12-12-2010, 01:58 PM
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getDare Sweetheart
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 great story and hey you stole my name :P
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27 Years old, EU. Likes: Bladder control, Nudity(hidden), CBT, Pet Play, Cum(as in eating/drinking), spanking, extreme pain Will do(don’t like nor dislike): Semi-Public, lines Dislikes: Anal, Messy Limits: Needles, Involving Family/Friends, Wetting, Permanent, food and blood. Don't be nice, treat it like an object. That's what it is. |
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12-12-2010, 02:03 PM
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@ Karl14, the name Karl is from my best friend. And no, this story isn't based on him.. I use my friends names for inspiration..
Also.. Part 4 will follow this message.. It is short, alot shorter than the others.. but it is the "set up" for part 5, which will be monumentally long. I won't post for about a week now, maybe Thursday if you are lucky. |
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12-12-2010, 02:03 PM
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Part 4.. [Realisation]
--- The girls approached me and Holly puched me in the arm. “What was that for?” I asked, my hard on fading “Wake up you lazy sod!” she shouted at me And then it hit me. I was dreaming. Somewhat glad, yet disappointed at the realisation, I opened my eyes to find the girls stood infront of me in just their pyjamas. “Can you get off our bed please?” Josie asked, trying her puppy dog eyes on me. I reluctantly got up and walked, still half asleep, out of the room. As I shut the door, I heard Ellie giggle and say, “Did you see the lump in his shorts?”. I shook the voice away, thinking it was still part of the dream. I walked into the lounge, and saw, when looking at the clock, that it was 6 pm. What were the girls doing, going to bed at this time. I wondered no longer and set up the sofa bed. We had a six seater sofa where each seat folded out to be a single sized bed, or when all out, a large-ish bed. I chose four seats in the middle, allowing the two at the edge to be used to watch TV. I flicked through a few channels, but being before the watershed, nothing funny was on. I decided to change into my pyjamas, which were just a new pair of boxers. I opened my suitcase, and searched through for my boxers, to no avail. I was sure I packed some.. At least 5 pairs actually. I decided to ask the girls if they knew. I went to the bedroom door, and gripped the handle. As I opened the door slowly, I heard the familiar cute voices coming from the four-poster bed. I swung the door open and they jumped. “Evenin'” I casually said to them “What do you want?” Holly and Josie said in unison. “My boxers.” I snapped “Well, I think we have a dilemma, don't we girls.” Josie said, as if leading the group “And that is?” I asked “We have something you want, and you have something we want” Holly said, pulling me onto the bed “Ok, but you don't just take my stuff and expect me to do as you say to get it back” I said, feeling somewhat angry at the youths, but at the same time, slightly horny. “Fair enough. What about truth or dare?” Ellie asked, blushing slightly. The other girls murmered and nodded in agreement. “Ok, just a quick game” I said, climbing off the bed and slumping on one of the bean bags. “Cool” Holly said, “here are the rules” …. To be continued.. Just a quick note, half of Part 5 will be focused on T or D, leading into the main part of the story. By my estimates, after Part 6, I will be 1/3 of the way into the story, and maybe a sequel or two to be made.. |
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12-12-2010, 02:18 PM
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Hurry
I'm lovin it more than Mcdonalds!
now please don't make us wait another 3 hours!! |
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12-13-2010, 02:38 PM
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Like it, tho the girls so young?
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12-13-2010, 02:59 PM
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It is in the R18 section.. if offended, read on no longer.
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藤叶从藤蔓上 缓慢地飘落 像一片脆弱的小贝壳 随着泡沫漂流 勇士小男孩 凯旋回家了 作战勇敢的小男孩 凯旋回家了  DIBS ON MEW |
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12-14-2010, 02:08 PM
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if this was facebook id press da like button
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male/straight pm me to ask me for my msn ask me or dare me anything: http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...883#post331883 ireland i have household objects Loves: Dice Dares, Wedgies, Cum, Forced Orgasms, Risky stuff,wedgies Likes: Some pain, Light Public, Edging, Self Bondage, Some Anal, Nipple torture, Dislikes(will still do though) : Messy, Limit: Heavy Public, Friends/Family, Watching gay stuff, Day long Dares, Xtreme pain |
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12-18-2010, 04:01 PM
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Hurry up, i want to know what happens in the monumental post
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12-19-2010, 05:25 PM
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did this story die?
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PM me dares! I will try any dare that gets sent that doesn't have anything to do with any of my limits! I need help figuring out my likes, dislikes and some limits! Dare me!  Likes: Mouth soaping, writing lines, spanking, anal, slight pain, certain public things Dislikes: ??? Limits: Certain public things, permanent, major pain, any type of sex, family, friendsIf you think I deserve a punishment for not updating my story, punish me. 
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12-20-2010, 12:57 PM
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no,i am just having trouble getting on the computer [belongs to mate, and the snow here is causing transport trouble - he has pw and if i go to bed b4 he gets in, i cant do any more to the story.]
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12-20-2010, 03:06 PM
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i cant wait for the next part. please hurry
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16m http://www.formspring.me/dareboy7 i must do any dare that i get as long as this is a part of my signiture like: humiliation, anal, masturbation, edging maybe: messy stuff, cum related, bondage, bladder control dont like but will do:feet, ice, pee, pictures, crossdressing no: extreme pain, pemanant, friends/family, illegal, scat |
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12-20-2010, 08:34 PM
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please keep going Im liking the story
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12-20-2010, 10:49 PM
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Please More. Please?
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12-21-2010, 11:15 PM
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getDare Sweetheart
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great story, but i noticed something that could make it better. towards the beginning, there was a part where holly muttered something under her breath, and you wrote what she said, but then the main character didnt hear her. this story is told in first person, and its confusing if the reader hears a character say something, but the narrator does not. it would also make it more suspenseful if you wrote something like "i heard her mutter something under her breath". then, the reader is left wondering what she said, and it doesnt give away the plot outright
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18/m likes: masturbation, low-risk, slight crossdressing, video game dares, will do: most things not in limits limits/dislikes: urine/feces, family, public, pain, pics, messy http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...926#post272926 Ask me anything! I have limits but I'm willing to push them for the sake of a thrill. If you have a dare that isn't in my limits but not in my likes, keep it mild and I will most likely do it.  |
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