Fiction: Lose Bet And Be My Slave.........Emma's Revenge

andrew_b · 10-09-2009, 10:07 AM

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here is the link to the first story
http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=32292

Part 1

*Heather rings Emma*
Heather: Hi
Emma: Hi
Heather: Hey wanna come over to mine, all the girls over
Emma: Em yeah sure, i'll be right over
*Emma arrives at Heather's*
Heather: Hey come in
Emma: Okay
*Emma enters kitchen and all the girls are sitting at table, Emma is a bit suspious*
Emma: Hey whats going on, this isn't an intervention or something
Emma: Is it?
Heather: No no no
Heather: It's just me and girls have been chatting
Emma: Okay?
Heather: It's about last week
Emma: I told you already Heather I don't want to talk about that anymore
Heather: Well i'm sorry you feel that way but I do
Heather: Andrew is an asshole and needs get whats coming to him
Emma: But like I lost the bet, fair and square
Heather: Yes I know but thats no excuse for the way he treated you
Emma: I guess so
Heather: Good
Heather: I mean he knows how shy you are and the stuff he made you do, god i wanna rip his head off
Emma: And plus what you seen wasn't all of it
Heather: Oh?
Emma: *cries* He beat me if i didn't do what he said
Heather: Oh thats it, i'm bet we can think of something so he never does anything like this to you again
Emma: Okay
Heather: Okay as i said me and girls have had a talk about it and this is what we came up with

To Be Continued

blaise1 · 10-10-2009, 12:32 AM

This is great all you storys are I cant think of anything that needs improving beside it can being a bit biger.

andrew_b · 10-10-2009, 02:56 PM

Part 2

Heather: What yous think?
Emma: Isn't taking it a bit too far?
All girls: No
Heather: Plus it would be funny to see the look on his face, even he would be embarrassed
Emma: But like it's very cold out
Heather: Well it ain't snowing so I think he will be fine
Heather: Okay we will do it tonight
Everyone: Okay
Heather: Okay Rachel and Jennifer will get the supplies, while me and Emma will get some muscle to help us
*Rachel and Jennifer go off to the local shop*
*Heather rings Paul and Mike and tells them about their plans, they think it's hilarious and are glad to help out*
*Everyone meets up at Andrew's*
Heather: Okay here is what we will do, Jennifer you go in and tell Andrew you have a flat tyre and can he come out to help you
Jennifer: Sounds good, I know he fancies me anyways so shouldn't be a problem
*Jennifer goes up to Andrew's place*
*doorbell*
Andrew: Hi Jen, whats up
Jennifer: Hi got a flat tyre just wondering if you could come down and help me out
Andrew: Yeah sure just let put on something descent
Jennifer: Okay
*Jennifer can barely contain laughter as Andrew goes to change*
Andrew: Done okay now to help with this tyre
Jennifer: Coolio
*They head down to the parking lot and the Mike and Paul jump out from a tree and pin Andrew down to the ground, the girls strip him butt naked. They then tie him up, put a blindfold on and throw him into the back of Heather's car*

To Be Continued

molten man · 10-10-2009, 04:04 PM

Good start...

Waiting for the next part!

NatGetsHighOnCoffee · 10-10-2009, 04:14 PM

starts interesting

cornylad · 10-10-2009, 05:29 PM

bery interesting,cant wait for next part

seth18 · 10-10-2009, 07:12 PM

i like your style, but you rush it a bit. Too much stuff happens it a few seconds/sentences.

I figured he was gunna get stripped, but there wasn't much detail, no screaming, cussing, freaking out, fighting back, it's great, but slowing down & adding more would make it #1!!!

EXAMPLE:

The two head out to the parking lot, while Paul & Mike were waiting up in a tall tree. Adrew walked by and was jumped by Mike & pinned down by Paul while the girls stripped him down to his birthday suit. One quickly scooped up his clothes while teh rest of the girls blind-folded him & Mike tossed him into Heather's back seat before any other noises were made.

Of course, it wouldn't be quite liek that, since your style is a bit different. And I'm nto trying to be rude, just giving a little advice.

And if you want this removed, contact me or a mod, either will be happy!

andrew_b · 10-10-2009, 07:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by seth18

i like your style, but you rush it a bit. Too much stuff happens it a few seconds/sentences.

I figured he was gunna get stripped, but there wasn't much detail, no screaming, cussing, freaking out, fighting back, it's great, but slowing down & adding more would make it #1!!!

EXAMPLE:

The two head out to the parking lot, while Paul & Mike were waiting up in a tall tree. Adrew walked by and was jumped by Mike & pinned down by Paul while the girls stripped him down to his birthday suit. One quickly scooped up his clothes while teh rest of the girls blind-folded him & Mike tossed him into Heather's back seat before any other noises were made.

Of course, it wouldn't be quite liek that, since your style is a bit different. And I'm nto trying to be rude, just giving a little advice.

And if you want this removed, contact me or a mod, either will be happy!

no i don't think rude, i don't mind thanks for advice i will try to put more detail in it

andrew_b · 10-12-2009, 02:24 PM

Part 3

*They drive off, with Mike now driving*
Andrew: Where are you taking me?
Heather: You'll see
Heather: You seem to be enjoying this, your dick is very perky tonight
Andrew: I am
Heather: Want me to jack you off?
Andrew: Yes please
Heather: Hmm okay but you must not cum
Andrew: What if I do?
Heather: I'll superglue your dick to your leg
Andrew: Okay well I guess I better not then

*Heather violently jerks Andrew for about 30 seconds*
Andrew: Ouch, Why so hard?
Heather: You didn't think i'd let you enjoy, Did you?
Andrew: Suppose not
Heather: We will continue to do this every 10 minutes
Andrew: Okay
Andrew: Will I be able to cum later?
Heather: You will be able to cum when we drop you off
Andrew: Drop me off where?
Heather: Where you are going to be staying tonight
Andrew: Okay
*Mike continues to drive further out of town*
Heather: I guess it's jerk time, Rachel you wanna have a go?
Rachel: Em sure
*Andrew's dick grew harder knowing Rachel was going to touch it*
*Rachel starts to gently caress Andrew and very quickly speeds up pace, she does this for about 20 seconds*
Heather: How do you feel now?
Andrew: Very horny
Heather: Shame cause your not getting any relief off us
Andrew: No
*Mike pulls in to get some petrol*
Andrew: Why are we stopping?
Heather: Relax we are only getting some fuel for the car
Andrew: Okay but can anyone see me?
Heather: Well me Rachel, Jen, Emma and Paul can
Andrew: Okay yes but can anyone else?
Heather: I'm pretty sure no one can see in at you but can be positive
Andrew: I don't believe you
Heather: Doesn't matter if you do or not
Andrew: Okay
*Mike fills up tank and then pulls away*
Heather: Another 10 minutes have passed, Emma wanna have a go?
Emma: Me?
Heather: Yes you
Emma: Oh I dunno
Heather: Come on, it's not that hard
Emma: Okay i'll try
*Emma gently strokes Andrew*
Andrew: Oh thats the stuff
Andrew: Mmm
Heather: Keeping wanking him, wanna keep him hard for a bit, at least until we get their
Emma: Okay
*They travel into another town about an hour away from where they all live*
Heather: Okay, now we just need to find a nice spot
Andrew: Nice spot for what?
*girls giggle*
Heather: You haven't long to wait now
Heather: Okay this looks good
*Mike pulls over*
Heather: Now stop Emma
Emma: Okay
Heather: Hmm I think you have had too much fun for one night, i think we need to soften you up
*Heather then pulls back Andrew's foreskin and rubs an ice cube over it*
Andrew: Ah

Andrew: Thats so damn cold
Heather: Oh thats nothing, trust me
*Mike and Paul lift Andrew out of the car*
Andrew: Where are we?
Heather: You'll find out soon, promise
Andrew: Please take me back home, I beg off you
Heather: It's too late for that
*Andrew breaks down*
Andrew: Please I'll do anything, I swear anything
Heather: Ha you sound like you did when we were dating, i didn't forgive you then and i'm not forgiving you now
Andrew:

*Mike and Paul untie Andrew*
Andrew: Oh thank you
*takes off blindfold*
Heather: You think your night is finished, ha cute
Andrew: What?
Heather: It's only beginning
*Mike and Paul handcuff Andrew to a near by railing*
Heather: Have fun, it's gonna be a long night
*Andrew screams out pleading for Heather to let him go but to no avail*

To Be Continued

The Judge · 10-12-2009, 04:07 PM

Totally Awsome! Keep it up! Next case please

cornylad · 10-13-2009, 08:49 AM

plz keep going,i liking this continue plz

andrew_b · 10-15-2009, 04:38 AM

sorry i'm a bit stumped as to how to continue, hopefully think of something soon

molten man · 10-15-2009, 03:35 PM

Nice continuation. Keep it going!

andrew_b · 10-18-2009, 01:15 PM

Part 4

*after five minutes of standing their andrew realised that they weren't coming back, he began to panic wondering if they would ever come back and was also wondering where the hell he was. He knew if anyone seen him that he was in a very compromising position and they could do anything to him. After more time had passed Andrew heard some footsteps in the distance. He then realised how strong his hearing had become, he could hear cars that seemed like they were only around the corner. He found that them footsteps were becoming louder and pretty soon he found out what it was. It was an elderly woman probably in her 60s or 70s. She had noticed Andrew as soon as she turned the corner and she also chose to ignore him. Andrew tried to get her attention hoping that she might be able to free him but she just went about her night, heading home presumably. All of these emotions that were rushing through Andrew's body began to tire him out and he closed his eyes and somehow got some rest*

To Be Continued

andrew_b · 11-04-2009, 01:52 PM

Part 5
*Andrew awakens to find out that he had a wet dream the previous night, Andrew wondered if this could get worse and then he got his answer, a person along with their dog began coming towards him and this was no puppy. Andrew began to worry somemore. As the owner as his dog walked past, he didn't pay much attention to Andrew, presumably ignoring him but his dog took a great interest. It began barking at him and coming towards him but his owner pulled him away and continued with his walk. Andrew felt like crying and was praying for the girls to come back*

To Be Continued

10-10-2009, 02:56 PM	#3
andrew_b getDare Cultist (Outer Circle) Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Dublin, Ireland Posts: 11,063 Blog Entries: 20	Part 2 Heather: What yous think? Emma: Isn't taking it a bit too far? All girls: No Heather: Plus it would be funny to see the look on his face, even he would be embarrassed Emma: But like it's very cold out Heather: Well it ain't snowing so I think he will be fine Heather: Okay we will do it tonight Everyone: Okay Heather: Okay Rachel and Jennifer will get the supplies, while me and Emma will get some muscle to help us Rachel and Jennifer go off to the local shop Heather rings Paul and Mike and tells them about their plans, they think it's hilarious and are glad to help out Everyone meets up at Andrew's Heather: Okay here is what we will do, Jennifer you go in and tell Andrew you have a flat tyre and can he come out to help you Jennifer: Sounds good, I know he fancies me anyways so shouldn't be a problem Jennifer goes up to Andrew's place doorbell Andrew: Hi Jen, whats up Jennifer: Hi got a flat tyre just wondering if you could come down and help me out Andrew: Yeah sure just let put on something descent Jennifer: Okay Jennifer can barely contain laughter as Andrew goes to change Andrew: Done okay now to help with this tyre Jennifer: Coolio They head down to the parking lot and the Mike and Paul jump out from a tree and pin Andrew down to the ground, the girls strip him butt naked. They then tie him up, put a blindfold on and throw him into the back of Heather's car To Be Continued __________________ *Best Truth Giver 2016 & 2017* My Real Experiences http://www.getdare.com/bbs/blog.php?b=81891 Send me a pm if you want, I'm always up for chatting to people CHECK OUT MY NEW FICTIONAL STORY "Pushed to Fantasy (On Vacation)" LINK BELOW https://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthre...00#post4465100 I've also got snapchat, kik, skype and messenger. If you want to add me just send me a pm and I'll give you my username(s)

10-10-2009, 04:04 PM	#4
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	Good start... Waiting for the next part! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

10-10-2009, 04:14 PM	#5
NatGetsHighOnCoffee Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: UK Posts: 117	starts interesting __________________ (16/F) not doing dares, mainly due to lack of time We're part of a story, part of a tale Sometimes beautiful and sometimes insane No one remembers how it began. (8) You can only move as fast as whose in front of you And if you assume just like them, what good will it do? (8) not going on webcam so dont waste ur time asking

10-10-2009, 07:12 PM	#7
seth18 Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Google Posts: 196	Improments... i like your style, but you rush it a bit. Too much stuff happens it a few seconds/sentences. I figured he was gunna get stripped, but there wasn't much detail, no screaming, cussing, freaking out, fighting back, it's great, but slowing down & adding more would make it #1!!! EXAMPLE: The two head out to the parking lot, while Paul & Mike were waiting up in a tall tree. Adrew walked by and was jumped by Mike & pinned down by Paul while the girls stripped him down to his birthday suit. One quickly scooped up his clothes while teh rest of the girls blind-folded him & Mike tossed him into Heather's back seat before any other noises were made. Of course, it wouldn't be quite liek that, since your style is a bit different. And I'm nto trying to be rude, just giving a little advice. And if you want this removed, contact me or a mod, either will be happy! __________________ Here we go; Cool people use a ;; Duh! Likes: Candy. Dislikes: You. Limits: 'You have to cause I say so' Last edited by seth18; 10-10-2009 at 07:18 PM. Reason: Left something out!

10-12-2009, 02:24 PM	#9
andrew_b getDare Cultist (Outer Circle) Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Dublin, Ireland Posts: 11,063 Blog Entries: 20	Part 3 They drive off, with Mike now driving Andrew: Where are you taking me? Heather: You'll see Heather: You seem to be enjoying this, your dick is very perky tonight Andrew: I am Heather: Want me to jack you off? Andrew: Yes please Heather: Hmm okay but you must not cum Andrew: What if I do? Heather: I'll superglue your dick to your leg Andrew: Okay well I guess I better not then Heather violently jerks Andrew for about 30 seconds Andrew: Ouch, Why so hard? Heather: You didn't think i'd let you enjoy, Did you? Andrew: Suppose not Heather: We will continue to do this every 10 minutes Andrew: Okay Andrew: Will I be able to cum later? Heather: You will be able to cum when we drop you off Andrew: Drop me off where? Heather: Where you are going to be staying tonight Andrew: Okay Mike continues to drive further out of town Heather: I guess it's jerk time, Rachel you wanna have a go? Rachel: Em sure Andrew's dick grew harder knowing Rachel was going to touch it Rachel starts to gently caress Andrew and very quickly speeds up pace, she does this for about 20 seconds Heather: How do you feel now? Andrew: Very horny Heather: Shame cause your not getting any relief off us Andrew: No Mike pulls in to get some petrol Andrew: Why are we stopping? Heather: Relax we are only getting some fuel for the car Andrew: Okay but can anyone see me? Heather: Well me Rachel, Jen, Emma and Paul can Andrew: Okay yes but can anyone else? Heather: I'm pretty sure no one can see in at you but can be positive Andrew: I don't believe you Heather: Doesn't matter if you do or not Andrew: Okay Mike fills up tank and then pulls away Heather: Another 10 minutes have passed, Emma wanna have a go? Emma: Me? Heather: Yes you Emma: Oh I dunno Heather: Come on, it's not that hard Emma: Okay i'll try Emma gently strokes Andrew Andrew: Oh thats the stuff Andrew: Mmm Heather: Keeping wanking him, wanna keep him hard for a bit, at least until we get their Emma: Okay They travel into another town about an hour away from where they all live Heather: Okay, now we just need to find a nice spot Andrew: Nice spot for what? girls giggle Heather: You haven't long to wait now Heather: Okay this looks good Mike pulls over Heather: Now stop Emma Emma: Okay Heather: Hmm I think you have had too much fun for one night, i think we need to soften you up Heather then pulls back Andrew's foreskin and rubs an ice cube over it Andrew: Ah Andrew: Thats so damn cold Heather: Oh thats nothing, trust me Mike and Paul lift Andrew out of the car Andrew: Where are we? Heather: You'll find out soon, promise Andrew: Please take me back home, I beg off you Heather: It's too late for that Andrew breaks down Andrew: Please I'll do anything, I swear anything Heather: Ha you sound like you did when we were dating, i didn't forgive you then and i'm not forgiving you now Andrew: Mike and Paul untie Andrew Andrew: Oh thank you takes off blindfold Heather: You think your night is finished, ha cute Andrew: What? Heather: It's only beginning Mike and Paul handcuff Andrew to a near by railing Heather: Have fun, it's gonna be a long night Andrew screams out pleading for Heather to let him go but to no avail To Be Continued __________________ *Best Truth Giver 2016 & 2017* My Real Experiences http://www.getdare.com/bbs/blog.php?b=81891 Send me a pm if you want, I'm always up for chatting to people CHECK OUT MY NEW FICTIONAL STORY "Pushed to Fantasy (On Vacation)" LINK BELOW https://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthre...00#post4465100 I've also got snapchat, kik, skype and messenger. If you want to add me just send me a pm and I'll give you my username(s)

10-09-2009, 10:07 AM	#1
andrew_b getDare Cultist (Outer Circle) Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Dublin, Ireland Posts: 11,063 Blog Entries: 20	Lose Bet And Be My Slave.........Emma's Revenge Click here to read the completed story without user comments! here is the link to the first story http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=32292 Part 1 Heather rings Emma Heather: Hi Emma: Hi Heather: Hey wanna come over to mine, all the girls over Emma: Em yeah sure, i'll be right over Emma arrives at Heather's Heather: Hey come in Emma: Okay Emma enters kitchen and all the girls are sitting at table, Emma is a bit suspious Emma: Hey whats going on, this isn't an intervention or something Emma: Is it? Heather: No no no Heather: It's just me and girls have been chatting Emma: Okay? Heather: It's about last week Emma: I told you already Heather I don't want to talk about that anymore Heather: Well i'm sorry you feel that way but I do Heather: Andrew is an asshole and needs get whats coming to him Emma: But like I lost the bet, fair and square Heather: Yes I know but thats no excuse for the way he treated you Emma: I guess so Heather: Good Heather: I mean he knows how shy you are and the stuff he made you do, god i wanna rip his head off Emma: And plus what you seen wasn't all of it Heather: Oh? Emma: cries He beat me if i didn't do what he said Heather: Oh thats it, i'm bet we can think of something so he never does anything like this to you again Emma: Okay Heather: Okay as i said me and girls have had a talk about it and this is what we came up with To Be Continued __________________ *Best Truth Giver 2016 & 2017* My Real Experiences http://www.getdare.com/bbs/blog.php?b=81891 Send me a pm if you want, I'm always up for chatting to people CHECK OUT MY NEW FICTIONAL STORY "Pushed to Fantasy (On Vacation)" LINK BELOW https://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthre...00#post4465100 I've also got snapchat, kik, skype and messenger. If you want to add me just send me a pm and I'll give you my username(s) Last edited by Leopard; 04-28-2016 at 06:43 AM.

10-10-2009, 12:32 AM	#2
blaise1 Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 31	This is great all you storys are I cant think of anything that needs improving beside it can being a bit biger.

10-10-2009, 05:29 PM	#6
cornylad Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 178	bery interesting,cant wait for next part

10-12-2009, 04:07 PM	#10
The Judge Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: The courtroom chambers Posts: 94	Totally Awsome! Keep it up! Next case please

10-13-2009, 08:49 AM	#11
cornylad Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 178	plz keep going plz keep going,i liking this continue plz

10-15-2009, 04:38 AM	#12
andrew_b getDare Cultist (Outer Circle) Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Dublin, Ireland Posts: 11,063 Blog Entries: 20	sorry i'm a bit stumped as to how to continue, hopefully think of something soon __________________ *Best Truth Giver 2016 & 2017* My Real Experiences http://www.getdare.com/bbs/blog.php?b=81891 Send me a pm if you want, I'm always up for chatting to people CHECK OUT MY NEW FICTIONAL STORY "Pushed to Fantasy (On Vacation)" LINK BELOW https://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthre...00#post4465100 I've also got snapchat, kik, skype and messenger. If you want to add me just send me a pm and I'll give you my username(s)

10-15-2009, 03:35 PM	#13
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	Nice continuation. Keep it going! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

10-18-2009, 01:15 PM	#14
andrew_b getDare Cultist (Outer Circle) Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Dublin, Ireland Posts: 11,063 Blog Entries: 20	Part 4 after five minutes of standing their andrew realised that they weren't coming back, he began to panic wondering if they would ever come back and was also wondering where the hell he was. He knew if anyone seen him that he was in a very compromising position and they could do anything to him. After more time had passed Andrew heard some footsteps in the distance. He then realised how strong his hearing had become, he could hear cars that seemed like they were only around the corner. He found that them footsteps were becoming louder and pretty soon he found out what it was. It was an elderly woman probably in her 60s or 70s. She had noticed Andrew as soon as she turned the corner and she also chose to ignore him. Andrew tried to get her attention hoping that she might be able to free him but she just went about her night, heading home presumably. All of these emotions that were rushing through Andrew's body began to tire him out and he closed his eyes and somehow got some rest To Be Continued __________________ *Best Truth Giver 2016 & 2017* My Real Experiences http://www.getdare.com/bbs/blog.php?b=81891 Send me a pm if you want, I'm always up for chatting to people CHECK OUT MY NEW FICTIONAL STORY "Pushed to Fantasy (On Vacation)" LINK BELOW https://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthre...00#post4465100 I've also got snapchat, kik, skype and messenger. If you want to add me just send me a pm and I'll give you my username(s)

11-04-2009, 01:52 PM	#15
andrew_b getDare Cultist (Outer Circle) Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Dublin, Ireland Posts: 11,063 Blog Entries: 20	Part 5 Andrew awakens to find out that he had a wet dream the previous night, Andrew wondered if this could get worse and then he got his answer, a person along with their dog began coming towards him and this was no puppy. Andrew began to worry somemore. As the owner as his dog walked past, he didn't pay much attention to Andrew, presumably ignoring him but his dog took a great interest. It began barking at him and coming towards him but his owner pulled him away and continued with his walk. Andrew felt like crying and was praying for the girls to come back To Be Continued __________________ *Best Truth Giver 2016 & 2017* My Real Experiences http://www.getdare.com/bbs/blog.php?b=81891 Send me a pm if you want, I'm always up for chatting to people CHECK OUT MY NEW FICTIONAL STORY "Pushed to Fantasy (On Vacation)" LINK BELOW https://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthre...00#post4465100 I've also got snapchat, kik, skype and messenger. If you want to add me just send me a pm and I'll give you my username(s)

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