Old 04-17-2014, 07:22 AM   #1
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Mary sat at her computer with a glass of wine looking through the work wanted websites looking for a job to replace the job she was fired from last week and to make things worse she was three weeks behind in her rent and had $3000 worth of dept she owed people. She was 19 years old and with no family and she was about to get evicted.

Not finding any jobs she poured another glass of wine and wondered what she was going to do with her life if she got evicted. As she drank another glass of wine she decided to look on Craigslist and came across an ad that caught her attention. The ad read

“Wanted female slave for one full years work $1,000,000 at the end of the years work. All accommodation services and meals supplied for the year. Must not have dependents and can leave as soon as possible. You will be working for a large company as a slave at the company’s private resort and conference centre taking all requests and orders from all staff and guests.To receive the million dollars on completion of slavery all staff and guests will complete evaluation reports on your tasks and how you preformed to determine if you receive the money at the end of the year. Must be prepared to do many degrading things for your money. If interested apply to the email address below.”

Mary thought to herself is this too good to be true $1,000,000 and a year’s paid holiday at a private resort just to fuck a few guests each day it’s got to be better than homeless and broke here?

Mary opened her email account and sent an email to the address indicating her interest in the position and sent it off. The next morning Mary heard a noise at her apartment door and quickly got out of bed to see what the noise was. Looking down to the floor she saw that someone pushed a envelope under the door and after closer examination she realized it was a final eviction notice giving her forty eight hours to vacate the property.

Great start to the day she thought to herself as she made a coffee and switched on her laptop to look for another job. As her yahoo homepage started up she realized there was two new emails waiting to be looked at and proceeded to click on her account. The first was just junk mail but the other one was from the slave ad with the heading you have been approved for slavery.

Mary quickly opened the email to read the following “Thank you for your application and we are happy to accept you as our slave if you still are prepared to go through with it. We are sending a representative from our company to see you sometime in the next 24 hours to answer any questions you may have and sign a contract. If you still want the job she will pay off all your bills and money owed. And take you away with her immediately to the resort.”

Wow this it all happening so quickly but I’ve got nothing to lose any more Mary thought to herself as she finished her coffee and watched her TV or a while. Later that afternoon Mary heard a knock at her door and walked over and opened it to see a tall blond woman in a business suit holding a folder standing there.”Hello is you Mary? I’m from the company you applied to” she said. Mary showed her in and made her a coffee.

After chatting for a while and showing her pictures and information about the company resort she said “now Mary are you shore you want to go through with this once you start you will be trapped at the resort for the full year and you may have to do some degrading things at times if requested by guests” she said as Mary replied “if I stay here I’m in a lot of trouble and owe a lot of people money they want back.” “OK sign this contract and give me a list of everyone you owe money to and my company will sort it out and you will leave with me now.” Mary made a list of everyone she owed money to and signed the contract. “Give me some time to pack some clothes and we can go” Mary said as she walked towards her bedroom.

“Don’t pack anything all your clothes are supplied and I will send someone from the company to pack and store your things for the year.” Mary couldn’t believe her luck as she was walked out of her apartment building and into a black limousine then onto a private jet and finally landing at the resort on a private island covered in palm trees.

As she departed the plane she was welcomed be two girls who escorted her through the lobby where she passed a big red chair with the word slave written on it then to the manager in his office and left closing the door behind them.

“Welcome to the island Mary let me tell you a little about what we do here. This private island and the resort is owned by a multinational company that sends some of their special employees that wants to have cretin kinds of fun in private that they can’t do at home due to special circumstances and it’s your job to accommodate their needs” he said as he looked over Marys body.
Once finished looking he continued to say to Mary “form this moment you will address anyone at the resort as Sir and from now on you will lose your name and if asked you will address yourself as slut do you understand?” “Yes sir” she replied and nodded her head.

“Now the guests will start arriving in the morning there may only be a few at the moment or there could be a lot depending on who takes there holidays at what time of the year so I expect you to be sitting in the lobby on the slave chair at six o’clock waiting in case you are needed for any reason.”
Is there anything else Sir or can I go to my room and rest for tomorrow?” Mary asked the manager.

“Strip naked and throw your clothes in the corner he said as Mary nervously removed all of her clothes leaving them in a pile in the corner. “Such small tits for a 19 year old what size are they and how tall are you?” “34AA and I am five foot six inches tall Sir” she replied slightly embarrassed knowing he was looking over and commenting about her small tits. Reaching for his intercom he asked his secretary to enter the room and instructed her to take Mary to the bathroom and shave her pussy bald then escort her naked to her room where she will find some more appropriate clothes to wear tomorrow morning waiting on her bed.
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Old 04-17-2014, 07:34 AM   #2
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deswill,

The first thing I want to briefly note is that there are some grammar, punctuation and spelling mistakes. Maybe run it through Word's spell check and double check things like commas?

But that aside, honestly, I'm enjoying it so far. It's a little quick in terms of pacing and going from one event to another - it feels like you wanted to get to Mary's arrival at the resort rather quickly - but it works okay because we get the general jist of the story, and I'm excited to see where you take it next.

Just take your time, don't rush, build up things at a nice pace, and don't feel like you have to get to 'main events' at breakneck speed. Lots of potential here!
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Old 04-17-2014, 07:43 AM   #3
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Interesting storyline! and opening, would love to see how this works out! Keep it up
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Old 04-18-2014, 03:35 AM   #4
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Love your story so far! Really looking forward to the next part(s). As Doctor said. Some grammar errors. Maybe you could try to find someone who reads it before you publish it and takes all the errors out if you aren't that good at grammar.
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Old 04-18-2014, 03:59 AM   #5
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It's great so far keep going.
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Old 04-18-2014, 08:45 AM   #6
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Great start to the story.. I love it..
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Old 04-18-2014, 02:43 PM   #7
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this is realy good pm when the next one is up.

I agree though, there are a few grammer mistakes, they can be easily corrected.
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Old 04-18-2014, 05:02 PM   #8
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Old 04-18-2014, 08:01 PM   #9
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The first thing I want to briefly note is that there are some grammar, punctuation and spelling mistakes. Maybe run it through Word's spell check and double check things like commas?

Thanks doctor for your advice. I just installed Microsoft office word on my computer so hopefully that will pick up my grammar mistakes in the next parts of my story.
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Old 04-26-2014, 03:27 PM   #10
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Hope you post more too as I am very curious what kind of things she'll have to do. Hopefully a bit more than the usual BJs and having vanilla sex though .
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Old 05-03-2014, 10:16 PM   #11
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When is another chapter coming?!?!?
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Old 05-07-2014, 09:08 PM   #13
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Can't wait till the next section
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Old 05-07-2014, 09:33 PM   #14
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Old 06-10-2014, 06:03 AM   #15
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I really hope this story isn't dead, as I would like to hear more!
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