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anonimousbob
02-21-2007, 12:44 PM
First of all, I am male, 17 and this is a fiction story I made up


One afternoon we had a free period and were bored in the common room, we had played all the card games we liked and had completely run out of things to do. It was me and my friends Sarah, Gemma and Lisa. They said about a game they had played at a party before and that they needed a few minutes to prepare.

After a couple of minutes they came back with a pile of scraps of paper with writing on the bottom, they put them face down and said they were like chance cards. They then got out the deck of cards we had been using, it was shuffled and they said to take a card at random, like drawing straws with lowest card losing, aces high. I pulled out a 6, thinking it was ok, not high but not too low either. I was wrong, it was too low as the others had face cards.

Next, they said to pick a card at random from the chance pile, the first card I found was one saying lick the floor, it was disgusting but I did it. Next round I couldn't believe my luck, a 2!!! I took another card, this time it said "get naked". I protested this because we were still in school. They agreed I could have another dare that they would choose because I was new to the game, and it normally helps when they can get a little drunk before playing.

My alternate dare was to be a servant to the three of them for the rest of the week (only a few days). My first task was to get their books from the lockers and carry them. That seemed fine, and it looked like they weren't into dareslave style things, which I had doubted anyway.

Next they asked me to follow them up to the woodland bit at the very edge of the school field, it was just an area of a few dozen trees just before the fence that leads to a main road. Not many people go near there or on the road outside during school so it was pretty quiet.

The first thing they ordered me to do was act like their pet dog. I did it, getting down on my knees, barking. They pointed out that dogs sniffed peoples groins and butts, so I followed the hint. Nothing too bad so far, until they told me that dogs shouldn't wear clothes and that since I was a dog I should.....well I got the hint but didn't like it. I stated that they let me off being naked so why should I now, but beofre I finished they said dogs can't talk. Lisa told me to lay on my back, as soon as I did they held me down and pulled off my jacket and T-shirt, next my shoes and socks. They kept trying to undo my jeans but I kept strugling. Eventually they got them undun and pulled down my jeans and pants.

I quickly managed to roll over as they had let go of my arms and legs to get the jeans off. I covered myself, getting really embarassed because I really fancied Gemma and I had got an erection from her grabbing my groin.

Next it got worse, much worse. They claimed that since I had disobeyed my order to be their obedient dog I was going to be punished. They followed this statement by putting my clthes in one of he bags I had carried out there, out of another the pulled some handcuffs, four sets. They walked over and forced me out of my curled position on the floor and put the cuffs on me. One on each wrist and one on each ankle, the other ends were still lose. They forced me over to the fence and locked me up with my back to the fence, the crack facing through one of the gaps of the 8 foot metal fence.

Sarah pulled out some paper and wrote something on it, then she attatched it to the other side of the fence facing the road. A this point I had lost my erection because of a combination of the cold, my embarassment and my nerves over what was going to happen. Gemma then walked over and grabbed my cock, standing really close. I instantly went hard from her. She started to kis me and I felt something go into my mouth. I didn't know what it was until I saw them pull out the viagra packet.

"That should be enough to keep you up for hours" they sniggered, "enjoy the fun"

This part of the field was at the back of the school but just up the road was a girls school, and I knew they finished in a mater of minutes. I was handcuffed naked to a fence they would all walk past. I felt lucky this was the way I was facing, it could have been much worse.

Lisa snuck into a small bush just to my left, I could just see her pull out her video camera. Gemma hid behind a tree just in front of me and Sarah hid to my right, they were filming me. As I looked down I noticed they had left an assortment of objects, carrots, cucumbers, a bike pump, pens, rulers and bottles, there were more things I could see out of the edge of my eye but couldn't tell what they were. What were they up too?

At that moment I heard the distant bell of the girls school, they finished about 20 minutes before our school, so it was at least that long before Lisa Gemma and Sarah went home, this would get bad.

The chatter of girls became closer, I grew more and more nervous, I didn't know what was planned for me, or what the sign on the fence said but my time was running out.....


Sorry, don't have time to finish, I will as soon as I can.

cadi14
02-21-2007, 01:15 PM
More More More!!! Please!

Tessdog
02-21-2007, 02:13 PM
Thats really good couple of spelling mistakes though..... But keep it going.....

cheesy dude
02-21-2007, 02:20 PM
amazing, more more more well put cadi14 .

i love it, i cant wait for the next bit... i hope you dont make me wait too long

spat
02-21-2007, 02:50 PM
doing real good - keep it going.

Soraslight
02-21-2007, 03:16 PM
ok that annoys me, i was hoping you were gonna finish the entire story. Please continue and make sure the guy gets his own back on atleast one, i hate it when girls get their own way.Long story, wont say why, but it painted a picture in my head of what was going on, you should be a story writer :-).

anonimousbob
03-13-2007, 11:11 AM
There was laughing behind me and suddenly one of the girls school ties went over my eyes. They must have tied it to the fence because I couldn't move my head. Something was rubbed around my but hole, it was gooey and started to burn and the girls started to rub it with something bristley. After a few minutes they shoved it in my mouth, it was minty, that was why it was burning.

The toothpaste was becoming intolerable and the taste of the toothpaste in my mouth was terrible. They poured water into my mouth and I spat out the froth. Next they started pouring mouthfuls of water into my mouth and covering my mouth and nose so I had to swallow, nearly a hundred mouthfuls in the end, it made me feel so full and a bit sick.

Once they had finished forcing me to drink I felt them start rubbing more paste around my butt hole when they suddenly stopped. I noverheard them talking

"...not doing anything....just messing around.....sophie why don't.... your dads van.....hidden"

I wasn't sure what they were talking about but after a few more minutes I heard a car or something pull up behind me, maybe they wanted to hide their new "toy"

"while I was at home I got some of my wahing" the girl I guess was sophie said. The next thing I know there was something being forced into my mouth. It felt like lace, maybe dirty panties or something, it didn't taste nice.




More later, I have no time now, PM me if you have any ideas for the revenge

anonimousbob
04-01-2007, 07:57 AM
One of the girls reached through the bars of the fence and started to rub my cock, at the same time they shoved something up my arse, it started to move like an electric dildo.

It seemed like they could tell when I was about to orgasm, because every time I came close they stopped for a while, then started rubbing me again. It became torture after a while, I just wanted to orgasm.

After what seemed like hours of torture, I had a weird feeling up my arse, I was having an anal orgasm. It was the strangest feeling I had ever had. They pulled out the dildo and shoved something else up there. I over heard one of them talking about training me with a butt-plug so that's what I guessed it was.
By this point I really needed to pee, and after a while I had to let it out. It sounded like it was hitting plastic, maybe a bucket or bottle, it was hard to tell. I still had the erection from the viagra so they must have been holding up one of the objects that had been left out for them to use in order to catch the horizontal stream of pee.

They kept messing with me for a while, squeezing my balls and shoving things up my arse. About another 10 minutes passed and I heard what sounded like an egg timer.

"Aww, the sign says that means play time is over, never mind. We can always find him on his way out of school tomorrow and finish the game"

I didn't like the sound of that, but I heard them leave in the van behind me and after a few more minutes Gemma, Lisa and Sophie came and untied me.

"you see, that was just a mild punishment so that you would get the idea. We could always make it much worse next time, they said they wanted to play again so if you ever dare disobey us again we will let them keep you. They never even got on to the best toys" They laughed and indicated that I should follow them

"What about my clothes?"

"Fine, sarah give him the stuff in that bag" She pulled out a pile of girl's clothes

"What, I don't want to wear that!" I complained

"Fine, then as punsihment you will be naked until we reach my house" I reluctantly accepted the clothes, it was better than nothing

I ended up in a Gstring, bra, mini skirt and strappy top. They also gave me tights and some high heels


I was so embarrassed walking through the school grounds and along the road to Gemma's house, but I knew it was this or nothing and I just did my best to kep my face hidden.

When we reached Gemma's house we went inside for "more fun" as they put it...


I'll do some more later, sorry for the wait, and again if you have any ideas please send them to me

Tessdog
04-01-2007, 06:35 PM
Very Nice....very nice.....

anonimousbob
04-03-2007, 09:21 AM
At first it wasn't too bad, they made me get them drinks and cook their dinner, a lot better than I expected. The only downside was I was still dressed like a slut and that the viagra hadn't worn off.

After they ate, they gave me some leftovers in a dog food bowl and told me that I had to be a dog again, and if I didn't obey this time I would be punished worse than before.

I obeyed and stripped off, getting down on my hands and knees. They put a collar round my neck and took me upstairs. Apparently it was time for my checkup with the vets. They all put on rubber gloves and told me to spread me legs so they had better access.

The first exam involved a LOT of anal probing with their fingers and then they took my temperature anally. After this they decided that I needed to be cleaned out, and that nothing could do the trick better than toothpaste, a whole tube of wonderful, extra strong minty goodness. They held me in plave and shoved the end of the tube up, squeezing out all they could, it started burning straight away. Gemma then shoved her finger up to spread it around, pushing against the wall in there to get it really burning, after she made me lick her finger clean, she had taken bthe glove off that time.

I was then ordered to follow them as they pulled my leash and took me downstairs to their bags where they pulled out a but plug and rammed it up my hole. After this they decided I needed some exercise so we went into the back garden to play fetch with a dildo, I also had to pee so I found a nice covered part of the garden. I kept getting the feeling the neighbours were watching, but I wasn't sure.

My arse was really stinging by the time they said I could go inside and stop being a dog for a while. They ordered me to lie down in the wet room of the house, kind of like a shower but a whole room.

They made me lie on my front, they took out the butt plug and used their fingers to spread out the paste a bit more, they then re inserted it and I had to lick them clean.

I was then rolled over onto my back and blindfolded, I felt them start rubbing my cock, it felt good, they had such soft hands. Just before I came they stopped rubbing and left me there for a few minutes

They came back and told me that I was going to suffer at the fornt now. They started rubbing what I assumed was toothpaste all over my cock and balls, it covered every last bit of my pubic area, right up to my butt hole.

They kept rubbing me, giving me a mixture of please and burning. After another 20 minutes they started to wash it off

"In 2 weeks is the trip to France, we will all be there for a whole week and we will let you off now in exchange for you being our slave for the entire trip. The only thing you must do between then and now is everytime you come round here or see us out of school, you MUST wear these"

They took out a very hot thong and bra, since I was with them I put them on once I had been, very sexually, washed off. For the rest of that day I ended up wearng only those because they did not return my clothes until later, although it wasn't too bad

I had accepted the deal as the trip seemed a long way off at the time, and I had sort of enjoyed the day so far

depp=noob=lol
04-03-2007, 09:31 AM
great story! excellent writing job!

anonimousbob
04-04-2007, 01:18 AM
Over the next couple of weeks I made sure I wore the underwear whenever I went out somewhere with the girls, they often pulled down my jeans whenever we reached a secluded area just to be sure which always turned me on


On the dy of the trip, I asked the girls if had to wear the thong and bra, they said no. I was quite relieved because there was a fairly large group from school going. On the coach we sat on the back row, with me in the corner by the window, out of sight of the rest of the coach as the seats in front of me were empty.

We were going to cross the channel by ferry, and then drive by coach down to Paris. When we were about half way to Dover they told me that the second we left England, I was their bitch for the week, it was somewhat unnerving to hear that as I had done my best not to think about it until now.

When we reached the ferry the four of us went up to the top deck, it was cool with a nice breeze up there, and there was also a nice, secluded spot I saw Lisa looking at. As the ferry started moving she took me over there.

"Strip off" she demanded, I looked around and couldn't see anyone so I agreed "now, you can't get dressed until you have an orgasm" I didn't think it was too bad, I started to jerk off when Sarah grabbed my hand

"You are girl, you bitch, start acting like one! Get on your hands and knees" she demanded. I complied, nervous about where this was heading. I looked round to see her putting on a strapon over her jeans. This was bigger than anything they had pushed inside me before and I wasn't looking forward to it.

I had become used to them fingering me, to a point where I found it fairly pleasurable so I got extremely hard as Gemma lubed me up and lubed up my butt hole too, I also saw Sarah lubing up her "penis" when a terrible thought struck me, they weren't just going to do this for how long they want, they want me to orgasm, I had never had an orgasm because of anal stimulation before, and had no idea how long this torture would last.

She started off slowly, pushing it in as far as she could, it was quite painful having something so large rammed inside me. After the first few insertions she started moving faster. This tortuous task lasted about half an hour before I had one of the weirdest senstaions I have ever had, an anal orgasm. After this they stopped and said I could have a bit of time off now, they let me get dressed and left me up on the top deck

Soraslight
04-04-2007, 07:31 AM
Sounds like my school paris trip all over again, nice story hope to hear the end soon.

anonimousbob
04-04-2007, 01:01 PM
Glad you are enjoying it


The ferry was going to last about an hour more and I was already bored. I spent some time in the shop, wondering what the girls had planned. While I was browsing at the magazines I felt someone grab me and pull me round, it was Sarah, she handed me some money and a piece of paper, telling me to buy the things on the list.

I looked down at the list:

5 tubes of toothpaste (I knew where it was going, and felt nervous already)
a pack of tights
tampons
toilet paper
waxing strips
women's razor

They also listed varying makeup and perfume products, chocolate, ketchup, syrup and chilli sauce


The list was making me nervous about the rest of the day, and I was also really embarrassed about buying the items, luckily nobody I knew saw me buying it. After I had bought it all, I shoved it in my back pack to hide it, and shortly before we arrived they came up to me and told me to wear the underwear they had for me because they took it with them after they played with me earlier. However, before I could go and change there was an announcement to go back to our vehicles, I thought I was lucky

We went down the stairs to the coach and climbed to the back of the coach, when everyone was on and we started to drive away the girls handed me the sexy underwear and said I need to wear it. I offered to change at the next pertol stop we make, but they demanded it now.

I carefully slid off my jeans, and pulled up the soft lingerie. It felt so wonderful against my balls, over the top I put my jeans back on, nobody else saw me put them on so I was relieved. At this point they handed me a bra. I bent down to carefully put it on, but at this point ella looked over and saw me, she seemed shocked. Gemma quickly texted her and explained, that was another girl ready to torture me, I felt terrible.

When we next stopped at a service station for petrol and lunch the 4 girls come over to me and told me to follow them.

"We need to show Ella some of the nice little tricks you can do, come"

They dragged me to the girls toilets, they were quite dirty

"Strip into your undies bitch" Ella demanded, I agreed, stripping down to the bra or panties, "hmm, not a very convincing slave girl, I'll help you fix it later at the hotel. For now I just want some fun. Down on your hands and knees"

I got down, and Ella sat on my back and started to spank me, it was quite nice, but painful at the same time. Deep down I had some dread that Ella would be worse than the other three, although I couldn't be sure.

After a 20 minute spanking session I was allowed to go and have some lunch, although I had to gt their's first. After an hour stop we were back on the coach. Sarah sat next to me for the final leg of the trip to Paris, she was nice to me, stroking my thigh and groin, at one point opening up my fly and rubbing me, although never letting me finish. The entire time she made me sit with my eyes closed as she toyed with me.

Smile Guy
04-04-2007, 03:43 PM
This is extremely well done. I'm impressed how this story is going and more importantly your writing skills are improving. Star author in the making here!

ksax
04-04-2007, 06:02 PM
I can't wait to see even more of these stories!

anonimousbob
04-05-2007, 05:48 AM
Thanks, glad you like it, I'll try and get some more done by the weekend, as always if you have any ideas they are welcome, post here or pm me

anonimousbob
04-07-2007, 06:52 AM
:( I wrote this bit but my laptop crahsed just before I posted it so I'll try and recreate it a bit later

depp=noob=lol
04-07-2007, 09:28 AM
ahhh....that sucks....i hope that you can recreate it is a rlly good thread/ story....

anonimousbob
04-08-2007, 03:59 PM
Once we got to the hotel we had the rest of the afternoon free, which of course meant an afternoon of doing what the girls demanded. I sighed and carried their bags one by one to the third floor, by stairs of course, not the lift.

When everything was up there I have my first task, I had Sarah, Lisa and Gemma in the room

"Hand me the chocolate" it was put on a radiator and started to melt "since Sarah has given you the most pleasure so far, you will return the favour"

Sarah them started to strip, down to her panties and bra, moving over to one of the beds and sitting down.

"You have to clean her using only your mouth" they continued, this didn't sound to bad, sarah had a very hot body

she walked over the the radiator, opening up the choolate packet and pouring the liquid chocolate down her panties, front and back, and some into her bra. She proceeded to rub in the chocolate in the panties.

She laid down on the floor, face down, and I was ordered to clean her, I used my mouth to pull down the panties at the back, licking her soft, smooth arse, it was wonderful for me, and giving me a hard on. About a minute in I was pulled away

"you will be naked unless we say otherwise" Ella had just entered the room, she stood me up and stripped me off, even the panties and bra.

I was thrown back to the floor to continue my suprisingly pleasurable punishment. Sarah looked so hot that I din't mind the way she had rammed the chocolate right up her butt crack and all around and into her arse hole. I just licked it clean. Once this was complete I went to lick the panties clean but was ordered to stop. I used my mouth to then undo the bra clip, a very challenging thing to do with only your mouth.

Once I had finally tackled the clip, Sarah rolled over ontop her back, seeing her lie there was such a turn on, she was so hot and sexy. I was told to start at the top and work down.

I pulled down the bra, sucking her wonderful nipples clean, I felt her reach down and grab my cock, stoking me as I cleaned her. Once I had done her soft breasts I moved down, although I kept my groin close enough for her to reach, I was enjoying the reward I was getting.

I started to lick her groin clean, she had shaved down there so her skin was as soft as the rest of her body. As I began to lick her pussy clean I felt her rub my arse, the longer I sucked her, the more she groaned, the stronger she grabbed my arse and the more intense the stroking was. This was an amazing experience, one I didn't want to end. Suddenly Sarah came, stroking me more than ever, causing me to come too. Ella wouldn't stand for it,

"Girls don't ejaculate, now be a good slut and eat it" Most of it had landed on sarah, although she seemed to enjoy it, it appeared she enjoyed me licking her clean again even more as she stroked me a bit longer.

As further punishment, put on the panties and bra. I did, they were still filled with chocolate which was spread out as they massaged it around my groin, butt and my nipples. At this point they took out a spoon, telling me to eat it all. They had covered my entire groin and penis, even shoving a load up my butt hole. I took the spoon, started to strip, although I was told to do it how it was. I scooped out the mess in the bra, then around my penis before cleaning my arse.

"I know I shoved some upyour hole, clean it now!" demamnded Ella, she was worse than the others, really trying to make me suffer. I put the spoon up mybarse hole, scooped it out and ate it, I doubt much of it was chocolate, but I had no choice in the matter. I swallowed the disgusting lot, just thinking about the pleasure I had just experienced to help me get through it.

Soon after I learned what my true punishment had been whilst enjoying Sarah, Gemma had put laxatives in the chocolate and they were starting to work.

"Here, put this on" as I was handed a nappy, an adult size nappy. I put it on just as I ran out of time and the entire contents of my guts came flowing out. "don't worry, it only lasts for 5 minutes"

Once my intestines had recovered and were back to normal I was ordered to take a shower, hut first I must get in the cubicle and rub the filth on my body. I comlied, just happy to be permitted to remove it.

Once I had covered myself, I started to to wash off, cleaning myself for nearly an hour to get the stench off. When I was done I stepped out, finding my towel missing. I moved into the bedroom to find all the clothes, bags and sheets gone, all I could see was a cupboard in the corner but it was locked. On the door was a not saying to go up to the room above, naked. I felt it was some kind of trap.

I stepped out the door, checking the landing was clear before cloding the door. I ran to the stairs about 5 metres away and went up one floor. I snuck across the landing to the door, knocked an ran back to the stairs, hiding behind the door. Looking out I saw a teacher answer, it had been a trap.

Suddenly I was grabbed from behind by the girls who took me down to the swimming pool in the basement and into the girls changing rooms. I was held down on the floor by Lisa and Sarah. Ella and Gemma stood over me, pulling out a razor, scissors and waxing strips. Gemma sat on the floor beside me, cutting down my pubic hair, she then took wax strips and put them on my groin, penis, balls, chest and legs. They then left it for a while, using the razor to shave my armpits and any other hair they saw. After this they suddenly grabbed the wax strips and ripped them off. It was a terrible pain, and they rolled me over straight away, waxing all over my back and up my arse crack, even places I doubted I had any hair.

They then taped my penis between my legs and used some kind of skin glue to attach fake breasts, realistic ones, the kind of gel ones that give girls extra cleavage but are fairly obvious they are fake from close up. They felt very real and they used something to mould it to my skin to look natural. They then used the same glue to give me longer hair, adding makeup and anything else they could to make me appear female.

Once this was done they dragged me into a changing cubicle, looking down it seemed they had just given me a brazillian waxing, they threw me a bikini and told me to put it on. The strap of the bottoms gave me a terrible wedgie, although it became quite nice after a while, making me understand why women liked thongs so much. I put the bikini top on, looking in the mirror I had huge breasts. They then took me to the pool demanding I swim 10 laps, unfortunately there was a group of girls in there, they were french girls staying at the hotel. I sensed that it could be an embarrassing swim.

"If they come over to you and realise you are male, yopu must offer to do anything for them in exchange for their silence"

It was not going to end well...

Glutgod
04-08-2007, 05:19 PM
Wow a very good story!

JohnC15
04-08-2007, 05:23 PM
I love this story and i can't wait for the rest you are a great writer and this is a great story. Keep up the good work.:D :D

Tessdog
04-08-2007, 08:14 PM
I was loving it but you made a huge mistake, you used my plot of fake breast and all that jazz. Keep it orignal.

anonimousbob
04-09-2007, 03:15 AM
actually tessdog I didn't, for a start this is a minor part of my story (just looked at yours and it's a major part of yours), secondly I didn't even remember your story at the time. I guess it's possible that it was in the back of my mind somehwhere from ages ago and if that's the case then sorry

Tessdog
04-09-2007, 09:21 AM
Its cool, I was just over reacting. I think we really need to work on a story with each other. Mean me in the chat section so we can write it.



Tessdog

dared to perfection
04-09-2007, 02:55 PM
best story written on this site.

it has left everyone that has began to read it wanting more

anonimousbob
04-10-2007, 07:11 AM
I'm glad you are enjoying, and once again if you have any ideas please send them to me (nobody suggested stuff yet :( )


I climbed down the steps into the water, it was freezing. I looked over and saw a sign claiming that the water heating was turned off at 9:00 pm; it was just past 9:30. I started swimming; the French girls were sitting by the side of the pool at the other end, the end I was swimming towards. As I approached the end I tried to keep my face down, holding my breath. I turned around and swam back down towards my mistresses who were smirking. I continued to swim, managing to hide my face when I reached the French girls. I managed to do the laps without the girls talking to me so I climbed out the pool only to have Lisa quickly take a picture of me. I got angry and demanded that she delete it. She pointed out that they were my masters, and that the girls had looked up. I had been speaking in my normal voice but fortunately they didn’t come over to see what was going on and I thought I had got away with it.

I had to walk back up to their room now, in the swimming costume. Luckily nobody was out of their rooms. When we were back inside they unlocked the cupboard and got out all the things they had hidden

“Now I need to punish you for not going to the room upstairs” insisted Gemma

“But I did….” I tried to explain, but they said I had to be at the door when it was opened.

“hmm, now let me think of an appropriate punishment. Perhaps we should leave you by the door and let people come and look” suggested Lisa. I begged them not to do that, saying they promised not to involve anyone I knew

“Ok then, lets do something very evil to you…” I gulped at Ella’s pause, hoping she was being over dramatic and that she didn’t really have an evil plan

evanekid
04-13-2007, 01:07 PM
cme on bob whn u gna carry on wit grt story

the dude
04-13-2007, 01:36 PM
Yeah,this is a good story and i like it and you should write the next part.
I think your a future writer!

penguin13
04-14-2007, 09:06 PM
good story cant wait for the next part

anonimousbob
04-21-2007, 01:12 PM
“Ok, since you are being so pathetic about it, we will save that for if you disobey us so badly again. For now I’ll just make you uncomfortable”

They left me in the bikini and dragged me into the shower. I was ordered to get the water to the correct temperature. I did so and when I confirmed it was a comfortable temperature they tied my writs and ankles, forcing me to the floor of the cubicle. It wasn’t exactly a bad punishment.

“oh, and you should be able to see” Sarah leant down and put some swimming goggles over my eyes.

Soon I knew why it would make me so uncomfortable, there was a limited hot water supply to each room, and ours had nearly gone. Pretty soon the water became ice cold and I was left freezing for what seemed like an eternity. Later that evening Ella came in.

“you look cold, I know how to warm you up” she stripped off and stood over me in the shower “you might not enjoy it, but you will love the warmth of this”

She let a golden shower pour over me, mostly hitting me in the face. It was disgusting, some of it had gone in my mouth but she was right, it was wonderfully warm.

“For tonight, anytime we need to use this room, it will go on you. You will accept it because you need the warmth”

Throughout the remainder of the evening I both anticipated and hated the moments the girls came in, giving me the disgusting, glorious warmth I wanted so badly. At the end they took me out and warmed me up, saying I had learnt my lesson

JohnC15
04-21-2007, 01:17 PM
Bravo Bravo Great story so far but it was to short. We need more.

evanekid
04-21-2007, 03:42 PM
very good but plz we need more

timmy
04-22-2007, 01:25 AM
more more more, im like a little kid

the dude
04-23-2007, 08:01 PM
Dude come on this is like torture so give us the next part! PLEEEEAAAAZZZZZZEEEEEEE! It's an awesome story!
:D

RockerChick9
04-27-2007, 06:14 PM
i agree. its a very good stroy. i love it keep on writing!

anonimousbob
04-30-2007, 09:46 AM
To make up for last night I was allowed the morning off, although I had to wear some pink panties under my jeans. We had another free day to do what we like around town, the girls were going shopping.

As we left the hotel Sarah came up with a couple of French girls, they looked familiar but I couldn’t quite remember where from.

“I started talking to these two girls a minute ago and when I said I was going shopping with you they asked to join us.” This was the first I had heard of my going shopping, but I didn’t mind spending the day with Sarah, away from Ella and her overly dominative ways.

After about an hour of shopping, Sarah and I hadn’t bought anything although the French girls had bought a few things. As we walked down the road Sarah stopped to do up her shoe lace and one of the French girls beckoned me over.

“So you like dressing like girl” she whispered in my ear, she spoke very good English, although she did have a fairly heavy accent. At this moment I remembered where I knew them from, they had been in the group at the pool the night before, they must have seen me.

Sarah stood up and we kept walking, I was a bit embarrassed about the girls seeing me but they didn’t seem to be laughing at me although it was hard to tell since they were speaking in French, and it wasn’t a subject I was taking despite me being on the trip.

About 1:00 we stopped for lunch, sitting down in a nice little cafe, it was fairly quiet and the area we were in was empty. We decided what we wanted and Sarah went up to order while we sat down and.

“Later you come with us for some fun” one of the girls said, it turned out their names were Louise and Sophia. After this I went up to help Sarah with the food, feeling a little nervous that I would get stuck as a slave for someone else.

Half way through our lunch Sophia stood up and walked towards the toilets, indicating for me to follow. I waited a while and then followed her as she walked into the girls toilets. I saw that she had one of the shopping bags in her hand. She told me to get into one of the cubicles and sit down; she then stood at the door until Louise arrived with Sarah.

“I told Sarah about your little adventure last night, she said she made you and we can join in now” This was taking a turn for the worse, I was turned on by the three hot girls surrounding me, but knew what could be next.

I was ordered to strip, although they told me to stop when they saw the girly, pink undies I had on. After this I was handed the shopping bag in which I saw a wonderful selection of clothes, not wonderful for me but they would be if one of these girls was wearing it.

After I looked through the outfit they pushed me onto the toilet seat, pulled down the panties and held me there, my hands and legs were chained to pipes and I couldn’t move, at this point they took out a small metal object and stuck it onto my chest, wires came out of it which were one on each of my balls, one on my cock and a couple for my nipples. There was one more wire but it didn’t seem to be used, I was unlocked and told to face the toilet, they forced me on my hands and knees and I guessed where the other wire went. They connected it to a metal dildo like object and pushed it up my arse, it was terribly cold. It turned out there was a sex shop down the road and Sophia and Louise had bought this present for me.

I was then instructed to put on the bra and panties included in the bag, and that the rest would be saved for later. I put the pink panties in the bag and put on the almost see thru black thong and a black, sexy bra. Sophia then stuffed the bra before allowing me to put my clothes back on. I had a fairly thick jacket so Idid my best to hide the breasts I had been given, they were fairly big so it was awkward

Once this was done they let me go back to eating, although I felt an odd tingling as I was walking. I was informed, shortly after an unpleasant jolt to my arse, that each electrode could be controlled separately and that each could go between pleasurable and painful, I was gifted a pleasurable tingle in my penis. It was an odd feeling, but I enjoyed it and was willing to bet that the fully painful setting wasn’t one I wanted to experience, so I decided to play along.

Throughout the afternoon I experienced a fair share of pain and pleasure. I often made the mistake of refusing to try on various outfits that had been selected for me, being rewarded if I cooperated. After a tiring day we finally walked back to the hotel, I was expecting even more treatment like this.

the dude
04-30-2007, 02:08 PM
I like it! so keep on goin cuz this is gettin good!:D

Big_Joe
05-01-2007, 12:51 PM
Fantastic story. Please take your time with it so it remains as good as it is now! Do not rush!

Glutgod
05-01-2007, 04:53 PM
Wow yes a very good story!

JohnC15
05-02-2007, 07:55 PM
need more please finish great story!!!

anonimousbob
05-03-2007, 11:52 AM
As we entered the hotel lobby the lift door opened and a group of people stepped out. We got in and Sophia pressed the button for the top floor.

“Right then, you have until the top floor to get changed” the hotel was 20 stories, with a basement car park below it. I looked at the girls with a bewildered look, to which I got a mild pain on my balls, so I started to undress.

Once I was naked, except for the panties and the stuffed bra, they chucked me a bag, the same one I had looked through earlier. I was worried I would be seen wearing it, after all I knew what was in there. I pulled out a sexy, nearly see thru white top, a tight black miniskirt and a pair of thigh high boots.

I started by putting on the top, through which the black bra was clearly visible. After this I slipped on the skirt, which felt to me more like a belt than a proper skirt, and finally the boots, they were tight against my skin, and almost impossible to stand in, but after a while I got my balance. I was ready just as the lift stopped, thankful that nobody had gotten on whilst we were ascending. At the top floor Sarah said “meet you at the room” and pushed me out as the doors closed again. I panicked at first, pressing the door open button dozens of times but the lift had gone.

I rushed to the stairs, not thinking to check if there were people around, but luckily I didn’t encounter anyone. I ran down the stairs, checking the floor as I passed each one. Running as fast as I could in the boots I moved down the building until I reached the floor where the girl’s room was. I slowly opened the door, I could see the room, the door was slightly open and the hallway was clear, I quickly moved along the hall to the door, pushing it open only to be grabbed from behind and blind folded.

I was forced to my knees by the unknown person, and behind me I heard the door shut and lock. My hands were handcuffed behind my back as I had someone squeeze my cheeks to force my mouth open. I felt a rubbery, horrible tasting object being pushed in, thrusted to the back of my throat, making me gag. This was repeated for what seemed like an eternity before disgusting flavour goo oozed out the end. My blindfold was ripped off and I was looking at Ella standing over me, holding the blindfold, next to her were Sophia and Louise with Sarah sitting with a video camera, filming me. Sophia had a strap on penis, on the floor I could see a small container with “Sperm flavour” written on it, with a series of statements about the realistic sensation that comes with the product.

“oops, I thought you were a bitch girl” laughed Sophia as my head was pushed down to the ground, leaving me with my arse sticking up in the air and my butt crack spread open.

I could just about see Ella move round behind me, but I soon lost sight of her. I felt my boots being unzipped and afterwards the panties were pulled down to my knees.

“Maybe he is a bitch girl, he has a dildo shoved in him. Oh, and is this the remote for the vibrator” I felt the tingling begin on all the electric pads, with the strongest being up my arse. It grew stronger and stronger and it became clear that she was using the pleasure setting, she place a bowl below my penis as the device seemed to reach the maximum power.

The sensation was amazing, I was having what felt like loads of small orgasms, which soon turned into me cumming into the bowl in fairly large quantities. After I thought I could cum no more, I had an anal orgasm, I was moaning with the intensity of the feeling, and soon it was turned off, just as the feeling became too powerful.

“Glad you liked it, I can use it next time you misbehave or as a reward” Ella pulled out the anal electrode and pulled at the wires until they all came off, they were stuck on so it hurt quite a lot, especially my nipples as it was held in place under the bra.

I was pulled up to my feet and the handcuffs were removed, it was pointed out that I was dressed like a dirty slut, not even wearing any panties. When I argued that they had just been taken from me I knew I had made a mistake.

“I know that you stupid bitch. I was waiting for you to make a mistake so I could tell you to do this. Sophia and Louise, strip him off” As the girls stripped me, I couldn’t help but get another erection. This time I was gently teased as they rubbed my balls, it was soothing after the electric shocks, although I still ached a bit.

“Now that I have you naked, you will be my little pet slave for the rest of the day, these girls will help me control you: they will video you and help administer the punishments. For now just stay naked, you just filled your dinner bowl so it is there for when you get hungry” I looked down, my nice bowl of cum had become my dinner, how did I let it get to this. “Oh, and be a good pet and be on your hands and knees”

I knelt on the floor, going into the bathroom to go to the toilet only to be questioned where I was going. I was given a 2 litre bottle for my “drinking water” to be put in, the alternative was to drink straight from the toilet, but before I had a chance to decide, all my mistresses used it one at a time, no flushing.

I felt like being sick at the prospect, but before I could I had to pee. I unscrewed the bottle lid and was told to hold the bottle upside down above me, that way any mess would be on me. I started to pee, holding my dick right up against the opening in the bottle to seal it as much as possible, but it was very difficult and the majority poured onto me.

This was the start of my job as a pet, but so far it wasn’t too bad….

JohnC15
05-03-2007, 02:30 PM
Great story but we need more please!!!

cheesy dude
05-04-2007, 04:56 AM
great story bob hope the next bit comes out soon :)

the dude
05-04-2007, 12:15 PM
I like it! its getting better!
:D

evanekid
05-07-2007, 04:50 AM
this is great keep it going

anonimousbob
05-24-2007, 04:04 AM
I screwed the lid onto the bottle and rolled over onto my hands and knees, being a good pet for my owners.

I crawled to a corner and curled up, I wanted to sleep, hoping it would all be over by the time I awoke. However it wouldn’t be like that.

“Aww, poor baby needs to sleep, it’s only 7 o’clock” taunted Ella “well like a good little baby you need to be fed, burped and brush your teeth”

It didn’t sound too bad. Ella walked over and pulled out one of her breasts out of her bra and over the top of her partly unbuttoned blouse she was now wearing. She put my mouth next to her nipple and told me to feed, I obeyed, sucking on her nipple for a few minutes. After a short while she stood up and picked up the bowl of cum

“Looks like I’m out of milk, you’ll have to use the other stuff” she said as she held my head back and poured some of the still warm, gooey cum into my mouth. I swallowed quickly to get rid of the taste. “You seem thirsty, have a bit more” I heard as more was forced into my mouth.

Once I had been fed I needed to be burped and I was positioned on my “mother” Ella’s lap as she began to spank me, gently at first but after about 5 times she became more aggressive. Another 20 or so spanks later I was let go for me to have my teeth brushed.

‘Brushing my teeth’ constituted exactly what it sounds like, surprisingly, but it was the source of the toothpaste that worried me. I was put on my knees and had my head pushed down onto the floor. One of the girls pushed my legs apart, opening up my butt crack. I felt the tip of something enter my arse hole, soon followed by something oozing out, something I assumed was the toothpaste. After what felt like the entire tube had been squeezed out I had the brush shoved in, bristles first. The scratching of the bristles combined with the burning of the toothpaste was agony. It seemed that Sophia saw the pain through the expression on my face as she sat next to me. She began to stroke my cock and balls, whispering in my ear “It’ll be over soon…….hmm I need some lubricant”. She rubbed some lube on her hands and started to massage my balls, a pleasant experience at first but soon becoming painful “Hmm, it says on the tube it helps relax muscles, but your cock is still hard”

After about 5 minutes they pulled the brush out of my arse and took me to the bathroom.

“Don’t forget the water to rinse” I was handed the bottle with the piss that hadn’t leaked out and indicated that the toilet would work for water too; the lid was down so I didn’t know how bad it was in there.

I started to scrub with the disgusting toothpaste mixed with crap, my arse and balls still burning. I rinsed my mouth with the urine but instantly regretted it, spitting it out.

“Wow, the baby’s starting to grow up, brushing his own teeth. Now lay on the floor” I laid down on my back and they held my legs up in the air in a straddled position as they applied powder around my groin and placed a nappy on my.

“Just in case you have an accident over night” I crawled over to the corner and tried to get to sleep. After 15 minutes I heard giggles and the sound of cameras. I opened my eyes to see the group of girls taking pictures of me.

“Are you awake now, good. Stand up and take off the nappy, we need some nice photos to remember this”



I might do a bit more this afternoon

anonimousbob
05-27-2007, 12:02 PM
I stood up to take the nappy off but was reminded that I was a baby. I crouched down on the floor and took off the nappy as I was blinded by more camera flashes. I positioned myself to hide my groin, they had filmed me earlier but I still felt self-conscious about it.

It was about 8pm now and I hadn’t eaten for 7 hours, but I wasn’t going to give into my hunger, I knew it would either be cum or going somewhere in an embarrassing attire. I chose to ignore my suffering until I had decided which of the two would be worse, probably the cum as it wouldn’t even satisfy my hunger, but nevertheless I waited until it was at least dark outside.

After much teasing and tormenting I finally gave in and told them I was starving but didn’t want to eat any more of my cum.

“Very well, we’ll take you somewhere nice to eat out” a sentence that was to be interpreted in the most dominating way they could.

I was permitted to wear my own clothes, but with the female underwear, and we left the hotel and walked down the road, Sophia and Louise leading us. After about a ten minute walk we reached a park, a large field with areas of woodland scattered about. We crossed quite a long way into the park and entered one of the woody areas, secluded from the rest off the park. I was ordered once again to strip off, and I did so, not wishing to suffer another one of the punishments they had planned. I was stopped once I was down to the underwear and blindfolded, my arms tied to a couple of branches above my head. My arms were stretched in this position so I could barely keep my feet flat on the floor.

Gemma whispered into my ear softly “remember our first date”, she was referring back to the day at school where I had been tied to fence, it seemed so far away but it suddenly became much fresher in my mind now I was in a similar situation.

After 5 minutes I heard Sophia speaking French to someone and some giggling of a person I hadn’t seen before to my knowledge.

“This time I think you should see what is happening to you” my blindfold was taken from over my eyes and I saw a group of teenage French girls, they looked maybe a year younger than me.

Sophia and louise explained to me how this was an area that the teenagers round here come to smoke and such and that I was a gift to them for the night. There was to be a group of maybe 10 or 15 girls that night, all horny and willing to play with me.


This is all I had time to write today

Best
05-27-2007, 12:23 PM
EXCELENT!!!! plz write more ::))))) i am so intrested in this story :)

Truthgu
05-27-2007, 04:37 PM
Dam, I don't know how many times I masterbated thinking about this story. Keep it up, and by that. Keep my STIFF, STIFF!

anonimousbob
05-28-2007, 02:26 AM
Dam, I don't know how many times I masterbated thinking about this story. Keep it up, and by that. Keep my STIFF, STIFF!
:eek:
lol I'm not sure if that's a good or bad thing, but glad you enjoyed it


ok done a little bit more



So here I was, tied to a tree with three people who I thought were friends, two people I had met in france and two other strangers who were just leaving to get some friends and some supplies for the evening. To top it all off I was in nothing but lingerie and my arms were stretched up so I could barely stand with my feet flat on the floor. Yet despite all this I was being turned on by the soft hand that was making its way up my leg, owned by someone crouched behind me.

It moved slowly up the outside of me leg, then wandered over to my inner thigh and caressed it before gently massaging my balls through the soft underwear.

I heard the person behind me stand up slowly, bringing their hand out from between my legs, grasping my arse as it went round my leg and to my groin, massaging it again as their body was pushed close to mine. The hand moved to the rim of the panties and started to push into them from the waist line with the other hand massaging when suddenly a noise came from in front. It was the girls back with a few bags, the supplies they had gone to get. The person quickly withdrew.

The new French girls, the ones I didn’t know, put down their things and walked over.

“Have you been thinking naughty things while I was gone?” she grabbed my erect penis and squeezed it hard, hurting quite a bit as she dug her nails in through the thin panties. “Well we know how to fix that” she walked over to one of the bags and ripped it open, it looked like a sealed plastic bag, she took a handful of something out and Gemma pulled the panties out at the waist, opening it up as the girl dropped the handful into them. It was freezing, a handful of ice plopped onto my erect penis,

My penis didn’t go flaccid so she took it over the top of the panties’ waist and started to rub it with a handful of ice whilst another load was poured down the back of the panties.

Truthgu
05-28-2007, 09:25 PM
Keep Writting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

turbo1914
05-29-2007, 05:06 PM
good story alit more of the girls naked.

anonimousbob
05-30-2007, 10:10 AM
lol, well if anyone has any story suggestions for later I'll listen to them, no guarantee I'll include them but please send them to me

Bored
06-03-2007, 02:12 AM
good story please finish.

dared to perfection
06-03-2007, 06:01 AM
lol, well if anyone has any story suggestions for later I'll listen to them, no guarantee I'll include them but please send them to me

i am amazed how you still have ideas of your own it seems to me that every idea possible has been used so far.

i would love to post an idea for the story but have none and only hope you can continue it as i have commented a while ago it is the best story written on this site !!

JohnC15
06-07-2007, 04:07 PM
i agree and i would like to read more so can you write some more? please?

anonimousbob
06-08-2007, 12:19 PM
I will, but I have exams at the moment so they have priority. I will try and do some more as soon as I can

JohnC15
06-08-2007, 02:45 PM
ok i under stand about exams and school work just dont forget about your story ok thanks

2doctor
06-10-2007, 04:00 AM
more more need more please nedd more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Big_Joe
06-10-2007, 06:27 AM
Listen give the guy a break for a bit his stories are fantastic and if he has exams i'ts fair enough that he puts his priorities on them. Besides, if he tried to rush his story just to entertain the public them it may not be as good as it could be.

2doctor
06-10-2007, 07:52 AM
i now their fantastic but i just cant w8 you have to admit that you cant w8 either

anonimousbob
06-12-2007, 03:18 PM
Just so you know, I do still have exams but I wrote this quickly in 5 minutes of spare time I had, so it probably isn't very good


I was filled with a combination of pain and pleasure and one of the girls rubbed my penis with ice moving around in the panties. I was pleasured to within a few seconds of climaxing when she suddenly stood up and pulled down the panties, gently sliding the soft fabric down my legs and over my feet.

Most of the people here had already seen me naked, or at least seen my penis, yet I still felt the urge to cover myself, trying to pull at my bindings.

Over the next couple of hours a dozen or so girls, all extremely sexy, came and played with me in various ways. Most of them just played with my penis, which although very pleasurable actually became somewhat tiresome, partly because my penis began to ache with the constant rubbing and molesting. Some wanted to tease, punish or humiliate me using various methods like playing with me but never letting me have my orgasm, stripping off slightly but never quite finishing, pushing things up my arse like dildos which my mistresses had decided would be a good accessory for the evening. One girl actually stripped off below the waste to see what her outfit would look like on me, which both embarrassed me greatly and was a huge turn on.

Then, there was one girl who approached from behind and blindfolded me, it was at the end of the night and everyone else but my mistresses had left. My mistresses were trying to find some more girls to come and play, not wanting my torment to end prematurely.

This final girl started to stoke me like the person who was behind me at the very start, staying behind me and being so very gentle, making sure I was feeling every last ounce of pleasure she could give. She gently stoked my thighs, tickling but feeling so very nice at the same time, another hand moved onto my balls, stroking them before suddenly nothing. The hands slipped away and stopped. I was alone. I was blindfolded.

I hung there in silence for a few minutes when I felt warmth grow around my penis, moving along from the head as soft lips pursed around it. An agile tongue with so much skill started to tease my cock as it slid further into the mouth, touching the wall of the throat. It was an unusual and sensational experience that built up, leaving me wanting more with every second. The intense feelings built up until the emerged as a thick stream from my penis and slathered the back of the throat and the tongue as the mouth slid back up my penis and off.

For a few seconds there was nothing when I was embraced in a deep passionate kiss with whoever had just been pleasuring me, sharing the sperm with me, something that usually I dislike the taste of and yet this experience made it taste somehow better, or at least more acceptable.

I felt her slip a pill of some sort in my mouth and the next thing I remembered was being in the hotel room with my mistresses with an odd sensation in my arse. I turned my head to see Gemma behind me, her fingers embedded in my arse for an unknown reason.

As I regained my senses, the first thing I had heard was “I told you he enjoyed it” and as I looked down I could see my penis was as hard as ever, curious about what had happened that night.

Truthgu
06-13-2007, 06:38 PM
My Friend,

You know how to write a great story. At this time, I have finals as well, so everyone back off this great writer. I must says wow, that was just...Like....so well written. Depp or whoever the mod of this board is these days. I think that this writer should get the award. His stories are 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 000000000000000000000000000000000 better then mine. All I am asking from you, is that you provide me with a end to this story. In 10 days I will never come back to getDare again, because I will not have computer acess. So please just give me a outcome so I don't wondor all summer long.

Tessdog

Bored
06-13-2007, 10:39 PM
you are an exeptional writer but on the other hand writers do not do good under pressure. i do not want to have the story end short sorry tessdog. but it will be better for us all if he just takes his time on it.

anonimousbob
06-14-2007, 01:05 AM
well, to be honest I only have a vague idea of where it is going, so I couldn't even tell you breifly in a PM

JohnC15
06-15-2007, 10:38 AM
so f-ing awesome dude best story ever write more please as soon as you can . no worries lol

oh and tessdog im leaving for europe this summer to so i wont know either so i feel you but give him a break ok

peace
JohnC15

2doctor
06-23-2007, 12:53 AM
brillaitn man please write more

pilot939
06-23-2007, 09:46 AM
all i can say is WOW...this is deffinately the best story on this site :p and i'm doing my finals too :p my finals gcse exam in on monday wooo however it's physics...hmmm you should have written this for your english creative writing lol you would have got an A* for creativity. and i'm sure you would have got a note from the examiner for more hehe.
good luck in your exams anon, and take your time.
have a gd day. ;) keep up the good writing :D

anonimousbob
06-23-2007, 04:29 PM
lol, I don't think this is one of the available subject areas for english, but glad you like it. I still have quite a lot of work to do but I want to do more soon

Gotmilk272727
07-13-2007, 03:36 PM
I dont mean to rush you but... come on! school is over! how can you still be doing exams!?

Rowan
07-14-2007, 03:12 AM
give him a break!
school isnt over for me yet - may not be for him

anonimousbob
07-15-2007, 07:18 AM
excuse me but demanding me to do more won't make me write. I live in England and school is not over for another week, and we still do work even if it isn't as much as normal. Also, how do you know what I have been doing recently, I could be busy with other activities and if shool is over, I might be on holiday. I haven't even been on the forums in over a week.

I will write more when I have time, and when I think of some original ideas. If you think of any ideas ou think would be good in the story then PM them to me and I may include them. I am still busy at the moment but will write if I get time

molten man
07-16-2007, 01:22 AM
anonimousbob.. too good. the best story on d site!!

sonshinegirl653
07-29-2007, 08:05 PM
just take your time (even though the wait it excruciating) because im sure it will be worth it after the long, hard wait.

molten man
07-30-2007, 09:22 PM
just take your time (even though the wait it excruciating) because im sure it will be worth it after the long, hard wait.

i would second that!!

Gotmilk272727
08-15-2007, 01:39 PM
i really dont mean to nag but the wait is just to much! youre such an awsome writer

molten man
08-15-2007, 09:37 PM
hey anonimousbob.. the waiting has gone on for eternity now. please write soon..

Thanks

anonimousbob
08-24-2007, 01:40 AM
I'll try, but I am still busy. Feel free to send me any ideas you think would go well in the story

the dude
08-29-2007, 09:56 AM
dude i underdtand how it is to be busy becuz i havnt been on since april and all these ppl keep complaining that its been too long since i wrote anything but i just added another part to my favorite 1 i wrote alled my crazy girlfriends problem and it was good becuz i had a few months to think of ideas and it was better than if i would have wrote it right away!So yall stop bothering him to write more becuz it'll be better if he has more time for ideas!:D

molten man
08-29-2007, 10:20 PM
hey anonimousbob.. Have your exams finished and u busy with other things?? or exams are still on??

gotmilk727272
08-30-2007, 03:59 PM
this story is awsome

anonimousbob
09-11-2007, 10:49 AM
I'm having some time issues right now and don't know how to continue. If anyone wants to try carrying it on, please feel free to. I might later post how I would have finished it

molten man
09-21-2007, 11:50 PM
k. no promlemo. But please continue this story at a later stage!!

gotmilk727272
10-21-2007, 09:12 PM
i geuss your done this now?

anonimousbob
10-22-2007, 01:15 AM
I am still busy and haven't had any good ideas. Other people can continue if they want

Marc
10-22-2007, 10:45 AM
As mentioned elsewhere by someone else, this does irritate me. Please can authors have an idea of how to finish their stories, or at least be able to end their story - there is no need to have an open-ended story (unless it is an 'interactive' one like the current 'Ten Words only' story)!

Thanks!

anonimousbob
10-23-2007, 02:03 AM
I did have a general idea of how it would end, but had not specifically filled out the detail. Besides, I am very busy as I have said and originally started writing this for fun, posting it here to see what people thought of it rather than writing it for the site from the start

molten man
10-25-2007, 10:09 PM
kk. anonimousbob. Please be free as soon as posible and complete this syory!!

anonimousbob
10-26-2007, 04:38 PM
I finally got some spare time and had a go at continuing


Gemma removed her fingers and I was left with my thoughts for a while. Today was the last day of the trip, and I was sure it would be the worst, afterall they would want to make the most of the last opportunity to toy with me.

For our last day we were going to an amusement park, a fun last day of recreation and as far as I saw it, a multitude of opportunities for pain and humiliation. We left around 10ish with me stuck in a tight thong, in a wedgie of course, and a large bra beneath my usual clothes, I also had the usual duty of carrying my mistresses’ bags, fearing what was within them.

The coach ride was to last an hour, and I spent much of that time with my trousers down in an attempt to humiliate me in some way. I would have felt immune to this, but with so many of my school colleagues on the coach I couldn’t help but feel vulnerable despite the 2 empty rows in front of us.

When we finally arrived and got through the queue I was taken straight to the toilets, girls’ obviously, and told to get changed.




I know it’s short, but this sets up the next bit, I will try and do some more

slave_boy
11-26-2007, 03:11 AM
great story mate just wish some females would do that to me all of it :(

molten man
11-26-2007, 08:37 PM
No problem. Write at ur leisure!!