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It was just another night hanging with guys. Joey was texting his girlfriend half the night, Michael was trying cheap ways to get high, meantime Jamie and Adam were playing xbox on the couch. “Dude, try this shit Nick, its so great” Michael said to me. Nah man I’m good I quickly replied. “Aww, your no fun”, Correction, I’m just not a retard.

The rest of the guys laughed, and agreed with Nick, “seriously bro, why do you always got to be high?” said Joey. Shut up you pussy, replied Michael, Your girlfriend has you whipped man. Everyone laughed at Joey now. Joey then said “ I don’t know why your all laughing, I get more pussy than all of you combined, and I’m not whipped”.” Not whipped, You cant leave your house without telling Abby where your going” said Adam, Not to mention, Girls love me and my fast car. Jamie chimed in, “Man your car goes 0-6 in like 2.4.. YEARS” The whole room boomed in the typical “oohs” It was at that time I decided to say,” yall are all pussies”.

To my demise, the tables instantly turned when Michael said “Bro. you aint even kissed a girl yet, I bet you don’t even know what a vagina is!”. The whole groups laughter was then aimed at me. My night and my entire life then change when Joey said, “Man we got to hook ole brother Nick up with a lady”. I don’t need any help I replied, when Adam chimed in “Dude you've been single your whole life, your sixteen man.” “Yea nick c’mon, Lets get you laid” said Michael.

The whole group was pressuring me so I decided to play along, and go with them. We left the house at abut 5:30 and decided to go to our high school football game.

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Old 11-22-2013, 11:49 PM   #2
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On the way to the game, Michael said he was hungry and recommended we get food, and just miss the first few minutes of the game. So we all went to the McDonalds by the school. When we walked in all eyes went to the cute brunette managing the cash register. She had a nice skinny body, about 5”10, and D size breasts. The guys told me to hit on her, because it would be good practice. “Your not going to get her she’s out of your league, but you’ll be able to try out your pickup lines on her” so all the guys went up and ordered their food, and the closer I got, the more the nervous and anxiety began to take over.

When it was finally my turn I said “Wow McDonalds has gotten big, Didn’t realize they were hiring models as cashiers”. She laughed at this, blushing, and gave me a smile. “Ill take a number seven, no mayo, Got to cut back on what I eat”. From the looks of it you don’t have to though, and I gave her a wink. She giggled again and said “your funny, my names Claire. She said “your food will be out in a sec” blushing as she walked to the back. Right before she completely disappeared she looked back at me and smiled. When she came back she handed me my tray of food and said “Have a nice day boo”. All the guys looked at me in awe, as they had just doubted me, and now everything with her went so well. “Dude she was all over you” said Michael. We all went to the table and continued to talk about Claire. Once I finished my burger I picked up the fry container to pour them in the empty burger box, to see something written on my placemat. “Call me some time – oxClairexo with little hearts around it. Right under was a 7 digit number. I showed the guys and they all went bat shit.

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Old 11-22-2013, 11:50 PM   #3
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They all suggested I go back up and talk to her before we left, so I approached the counter. To my dismay she was no longer there. I asked the cashier were Claire was and she said “Oh Claire has to go cheer for her school tonight” Then it all came to me. That was Claire Harkins, captain of the cheer team for our high school. I had only heard rumors of how attractive and popular she was, but never met her.

Normally we don’t even go to the football games, so I hardly even recognized her. I went back to the table and told the guys this news, and within seconds we were walking out the door. Once we got to the game the sound of the band playing beat against our hearts, pulsing adrenaline through us. While people were covered in paint in the colors of the school, everyone was hyped for the game. We decided to stand on the fence, so we could easily see the game, and the cheer routine of coarse. I decided to send her a text just to see how she was doing. Within seconds she replied “Omg its you from the restaurant! I didn’t even catch your name!” “ I replied back “My names nick, Thanks for your number btw” . My phone started buzzing, it was my mom calling, I answered it and she nagged me about leaving the door unlocked While I was talking to her I heard a beep in the background, the beep you get when someone sends a text when your on the phone. I tried to tell my mom I had to go, which only mad the nagging worse. After a few minutes passed I heard another beep. I was starting to get anxious, I didn’t want Claire to think I was ignoring her. Finally I got off the phone with my mom and as I hung up I got a third text from Claire! The first one said “My pleasure, most guys aren’t sweet like you  “, then “ Hey do you go to Meadow hills?(our high school) And are you going to the game?” finally she said “ well im cheering there tonight, i hope you show up either way , I got to go were about to warm up!”

Finally half time rolled around and the cheerleaders came out, and did their big routine performance. There I saw her, her perfect brunette hair, in that cute cheering outfit. She had blue and yellow pom-poms, white knee socks, and ruby-red lipstick. The music started and I though I was dreaming, She started moving around, shaking, and jumping in that tiny little mini skirt. I couldn’t help but love every second. Then she looked in my direction and smiled, She had spotted me. After half time, I was talking to the guys and they all commented on how hot she was.

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Old 11-22-2013, 11:51 PM   #4
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Suddenly from behind me I felt someone wrap their arms around my neck from behind me. “Oh my god nick you’re here!” in that soft voice of hers. I turned around and got an up close look of her in that cute outfit. Standing there in that short skirt, and knee socks, it was a battle to not get hard right then and there. She asked me if I had any plans for the night, and I said, “Nah, just watching the game” She then said, “well were up by three touchdowns, Why don’t we go hang out?” My heart was pounding, everything slowed down, I felt invincible. I went from being a looser, to having the cheer captain ask me out. I looked back at the guys and they all just gave me the “your going to get laid smirk”. Finally I spoke up and said, “Yea, that would be great!” We left the stadium and it had gotten cold out, and she was still in her uniform. “Hey lets go in the school real quick, I have some clothes in the locker room”. We walked to the school and got in through the side door and went down the hallway to the gymnasium.

As we walked we exchanged simple small talk, such as movies, interests, and school. We walked into the gym and went to the hallway that had the locker rooms. She opened the girls locker room door and said “Wait here”. She came back 30 seconds later and said, were alone, just come in for a second. I felt nervous, this was the girls locker room, but how could I say no. If I didn't go I could risk a great thing here. I walked in and it was like the men’s locker room, only it smelled fruity, as opposed to the stench of sweat in balls in the men’s locker room.
The lockers all had stuff like perfume, clothes, socks, and just girl stuff. She grabbed my hand and said c’mon, and took me to her locker. I had a slight rush of being in here, even though we were the only ones, it felt like I was doing something wrong. In her locker she had a pair of jeans, some boots, and a pink sweatshirt, Typical cheerleader.

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Old 11-22-2013, 11:54 PM   #5
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Hey everyone, If you thought the story had come to an end, it has just begun. I plan to update this every day, until its done, but i imagine there will be 15-20 chapters of this. Please post questions, comments, and any grammatical errors you see, So I can revise them. Hope you all enjoy this story, and you have any suggestions please post them!
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Old 11-22-2013, 11:59 PM   #6
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Wow. Who was in the room with them? Was this all a set up?? Great work!! Please don't leave us hanging long!! Make another chapter!!
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Old 11-23-2013, 03:17 AM   #7
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Since your title states "18+", why didn't you post it in the "R18: Mature Stories" section?
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I really like it so far, the only thing I would like to see, is a spacing between paragraphs or when people are having a conversation back and forth. That's just me though, made it feel like an uphill long winded read, till i read it.
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Old 11-23-2013, 09:08 PM   #9
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I made a mistake with this. I wrote the story in word so when I copied the chapters over, it didnt paste all of it, so now chapter 5 is a little off.

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“Hey I need a shower, Im all sweaty and gross” she said. “Just wait over by my locker, and look away im getting undressed!” This completely turned me on. Being in the girls locker room, with a naked cheerleader! I heard the sound of the curtain as she opened it and got in the shower from across the room. The sound of rushing water quickly came after that. After taking it all in I suddenly had an idea. The horny boy inside of me wanted to smell her panties.

The idea of this had gotten me hard, and I was starting to feel that rush once more. The mist of the shower emerged from the room as I slowly walked into the room. She had laid her uniform and her change of clothes on a bench in the middle of the room. I very carefully approached the bench and looked up at the shower to make sure she was not getting out. I could only see the heels of her feet at the bottom of the curtain so I was good. I approached the bench and picked up the skirt.

I reached inside to find a pink-lace thong and held it in my hands. I just pictured it on her beautiful tan body, and that rush feeling was stronger than ever. I looked back at the curtain and the coast was clear. I took a whiff and put them back where I found them. I quickly exited the room and in good time too, because less than a minute later she said, “Ok im getting out now, don’t peek!”
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Once she had gotten changed she walked out of the shower room and made a head notion to follow her. We walked to her car where she played what she said was her favorite song, and then she took me to her house. We pulled up to her house and we were In the only car in the drive, her parents weren’t home.

We walked inside and she took of her boots exposing her pink toe nails, and she lead me up the stairs to her room. While in her room we watched a movie on her bed, and she keep touching her my feet with hers. Everything about tonight just felt perfect and I didn’t know how it could get any better until she said those words.

She turned her head, smiled and said “ kiss me nick”. I felt so nervous now, I had never kissed a girl, what was I going to do, but before I could finish my though process, she grabbed me by the hair on the back of my head and pulled me in close, locking lips for the first kiss of my life. Suddenly I was on cloud nine, everything in my life was perfect. My dream came crashing down when a large shadow came across the room.
Claire’s parents had just pulled into the driveway, and she looked at me with a horrified look. “Oh my God, my parents are going to kill me if they see you here!”. I couldn’t let her get in trouble, she had just made this the best night of my life. So I acted quickly. I ran to the window and looked for an exit strategy. There was a tree in the front yard that had a large branch right above the window. “Claire I had a great time tonight” I said, and then I opened the window.

I climbed to the top of the roof as she said goodbye, and I climbed onto that branch. Once I made it back to the tree in the yard, I started to climb down. I lost my footing on the way down, and fell out of the tree and landed on my arm. I sat there for a few seconds in utter pain, until the porch light came on. I quickly got up and ran away without looking back.
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I Got a ride from Joey and told him about everything, and in the car ride home she texted me saying: “ Hey my parents will be gone till midnight 2morrow wanna come ova again, I got a surprise for you  ??” I warm feeling of excitement filled my body and I was happier then I had ever been.

That night falling asleep was very difficult, all I thought about was tomorrow. The next day I woke up and was sore from the fall I took, but I was not going to let that stop me. I went to got my hair cut, and then bought a new outfit to wear to her house. Later that night it was time to go to her house, so I got in my car and drove there.
When I rang the door bell she stood there in her bear feet, jean shorts, an orange top and she had her hair curled. Her beauty mesmerized me to the point of stuttering “ H-Hey Cl-Claire” * Clears throat* . She smiled at me and said “hey c’mon in”. I took my shoes off and we ascended up the stairs back to her room. I sat down on her bed and before I could say a word she was taking off her top.

“Holy shit I’m getting laid” I thought to myself as a really hot brunette cheerleader stood there in shorts and red bra. She gave me that promiscuous smile you see girls give in the movies. She then started walking towards me and pushed me on the bed. She started kissing me, and then unbuttoned my shirt and took it off. She then got onto her knees and unzipped me jeans.
She began to suck me off and it was the greatest feeling of my life. After a few minutes I was about to cum, but she stopped and said “Lets kick things up a notch, stay here for a second”. She then walked away with her bear feet, jean shorts, and red bra. She went into her closet and came out with a cardboard box.

She put the box down on the ground next to the bed and said those are my toys. She then sat on the bed, and told me to remove her shorts. I unbuttoned them, and slowly pulled them off, as she raised her leg. Everything she did was just so sexy, and there she was wearing nothing, but her bra and panties, while I was just shirtless.

She then instructed me to get naked and she would follow. For some reason this made me nervous once again, but I slowly unbuttoned my jeans, and took them off. There I was standing in a cheerleaders room in my boxers, taking a deep breath as I removed them too, exposing my self completely. She giggled and then did a strip tease as she removed her underwear.
She then reached into the box and pulled out a purple dildo, and started using it, and instructed me to squeeze her breasts. We started kissing, and then she pulled away and said, “lets see how kinky you are”. I let my inner arrogance take over and I said, “I’m the kinkiest man alive”. I grabbed he foot, and put her toes in my mouth, and ran my tongue all the way up her leg. All those hours I spent watching porn, were going to help me.

She then told me to use the didlo on her, so I did inserting it. In to her. She then walked to the middle of the room, and got on all fours and told me to insert it anally. And I did. After she told me to lick it. I hesitated and she said “Cmon, I thought you were kinky”. So I stood thee in the middle of her room, and started licking the purple dildo. “put it in your mouth, do what I did to your cock”. So I started deep-throating it. This was a bit embarrassing, but I was encouraged when she said “ I love a man with kinks”. “Play along, tell me how badly you want the dick” she said, “stick it in your butt”

I was very uncomfortable with this and hesitated. She then grabbed her tits and said “ C’mon do it, an you can what ever you want to me, and she squeezed her lips together like she was begging. So I slowly put it in and it was so cold. This was so wrong, but I knew what was coming after would have made it worth it. “ now just say I love dick, and you will control me”. “Oh I love dick so much, I wish I could just take a huge load to my face I said” Then I heard laughter from across the room, and in the closet.
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Ok I fixed all the chapters after my word mistake. Hope you all like it. As usual if you have any suggestions, questions, complaints, or criticism please post it.

(Also, is it possible to move this thread to the 18+ section, I forgot to do that when i made the thread)
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Old 11-23-2013, 10:31 PM   #13
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Old 11-24-2013, 12:49 AM   #14
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Oh mu god yes! It just gets better! I love your writing, and thank you for the spacing. Made me happy.
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