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Creeper
05-30-2012, 09:49 PM
WARNING I WROTE THIS LIKE A SCRIPT

Morgan- Hey Dylan how are you?

Dyaln- Im doing good babe.

Morgan- Thats good, wanna come over to my house tonight, no parents will be home.

Dylan- Sure but then i got to get back home to finish my Collage application.

Morgan- Ok babe just knock when you get here.

Dylan- Ok bye babe.

Morgan- bye

Jared- I guess im going to be home alone for a little bit, arnt I?

Dylan- Pretty much ill order you a pizza if you want.

Jared- Its fine just go have fun bro.

Dylan- I will little buddy and remember dont tell mom im leaving.

Jared okay bye

Dylan- bye

Dylan opens up the window and jumps out.

Dylan gets to morgan's house.

"Knock Knock"

the door opens

Morgan- Hey babe

Dylan- hey babe girl (kisses)

Morgan- So wanna watch a movie with me?

Dylan- Sure what kind of movie?

Morgan- Who cares we will be making out the whole time.

Dylan- True so should we just skip all that time putting a movie in and just start kissing?

Morgan- Sure whatever you say im yours tonight.

Dylan- Cool

Dylan and Morgan make out for 10 minutes.

Morgan- Can I get you a drink?

Dylan- Sure babe.

Morgan- okay

Morgan gets up and Dylan slaps her ass.

Morgan comes back with drinks.

Dylan- What took you so long?

Morgan- Just had trouble with the drinks.

Dylan- oh okay.

Morgan- Drink up

Dylan- okay.

They both drink the drinks.

Dylan- Whats going on why am I so tired and Dizzy.

Morgan- I dont Know Probably Because I DRUGGED YOUR DRINK!!!

Dylan- WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU DO......

Dylan Knocks out on the couch

I hoped you liked part 1. NO RUDE COMMENTS

Slugger
05-30-2012, 10:18 PM
this story has much potential. I don't like the writing style, but IG you want to stay that way and you know be unique I would suggest that you make it more detailed.

Morgan gets up and Dylan slaps her ass.

I would say "Dylan found him self lost in Morgans round ass it was something he had always dreamed of tapping, I slowly reached out and have her a passionate yet firm slap on her fine ass"

daremaster23
05-30-2012, 10:24 PM
Great story and yes please change format if ya can, but please dont go into THAT much detial ^ story above but get some if you can.

Hunterman36
05-30-2012, 10:34 PM
Why am I feelin tired and dizzy? Oh I don't know probably because I drugged your drink!!!

That was hilarious lol.

dobelozero
05-31-2012, 08:30 PM
dude that i didn't expect at all