My Time With Jake

[boxershortsboy]

Hey guys :). I've been on this website for a bit now, reading all the stories and I decided to write my own!

This is a completly true story, one that I think of every day.

I am open to constructive criticism, so feel free to comment!

This story will be written in the first-person perspective of Zach (Me)

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Characters:

Jake:

Age:13
Height:5'6"
Eye colour:Blue
Other Interesting Facts: Likes playing Truth or Dare, speaks 4 languages (English, German, French and Russian)


Zach (Me):

Age: 14
Height: 5'11"
Eye colour: Blue
Other interesting facts: Secretly thinks Jake is cute, has a fetish for boxer briefs.

Chapter 1: How it all began:

As I go out onto the street to catch the bus, my phone rings. As I pull it out of my pocket, I notice it is Jake calling.

I met Jake on my first day of Cadets. We both started at the same time - and we became really good friends. Some believe that we are even brothers (we look very alike).

(Me) "Hello?"

(Jake) "Hey man! Waz up?"

(M) "Not much, just on the bus heading home. You?"

(J) "Just bored as hell. Wanna hang out tonight?"

(M) "Hell yeah. Where and what time?"

(J) "Eh, my house around 5 if you can."

(M) "Is there food?"

(J) "When isn't there?"

(M) "I'll be there for 4:30"

(J) "Haha alright, see ya then"

(M) "Later"

As I get off the bus, my mind starts racing, thinking what could come from this night? Will we become more then friends?

I step into my house, and I'm greeted by my German Sheapard, rightly named Bear. He is a HUGE dog. (I don't even think he is a dog !!). I head up to my room and start the shower, putting it on really hot because of my tense muscles from lifting pumps all day.

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End of Ch. 1.

Let me know what you guys think. I'll post the 2nd chapter either later tonight (If i get good feedback) or tomorrow around the same time.

~Zach

[Luke.m]

This looks really good :) I want to read more :)

[KjblankenshipKevin]

Sounds interesting. Please continue

[standard muffin]

Can't wait for more! Keep it coming!

[boxershortsboy]

Thanks for the feedback guys :)!

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Chapter 2: The Sleepover

I head up to my room and start the shower, putting it on really hot because of my tense muscles from lifting pumps all day.

My watch starts beeping.. *beep* *beep* *beep*. As I look at it, I notice that the time is 4:30.

Frantic, I rush to get my clothes on - pulling on a pair of dark blue fruit of the loom boxer briefs, American Eagle pants and a plain white t-shirt.

As I leave my room, I get a text from Jake:

Hey if you want, my mom said I could have a sleep over with you.. ask your parents and let me know

(M) "MOM!"

(Mom) "Yeah honey?"

(M) "Can I go for a sleepover at Jake's house?"

(Mom) "Sure, just be back before dinner tomorrow, you have to babysit your brothers tonight."

(M) "Alright, will do. Thanks mom, love you!"

(M texting Jake) Mom said its ok. Be there shortly

I run back into my room, and grab 2 shirts, 3 pairs of pants, and 3 boxer briefs and boxers and set out for Jake's house.

*30 minutes later*

*Ding Dong*

(J) "Coming!"

(M) "Haha well close the porn and open the door"

(J) *Opens door* Well aren't we a funny guy, eh?"

(M) "Not my fault, you set yourself up"

(J) "True that. Come on in, my mom has to leave for work shortly, the police are short on staff tonight."

(M) "So we can have some... fun, together? Haha"

(J) "Just wait until you find out"

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Sorry to cut you guys off there lol, but I gotta have some suspense :p.

Anyways, lemme know what you think and hopefully a new chapter will arrive shortly :)

~Zach

[loves_the_dares]

good so far...it makes you want more!!

[boxershortsboy]

Thanks :)

Hopefully later on tonight I will have time to write Ch. 3.

I hate work :(

[dirtylittleboy]

keep going. it could get very interesting

[exsuberman]

Please keep this story going, it is great so far excited to see what comes next

[Mr. Fun 21]

Really good job. :)

[kinky]

Finally - A mxm original story.
Not seen one of these around on GD for a while that I like now!

Keep it going, I like your story so far :)

[Abmp]

This sounds really interesting, keep going!

[boxershortsboy]

Hey guys!

Thanks for the comments :) I love them.

Unfortunatally, my vacation is over and I have lots of stuff for work to catch up on.

I have managed, to, however, finish writing another chapter :)!

Hope you enjoy!

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(M) "Damn Jake, I'm hungry' I say as I poke my head around his fridge "Got anything to eat?

(J) 'Sorry bro, I kinda ate it all".

(M) 'Well whats for dinner?'

(J) 'Pizza. Should be here shortly.'

(M) 'Sweet. Wanna do something while we pass the time?

(J) 'Like?'

(M) 'I don't know. CoD?'

(J) 'Let's spice it up a bit though alright? How about for every game we lose we have to do a dare and every game we win we have to do a truth?'

(M) 'Fair enough' I say as I put CoD MW3 into the xbox. 'You so totally know I'm gonna win!'

(J) 'No way in hell!'


So, for an hour of play we each played 3 games. Here are the scores:

Zach|Jake

3 Wins | 2 Wins

(M) 'So... No dares for me and one dare for you! I win!!! Haha."

(J) 'It was lucky! If it wasnt for that stupid sniper I wouldv'e won.'

(M) 'Thats what you say every time!'

(J) 'Anyways. Whats my dare?'

(M) 'Umm.... Let me think here....... Umm.... Answer the door in just your boxer briefs"

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I'll try to post one or two more chapters before the end of the week.

Love!
Zach

[loves_the_dares]

Could you make the Chapters a bit longer? This story has real potential but it needs a bit more detail. Good so far though :)

[boxershortsboy]

Hey;

I am trying to make them a lil longer, but I don't really have the time to work on them. Between work and babysitting, I have only about an hour a day to myself (not including sleeping :p).

Within the next.... 2 or 3 days a new, longer chaptre shall be posted - I promise :)

[Mr. Fun 21]

Seems like its going to be good! :D

[Abmp]

Can't wait!
And just so you know- we will hold you to that promise...

[boxershortsboy]

Can't wait!
And just so you know- we will hold you to that promise...

I dont doubt it XD

~Zach

[Tylerr]

Liking it so far.. dont let it develop to quickly

[boxershortsboy]

(J) No way man! What if it's Tyler that's deleviring the pizza? I don't want him to see me like that!

(btw, Tyler is a good friend of both me and Jake. He works for the pizza place we order from as a delivery guy)

(M) You agreed to doing dares if we lost a game - and you lost, Jake!

(J) *sigh* 'Don't have a choice, do I?"

(M) " No, you don't"

Just then, the doorbell rings *ding-dong*

(M) "Well, what you waiting for? You wanna eat you gonna go get the pizza in your underwear!"

As Jake takes off his shirt, I can just see the outline of his abs. He's been working out with me for some time - but he seems to be able to put on muscle much faster then I do.

Slowly, Jake strips off his American Eagle shorts, and kicks them off

(J) "Better? Now, I'm hungry. Let me get the food"

(M) "Ok"

As Jake walks away from me, I can't help but stare at those boxer briefs that hug his ass real tight. Some would say they are a little bit too small for him. Others would say 'Holy crap, thats hot.'. Well, it defenatally it cute on him - that's for sure.

As Jake opens the door, a very familiar voice comes from behind the door

(From this point on, the letter T is Tyler talking)

(T) "Hey! Jake! How you doin..... What the crap?! Get decent before you open the door!"

(J) "Haha very funny Ty. Now just give me my pizza. Here's 20 bucks. Keep the change."

*slam* goes the door.

As Jake walks back towards me, I notice a small tent forming in his boys blue fruit of the loom ringer boxer briefs.

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Stay tuned for more :)

And please,, spread the word to your friends!

Thanks! (And lots of love to all of you out there in cyber world!)
Zach

[Abmp]

Cool update
Write some more ! It's good

[boxershortsboy]

Hey guys! Sorry for the lack of updating... Computer chrashed and stuff with family happened but I should be able to post another chapitre soon!

~Zach

[Mr. Fun 21]

Well i cannot wait!! :D