02-28-2012, 03:54 PM | #1 |
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The blackmail, the bike and the rebound
It was early spring and I was bored so I rang up my friend Blake and asked i he wanted to go cycling. He agreed. So 10 minutes later I cycled up to his place.
"Where you wanna go cycling today."Blake asked. "Blake, I told you over the phone remember." "Oh yea,"said Blake remembering back to the phone call, "Blackboys, wasn't it Ben" "Yea shall we go?" "Sure, I'm taking the flatter road down *there" "Well I guess we"ll be split up then cos I'm going the hill fast way." So as we set off down the first bit when we would be on the same road. I turned right while Blake turned left at the turning. As I was free wheeling down the fastest hill around for miles I started screaming "WOOOOOO" and I turned the final corner and... Sorry for a short beginning but it's setting the scene at the beginning the characters are free for you to come up with appearances for them. As you may guess so far this won't be a very long story but sorry this is only my second story my first one failed maby some of you remember any feedback whould be appreciated
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02-28-2012, 04:11 PM | #2 |
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Well I like this story. Starts out pretty good, and I want to know what happens when he turned!!
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02-28-2012, 05:42 PM | #3 |
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Looks good! Hate cliff hangers, but I love them to.
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02-29-2012, 12:46 AM | #4 |
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Ankhs for the feedback might have another part up tonight or tomorrow
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02-29-2012, 06:01 AM | #5 |
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Nothing like a bit of dirty fun on the mountain bikes!
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02-29-2012, 02:53 PM | #6 |
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I turned the final corner and as I went round it I slowed down with common sense because it was a tight corner. So as I turned the corner I got whacked off my bike by a low branch. I must have been out cold for a good hour or so. As I woke up I heard a strangers voice.
"Well what have we here" said the stranger. "I I I think I should be going."I replied "Oh your going nowhere bitch" "Bitch? I I don't understand" "Well while you where out cold I took some pictures of you while you where nude. So now your my little slave, bitch." "Oh shit" I muttered under my breath. "What was that bitch" "I'm ready master, for my slavery." "Thats better you will come with me and earn your bike back bit by bit. Hope your good at mechanics bitch" As I was me back to the spot by my master he told me to put down my likes, dislikes, limits and fantasies on a piece of paper. I did as I was told and after I was finished he checked them over. "Very good bitch this will be a good day for you."I smiled, "Right bitch lets get started..." Short update but this way it works better more tomorrow night
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02-29-2012, 02:58 PM | #7 |
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Pretty good. That would suck
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02-29-2012, 03:03 PM | #8 |
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Know same time happened to my frown just either this week
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02-29-2012, 04:33 PM | #9 |
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Could you please write the next part but make it a little longer?!?
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03-01-2012, 11:01 AM | #10 |
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Prey can't make longer chapters bearing on mind I have to copy and paste this from an iPhone so its pretty hard
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03-03-2012, 03:23 PM | #11 |
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Next part many tommorow or Monday I'm I'll and have a ton of homework any feedback whould be appreciated thnks
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03-06-2012, 10:03 AM | #12 |
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monday's gone...
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03-06-2012, 03:04 PM | #13 |
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I'm so sorry I'm ill ad not really feeling good enough to write because I'm throwing up every 30 minuites sorry if I dissapoint you any feedback will be appreciated bye
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