06-29-2017, 09:17 AM | #1 |
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School Time
Ok, so I wanna start by saying that this is my first attempt at writing a story so any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. I am currently writing this in my 6th form library this is half fiction half non-fiction, some bit are based on true events and have had plot devices added some are entirely true and some are completely made up. All of my characters are based on people I know (with their names changed) all their 'measurements' are correct as of when I am writing this, however, they may be larger than they were at the time in which this is set. The chapter names have a theme for a bit of fun and any questions feel free to PM me.
Character list Name-Age-features Niamh-16-36C Emily-16-30B Bethany-17-32C carlee-15-28A Ella-16-36C Tom-16-6" adam(me)-16-6.5" matt-16-7"
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06-29-2017, 10:01 AM | #2 |
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Chapter 1 (Genesis)
Chapter 1 (Genesis) It all started back in 2014, 2 years ago. It was during this year that my fascination and love for truth or dare really began. During this year I and my friend Tom began playing it rather innocently during break and lunch at school with simple things like ' ask ... if they are on their period' Now let's skip forward to my 2015, I am sat in my bedroom browsing Facebook like any bored teenager would. It was around 9 pm when I remembered I had some geography homework due in the following day but I couldn't for the life of me remember what it was. So, I messaged the only person in my geography group who was still online, Ella. Ella was a short girl, about 5'8, curvy body, mid length brown hair and brown eyes. I messaged her asking what the homework was. Adam(Me)-Hi Ella-hi Adam-hw r u? Ella-Im good u? Adam-im good thanx Adam-Can you remember what the geography homework was? Ella-yea, we had to write a report on the primary and secondary effects of the boxing day tsunami Adam- Adam- so wuu2 Ella- not much u? Adam-same, wanna play a game? Ella-What game?? Adam- "1 dares, truth or dare or truths Ella-sure Adam-Which, there were options?!? Ella- we can give truths a shot Adam- you can start as i came up with the idea Ella-ok erm whens your birthday Adam-12/12/1998 Adam- erm, ok, what colours your under wear? Ella- srsly Adam- yea Ella-Fine my bra is white and my boy shorts are black
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06-29-2017, 10:01 AM | #3 |
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thats the first half of chapter one and i want to know what people think before i continue
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06-29-2017, 10:04 AM | #4 |
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Love It. But write a bit more at a time. Hehe
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