Slave Island Feedback

[Thank you rachie]

Hey guys! I recently started writing my first story, Slave Island, and I recently posted the 6th part. The interest level has been dropping lately and I don't know why. Is my story getting old? I would really appreciate any feedback about the story and any ideas on how to get the interest level back up. Thanks!

http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=119825

[Dare99]

I like it! I've been checking everyday for the next installment of the story