgar and repulsive, but Pam had to swallow.

"Now, slut," said Julie, "Your master told me to tell you about what you'll do here. It'll be a series of tests. And if you pass, then he'll know that you are a good little slave. If you fail, well we'll have to use the ultamite torture on you."

"What's that?"

"Don't ask questions! And just in case you're wondering, we'll release those photos of you. Hopefully, dear, it'll never have to come to that."

Pam nodded.

"Well," said Julie, "shall we get started on the first test?"

She disn't wait for a response. Julie explained, "This first test is a test of resistance. We're going to see if you possess the ability to resist making sound. Follow me."

First, Julie put her in some tight-fitting, wet panties. Then Pam's legs were tied together. Pam didn't really mind this. Julie pushed a butt plug up Pam's ass.

Then, she took some honey, and some syrup. She took some ice, and a great plethora of foods. All of them, Julie put inside Pam's panties.

Julie was a strong woman. She was physically fit, and lifted Pam up without far too much trouble. This would be easy, seeing as Pam was very thin.

There was a hook on the wall, and Julie hung Pam from said hook by the back of her panties. It was probably the most uncomfortable position Pam had ever been in.

With all those disgusting foods stirring around in her panties, and all the pain coming from her ass, this was quite painful.

As if that wasn't enough, Julie said, "It looks like I have myself a new dart board."

Pam was, for a moment, seriously worried that Julie was about to hit her with darts. Of course, if this happened, Pam would most likely die and we would have no more story.

Instead, Julie took an assortment of things. First she reached into a bucket. Pam wondered what was inside. She was about to pull something out, when she said, "Oh wait! I forgot to blindfold you!*

Julie stood on a chair, and took a black blindfold. Pam could no longer see. "That's better." said Julie.

Julie returned, and pulled something fro the bucket. Pam felt a cold splash of water on her arm.

Pam relaxed; Julie was only throwing water balloons. However, soon after that, another thing hit Pam. This time Pam thought it was an egg. Disgusted, Pam felt as the gooey yolk dripped down her body, suspendid in
air.

More eggs flew, and soon Pam felt as if she was a house on Halloween. She had been 'tricked'.

Next, Julie walked over, smiling. nowing that Pam didn't know what she was planning on doing. A chill then went through Pam's entire body. Julie was rubbing ice over her.

Pam wanted to ask her mistress to stop. She wanted to scream, and cry out in disgust, and laugh from all the tickling sensations. Pam was seriously annoyed.

Then, Julie said, breaking the silence, "After this, slut, we'll be done with this test."

Pam waited in anticipation. She expected an egg, a water balloon, ice. But what seriously alarmed her next was shock. Julie was whipping her.

Pam litterally bit her lip to keep from yelling out in agony. She went to her happiest spot. After 20 lashes, things only got worse.

Pam heard something bubble from a bottle. First she felt a cold liquid pour over her body. Within seconds, however, Pam realized something was terribly wrong.

Pam burned all over! Everywhere hurt! This was worse than the wipping. Pam wished the wipping would just start again, rather than whatever was causing this burning.

It had been, in fact, alcohol. (* Do not try this at home. This probably could kill you, but as this is a fictious story, I thought it valid to include it.)

After what seemed lik three days in hell, but had actually been more like three minutes, Julie said, "Okay. You can make noise now."

Pam let out the largest scream that had ever been heard in that neighborhood; or at least, it would have been if the room hadn't been sound-proofed for these exact circumstances.

Then she proceeded to cry, and say just how disgusting it felt to have all these things in her panties.

She was taken off the wall...

nightmare09
01-13-2009, 06:16 PM
go on please it alsome

ty_la
01-13-2009, 07:18 PM
niiice, for those of you who like wedgies / food dares. I'm sure you enjoyed that, I'm not a particular fan of those kinks, but i understand that your trying to toutch on everyones likes.

Officelover
01-14-2009, 05:03 AM
niiice, for those of you who like wedgies / food dares. I'm sure you enjoyed that, I'm not a particular fan of those kinks, but i understand that your trying to toutch on everyones likes.

Thank you. Yes, I am trying to touch on everyone's likes. I have already had bondage, absolute submission, animal roleplay, public nudity, pain, and many others. I try to do this in most of my stories.

I would post moe today, but I don't really have time.

Zeromus
01-14-2009, 06:10 AM
:D great story.
*Thought the title was wanking moon at first* o.O

Officelover
01-14-2009, 02:11 PM
Part 13 - Hope no one has triskaidekaphobia.

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Julie said, "Slave, you will lick your panties clean. Don't you dare complain; you're lucky to be getting food."

Pam peeled off her sticky, putrid panties. She raised them to her mouth and stuck out her tounge to lick the revolting mixture. This reminded her of one of the first things she did with Daniel.

Now, after she had finished, Julie said, "Okay. You are a mess. Don't you think we should clean you up? Do you know the best way to clean someone off?"

Pam replied, "A bath?"

Julie smiled a sweet smile, and said, "No." She then proceeded to Pam to the ground. She removed her skirt and panties, and said, "A shower."

With that she semi-squatted and began to piss on Pam. Pam stuggled, but found herself shockingly turned on by the warmth on her body.

Jule said, "Good. Now, I beleive it is time for your second test. The test you'e just had is the test of endurance. You have proved yourself able to endure anything for your master. Now it is the test of loyalty. Follow."

Pam didn't need to be told twice. She walked with Julie. Julie was walking far. She walked up stairs, and down starirs. To the kitchen, to the living room. Pam truly didn't understand where the test was.

But then, Julie opened the front door, and strolled outdoors. Pam suddenly realized, "Oh, this is the test." Then it dawned on her that she was supposed to follow Julie.

In the street.

With a butt plug up her ass.

Naked.

Pam knew what she had to do. She tried physically forciing herself; she wouldn't budge. She tried reasoning with herself; she knew no one around here.

In the end, it was simply one tiny bit of logic: Either people she doesn't know sees her naked, or everyone she does sees naked photos of her.

You can probably tell which one she chose.

Pam ran after Julie.

"Mistress Leia!!" called Pam, "Wait up!"

"Come on, slut. Move faster."

Pam followed quickly, trying to stay out of view. She envied every thread in her mistresses clothing. It took all she had, to keep from covering herself with her hands.

Julie led Pam into a bike path. Fortunately, no one was biking this time of day. It actually seemed beautiful. The path led deep intoa forest. Pam followed, and was mystified by the beauty surrounding her. All seemed serene. Suddenly, Julie started running, and screaming, "Pick up the pace, bitch!"

Pam was tired, and couldn't move nearly as fast as Julie. Nevertheless, she did as she was told. Julie ran with many twists, and turns.

It became harder and harder to see Julie, and gradually, Pam couldn't see her at all. Pam got a sickly feeling that something terible was going to happen. Pam called, "Mistress Leia? Mistress! Julire, where the hell are you?!" She panicked (worst thing to do) and couldn't help crying a bit.

She was lost. Idiot! She had been an idiot! She was lost! And then, she saw something that built up rage like no other inside her: a sign.

But not a normal sign. This was a simple message carved into a tree. It read, "Pam: Stay here. Or else. I'll be back soon. -M.L."

Pam was enraged. How could she have been so stupid! It had all been another cruel test. This was so annoying. However, Pam still could not keep from feeling lost without a mistress.

Pam sat down. She ran around the tree. She traced the etching in the tree probably 100 times. She sang. She danced a little.

But when she came right down to it, she was bored and scared. She was tired, and just wanted for stupid Julie to return. But she didn't.

After three hours of waiting by that tree, Julie still had not returned. It was now pitch black out. Pam was cold, an hungry, and tired, and scared, and worried, and kept getting bitten by bugs.

She was not having a very good time.

Pam started to think about leaving, trying to find her way out of the woods. But she disn't. She stayed, because she did, admit it or not, trust her mistress.

So she sat. And waited.

And all that waiting paid off. In another 15 minutes Pam saw a flickering light in the distance. It turned out to be - guess who - Julie.

Pam rushed to her arms, and hugged her. Julie said, "You are a good slut. I like that. I think you'll be a good slut for Daniel. Let's go home."

They left those woods, and Pam never returned.

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Question: You have two options:

Either that was the last test

Or there was one more.

I would appreciate an answer

ty_la
01-14-2009, 03:18 PM
Very niice, i'd prefer a longer read though D= . That took me less than two mintues, but i like where it's going :)

Officelover
01-14-2009, 03:19 PM
Very niice, i'd prefer a longer read though D= . That took me less than two mintues, but i like where it's going :)

I don't know if you noticed, but I wrote more. I had to go; I keep waiting for a call.

nightmare09
01-14-2009, 06:43 PM
go on please i want to hear more

Officelover
01-14-2009, 06:44 PM
Is no one going to post which version of the story they want?:(

nightmare09
01-14-2009, 06:45 PM
i know i wont i like the way u do it

CheshireCat_13
01-14-2009, 06:55 PM
I know that I'll enjoy one more test....but I want her to pass and not go back to Daniel....just stay with Julie. But, not my choice so, carry on!

Officelover
01-14-2009, 07:00 PM
Thank you. That's one vote for another test.

About her staying with Julie; I'm sorry to say it but I don't think I can really do that. It kind of conflicts with the rest of the plot. And also, we've already had a master try to keep Pam (remember James back in the first book?)

But keep reading, I think you'll like some of the twists coming up.

nightmare09
01-14-2009, 07:04 PM
i agree please carry on

ty_la
01-14-2009, 07:34 PM
Hm, I'd like to see another test, but im not sure what it might be on, but that just makes me want to find out :D My vote for one more :)

Officelover
01-16-2009, 07:59 AM
I've decided to add another test. Sorry for the wait!

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Julie and Pam walked back to Julie's house. It was dark. Very dark. As dark as Pam's life would soon be (Just to warn you). Pam was grateful for night fall, as no one could see her.

She saw the porch light of Julie's house, and Julie said, "Come slut. We still have one more test." Pam gulped, and followed Julie.

Julie said, "All right. Now, you've had two tests so far. The first one was a test of Endurance. You proved that you can endure your master. Then you had a test of loyalty, which you passed with flying colors. You have proven that you'll be lotal to your master. Now, you have a test, or rather tests, of obedience."

Julie produced a pen and a peice of paper. Printed on it were many instructions. "What's this for, Mistress Jul- uh, Leia?" Asked Pam.

Julie laugheds and said, "You'll find out."

Pam saw the peice of paper. "Start the test." said Mistress Leia. It was a list of instructions. Pam had seen these before. The second instruction was, "First read all the instructions." Pam knew that this was a trick. She knew the last one would be something that said, "Only do the first two instructions."

Pam read all the instructions, wrote her name at the top of the page, and handed it back to Julie. "Ah, I see you've passed my test. Good, now the next part will be slightly harder." She laughed an evil laugh. "You must write as your master tells you to write and talk as your master wants you to talk. And usually, he'll want you to tell the truth. Follow."

Pam followed her into a room that Pam had never been in before. It had a machine in it.

"This machine," explained Julie while pointing to the machine, "will do something that might shock you. Ha ha, I love puns. Anyways, you don't want to have it hurt you."

She hooked Pam up to the machine, and clamped her breasts, and other parts of her skin into some clamps attached to wires.

"Truth is beauty," quoted Julie, "and beauty is truth. I'll now ask you some questions. You will answer truthfully, and if I think you've lied on one, I will not hesitate to punish you. First, how many times have you ever had sex?"

"Pam answered, embarrased, "Only once."

"You expect me to believe that a slut like you has only fucked once? You'll be punished for that!"

She pushed a large red button, and Pam felt a terrible shock. It hurt, it hurt, and Pam felt like she was burning. She screamed from agony.

"And it will only get worse, as we progress!" warned Julie.

It is a popular and incredibly accurate fact that there is one universal idea in every culture around the world, and even, possibly, around the universe, that large red buttons can only mean one thing: danger. And Pam was in danger. After every shock, it would only get worse. Pam was truly worried.

Julie asked her such questions as, "What is your fantasy?" and "What is the slutties thing you've ever done." After a total of ten questions, Pam had been shocked nine times. And she hated it.

"Well, you did, I suppose pass. At least you answered one question right. And you didn't get up to the tenth mark, which is a good sign. Now, you have one final test."

"What is it, Mistress Leia?"

"Don't interrupt! Now, you must prove that you are able to do things that your master wants you to even if you don't want to."

She took the large red button of the table, and handed it to Pam. "You will, slave, shock yourself."

Pam couldn't. But then again, Pam disn't want naked photos of herself all around school. She'd die of humiliation. Pam mustered all her courage and bravery, and pressed the button.

Pam fell to the floor, unconcious.

HottayFerSure
01-16-2009, 02:48 PM
this is so amazing, I forgot there was a sequal to Pam's Story and just read all of it now, haha. But anyway, continue it's great!

ty_la
01-16-2009, 07:42 PM
Niiice, very original. I must admit that i expected the last test to be "Fuck me now whore!". I much prefer this :)

kitkat
01-16-2009, 11:36 PM
wow, thats kind of scary, it sounds like she was going to be shocked all 10 times no matter what happened.

I want to know what happens when she wakes up. I'm pretty scared for her!

Officelover
01-18-2009, 01:07 PM
I'm so sorry. It's snowing where I live, and I have to shovel a lot. I'll write more soon.

Officelover
01-19-2009, 06:25 AM
One of the most awkward possible places to wake up from unconciousness in, is a moving car. This is because, usually, there is someone driving the car. Someone who you may or may not know. Also, there is the fact that you are suddenly jolted into a moving object that is not very comfortable.

This was, of course, the place that Pam woke up in.

Pam felt very awkward and confused as she woke in the car. "Where am I?" She asked, or rather, would have asked, if she hadn't been gagged. And hogtied. And naked. What a surprise.

"Oh good," said Julie, "You're up. You're leaving me. It's about 8 AM, so you have around three, four, hours to get home. And don't worry about your parents; I've called them and said that oyu were fine and whatnot."

Pam nodded. Julie continued, "You may wonder why we're leaving so early? Well, you didn't really think that I'm just going to drop you off did you?"

She suddenly stopped the car next to a local park. It was a Sunday, so although no one was here yet, soon little kids from all over town would come in. Julie lifted Pam from the backseat, and carried her to the middle of the park. She set her down, and said, "Well things are out of my hands, now. And they've alwaysbeen out of yours. Bye."

Despite Pam's attempts at pleas, Julie walked away leaving Pam all alone. How would she escape?

Pam figured that she would have to wait for a kid or a parent to come along, and free her. How would she explain it? Would she say, "Oh, yeah, I've been blackmailed so recently I went to a lesbian dom who left me like this?"

She couldn't! Well, she realized, it wasn't really her fault. Who would believe that Pam had brought this upon herself. Pam felt slightly beter about that.

Pam didn't know which one she dreaded more, lying here like this, or being rescued.

Pam lied there for an hour. It was boring and overall terrible. And then, then, a woman came. She was jogging. She spied something lying down in the feild; and lo and behold, she came over to inspect it.

She gasped and asked, "What the hell are you doing."

Pam yelled, but it didn't help throught the gag.

The woman untied her, and said, "Look, I'm sorry that this happened. But, could you please tell me why the hell you were lying in the middle of the feild? Naked? All tied up?"

Pam couldn't bear (no pun intended) it and ran away. She immediately thought, "IDIOT!" Now, now, she was running home. But she was naked. On a public street.

Yikes.

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I'm so sorry for the length. And the wait.

kitkat
01-19-2009, 08:04 AM
wow.
Personally, I'd just say fuck it at this point and let Daniel send the pics out.
Wow... I don't know what else to say but..... wow

ty_la
01-19-2009, 11:54 AM
Hm, im not very impressed :( sorry, if you need time to think of idea's, don't hesitate to take it.

Officelover
01-19-2009, 12:02 PM
Hm, im not very impressed :( sorry, if you need time to think of idea's, don't hesitate to take it.

Really? What's the matter with it?

I'm not angry, I genuinely want to know what's wrong so I can improve it.

ty_la
01-19-2009, 12:57 PM
It wasn't terrible, and i mean no disrespect as your story's are great, but i just think that would've played out differently then it did. The womans reaction and such, and julie seemed more compasionate then to just leave pam alone in the park :P

Officelover
01-19-2009, 01:05 PM
It wasn't terrible, and i mean no disrespect as your story's are great, but i just think that would've played out differently then it did. The womans reaction and such, and julie seemed more compasionate then to just leave pam alone in the park :P

That is true. Hey, I've been meaning to ask everyone:

What should Pam's next mis-adventure be?

I have a couple options:

Version 1: Pam is recruited as a stripper/slave at a party.

Version 2: Pam goes on a class trip, and Daniel tells her various humiliating things to do.

Version 3: Just skip ahead to when she get's back with Daniel!!!

ty_la
01-19-2009, 01:09 PM
If my opinion still counts, i love the idea of number two ;)

Officelover
01-19-2009, 01:13 PM
It still counts.:)

However, personally I would kind of prefer option 1. But, being democratic, I'm putting it up to a vote.

CheshireCat_13
01-19-2009, 01:24 PM
Personally, I do prefer option 1, but I would also like to see her having a bit of fun before she goes back to Daniel...

ty_la
01-19-2009, 03:19 PM
Slave party on the school trip perhaps? Maybe daniel knows some people to make it happen... ;) ? Just an idea.

Naigan
01-19-2009, 04:45 PM
Personally, i'd rather not know what is planned. A film or book is never the same once you've read it once, and i'd rather not have the plot ruined. Just my two cents.

ty_la
01-19-2009, 05:06 PM
True, but as long as he's giving us the option, why not? It's not ruining it, he might jsut be trying to secure readers.

HottayFerSure
01-19-2009, 06:40 PM
i like option two

kitkat
01-20-2009, 06:45 AM
I'd go option 2, the school trip. The party thing has been done, and might be kind of similar to the s&m party they went to.

But at the same time, your a great writer and would probably come up with something awesome that I wouldn't expect. I do feel like if shes been topless in front of everyone at the pool, and masturbated in front of everyone at the s&m party, and everything else stripping would be a piece of cake:P She's running down the street naked in the morning at the moment! Taking off her clothes in a room full of guys would be easy.

Just my opinion though, I don't really know how you would write any of the options. I know that you'll write something awesome whatever you write. I'd be happy for you to pick:)
And hey, it would be nice for her to go back to Daniel soon.

Officelover
01-20-2009, 03:04 PM
Being democratic, I've decided on Option 2. Give me a little time, and I'll have the plot.

But, I've got to say, I'm thinking of making this 'book' the democratic one, in of that I'll give you options. Hey! What can you expect from an Obama-supporter on Inauguration Day?

So, where would you like the trip to be?

-In America
-Specifically Washington D.C.

-In Some other Country
Like: -Italy
-France
-Spain

CheshireCat_13
01-20-2009, 04:21 PM
Hmmm....If it isn't too much of an inconvenience, have it be in Beijing or France? That way, she can't understand the language so it'll be rather hard for her to do anything on her own and she can't explain anything to people. Also, there's so much fun stuff to do in France....wine, the French people....soooo many baked goods.

Officelover
01-21-2009, 05:25 AM
The democratic system has been corrupted!

I'm so sorry, it's just that I can't figure out how to do the school trip. I was just wondering, would anyone seriously mind if I just got her back to Danile already?

I mean, it's just that I'm tired of keeping the major plotline away.

So, if you really mind, speak up now or forever hold your peace.

kitkat
01-21-2009, 08:34 AM
Go for it.
I love your story and trust you to write it far more then our/my opinion of what you should write.
After all, if I could write an awesome story like this and enjoy it, I'd do it, right?
Do what you want to do and it'll be a better story then if you do what your told to do.

Unless some awesome author (EMPLOYED AUTHOR) or publisher comes along and tells you different, just go with it.
I could tell you that I feel sorry for Pam and want her to go back to her regular life... but that story would suck!:P

Officelover
01-21-2009, 06:23 PM
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Daniel Huge to you four hours ago, at 5:13 on Tuesday, June 8, 2009

Dear slave,

Let me establish something.

I know we have a four day weekend. I know your mom and dad are away. I know their letting you stay by yourself. I know that I still own you. I know that I have pictures of you. I know that unless you do what I say, I have no problem releasing them. I know that I'm a great person, and will destroy them if you come to see me. I know that you will.

Think about this; if you play your cards right, I'll free you. You'll be free. Freedom. It's just within your grasp; what you yearn for, what you crave, it's withing reach.

But on the other hand, an ultamite humiliation.

I'm kind. I'm reasonable. I'm compassionate. I'm sympathetic, empathetic, and you're just, well, pathetic. So, I order you to come to my house for these four days.

Your parents will not find out, and if all goes right, no one will ever remember that this happened.

Bring nothing with you.

Master Daniel

<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

I'm sorry for this really short post. I'll be sure to postmore soon. And I promise it shall be much longer.

CheshireCat_13
01-21-2009, 07:35 PM
FREEDOM! Yes! I feel so happy for Pam.....

Anyhoo, gahh! Stupid cliffhangers! Stop teasing meeee...:D

ty_la
01-21-2009, 07:58 PM
hahaha, im glad to know this story is still alive, i hope there's no hard feelings about some of my previous comments, this is seeming to be going well :)

kitkat
01-22-2009, 03:12 AM
I'm confused, did I miss something?
How did she get home naked with no keys? I'm guessing her fokes dont lock the back door?

Officelover
01-22-2009, 04:29 AM
Oops! Kitkat you're right. So here is part 15 1/2.

__________________________________________________ ________

Pam was running. She ran and ran as if nothing else mattered. She was thankful that most people were not up yet. "It's cold..." She though, "FOCUS!"

There were a few commuting cars on the route to the highway, Pam steered away from that. She was glad that she knew the area well enough to find back routes.

When Pam got to her street, North Road, she slowed down. But only slightly. She eventually went to her house, and crawled. She then snuck in the back door. (There was a key under the doormat.)

She knew her parents would still be asleep. She walked as silently as possible. When she came to the stairs, Pam took it one step at a time, cautious not to make them creak.

Then, when she was near her room, she slowly pulled the door open. Her room was all in order. She stepped inside, and closed the door. She instananeously put on clothes.

Boy, how she missed clothes.

Pam figured she had about an hour, so she grabbed a five dollar bill. With that, she headed out the back door to her favorite cafe, down the street.

She entered, with the jangling of the bell affixed to the door.

"Pammy!" said a friendly man, "How are things? Why haven't I seen you recently?"

"Oh," Pam said, "I've been at a sleepover."

"Really? How was it?"

"Fine. What's up with you?"

"Oh... well, there is one thing."

"What? What happened?"

"I don't know if you saw the police over there," the man motioned towards a police car, "but, there was some slut, pardon my tounge, 'promiscous woman' who ran over here naked."

"Ummmm... Really? That's interesting." Pam was thinking, "Oh my God! Shit, shit, shit!"

"Yeah."

"Did anyone- did anyone see who it was?"

"Not that I know of."

The bell the door sounded again. It was a policeman.

"Good morning, officer."

"Good morning."

"May I ask you a question?"

"You just did."

Both laughed, and then the man asked, "Um, well, do you have any developements in the 'case'?"

"Yes, in fact we do. A woman claims to have seen a woman engaged in some sort of bondage game."

Pam put the five dollar bill on the counter, and left without saying goodbye. She felt like crying, but ended up just taking a walk to calm down.

At 11:00 A.M. She returned to her house, and rang the bell. Her mother answered it. "Hi!" she greeted cheerfully, "How was it?"

"It was great!"

"Really? What'd you do?"

"Oh we, we did a lot of things."

"Would you like some breakfast? Come on in!"

Pam loved her mom.

The rest of that day, Pam spent distracting herself.

molten man
01-22-2009, 04:25 PM
awesome story!!

was out of town for a few days, so did nit have a chance to read. Up yo date now.

I also would have chosen option 2!!

Keep it going..

Officelover
01-23-2009, 02:21 PM
Pam was alone.

She was wearing all black clothing, and of course, had the chastity belt on that Daniel had sent her. She was anxious. Freedom. The word sounded in her ears thousands of times over. Freedom.

It was almost 7:00. Pam knew that Daniel would be expecting her. Her parents were gone, and Pam realized that she would have to go. Freedom.

She knew that Daniel would be cruel for these upcoming four days. Memories rushed back to when Pam was tortured for two weeks; she could only hope nothing like that would happen again. Freedom.

Pam started to cry. The last time she met this boy, she had lost her virginity. She cried tears of sorrow; tears that perhaps dreams could not stay forever. Freedom.

She shook it off. YOU'RE BENG FREED SOON, PAM!!! she thought ot herself. Pam took a tissue, and dried her tears. She took consolation in the fact that soon she'd be in college, and she could forget about this. Freedom.

She fantasized about what she'd do in college; she knew that many of her friends would be attending the same college as her. She'd be so happy there. Freedom.

At 7:15, Pam got into her parent's car (they let her use it.) and she drove to Daniel's street. She sat in the car, frozen. After 15 minutes, Pam finally ot enough prowess to leave the car. Freedom.

She knocked on the door. No one answered. There was a note that read,
"Come on in." She pushed the door open, and stepped inside. She quickly looked around, remembering how Daniel had once knocked her unconcious. She shuddered at the memory. Freedom.

"You're late my dear." said Daniel.

Then Pam became unconcious.

______________________________________________

There is a natural law in the universe that states, "If something happens once, the vast majority of the time it will happen thousands of times again." This law occured at this moment.

Too bad.

Naigan
01-23-2009, 02:46 PM
Erm, since when did the chastity belt come back in to play?

ty_la
01-23-2009, 03:56 PM
Interesting, looking forward to the next addition. The freedom kinda got annoying to be honest, but seeing as it wasn't a long addition. I just don't recomend you carry it into the next addition.

kitkat
01-23-2009, 04:52 PM
I liked the freedom thing, it was a good use of repetition.
That was a nice addition.

ty_la
01-23-2009, 07:36 PM
Well to each his own, I usually don't like repition in any stories. It's not criticism, just a personal opinion :p

kitkat
01-25-2009, 12:11 AM
Well to each his own, I usually don't like repition in any stories. It's not criticism, just a personal opinion :p

umm.. I'm a chick, but other then that I know what you mean.

ty_la
01-25-2009, 12:26 PM
It's an expression ;P And I wouldn't know what sex you were. And i think that expression can be used with both genders... not sure though.

Officelover
01-25-2009, 05:12 PM
His can mean either his or hers.

Strange, huh?

I'm going ot write more soon.

kitkat
01-25-2009, 06:04 PM
I've never heard his being used for her:P
Sorry, I've heard the expression as 'their' as well.
hehe, I guess I'm not that literate:P

Naigan
01-25-2009, 06:25 PM
I'll say again...

Erm, since when did the chastity belt come back in to play?

Officelover
01-25-2009, 06:38 PM
This is the 100th post on this thread (:pirashoot:) and my 808th (it looks like Bob; classic Scrubs joke) post in total. Moving on.

__________________________________________________ ___________

It was "bound" to happen. (Oy!)

Pam woke up, tied up. "Good. You've woken up." A sinister, all too familiar, voice called. Pam wanted to rub her eyes. She was tired, and confused.

She couldn't talk- she was gagged. She couldn't walk- her feet were tied together. She couldn't do anything. She felt helpless. She needed help. There was no chance of Daniel giving it to her. She was bound on a moderately comfortable bed.

"Slut," he started, "Do you know why I enjoy torturing you?"

Pam couldn't answer.

"No. I do not know either. But, just because the stars don't know we see them, doesn't mean we don't see them."

Pam thought to herself, "That's the worst addage ever!"

"So, I think I should tell you right now: I am a sadist. I love your pain, and I know you love pain itself. When you are humiliated I am soaking this in, while your pussy is just soaking.

"But, still I know this is hell for you. To anyone, I can understand, it would be. I intended it that way.

"Now, don't go thinking I care about you. I'm soon going to unwind an elaborate scheme to torture you. (A rush of fear chilled Pam's spine.) But, I thought it might be the humane thing to do to tell you right now that I am a sadist.

Pam didn't know why he was doing this. "This is really a strange way for him to talk to me." She thought to herself.

"Now, listen. I know that you are helpless. You have absolutely no control over anything right now. I'll be emphasizing that for these couple days. But then, once your back in control; I think you'll find that- well I'll just let you see."

He left the room. Pam was really confused. He shortly returned, and untied her. He gave her a skimpy outfit. "Put it on, slave!" He ordered. Danile left the room, and Pam took off her casual clothes, and put the other clothes on. Daniel returned, locked the door, and said, "My, my. Aren't we slutty, whore?"

Pam said nothing.

"I asked you a question. Answer me."

"Um... yes."

"Yes what?"

"Yes, I am wearing slutty clothes."

"That is not what I asked. I asked, "Are we slutty?"

"Yes. I am slutty."

Danile motioned to go on. "And I am a slut myself. And a whore. And a bitch. And a cunt. A stupid, stupid slut who should be taught by her master."

Pam suprised herself with her mode of speaking. Daniel just smiled, knowing that this is what he had wanted her to say all along. "Stupid sluts," he said, "Should be taught."

He pushed her onto the bed, and started fucking her. She screamed, but soon turned her screams of pain and shock into moans of pleasure. Soon, both came at the same time.

She felt amazing; mucxh better than the last time they had sex. She now had nothing to lose, and could enjoy it more freely.

This somewhat pleasurable moment was ruined for Pam as soon as Daniel tied her down. She knew that if he ever had to tie her down, that something bad would follow. And it did.

Daniel took a whip in hand, and began to flog her. She screamed out in agony. Daniel chimed, "Ah, the sweetest sound in the world. The screams of a slut in pain."


He continued to whip her, until he said all of a sudden, "Enough." He left the room, and let her stay there chained to the bed.


She felt abused. She felt degraded, like she was an object. A sex toy for Daniel; one who couldn't fight back. One who was blackmailed, forced into servitude. A way for him to release all of his sadistic passions.

She didn't cry; she comforted herself in of that she would be free soon.

Daniel came back in, and said, "Slut, we're going soon..."

Officelover
01-25-2009, 06:40 PM
I'll say again...

Naigan, you've stolen my thunder!

Yeah, I know. I fudged the part with the chastity belts again. Just ignore them. It's just a minor detail, that I thought was a good idea when I first wrote it in to the story.

ty_la
01-25-2009, 08:34 PM
Clap clap. :] I really liked that one. It took a while to get added ;D but it was worth it :p

skibunny
01-25-2009, 09:33 PM
This is the 100th post on this thread (:pirashoot:) and my 808th (it looks like Bob; classic Scrubs joke) post in total.


Hahah I laughed at that when I saw it and then went to watch that scrubs episode before I finished reading this....

Naigan
01-26-2009, 04:52 AM
It was fine until it got up to the stage where they fucked... That just happened way too quickly. Previously, you've given alot more detail, are you rushing these chapters for some reason?

CheshireCat_13
01-26-2009, 08:28 AM
It seemed a bit more....rough? than the other incidents. More like it was just a little part of the story, a treat to keep us going rather than an actual forward movement of the plot. I enjoyed it in a different way than some of the longer chapters that you've written.

Officelover
01-26-2009, 04:16 PM
Clap clap. :]It took a while to get added ;D but it was worth it :p

Yeah. I'm going to try to be more diligent and quick in posting in the future (not the next one, but you know what I mean.)

It was fine until it got up to the stage where they fucked... That just happened way too quickly. Previously, you've given alot more detail, are you rushing these chapters for some reason?

Yes, I'll admit there wasn't too much detail there. I'm workign on that. There isn't really an event that I'm building up as much right now. I'll work on that too.

It seemed a bit more....rough? than the other incidents. More like it was just a little part of the story, a treat to keep us going rather than an actual forward movement of the plot. I enjoyed it in a different way than some of the longer chapters that you've written.

Yes, it is slightly different. I gave it to you to keep your reading:). No, I'm just idding, I needed to show the contrast of leaving from "semi-freedom" to complete servitude.

Thank you so much for all your comments:D.

Officelover
01-27-2009, 03:17 PM
Pam and Daniel drove in his car. Pam was used to it by now; a green car. Kind of small. She was used to it's smell, and she always associated that smell with fear.

Pam was used to keeping quiet in the car. She knew she'd be punished if she talked. She was used to a lot of things now. But, truth be told, she wasn't and never would be used to humiliation. Or degrading things, for that matter. And pain. She wasn't used to anything.

It was rides in this car that Pam used the silence as an excuse to thik about these kinds of things. She realized that day that though she wasn't used to it, that she kind of liked pain, humiliation, and degradingness.

But not from Daniel. Daniel, to Pam, was still a cruel, evil person. One who went around blackmailing, kidnapping, and torturing young, sweet girls.

The car pulled to a stop. A mall? Pam thought, Daniel's already taken me here. What is going on?

They walked briskly into the mall, and into the large entryway. Pam was thankful that Daniel had given her clothes to wear. Pam felt strange, thinking of clothing as a priveledge.

They went up the escalator, and stepped off. They entered a large store. Pam had only been in here once before, to help her mom pick out a gift for a baby shower. What are we doing in here?

A woman in a friendly-looking red shirt and jeans stepped over to them and said, "Good morning, how can I help you?"

"Good morning." Answered Daniel.

"Hi." Said Pam.

"Now," Daniel said, "We are interested in buying some things."

"I see," the woman said, "And may I ask who these are for?"

"Her baby." Daniel pointed to Pam.

WHAT?! Now, now she thinks I'm... She thinks I'm... Pregnant!

"Oh." The woman said awkwardly. "Oh, um, I see."

Daniel subtly motioned for Pam to make up a little story. "Um," Pam said, "Yes. I'm three months pregnant now."

She felt as if a load of bricks had fallen on her. The woman thought that she was having sex. At eighteen! She knew this wasn't too uncommon, but it wasn't really tlked about. Then it hit her. She was having sex. Holy crap!

(Something just came up, I'll write more later. Sorry!)

CheshireCat_13
01-27-2009, 03:40 PM
Nooooo! Pregnancy! Nooooo! Sorry, I just don't like that part. The writing is good, but the task is....gah!

ps118jlg1
01-27-2009, 03:45 PM
wow. please update soon. and i wonder how she will keep this from her parents.

ty_la
01-27-2009, 06:00 PM
Hm, decent. Interesting in why daniel is doing this :p

Officelover
01-27-2009, 06:26 PM
Nooooo! Pregnancy! Nooooo! Sorry, I just don't like that part. The writing is good, but the task is....gah!

I'm just wondering... why don't you like this part? You think it's a contoversial sibject? Please, how can I fix this?!

CheshireCat_13
01-27-2009, 06:40 PM
No, it's just....pregnancy! You don't need to fix it and I haven't seen many tasks like this before so it's creative. But of all things! Pregnancy! I'm sorry, I'm just ranting for no reason. Something about it just irks the crap out of me.

cheesey923
01-27-2009, 07:05 PM
dont stop its getting good but i agree pregnancy interesting but weird awesome story though should have great ending

kitkat
01-27-2009, 08:44 PM
WHAT!? omg, I can't wait for the next part. Is she really pregnant or is he just trying to humiliate her? It seems like just embracing her like this is pretty light compared to the stuff daniel would usually do. But he couldn't know for sure if she were pregnant. Just because they had unprotected sex doesn't mean shes definitely up the duff.

Oh, and by the way, I noticed the lack of trivia:P

cheesey923
01-27-2009, 10:22 PM
dont take it the wrong way it makes for a very interesting story fantastic even but the pregnant thing caught me off guard keep up the good work

Officelover
01-28-2009, 06:08 AM
WHAT!? omg, I can't wait for the next part. Is she really pregnant or is he just trying to humiliate her? It seems like just embracing her like this is pretty light compared to the stuff daniel would usually do. But he couldn't know for sure if she were pregnant. Just because they had unprotected sex doesn't mean shes definitely up the duff.

Oh, and by the way, I noticed the lack of trivia:P

She is not actually pregnant. It's just strange, because Pam thinks to herself, "This woman thinks that I'm pregnant. And at this age; therefore proving that I've lost my virginity."

I don't know. In retrospect this was a bad idea, but I've already put it in, so I'll just have to continue it soon. So sorry, everyone.

HottayFerSure
01-28-2009, 06:36 AM
i thought that was good, it was very creative

kitkat
01-28-2009, 07:32 AM
Don't apologize. I think its a good addition. You definitely got a pretty damn big reaction from the readers:P

New and Shy
01-28-2009, 07:36 AM
I'm sure officelover appreciates everybody's comments. It is evident that everybody has an opinion on how the story should go. If you like sending a story in a direction that you want, check out the finish the person above's fantasy thread. It allows you to write your vision of how the story should go. That being said, I think officelover should write the story however he wants; I've loved seeing how it plays out.

Officelover
01-28-2009, 01:19 PM
*Sets record for most comments on a single post on getDare, except for a few more*

(*sets another record, for most oddly worded record*)

Here is the rest of part 19.

__________________________________________________ __________

Pam was still at the store with Daniel. They were checking around in aisles of baby food, diapers, teething rings, all kinds of things. The woman was obviously trying to avoid Pam.

Pam accidentally bumped into her. The woman, flustered, said, "Oh. I'm sorry. I never got to congratulate you. Um... congratulations."

"Thank you." awkwardly replied Pam.

"Come on, Pam," shouted Daniel, "We're going to be late!"

"Late for what?"

"For your doctor's appointment, silly."

"Oh. Yeah."

Daniel stepped over to the register, where he paid the woman for the things.

As Pam and Daniel walked away, Daniel said, "Man, you really need to take some acting lesons (hint, hint), that was terrible! "Late for what?" come on, slut!"

They walked out to the car, and Daniel opened the trunk. Pam started to put the bags she was carrying in, but Daniel said, "Uh-uh. You don't deserve to sit in the front. Or even the back. You'll ride in the trunk."

Pam gingerly climbed into the trunk, and uncomfortably lay down. She was annoyed at this, and felt unsafe as the car pulled away. She observed through a tiny crack between the trunk and the back seat that the bags were in her seat.

She felt so degraded, that she was being treated worse than a bag. "Calm down, Pam." she whispered to herself.

"No talking!" ordered Daniel.

The car ride seemed to take forever. Of course, Daniel had made all the wrong turns so it would take longer. When he finnaly pulled to a stop, Pam was relieved.

He opened the trunk, and said, "Out, bitch."

She needed no further asking, and got out and stretched. She carried in all of the bags. It was about 12 o' clock.

They stepped inside. "Pam," asked Daniel, "do you know why I've bought all this. Certainly not because I have a baby coming; actually I do. You. We're going to have some 'fun'."

__________________________________________________ ________

I'll post more soon!

doxanything
01-28-2009, 01:22 PM
thats good. cant wait for more! :)

CheshireCat_13
01-28-2009, 02:10 PM
Much better......much, much, much, better.
Sorry, I can't explain why, it just doesn't irk me anymore.

ty_la
01-28-2009, 02:22 PM
Oh my, I deffinetly did not see that coming. This should deffinetly be interesting, to say the least.

cheesey923
01-28-2009, 06:16 PM
dont stop its torture

Officelover
01-29-2009, 04:50 AM
I'll post more very soon. I'm pretty busy this time of year but I'll persevere. Keep reading, and I'll be sure to post soon!

Officelover
01-30-2009, 02:00 PM
Pam was in diapers. She was standing, entirely naked except for this diaper, in a basement. With a diaper. Did we mention she was wearing a diaper?

This was to her, humiliating. It was so degrading, Pam felt annoyed and insulted. But secretly, she fantasized about asking someone to do this to her. She was slightly horny.

Only slightly. Though possibly quite enjoyable consentually, this was humiliating beyond belief. Daniel returned with a spoonful of baby food. "Oh no! You're not getting me to take that stuff!"

Pam knew, from experience, that there were added laxitives. "For a stupid slut," said Daniel, "You can remember some of my tricks. Well, as your master I order you to eat it."

Pam screamed, "I won't!" She felt very defiant today. She had been through a lot, and needed to keep as miuch strength as she could. But she had to make sure those pictures weren't released...

"Hmm... feeling rebellious today, aren't we whore? Thinking that we should disobey our loving master? Hmm?"

Pam didn't answer. She knew any answer would get her into trouble. Daniel just took a rope, and pushed Pam onto a chair. He expertly tied her down- lots of practice, Pam guessed.

"Open your mouth!"

"No."

"Fine." He sweetly smiled, and then took his hand and tried to manually (Oy! Etymollogical puns!) open her mouth. As soon as he got it open, she bit his hand.

Daniel cried out in pain, pulled his hand out and shook it. "Fuck!" He cried. "Do NOT do anything like that ever again, or I will personally hand those pictures to your parents!"

Pam knew when she had been beaten; she would simmer down now. "Now, since you bit the hand that was going to feed you, I think it's fair for my little baby to be punished."

He had a wicked grin on his face. "What, praytell," he asked, "do babies eat?"

"Milk. Well, they drink it."

"They have to suck their mothers tits, right? Well, I think it's only fitting that you suck something too."

With that, he undid his pants, and stuck his cock into her mouth. She was used to this; but she had to admit to herself that it was unexpected. She sucked, and soon enough he came.

"Swallow it!" He screamed.

She swallowed with supreme disgust.

"That milk," he asked, "Tasted bad. Correct?"

"Yes, master."

"Well, then, maybe his will taste better!" He shoved the spoonful of baby food doen her mouth, and she couldn't help but swallow. It tasted bad, but taste was the least of Pam's worries right now.

Within a couple of minutes, Pam had to piss. And shit. Pam knew that it would be so demeaning, so degrading to soil herself, but apparently her body had a differnet opinion.

Pam eventually couldn't help but shit. There she was, sitting in her own crap. It wasn't a good feeling. At all.

Daniel hd been standing there the entire time, watchign her squirm. This only increased the magnitude of her shame.

"Master, help me, please."

"Babies do not talk! But if you won't be able to keep yourself quiet..."

He produced a gag, and put it in her. He explained, "Now the only way you can show your self and your feelings is through crying. I think we should try it."

He untied her, and said, "On the floor!"

With that, he tooka flogger, and started whipping her back. She was, ultamitely, crying. "Sit in front of me!" He ordered. It was humiliating for Pam to be seen by her master, in tears.

Daniel moved to the end of the room. "Come here, baby."

She got up, and started to walk. "Wow!" Daniel said, "A baby that can walk. NOT!!! Get down, and crawl, babe!"

She did so, and it was embarrasing. To be crawling on the ground of a dirty basement, with shit in a diaper you are wearing. Most people would also be embarrased in that kind of situation.

When she got there, he said "Youy are a nasty, stinky slut. I see you'veshit yourself. Idiot! You will change yourself."

Pam had no idea how to change ababy, much less herself. So basically she tore the diaper off, and looked to Daniel. This look basically asked, "Please, please can I have something to wipe with?"

Daniel was obviously not responding. Daniel said, "Oh? Done all ready? Okay, here is your new diaper." She put it on, and felt disgusted that she hadn't been able to wipe her ass.

Then, Daniel said, "Okay. Good. Now, you're going to take a nap in your crib." There was a crib that Daniel had brought in. He handcuffed Pam's hands together so scape was impossible, then he put her in the crib.

"Go to bed, cunt." He said.

She closed her eyes and tried to go to sleep. But sleep soon proved impossible. She was not tired at all, and time seemed to move as slowly as possible. She wondered how many minutes had gone by.

After about two hours, her ass began to sting. She couldn't expres that anyhow. By the time Daniel came back in, it hurt her a lot. Tears started forming in her eyes. He let her out ofd the crib, and untied her.

"What's the matter, baby?" he asked. She pointed her ass.

He took of the diaper, and said, "Oh. You've been a dirty little slut, and now you have a diaper rash. Don't worry. I know exactly what to do, little idiot slut."

He took a bottle of baby ointment, and spread it around her ass. Pam could tell that he was thouroghly enjoying this. That pervert! Pam thought with rage.

He put a diaper back on her. A new one. "Now, slut, you've given yourseklf a diaper rash. You've made me buy a new diaper, and diaper ointment. I'd say you've been pretty naughty."

With that he unexpectedly pulled her over his knee, and begun to spank her, with the diaper on. Pam didn't really feel it too much. Then, once Daniel realized this, he tore off Pam's diaper.

He spanked it a good 150 times, until it was bright red again. Then, to make matters worse, he took a butt plug, and jammed it in and out of her ass. It hurt a lot.

After Pam had came, he let her free. He took the gag out of her mouth, and said, "You are no longer a baby. You are just a regular, ordinary slut. And a whore. And a cunt. Clear?"

"Yes, master."

"Good," he said, "It's time for our next game."

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How was that? Feedback please! I'm going to try to be more prompt in future posting. So, so sorry for the wait!

cheesey923
01-30-2009, 05:30 PM
interesting part keep going

ty_la
01-30-2009, 06:24 PM
hm, I'm not a fan of that fetish. But I still enjoyed the story :) I wonder what the next test will be...hmm..

Officelover
01-30-2009, 06:31 PM
I wonder what the next test will be...hmm..

Not test, game. The testing is over. But... I think you'll enjoy it anyways.

CheshireCat_13
01-30-2009, 07:39 PM
Wait, wait, wait. She had shit all over her ass and then he just rubbed oil onto it? What?

Other than that, though I'm also not a fan of the fetish, good description!

kitkat
01-30-2009, 09:07 PM
A nice long addition. I'm not a fan of that fetish either but it was still entertaining.

Well done

cheesey923
01-30-2009, 11:42 PM
quit torturing us and finish

Naigan
01-31-2009, 05:08 AM
So she was in pain from the spanking, and then came at the same time, whilst having a butt plug shoved in and out of her arse...?

That would never work.

Officelover
01-31-2009, 08:36 AM
Okay, okay! I get it! There's a lot of inconsistancty! But, it's just a story.

jonh2345
01-31-2009, 10:35 AM
Okay, okay! I get it! There's a lot of inconsistancty! But, it's just a story.
I think your doing fine with the story, no one is perfict, its still a good story.

Officelover
01-31-2009, 11:29 AM
Pam asked, "Where are we going?"

"Do not ask questions!" boomed Daniel. "But, I guess you'll just have to find out on your own." A grin spread across his face. They left the room, and went up the stairs.

After they left the house, they got into the car. Daniel began to drive, and said, "We're going to be there soon. I want you to know something before we get there; you will be naked and blindfolded. There is a man there, Mr. Smith. He'll meet you in the lobby, and bring you to where your supposed to do. Do whatever he says. Oh, we're here."

The car pulled to a stop. Daniel and Pam got out of the car. Daniel put a blindfold on Pam. It was strange to Pam; she hated blindfolds. It made her fell uneasy.

"Okay, we're going inside. You will strip there, and wait like a good little slut for Mr. Smith. Do you understand?

"Yes, master."

"I'm going now. See you later."

"Goodbye!" Pam called.

Pam could feel the AC on. It was hot outside, as it was June. She gingerly took off her clothes. She wouldn't want Mr. Smith, whoever he was, to see her, but by now she was used to it.

While waiting she thought to herself, "Why will I not allow him to release those pictures, but do so much?"

"Hello, hello, hello." said a male voice.

"Are you- Mr. Smith?"

"Yes, I am, gorgeous."

"Please don't look at me."

"Oh, well aren't we all high and mighty? I tell you, leave it to Daniel to get a comedian."

"Sir,"

"That's more like it!"

"Where are we?"

"None of your buisness, slut. Now then, I believe you're on."

He led her down halls, up staircases, down staircases. It was confusing. Pam felt her feet on metal. She reached out and felt metal bars, and plate glass. "Where am I?" she asked, nervously.

"Don't worry." Mr. Smith comforted, "It's only a cage. For your protection." With that she heard a metal door shut.

"Goooooiiing Down!" He said. The cage lurched forward awkwardly. After a couple of seconds the cage touched ground. "Where am I?!" Pam thought. It was all so confusing.

Pam couldn't hear anything. She couldn't see anything. She was utterly, utterly mystified as to what was going on around her. Where was she?!!!!!!

Then Pam heard the cage door open. "Who's there?" Pam questioned.

"Ask no questions!" He said, dominantly. "Take my hand."

Pam took his hand, and he led her out of the cage. She felt wood beneath her. It was hot. Where was she? Why did she feel like she should know where she was?

The man led her to a wooden object. A stockade? She had felt something like this before, at a historical museum. He put her arms and head into the holes. Then, he took off her blindfold.

Pam could have died from humiliation.

She was on a stage. There were people, paying patrons she assumed, who were watching her here. And she was trapped there, no escape in sight.

She was so humiliated. So degraded, embarrased, ashamed. It was terrible! Pam looked out into the audience. Thankfuly, she didn't see anyone she knew. And it was a small audience. Only about 50 of them.

But still, that was 50 people who could see her naked!

This was absolutely terrible!!!

Pam started crying. An announcer said, "Oh look, folks. She's crying."

A man came over, and started to unlock ehr. Another one, muscular and strong, made sure she disn't run, as the other onemade her do things. He made her stand, sit, play with herself.

It was humiliating beyond belief.

The big finish, apparently, was a rack that she was chained too, so her breasts, and her pussy were visible.

The announcer said, "Well as you know, we offer all our patrons a chance to "meet" our whores."

Pam thought, "Oh shit."

CheshireCat_13
01-31-2009, 01:57 PM
Oh, well that's an interesting idea......I like it!

cheesey923
01-31-2009, 02:40 PM
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...interesting

ty_la
02-01-2009, 12:11 AM
Ah, one of my favorite genres. It's a shame you didn't give us more detail about the show :( But I do believe that the shows just begun :)

Officelover
02-01-2009, 05:35 AM
Ah, one of my favorite genres. It's a shame you didn't give us more detail about the show :( But I do believe that the shows just begun :)

Yes, ty la.

*16 characters*

molten man
02-02-2009, 02:36 PM
way to good officelover!! Keep it going...

Officelover
02-02-2009, 07:31 PM
I promise I'll write more soon. Hang in there, please!

Robert_Z_man
02-02-2009, 07:58 PM
its a good story, keep up the good work.:p

HottayFerSure
02-03-2009, 11:24 AM
Write soon! Cliff hangers kill me!

molten man
02-04-2009, 04:23 PM
Write soon! Cliff hangers kill me!

a really interesting one tho!! Plz write soon..

Officelover
02-04-2009, 06:02 PM
I'm really really really sorry. Believe me, I know thart this is probably annoying. I promise that when I do post, it will be long and good, and I'll get into the habit of posting regularly. It's ust that this tie of year I'm really busy. Sorry.

Officelover
02-05-2009, 05:07 AM
Pam was led into a room that was fairly well furnished. "YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME!" Pam screamed.

"Your master signed you up. It's all legal, honey."

"How dare you! Let me go!!!"

"Shut up!" He threw her onto a bed. It was soft, but Pam knew better than to enjoy it. He proceeded to take the chains from underneath it and tie each of her limbs to the bed.

Psm was already naked, and knew exactly what was going to happen. Daniel wlaked into the room. "Master, please help me out of this!"

"Slave, I'm sorry, but I will not help you out of it. Just listen over there-"

Pam heard a lot of noise, and asked, "What's going on in there?"

"Their bidding over you, slut!" he said, "The top twenty bidders will get to 'meet you in person'. You know what that means. Don't you feel proud?"

Pam actually felt ashamed of herself, and a despisement for Daniel. She did, however, feel slightly better about the fact that only 20 people would fuck her, not all of them as she'd thought before.

But that didn't help things. Mr. Smith entered, and said, "Hey, whore, their ready for you. So, be ready. You'll have fifteen minutes with each one, so I figure you'll be done in about five hours.

What happened next was a treachorous, treachorous time for Pam. That day she fucked twenty people. Twenty.

She was humiliated. She was an eighteen year old- a virtous, good, friendly person. And now- now, she seemed to be just a useless, slutty whore who had fucked with 20 different people before college.

She began to cry. She cried and cried and cried, and it was terrible. And then, then Danile came in. "Why did you do this?!" She cried.

"What are you talking about?"

"Why did you make me do this?! Why- you know I want to be a moral person! Why did you make me do this?!"

"Slave, don't get-"

"Fuck you!"

Daniel shivered a bit, and said, "You know what. This was my final test. I was going to let you go after this, but now, I'm not so sure."

"Please let me go!" She pleaded.

"Fine. Go."

"And you'll delete the pictures?"

"I promise. Go."

He unchained her, and gave her an outfit. She would have to hitch hike (the galaxy) home, because she remembered from the drive that she was in some different city.

As she rode home in the car of some nice person who gave her a ride, Pam felt sad at first. And then it started todawn on her, "I'm free!" she thought. She was no longer his slave, or his slut, or his cunt, or his bitch, or his whore. She was herself, free. She would forget this whole event. She smiled, and steeped out of the car as it approached her house, as it dawned on her again. She was free.

***

Meanwhile, Daniel was back at his place. He sat at the computer, much as you are doing now. Except, spread out around him were tons of memory sticks, cell phones, and cameras.

He took all of the pictures on them and put them into his computer. He smiled, as he saw each of the pictures of Pam. Here were the ones of her today, on stage. And here were ones of her having sex today. There were ones of Pam from that erotic photoshoot he staged so long ago. And there were the ones from when he first fucked her ("that was fun" he thought). There were even the ones from his cell phone that he had taken of her that started the whole thing off.

He put them all into his computer and made it into a word document, probably seven page slong (he had to make the images smaller). He printed two copies of each page- he'd have to copy that sometime soon.

But for now, he went to mail. He was sending a message to everyone he knew, and plus almost all the students in their class, the teachers, and Pam's parents.

He attached the word document. He titled it, "Hey everyone, check this out!"

Pam's life had reached new lows with sounds. The last time it happened, there was a click of a cameraphone. Now, it was a click again.

And so Pam's life decended into the pitch black darkness with these words:

Your mail has been sent.

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Okay- how was that? I thought it was pretty good if I do say so myself. The story does not stop here. I just thought I'd ocve the plot a logn a bit. Coments and questions, please!

Pikachu
02-05-2009, 05:18 AM
That was unexpected :eek:

Please continue...... I feel this is way to harsh on poor Pam

kitkat
02-05-2009, 05:54 AM
...... wow
You've got to keep going now!
I don't know what to say! I can't believe he did that!
I always assumed that he would never do anything with the pics!
I'm curious is this book as almost over?

Naigan
02-05-2009, 06:05 AM
You're doing it again. Skipping major parts of the plot, such as when she was fucked by 20 men, you did that all in literally 17 words, yes I did count... Where's the detail that used to be in this story? This is starting to lose its appeal.

ty_la
02-05-2009, 02:20 PM
I don't think the 20 men are an important part. If you want that go watch porn. This is brilliant literature. I really enjoyed that part. And i'm glad that it's not over :) I wonder where you'll take it from here...

Officelover
02-05-2009, 02:28 PM
That was unexpected :eek:

Please continue...... I feel this is way to harsh on poor Pam

Yes, it does seem a little harsh on poor Pam. And yes, I can plainly agree that this post was meant to be extremely unexpected.

...... wow
You've got to keep going now!
I don't know what to say! I can't believe he did that!
I always assumed that he would never do anything with the pics!
I'm curious is this book as almost over?

I know. It isn't often that you find online that they actually do release the pictures. That is one of the twists.


You're doing it again. Skipping major parts of the plot, such as when she was fucked by 20 men, you did that all in literally 17 words, yes I did count... Where's the detail that used to be in this story? This is starting to lose its appeal.

Well, can't please em' all. I'm sorry, naigan. Would you prefered if it I had said, "First Pam fucked the first guy. Then she fucked the second guy. Then she fucked the third guy..."?

I don't think the 20 men are an important part. If you want that go watch porn. This is brilliant literature. I really enjoyed that part. And i'm glad that it's not over :) I wonder where you'll take it from here...

Thanks. It wasn't really the point of the post.

I'm going to post more soon.

molten man
02-05-2009, 03:39 PM
That was a bolt from the blue!!!

kitkat
02-06-2009, 06:47 AM
Hmm. I did think it was abit weird when he said he was going to release her, I assumed he just wouldn't end up doing it:P
Or she would decided to stay with him. Or have to make a choice or something.

I thought she was abit silly to keep doing all of it. I mean, if shes hot who would really care about the pics of her in the shower, especially when she could have just told everyone he was the one who took the photos, then he'd look like the asshole in the first place. Now she'll just look like a slut for clearly participating.

Officelover
02-06-2009, 02:19 PM
Hmm. I did think it was abit weird when he said he was going to release her, I assumed he just wouldn't end up doing it:P
Or she would decided to stay with him. Or have to make a choice or something.

I thought she was abit silly to keep doing all of it. I mean, if shes hot who would really care about the pics of her in the shower, especially when she could have just told everyone he was the one who took the photos, then he'd look like the asshole in the first place. Now she'll just look like a slut for clearly participating.

Even worsening the dramatic effect. :)

nightmare09
02-06-2009, 02:21 PM
go on please i want to hear more

Officelover
02-07-2009, 02:53 PM
Pam woke up on Monday. She was excited. She had been freed last night. Never again would she have to obey Daniel. She could walk up to him today and slap him, if she wanted to.

But she didn't. Pam was the kind of person who liked to live in the moment. She wouldn't let the past months get her down. She had so much to be anxious about.

First of all, her parents were coming home from vacation today. They had been gone for about 3 days. Pam'sfather had been on a buisness meeting, and decided to take his wife with him. They trusted Pam, so they let her stay by herself. Pam was excited to see them again.

And she would be going to school. Pam was strange in of that she liked school. She enjoyed seeing the teachers, the people, and her friends.

Pam would forget all about her past. She was graduating this week! She would be heading off to college soon. Soon, she would be looking forward to the real world. Pam was so excited.

She got ready as usual that morning. Alone in the house, with a lot of extra time before she would have to walk to school, Pam decided to take a slutty liberty, and masturbate.

Pam thought about her fantasies, which Pam noticed ere getting progressively more masochistic. Today, she thought about being tied up to a tree by someone and people would stare as they walked by.

Pam came, and shuddered at what she had been thinking about. "What the hell were thinking about?!" She asked herself, "Why, for God's sake you have just been freed from a damn blackmailing master!"

Nevertheless, it made her horny just thinking about it. She glanced at the clock- it was a Monday, so she'd have a study period instead of a homeroom, which started at 8:30.

She left, as she was slightly later than she had planned on, and walked the short distance to school of about four blocks. When she reached her school, Pam entered through the large gray doors.

She set her backpack down inside of her locker, in the front hall. Pam walked to the room, and stepped inside. As she entered there was a stony silence. All eyes were on her. Odd, as every other time the room had been lively with noise.

Pam tried saying hi to her friends Luke, Samantha, and Martha, but they didn't respond. Pam was really creeped out by this. She tried doing her work, but it was qute distracting as five times she caught a boy staring lustously at her.

Pam walked to her locker after class, thinking this was insanely strange. As she reached in her locker for a book, she felt a hand on her ass. "What the hell?!"

"It's all right, slut."

She whirled around. It was not Daniel. It was Ben. Pam said, "That's extremely offensive. Why did you call me that?"

He laughed a bit. "As if you don't know." He pulled out a peice of computer paper from his folder, with an image of Pam and Daniel fucking. "It's all over the school." He said.

Pam froze. He walked away. This can't be happening! Pam thought. She ran to the bathrooms. She looked around, making sure no one was lloking, and headed inside the boys bathroom.

She locked the door, and saw something that made her more alarmed then she had even been before. Printouts of her naked body, in the stalls. She couldn't handle this!

Tears gushed down Pam's eyes. She ran out of the school building. Never would she return to that building. But on the way out, Pam swore people were laughing at her.

She ran home, and pulled the spare key out from under the mat. She frantically jostled the back door open, only to see her parents sitting in the kitchen.

They jumped up, taken aback. Once they had understood she was there, her father yelled, "Exlain these missy!"

Before her eyes, in her own parents hands were pictures of her in the most obscene possible positions. She was humiliated, mortified!

She wept till her eyes were red in her eyes.

No oen bothered opening her door. Pam just lay on her bed, gazing up at her pink room, thinking about how her love and life were shattered. She lay there, thinking about how no one in all of the entire town would ever be able to see her again without thinking, "Oh, there's Pam. She was a whore in high school."

Pam cried and cried and cried and cried. All to no avail. By nightfall Pam had made a drastic realization. She had to run away. She couldn't stay here any longer, she had to leave today.

She would stay- she didn't know where. But she had to leave.

And so she did.

Pam's life had been officially ruined.

THE END

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THE END

Written by Officelover

Illustrated by no one.

Published by Officelover and getDare.

Medic- Nonexistant and Unnescary (much like the magician on the beach; bonus word in the Trivia Game to hoever can tell me what that's from


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Yes, all I did was copy and paste that from the end of Pam's story.

And guess what, there totally will be more. I want to end it on a better note than "Pam's life had been officially ruined." right. And this was an insanely short book compared to Pam's story. It had 15 more installments than this one.

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As last tie here are all the people who commented:

Naigan
Ty la
Nightmare09
Kitkat
Molten Man
Justamale
Ps118jlg1
CheshireCat_13
Zeromus
Hottayfersure
Cheesey923
New and Shy
Doxanything
Jonh2345
Robert Z Man
Mercyyou

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Hang in there until the third book, yet to be named.

kitkat
02-07-2009, 05:12 PM
Shattering.
Great job. That was awesome, so sad, but awesome.

Naigan
02-07-2009, 05:29 PM
W00t, top of the list of commentors.

When I saw the ending, I just thought "What the Fuck?!", then I realised there is a third book in the making... So yeah, it's all good! :cool:

nightmare09
02-07-2009, 07:31 PM
do a nother one please

ty_la
02-07-2009, 08:32 PM
Woohoo! second on the list ;D I'm looking forward the last one :)

cheesey923
02-07-2009, 10:51 PM
you better right a third one or ill be mad

lol just kidding but seriosly right another one

Pikachu
02-08-2009, 04:48 AM
Bottom and my name has been spelt wrong :p

Officelover
02-08-2009, 06:23 PM
My name isn't even on the list. Wait a minute...

molten man
02-09-2009, 01:16 PM
fifth on the list!!

cant wait for ur next installment...