|05-04-2012, 12:49 AM||#1|
Join Date: May 2011
Blog Entries: 5
One Girl Two Guys – When Truth Or Dare Knows No Limits
They say the game “Truth or Dare” never ends well, but I have to disagree.
Not too long ago a buddy of mine and I got caught up in a spectacular version of this game. We were at his house and he had invited a girl he was interested over to hang out with us all.
We were outside in the backyard having a great time. The music was playing loud, the fire in the fire pit was roaring and the drinks were going down fast and smooth.
We had been swimming in his pool most of the day and had grown a bit tired of that now we were just drunk and passing the time. His girl smugly suggested we play truth or dare. Considering how drunk we all were it seemed like a logical thing.
Of course as all games of truth or dare start out this one was pretty simple. Questions like “have you ever run a red light” or dares such as “run around the pool three times” were passed back and forth amongst us.
It took a bit before the dares got a little lewd and crazy.
At first they were voyeuristic in nature: She was dared to kiss my buddy or my buddy was dared to grab her breast.
It was obvious where this was going. Still, someone had to make the move and sure enough in a drunken haze lines were crossed when he told me to bite her ass.
She smiled as I did this and then we all instantly knew there were no limits.
Soon enough each one of us sat there naked, exposed to the elements, with the music still blaring away and the alcohol never seeming to end.
At some point she was left out of the game and just became the object or our desires and command.
We told her to dance around a pole and she did.
We dared her to suck and nibble on our cocks and she did.
Before we knew she was giving us full blow jobs.
It was an insane situation you could only imagine or see in the movies.
At some point I dared my friend to move behind her and screw her while I watched. This girl, who we barely knew, didn’t even bat an eye as he entered her and began pounding away.
We eventually took turns switching positions and having our way with her deep into the night.
We had sex with this girl in every position imaginable.
She was hungry for everything thing we suggested. It was the craziest and most thrilling sexual experience I have ever had.
The next morning, or maybe it was afternoon, we all woke up with throbbing headaches and sore muscles.
We made small conversation never really touching on the topic of the previous day’s events.
It is now a few years later and shockingly we are all really good friends still, even the girl. Each of us is married and our spouses all hang out.
Whenever we are out of ear shot of anyone else the girl always manages to bring up that day with some smart remark.
It’s usually something to the effect of:
“So, when are we going to have round two or a repeat of that summer?”
My buddy and I can never tell if she is just joking or if she really wants it.
We may never really know with how close and tight knit are little social circle is, including our spouses.
Still, a part of me secretly can’t wait for the game of that time to continue again.
Truth or Dare is not only a game. It is a passion! You don't need to be young to play it. You need to be crazy!
Last edited by dareupyourparty; 05-04-2012 at 12:52 AM. Reason: Put in rest of the story to avoid double posting.
|05-04-2012, 03:05 PM||#2|
Join Date: Dec 2010
well I started with "oh this might have potential" and finished with "oh, this was only the summary? "
As to content, it's pretty much 08/15, but okayish and a good story to entertain most people on here, no doubt. But you could've written about 20 times as much, with the same storyline, just more detail... and I mean 20 times more, no exeggeration... ^^
Idk... it's over before it started, rather like a short porno than like an actual story, yet stories don't work that way :3
I'm pretty positive tho, that you have potential as author, if you take your time and write with details and all...^^
|05-05-2012, 03:07 AM||#3|
Join Date: May 2011
Blog Entries: 5
Thanks for the feedback.
I was worried it would turn out that way. But good to know where to set the bar for quality.
There are several stories sitting around on my cpu, but they are all this way. Short and to the point. I don't know if I will find the time to "lengthen" them by adding in descriptions if I feel the story is already complete.
Probably a question of the individual writing style.
But I'll think about it
|05-07-2012, 12:20 PM||#4|
Join Date: Dec 2010
When I wrote myself I had to force myself to writing the "slow way". Always wanted to get it straight to some point and yea... lost the potential on the way tho
Basically the whole story thing lives from the idea that your reader can symathise/identify with certain characters, love them, hate them, or just like the idea of what they are put through, which is some kind of identification tho.
To gain this you have to give the reader the opportunity to feel himself in the situation you're describing, in whatever you way do that. It demands however a certain minimum detail to make someone being able to connect to your story.
Ofc there are different styles of writing, I however guess each of them aims to entertain the reader tho
I just did some notes of what I thought about the first lines... I'm definitely procrastinating to not having to do my research paper for school :/
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