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Tessdog
02-15-2007, 12:48 PM
Please read, my other 4 stories before you read this one. It is the story with 4 chapters. This is next BIG part of it.

Part 1: Two Years After "Being tormented and dressed like girl"

I had moved, far far far away from my old town after that. I had a good thing going for me. It was my last year in High School. I had grown back all my hair : ). But I still seaked Revenge. So me and my Pals took a road trip. We got back to my old town around 12 in the afternoon. There, I made a few phone calls and had gotten my "Old Gang" back together. I went over good old Jacobs house. There we sat and planned, "Lets put a bunch of Condoms in the bag she takes to Church!" One guy suggested, Another said "Lets check online, I know a good website, its called Getdare.com" All these ideas were coming at me. Then fianlly it hit me. I would become someon diffrent. I would pretend to be. The New Guy in town, I would make her fall in love with me. Then I would get her back so badly, since I could just trick her because she thinks I am her boyfriend she would let me into her room. I could have so much fun...... Part 2 on the Way I want a good report before I write anymore!

spat
02-15-2007, 01:57 PM
Doing fine - keep it going.

Tessdog
02-15-2007, 02:32 PM
Please read the Part One before Reading This.

So, I told the guys the plan. All of them liked it, but how would we change myself to make me look like a diffrent person. So we did a couple things to my face. I looked like a brand new man. So, it was Vaction, Winter Vaction. The guys call her and her friend and they say they are going to go to the local Ruby Tuesday. We get there and all the guys introduce me as Luke. I had starting talking to Rebbca (The one who pulled the huge prank on me) "So how long have you lived here?" I asked. She repiled "Seven years when do you move here?" She asked, "I moved here last week at meet this group of guys at the mall." She and I where getting along fine. Then I asked, "Are you single?" she smiled and said "Yes I am". I asked her if she wanted to go out to Lunch with me. She said "Yes". So FOWARD a week later, we were sitting in some Pizza Place. We begin to get to know each other, and she falls for me. She asked me if I want to go over her house I say sure. So I go over her house we enter her room. Sure enough she has a board on the wall. Which says "Best Prank Board" I saw pictures of me nude. I was now very eager to get revenge. She sat on her bed, she asked me if I wanted to makeout with her. I did, even though she was HOT I did not want to for she was such a wicked soul. But I figured this would get us even closer. We begin to lock lips. Then I feel her tong cralwing into my mouth. Then she throws me down to the bed, and jumps ontop of me. Then out of nowhere she...... TO BE CONTIUED.... Please tell me if I am doing good or not I want a reply before I write Part 3

Tessdog
02-15-2007, 02:32 PM
Thank you Part 2 is up!

spat
02-15-2007, 02:53 PM
waiting for the conclusion

Tessdog
02-15-2007, 02:54 PM
This Story is going to be 5 or 6 chapters long so hold your horses cause its getting good......

Tessdog
02-15-2007, 03:11 PM
Please Read Part 1 and 2 first thanks!

Then out of nowhere. She says "Do I want to have some fun?" I repiled "What Kinda Fun?" She smiled and said "Its a Game, its called Strip Triva." I nod my head (Pretending I am Some Sex crazed teenager). She then picked up the phone and called her friends. In the next ten minutes all the girls were there. "Ok here are the rules, If you get the question wrong you need to take off one article of clothing ok?" "Ok, how is this fair? Though, we only have one guy." She then looked at me and said "If the girls get one wrong we all loose an piece of our Clothes." So the game had Started. They asked me the first question.

Does Victoria Secret only sell Underwear and Bra's? I was a little dumbstruck by the question but I knew for "guy" Reasons that they sold all sorts of clothes. So I said No. I had gotten it right I asked them a question.

What company invented The Halo franchise? The girl that answerd it asked whats Halo? They took of there shoes. So an hour later I only have on my pants and underwear. The girls have there shirts and pants on. As well as undergarments. I get the next question wrong and I take off my pants. Then they get the next one right. I then loose again. I take off my boxters, the girls laughed but were impressed by the size. Then one girl went to her bag and pulled out a Camera she snapped a shot and gave it to Rebbca. Rebbca said if I wanted it back I would have to be her slave. Now my Plan had become like a Box of Chocolates I was not sure what I was going to get..... TO BE CONTIUED I want a reply before I write Part 4. The story going to get very good..............

spat
02-15-2007, 03:20 PM
Doing great so far - more for 4

Tessdog
02-15-2007, 04:12 PM
Part 4 will BE REALLY BIG it will be funny, funny and some other stuff. It will go up later today or the next day.

scoop
02-15-2007, 05:46 PM
thats awsome dude!

Shawn
02-15-2007, 06:34 PM
All in one thread would be nice...

Shawn
02-15-2007, 06:36 PM
Umm you said the girls had to take off all of their clothes if they got a question wong, but they didn't??

Tessdog
02-15-2007, 06:44 PM
No per question, one article at a time. They had beat me.

Tessdog
02-15-2007, 06:50 PM
Once they are all done I will do that

Shawn
02-15-2007, 08:51 PM
do you have an ETA?

Tessdog
02-15-2007, 09:17 PM
??????? That means.......

Shawn
02-16-2007, 06:19 AM
Estimated time for the next one.

Soraslight
02-16-2007, 09:29 AM
Man i wouldn't have fallen for something like that. Keep going, don't make me beg for the conclusion.

Tessdog
02-16-2007, 12:53 PM
I am going to have to finish tommorw. I have too take Trip to NYC!

Soraslight
02-16-2007, 12:56 PM
cool can't wait.

freaksixsixsix
02-16-2007, 01:20 PM
cool story. can't wait for the rest.

anonimousbob
02-16-2007, 02:55 PM
This is brilliant ( and unnervingly like a game I once played, luckily it was called off when my friends parent got home lol)

keep it up

Tessdog
02-17-2007, 12:26 AM
Please read first three parts!

In mind I was starting to get pissed at myself for being so dumb. Then I said "Fine, I will be your slave. But for how long?". She looked at me and said "Untill Vaction ends".

Day One: So I was at Rebbca's House. Her parents were gone and she thought this was a good time to get to "know me" a little bit better. "Take off your clothes and let me feel around..." She walked over towards me. I had been a little bit on easy so I did not take off my clothes like she asked. She walked right up to me then and pulled out a "Little Taser" it shocked my whole body. Then she said "Ok you dont need to get nude, here want to have a beer?" So I am unsure of why she was being so nice. She fetches me a beer. I take a sip, I feel a little strange then I close my eyes. THEM DAM SLEEPING PILLS! I wake up and I am in the woods, my hands are handcuffed to a tree. I am cold and nude. I look at see there is a Dog Shock Collar around my neck. (Rebbca must have gotten that idea from the one story on the boards). I see Rebbca she takes the handcuffs off of me. She then hands me a robe from her backpack. I put it on and she begins to walk. I follow her, I am kinda scared to ask what she did to me when I was asleep so I did not. Then somthing accured to me, I am going by a fake identy. I will not be here when school starts for them. So those pics dont matter. Now I could make my move. We were walking then we reached her house. She fell asleep it was rather lateout her body was so tired from whatever she did, she could not even climb the stairs to her room. So she bunked on the couch. Her parents were gone for the Night so I had to crash there too. So when she was sleeping. I had taken off the shock collar. Then I had walked into her room. I had taken my backpack out, I had gotten mini cameras from my cousin. (A spy Geek). I placed them all around the room. The next day she wakes up. She tells me to go home for a couple hours and see my family. So I go and I see my pals instead. At Jakes house, I had hooked up my laptop. We watched her getting dressed and undressed. We did not send it yet because she would now. I still had a lot more planned, not only for her but for ALL the girls that pranked me..... Part 5 Coming Soon..... Please write what you think so far. I like to know how I am doing.

jackmaster
02-17-2007, 12:50 AM
Liking the story, Very Good.

Keep it going :)

the_tod_king
02-17-2007, 03:00 AM
plz for the love of god make more
:D

anonimousbob
02-17-2007, 03:31 AM
This is great, keep going :)

scoop
02-17-2007, 09:53 AM
this is so awsome dude!

Soraslight
02-17-2007, 10:06 AM
I absolutely hate it, too many cliffhangers :-P, can't wait for the conclusion, hope you get your own back lol.

spat
02-17-2007, 10:21 AM
lets work towards the conclusion

Smile Guy
02-17-2007, 11:10 AM
I've merged it all... again.

Could you please post the next installment here rather as a new thread... for my sanity, please.

Tessdog
02-17-2007, 11:40 AM
ok I shall do as you say.

Soraslight
02-17-2007, 04:50 PM
In the other post topic you made it said non fiction, but here it says fiction . Whats up with that?

Tessdog
02-17-2007, 05:13 PM
All these storys are real, sometimes I tend to be a bit dramtic though. I dont know who wrote that this was not real though...

Musty 21
02-18-2007, 08:07 AM
i'm kinda disapointed that this is fiction but it is still good

Manbearpig
02-18-2007, 08:37 AM
All these storys are real, sometimes I tend to be a bit dramtic though. I dont know who wrote that this was not real though...

Mustangman58, Tessdog just said that these are real stories, just a bit dramtic and Tessdog, really great stories cant wait till the next one!!!

Tessdog
02-18-2007, 10:03 AM
Thank you prehaps sometime later today! I will write the next part. Then I can start another 'Big Part'

Tessdog
03-01-2007, 08:36 PM
Part 5

I head to Rebbcas house, when I open the door at least 12 girls are there. Rebbca tells me that we are going to play a game. Only this time I choose what game. I say Truth or Dare..... Now its on. So It was my turn first I choose Truth. So have you ever eaten your Cum? Once, it was forced down my throat. The girls laughed. Then Rebbca went Dare. I told her too do whatever I told her to do on her bed in her room. So we go into the room and I tell her to strip, I tell her to finger herself (meanwhile the spycams are getting this) I tell her to play with her breast. I tell her to use a Dildo. Then I say ok you are done. So she puts her clothes back on...... Part 6 Coming Soon

Tessdog
03-07-2007, 12:17 PM
Part 6 THE NOT REAL PART 6 ( I am going to make two diffrent part 6's what really happend and what you want to hear. This is the fake one.

We go down stairs and then a couple turns later I am Dared too take four Viagra. So I do....... Then I am sitting down and another Blindfold comes over me. I feel cold handcuffs going around my wrist. I hear Rebbcas voice. How dumb do you think I am? I knew it was you all along. How could I forget a sucker such as you? I am trying to breakfree but I cant. My Revenge has taken a odd turn. Rebbca and her girl friends then take me to a hospital where Rebbca's older sister does Sex Transplants. Rebbca stops a man who is changing his sex and puts me in his place (Without the Doctors knowing) I am scared. Then a doctor comes over. Then takes out the sleeping stuff. I wake up. I am in a hospital bed. I see boobs. I freak and start screaming. The nurses come in and say. "Calm down Miss!" I go and talk and my voice is high pitched. I tell the doctors the story of what happend. "This may have caused serve stress to the brain that is why you do not remember anything before the opeartion." The doctors tell me. Then five days later they let me go. I am not used to being a woman. Plus I dont know where to go..... TO BE CONTINUED

Smile Guy
03-07-2007, 12:20 PM
Wow... the fake part 6 is eeeevil!!!!! A little bit too evil, to be honest. Looking forward to seeing the REAL Part 6!

Tessdog
03-07-2007, 12:22 PM
That will come soon..... But I want to see Part 4 of your story first.......

evanekid
03-11-2007, 05:16 AM
plese please hurry up i can't wait for the next part
the made up bit was a bit farfetched though

chain
03-11-2007, 01:04 PM
You gotta wait 2 weeks.

Musty 21
03-11-2007, 05:20 PM
how did he get banned! The stories! NO!!!!!

Manbearpig
03-11-2007, 05:24 PM
It looks like after a really bad yesterday, the Tessdog era is officially over. (Wonder why :scratchchin: )

JohnC15
05-02-2007, 08:04 PM
finish up the story please!!!!!!

Truthgu
05-26-2007, 11:59 AM
This is the real part 6

"I know you have a camera, you are in big trouble." I was worried for my life. I know Rebbca, I knew this was a problem. I jumped out of the window and slid down the roof. Sadly, I did not slide the right way. So I fell and hit my head. I was ok, but when I woke up I was laying down next to Rebbca. I was wearing a Silk Gown. She told me, that she popped a bunch of sleeping pills and viargra in me. I was worried, what she was planning to do. " Ok, I am sorry but you lost the game. I won, so where am I going to leave you? How about I send you to the girls room at college. There you can be their slave. They should treat you well, but first I am taking some pictures then making sure that the magizane company I work for, "puts" it in there. Your welcome. Oh I hope you rember my sister, Haley.


Part 7 Coming Soon

anonimousbob
05-26-2007, 01:06 PM
cool, i like this story, keep it up tess

2doctor
06-10-2007, 08:52 AM
need more write more this is to good to miss tessdog are you gonna be a athour when older if so can i ave your auotgraph

JohnC15
06-10-2007, 03:13 PM
need more write more this is to good to miss tessdog are you gonna be a athour when older if so can i ave your auotgraph

you do know hes banned right?

guakamaya
06-10-2007, 07:30 PM
can't wait to hear more i do hope you get back at them!!!

Truthgu
06-10-2007, 07:45 PM
Ok,

Guys, please go off and have someone else finish the story. I wish I could write, but I am very busy.

Tessler

Manbearpig
06-19-2007, 08:43 PM
Looks like Tess has been banned.....again.

Leblonk
08-17-2007, 05:48 PM
hurry up!!! please?

Manbearpig
08-17-2007, 06:20 PM
u will not be seeing posts by Tessdog, unless once again he has created a new username again (which i doubt). But I think this story is done with. This thread probally could be locked....

Leblonk
08-18-2007, 05:12 PM
why has he bin banned

bobo
08-18-2007, 05:15 PM
He became a power-crazed maniac and start screwing with depp (not a good idea:p ),i think