Old 12-13-2013, 05:24 AM   #16
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Bravo. Absolutely outstanding as always.
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Old 03-02-2014, 04:54 PM   #17
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Wow, thank you everybody for the nice comments!
Hadn't checked this thread in a long time, and I really didn't anticipate this much feedback - maybe I should consider writing another story.

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Old 03-02-2014, 05:24 PM   #18
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You definitely should.
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Old 03-09-2014, 06:22 PM   #19
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Wow, this is such an incredible story. The detail is so intense and perfect. I hope you write more short stories like this!
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Old 03-09-2014, 06:35 PM   #20
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Amazing, truly amazing. It does scratch the limits of what I'd consider erotic, but it's beautifully written.
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Old 04-01-2014, 05:01 AM   #21
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I'm considering writing another short story (although it likely won't be as graphic/disturbing as this one). If anybody would like to suggest any topics, I may feel "inspired"!

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Old 01-15-2018, 02:43 PM   #22
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This needs more attention! It's really well-written and fucked up
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This needs more attention! It's really well-written and fucked up
Why, thank you!
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Old 04-13-2018, 12:23 PM   #24
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Disturbingly good. Very well written.
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Old 04-23-2018, 01:37 PM   #25
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Would love to read more of the story..
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