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Hello. Before i start the first chapter i just want to say a few things about it.

I did write a story on here a few years ago but never finished it. I didn't want to write another one that i might end up not finishing so i have been thinking for a while if i should do it or not. But for this story i already have the basics of the story ready in my head.

It might seem like a slow starter but i just want to build it up that way. I have 9 chapters ready as a backlog so i hope i can keep a steady schedule with 1-2 days between each chapter so that i have time to add more before i run out. I wanted to finish it before i started posting it but i found myself spending too much time thinking about it rather than writing, so i decided to just go ahead and start. Anyway I'll post the first chapter right under this post to get going.

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Chapter 1


Guilty? She thought to herself, Guilty of what? Every memory before today seemed to have disappeared, she didn’t even remember her name. They said it as they read her verdict but was it really her name?

Ruby, as they called her, had been sentenced to 5 years on a prison located out in international waters this morning. This was the earliest memory she had, and she had no knowledge of any crimes they said she had committed.
  Confused and scared she had been taken away stripped down to only a red jumpsuit and placed in a bus along with four other girls and two boys who seemed just as confused as she was. They were not allowed to speak to one another and nobody told them how long the ride was going to be.
  
After what must have been a few hours they arrived at the docks where a large ship that looked like an old cargo ship was waiting for them.
  On the ship Ruby and the other prisoners had been locked in their own cells while being transported out to the sea. Her mind was spinning as she sat in the corner of her cell, not a single piece of furniture was placed in the cell, just a perfectly square room with white walls and a door. What did we do? What did i do? She thought to herself sitting there. Not being able to figure anything out she just closed her eyes trying to wait out the ride and hope she got her memories back eventually.

“Wake up!” A man shouted, she slowly opened her eyes and tried to get a look at the guard standing in front of her, he was wearing a black coat with matching black pants and he had short dark hair. “Get up missy! Time to get off this ship.”
  With no sense of time for how long she had been out or even what time of day it was she stood up and rubbed the sleep out of her eyes, the light hitting the bright white walls in the hallways was hard to adjust to.
  Once Ruby arrived at the deck with the guard she could see others aswell, she thought she recognized a few of the ones from the bus earlier but there were a few new ones that had arrived on the ship aswell, five guys in total and six other girls.
  
And then, in front of the ship she saw it. The big fences looked like they circled the entire island, probably ten meter high with barbed wire all across it. Watch towers all around with guards manning them and spotlights shining across the prison.
  Where the hell am i? Was all Ruby could think looking at her new home.
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Once the ship that was carrying them had docked at the port they were escorted off in a single line, each of them handcuffed with links holding them all together. The sky was dark and the only sounds coming from the island was the waves hitting the shores. No sounds at all came from inside the prison, you could just see the lights that shone across the courtyard back and forth as the guards kept watch.
  At the gates they were met by two armed guards who opened the big gate to let them in, after everyone had stepped inside, the gate shut close behind them again.
  “Don’t stop here, keep moving!” The guard shouted at them as they all stood and watched their surroundings. “Step inside this building and you will get your cell numbers and go through the information briefing.”
  They just followed him without anyone daring to say anything.
  
Inside the building they got let loose from the chain that held them all together and they only had their handcuffs left on. They got seated down inside what looked like an old classroom and a woman came in and went to the front of the room, she was tall and had short dark hair pulled behind her head. She wore a tight white shirt along with a long black skirt, she seemed very different from the rest of the guards.

“Thanks officer” She started and the guard raised his hand to his head for a salute and stepped towards the door to keep guard.
  “Welcome to your new home. I’m going to keep this briefing simple to give you the basic overview of this place. Your first week will be a week of learning, so any questions you still have after this briefing you will get answered within this first week. Understood?”
  Everyone nodded without speaking.
  “Good!” She continued with her firm voice. “Now let me introduce myself. I’m Amy, warden of this prison, unless any of you become a problem you won’t see me much, and that would be a good thing for all of us. Each of you will be placed in a cell with another prisoner who have been here for at least a week at minimum, they will be able to answer most of the questions you have at this point. The prison cells are located in two different buildings, one for the men and one for the women.” She looked at everyone to make sure they were still following her.
  “Starting tomorrow you will be placed in different jobs, a new one everyday for the first week and then we decide along with each of you what to do next, there are some other options available later on but ask your new cellmates for more details on that. Wake up is at 06:00 and from that time you have one hour to eat in the cafeteria. At 07:00 you will be at your cells again until you are picked up by someone responsible for your job that day.” She looked around at everyone before continuing.
  “Now you will be escorted one by one to your cells, so just sit tight and we will call each of your up and escort you into the cell block”
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Chapter 3


As the warden left after her speech, a female guard walked in to the room.
  "Ruby?" She asked, looking at the prisoners sitting in front of her.
  Ruby looked at the others before answering. "Here." Still confused about the whole situation.
  "Come with me."
  Ruby stood up and followed the guard out of the room.
  
The guard escorted Ruby out of the old school building, once outside she removed her handcuffs.
  "Thanks." Ruby said, giving a smile to the guard, trying to make the situation a bit more friendly. "They started to hurt a bit on the wrists."
  "Next stop is cell block A where you will be placed with the other girls, that's the big building to the left over there, the one to the right is cell block B, where the boys are placed." The guard replied back to Ruby, still with a firm and almost angry tone in her voice.
  
Ruby walked slowly in front of the guard taking a look at her surroundings as she walked towards the cell block, the courtyard looked almost like a park, it had a basketball court, a running track along the fences, lots of tables to sit at but there was no vegetation except for the grass.

They arrived at cell block A and the guard opened the door and let Ruby inside. Then pointed her to a room just to the right of the entrance.
  "Step in here so i can register you and get you into your new outfit."
  Ruby stepped inside and the guard followed and locked the door again behind them.
  "Stand in the circle at the center of the room there" The guard said before moving to the computer at the end of the room. "Now remove that red jumpsuit and everything else you may have on you and throw it in the basket in the corner, then get back in the circle."
  Slightly nervous and a bit confused she followed the order, not wanting to get in any trouble. She removed her shoes and unzipped the jumpsuit and stepped out of it leaving her completely naked. Once she had thrown the outfit away she stepped back into the ring, covering herself up the best she could with her hands and looking back at the guard who was busy typing at the computer.
  "Good." The guard said looking back up at Ruby. "Now state your name please."
  "Uhm... Ruby, you even said it when you picked me up." She told the guard, still not completely certain that was her real name.
  "Age?"
  "I don't..." Ruby started before a number suddenly popped in her head. "19 i think."
  "Don't worry, most of the prisoners who come here don't remember anything. Just tell me what you do remember and this will be quick. Most of the important memories will return in the next few days, and we can fill in any empty information if needed for those who can't give us everything on day one." The guard answered back.
  "Why don't we remember anything?" Ruby asked curiously, seeing as the guard seemed to know more of the memory loss she was experiencing.
  The guard gave no answer to that. "Breast size?" The guard looked at Ruby before adding "Remove your hands so i can see please, keep them straight down your sides."
  Ruby did as the guard commanded.
"Quite small ones. No need to know the exact size then." The guard said after getting a look at Ruby's chest while she kept typing stuff into the computer.
  Ruby was embarrassed just having to stand there naked getting eyed on by the guard who kept typing in information about her.
  "Alright, i think we got most information needed typed in." The guard said as she stood back up. "Please just wait here while i go pick up your stuff."
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Wow, these chapters look so much shorter on this site than in my writing program. Guess i'll post a double with this one and try to make them longer in the future ^_^

Chapter 4


The guard came back in the room after a few minutes and sat back down behind her desk. She opened up the bag she brought in and started taking out some clothing.
  "Here." The guard said holding out a pair of white panties for Ruby. "Put these on."
  Ruby walked over and did as she was told.
  "This is your underwear."
  "What about a bra?" Ruby asked.
  "Your breast size don't qualify for that in here." She answered back before handing her more. "And this is your everyday shirt and shoes."
  Ruby took the white t-shirt the guard held out and put it on, it was a large size and way too big for her, reaching almost down to her knees. Then she put on the shoes to complete her new outfit.
  "Now you have everything you need for normal days here. This final item is used only for special occasions." The guard said handing out a white jumpsuit that had a logo on its chest, wich was probably the prisoner logo.
  
Ruby took the jumpsuit and held it to her chest as she followed the guard back out, she felt oddly exposed walking around like she did. The cell block was dark as all the lights in the cells were off, the only light source was a weak light in the ceiling.
  The room was big and there was at least 10 cells on each side and there was two more sets of cells just like it up a pair of stairs to each side. Ruby and the guard walked up the stairs on the left side of the room and stopped at the last cell at the end of the top floor. The guard then gave a signal to a camera over the cell and the door opened, turning the light inside on.
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Chapter 5

Just as Ruby stepped into the cell, the door closed up behind her. The cell was small and didn't have much in it. There was a toilet in the corner and a sink next to it, a bunk bed for two persons and finally, a small locker to put clothes in.
  "What's your name?" The girl lying in the top part of the bunk bed asked.
  Ruby quickly turned her attention to the girl, not knowing if she had been asleep or not until she spoke just now. "I'm Ruby, and you?" She asked back.
  The girl sat up in the bed and put the pillow behind her for comfort, she had short blonde hair and a cute face. From the look of it she seemed about the same age as Ruby.
  "I'm Kate, i guess i should properly welcome you to this place." Kate said as she jumped out of the bed down to Ruby.
  To Ruby's surprise, the girl didn't have anything on other than her panties and her boobs that were way bigger than Ruby's came into full view as she landed on the floor.
  "They will leave our light on for about half an hour for me to introduce you to whatever you need to know, so don't be shy with the questions." The girl started. "As you probably can see there ain't much to show inside the cell, but the top bed is mine and the right side of the locker aswell. Also please don't stare at my chest, i'm sure you've seen boobs before."
  Slightly blushing Ruby changed her stare to Kate's face. "Sorry you just surprised me a little jumping out like that, didn't they give you a bra for your size? They said mine was too small, but you on the other hand should qualify for a pair?"
  "They did, but they are too uncomfortable to wear, specially while sleeping. So i mostly use them only when we have to go in our uniforms, and only sometimes when wearing the normal outfit. Is this really what you want to spend our first meeting talking about?"
  
Ruby took her uniform and put it in the locker and sat down in her bed inviting Kate to sit next to her. "Do you have your memories from before arriving here?" Ruby wanted to know.
  "I don't." Kate answered before sitting down next to Ruby and continued her answer. "But i do know some facts about me. I can for example remember how old i am, my name and the town i came from. But i don't know my last name or who my family is or if i even have one. Neither have they actually told me my crime other than the punishment i got wich now is six years.
  "I see, pretty much the same as myself then." Ruby said letting out a sigh. "However my sentence was only five years."
  "Well, here's the thing about this place Ruby." Kate started. "There is a way of getting out of here and receiving your memories back, but only a very few get that chance. Once a month, as long as you have been through the first week, you can participate in a tournament called 'Path to Freedom', stupid name if i may say so myself. It is apparently sent on television or a web stream or something for the public to enjoy. It is quite a unique tournament that i doubt you could even imagine and i'm not allowed to talk about it to you or anyone who haven't signed up for it. But if you win you get out of this prison and they say you get your memories back. But if you lose, wich everyone except the winner does, you get one year added to your sentence. That is why i'm at six years now, or rather five years and six months."
  
Ruby took a minute to process all that, after losing her memories, thinking she was going to spend years in this prison there finally was a way to get out.

"I wanna do it" Ruby said out loud.
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Again sorry about the length. This is still one of the chapters i had ready before i started posting. I'll probably add one more in a few hours to make up for it. And i really want to thank everyone who read it and commented. Gives me a lot more motivation seeing that someone likes it ^^

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"I wanna try the tournament. What's there to lose? If i have to stay here for five years and get out with no memories, then what good is it, at least i should keep trying till i actually get out?" Ruby asked, looking back at Kate.

Kate leaned her back to the wall and looked up. "I can't say much about it, but it's not as black and white as you think. I won't stop you from entering, and you can do that next Monday, after you've been here for a week. Your timing is pretty lucky if you actually want to participate in it, as the monthly tournament happens exactly a week after tomorrow."

Ruby was very curious now on just what kind of tournament this was, seeing how Kate was acting. But she realized she had to let it go seeing as she couldn't talk about it anyway.
  "So about tomorrow then, what sort of jobs do we do here?"
  "I won’t say specifics before tomorrow since it’s easier for me to explain to everyone at the same time, you are placed in my group for your first day so i'll be there for questions and stuff and i will give a quick briefing to all the new ones before we start. But it's not like anything you would think of. Just make sure to follow instructions and don't refuse to do your tasks and everything should be fine."
  "I see..." Ruby said still trying to figure out what it could be.
  
Ruby kept asking Kate a bunch of other small questions about the place until the lights went out and they had to call it a night. Kate told Ruby that talking was not allowed after the lights was out as she climbed back up in her bed. Ruby then laid down in her own bed trying to get some sleep before starting her first day in her new life in prison the next morning.
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The next morning Kate took Ruby to the cafeteria to eat their breakfast, the cafeteria was in the same building as their cells, they just had to step through the door on the first floor. It was weird seeing all these other girls wearing the same revealing prison outfit as she had gotten last night from the guard.
  The cafeteria itself was quite big, clear white walls and barred windows like the rest of the building, tables all around with three sets of chairs locked to the floor on each side of them, probably to avoid anyone using them as weapons, seeing as they got no knives or forks to eat with either. All the food had to be eaten by hand.
  
As the breakfast was finished they stepped outside the cellblock. Kate guided her and some other girls she picked up at their cells towards the old school building she had arrived at last night. Once inside they went up a pair of stairs and into the first room to the right. The room was a classroom, or at least used to be. It had a big chalkboard at the front to write on and several desks placed in the room. Kate stepped to the front and asked the other girls to sit down.

Ruby looked around to see if she recognized anyone else from last night, but only one of the six other girls than her seemed to be new, at least from what she could remember, they all looked so different now in their new clothes compared to the red jumpsuits.

“Hello!” Kate started, looking at everyone. “For most, if not all of you, this will be the start of a new life in here. How you want your time in here to be is up to each of you, follow orders and you’ll get it easy enough, make it hard on me and everyone and you won’t be having a good time. Understood?” Kate seemed like a completely different person now as she was standing in front of everyone being an instructor, not the same innocent looking girl Ruby had been with up until now.
  Everyone nodded their heads in agreement.
  “Good.” She continued. “Now, some of the work we do around here is traditional labor with washing toilets, scrubbing floors and things like that, but the majority of work here is more of a service to the thousands upon thousands of paying visitors that come here every year. The service we provide them varies from job to job, everything from massages and talking with them to... Well, i’m not going to sugar coat anything, it can go pretty much to a level of prostitution.”
  Ruby was surprised by that last statement, and she wasn’t alone. It seemed like the other girls aswell were all new here, and they all reacted the same way as her upon hearing the news Kate brought them. They exchanged looks to each other, all of them looking as nervous as the next one.
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Chapter 8


“Please calm down.” Kate started again after dropping the news on them just a few seconds ago. “most likely none of you will go to the extreme end on your first week, that kind of work usually goes to those who prefers that once the trial week is over and you get placed into different temporary or permanent jobs, but there can be exceptions, just know that. Today however is not that extreme.” She took a small break and continued.
  “Our job today is short and simple, we work as a service team to guests arriving here. Those who decide to come to this place usually do that for an experience they can’t get anywhere else, wich apparently only this place provides. We get a list of requests from the visitors and we complete those lists. Now today we are pretty lucky and we don’t have many guests, eight to be exact. That means one for each of us and one person gets two. I’m going to take those two today since all of you are new here. Any questions regarding that?” She looked at everyone before ending her look on Ruby, giving her a comforting smile. The girl next to Ruby raised her hand. “Go ahead.” Kate said pointing at her.
  “What if they force themself on us or something like that?” The girl said with a nervous voice.
  “They won’t.” Kate said with a clear voice. “The rooms do get recorded and they are in a prison, it would be very stupid of them to do so. And also, they can’t possibly do it in this exact job since they get chained up.” Kate took a small break again before continuing her explanation.
  “I should have probably specified more, let me explain. Our job involves the guests being locked up, they are taking the roles as prisoners and we have to do a task they requested to experience. The requests can be almost anything you can imagine, so it’s hard for me to tell you what to do before you actually receive your own. Each request given has a set amount of requirements that has to be checked off before your job is complete. Once you are done with your client, you just press the button at the wall next to the door you entered from, you will see that when you go in after this meeting. That button tells the guards that you are done and they can go in and release the client. After that, your work is done and we meet back here for a quick briefing once everyone is finished. Usually everyone does more than one task, but today is apparently a short day for all of you. Any more questions?”
  “Just one.” Another girl said. “If they are taking the roles as prisoners, do we decide how we do their requests, or can they still give commands?”
  “They can still decide how they want their requests to be done. The only real way they are considered prisoners is that they are chained up so that they can’t move.” Kate answered. “Any more questions or should we just get started?”
  
Everybody seemed like they just wanted to get it over with so Kate brought up a box with the requests inside of it and read up the first girls name.
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