<3 What a trip.. [M/M]

[daremaster 1]

Awsome! Thanks for the chapter!

[captainsatkins]

This is a very good story.

[dirtylittleboy]

its great keep them cuming. lol

[freshmilk]

Thanks guys

I just smiled and laid down as he walked over. It felt so wrong in my mind but my dick obviously didn't agree, as it became fully erect. Jarred put his knees either side of my shoulders and lowered himself. I opened as wide as I could and let them drop into my mouth. I started making circles with my tongue and felt as he twitched with enjoyment. I stopped when I noticed he was wanking and his balls were retracting just as I let them free he moved just a little and came all on my face, he thought it was hilarious and I didn't know what to think! *I opened my mouth and dared him to clean it all up just using his mouth but as I was speaking I tasted the salty cum that was on my lip, it was the first time I had ever tasted cum and it was no where near as bad as i expected. I savored the taste as Jarred lent in and licked my cheek before kissing me using his tongue to clean all his cum off. When I thought it would all be gone I found the funny side and began to laugh myself. Jarred went to the bathroom to spit out the cum and ran back jumping into my bed we talked a bit more then eventually fell asleep in the same bed, me wearing briefs and Jarred naked.*

We were woken up by James who walked into the room, as I heard him telling us to wake up I began to panic. Not recognizing the voice straight away but knowing that Jarred was naked in the same bed as me. When my eyes finally regained focus I saw James and let out a sight of relief, he said breakfast was down stairs and we were leaving to go to the game in 2 hours. He stayed in the room waiting for us to get ready and go with him. I stood up showing obvious morning glory and he couldn't take his eyes off it so I decided to play with his head and went over to my suitcase an pulled my briefs off and threw them at him. He ignored the projectile and just kept staring. I told him to come dress me. He had started to walk over before I told him I was joking and laughed, as I got dressed Jarred used that distraction to quickly get dressed before James realized he was naked in bed with me.*

James must have been embarrassed by his actions and didn't really say much for all of breakfast but eventually we made some jokes and he relaxed. We were heading to the ground and most people were listening to their iPods, Jarred and I were chatting with James.

We arrived at the ground we were playing at and went into the change rooms we did some stretches and some little warm up games before everyone started to get dressed, I never really paid much attention but noticed that regularly I see about 15 naked guys every week and today I couldn't help but look at each and every one of them Beau was the biggest and fattest it looked like he had a 3rd leg I'd say it was about 6 inches soft, and to my surprise James wasn’t the smallest Chad was. The only person to catch me looking was*Jarred who just smiled at me.

The game didn't go so well, we lost 4-2 with Jarred scoring both goals and me setting him up for one, by the final whistle we were all deflated and no one was really talking as we showered and went back to the hotel room.

When back in our room Jarred and were talking about the game and the things we did right and wrong and when Jarred fell asleep I went into the bathroom to wank, I thought about everything that had happened and thought ahead to what I wanted to happen and all I saw was Jarred for the first time I knew I wanted him not just to play around with but I truly wanted to be with him, I opened my eyes when I sensed something enter the room and I turned to see Jarred he smiled as he moved in close whispering "dare me to suck you off" as he reached down and took hold of my dick, I was in heaven and took a few moments to react and managed to say I dare you between my deep breathing.

I felt his lips press against mine, the softest kiss I've ever had and the most memorable by far. I felt his other hand run down my chest as he knelt down, I could feel his breath on my body which sent shivers down my spine. He lent in and placed his lips on my rock hard dick the warmth almost making me collapse as I reached back and lent on the basin for support, the first suck made me ache for more, he was giving long slow sucks taking almost my whole dick in his mouth, I had to tell him I loved him and said it between moans, he looked up and smiled, half my dick still in his mouth and he started to go faster and use his tongue to add even more joy to the moment of pure ecstasy. It didn't take long before I needed to cum and I told Jarred but he didn't flinch and just kept going. I felt my dick throbbing as the build up became too much I squirted a mouthful of cum into Jarreds eager mouth, he swallowed it all with a grin, keeping my now softening dick in his mouth. It seemed a lifetime before he stood up. He kissed my ear biting it a little before whispering I love you too.

I felt Jarreds hand on my shoulder applying just enough pressure to make it obvious he wanted me to kneel down, I didn't need much convincing but rather then doing it in the bathroom I walked him towards the bed, we stood at the end of the bed kissing for a few minutes, I put my hand down and felt he was hard so I prompted him to lay down while I knelt at the end of the bed. I took hold of his dick stroking it while I kissed his balls and shaft, I quickly gave in and wrapped my lips around his erect dick. The first thing that stuck me was how soft it was, it was an odd feeling to have something so hard that felt so soft. I tried to use my tongue on the underside of his knob and watched as his body flinched. Jarred was running his fingers through my hair and moaning loudly, but surprisingly he asked me to stop. I started panicking, thinking I hurt him or did something wrong I didn’t know what was happening but he spoke again, asking if he could video what I was doing, by this time I was hard again and back to being just as horny as I was before my blowjob and decided to let Jarred take the video.
He jumped up and grabbed his phone, turned the lamp on for light and positioned himself on the bed. As soon as he laid back down I grabbed his dick and went straight back to work, Jarred went back to playing with my hair an moaning while I tried to put on a show for the camera, swapping between long slow sucks to faster sucks while playing with his balls, I felt his balls tighten and felt him hold his breath so I prepared myself for what was to come.. Literally. I felt the first string if cum hit the back of my throat and the next fall into my mouth I smiled when I saw Jarreds face, a look of extreme happiness and I kept my smile as I swallowed his warm cum. When I stood up I realized just how horny I had become my dick was throbbing and I instinctively grabbed hold and pumped just a few times before I blew again, this time all over Jarreds now softening dick and balls, I laughed and he dared me to lick it all up so I did, It wasn’t as enjoyable knowing it was my cum but was still fun to watch him flinch when I licked his sensitive dick. I swallowed my own cum and went to lie next to Jarred. We were both completely spent and fell asleep.

[Aliciai<3u]

Why do I always miss the best storys on gD well read it now amazing

[Slugger]

I can feel the passion and heat! Work possibly on the imagery, let me have more of an image. I know it sounds silly but set up the setting, where and what's going around. What the room looks like, how the air feels on their body. It sounds silly but will add to the reader's interaction with the story. Think about diction, possibly.

Your defiantly on a beautiful level with the sex though

Constructive comments aside this is a REALLY good story, I'm genuinely impressed continue on.

4.5 stars.

[Crazierthenyou]

Keep going man! This is really good!

[freshmilk]

Thanks guys Aliciai & crazier, I'm glad you're liking it
Slugger, thanks for the feedback. The story is all pre written but ill try add some details, at the worst I'll remember it for my next story.


I swallowed my own cum and went to lie next to Jarred. We were both completely spent and fell asleep.

Our alarm sounded at 6am so we could go to the pool with the team, I opened my eyes expecting to see Jarred next to me but he wasn’t, he was fully dressed and at the door about to leave, I asked why he didn't wake me and he said I looked tired and he was going to James room. Slightly confused I got up and got dressed before meeting everyone in the lobby. The mood was strange, no one was really talking even on the bus we all just sat there waiting to get out. When we were at the pools we jumped in and did a few laps, some running and general exercises. When we went to the showers I went over to James and Aaron who didn't really say anything to me, feeling awkward I went to some of the other guys who were the same. I didn't know what to think, my only explanation I could think was Jarred showed them the video and that was causing them to ignore me.

The trip back to the hotel was dead silent and i was starting to seriously freak out. By the time we got back to the hotel I was in a state of panic. I went straight into the room ignoring James when he said we needed to talk. By the time Jarred came in my fears had gotten too great and a mix of fear and anger reduced me to tears. To my surprise and confusion Jarred sat next to me and put his arm around me, speaking softly I asked if he showed anyone the video, he denied it but his tone suggested there was a but coming and sure enough it did "..but I have to tell you something" my heart sunk and the fear was brought right back as he continued talking "most of the guys in the team already know, I didn't know if I should tell you but .. " and with that he burst into tears, I hugged him strongly and told him to continue "I'm gay.. I didn't want to freak you out after all that's happened I didn't want to.." I interrupted him by putting my finger on his lips. I punched his arm causing him to look at me with confusion, "that’s for thinking id freak out.. I love you Jarred, I don't care if you’re gay straight or a tranny you idiot" we both laughed and hugged, just laying there looking at each other for a few minutes. After a while we started talking more normally and he told me the rest of the team didn't take it so well that's why the bus and training was so quiet. I didn't notice Before but Jarred hadn't gone into the showers after swimming so he went to have a shower while I waited on the bed.

After a few minutes I worked out what I wanted to do and walked into the bathroom, stripped naked and opened the shower curtain and stepped in. I've never seen Jarred with such a big smile on his face, I told him I didn't know if I was gay but I love him and if he wants I'll do just about everything with him. We kissed and just stood under the water kissing, standing naked my body pressed up against Jarreds made my heart beat faster and harder then ever before. We wasted each other and just stood holding one another under the water, it felt perfect. After what seemed like eternity we got out and got dressed and I called Aarons room, he said everyone was there just talking so Jarred and I took the chance to go shock some people, we walked into the room holding hands and when everyone noticed us we made out, I could feel them staring and I just hoped Jarred get accepted by them, if not I'd be an outcast with him!

James spoke first and jokingly asked if he could join in, Chad laughed and asked if I could tell what Jarred had for breakfast and Aaron said he was going to get horny if we kept going. Jarred and I stopped kissing when we both started to laugh, the team said sorry to Jarred and we got quizzed about us being together. Chad pulled me aside when I went to the toilet and asked me if I got the note on the plane. I had completely forgotten about that note, it seemed so long ago. I told him I did and I was shocked it was him, he seemed shy and was blushing but I told him we would speak later when everyone else wasn’t around and went to pee. We spent some time just relaxing with the team before going to bed.

The next day we had training most of the day before heading to a beach to relax and play. We called Liam and the girls but they weren’t able to come. I swam for most of the time, it was cold but refreshing. When I got out I went to the showers James and Jarred followed me in. Jarred ran up and kissed me and James stayed back pretending not to look, James interrupted letting me know that the some of the team planned to play truth or dare tonight in his room and me and Jarred should join, we agreed and all hopped in the shower, leaving our shorts on as it was a public shower.
James kept asking questions about us being gay and what we have done with each other and other guys and when he left I told Jarred about Chad and the note, we planned on getting them two to experiment with each other.
When we finally left the beach Jarred and I got ready to go to James room to play. We made a deal that we wouldn't have sex or give oral as part of dares but hand jobs and kissing were fine.

The only people who turned up were James, Chad, Aaron, Jarred and me so we all sat around and talked nervously waiting for someone to start. Chad started up first, looking at me saying “tru.. Never mind someone else start when you’re ready” he seemed really nervous about starting. I looked around and everyone looked nervous so I thought I'd answer James and get the game started..
“Truth”.. His eyes lit up and he asked if Jarred and I have had sex. I knew this question would come up eventually but didn't think it would be first. I looked around at everyone before answering, all were eagerly awaiting my answer except Jarred who sat back smiling. When I said no they all looked disappointed so I added in.. Not yet. I asked James next and he shyly answered truth. When did u last masturbate.. Yesterday in the Shower. He asked Aaron who wanted a truth too. James asked if he had ever looked up gay porn and Aaron went red instantly. Yeah a few times just to see what it was like he admitted then quickly put the focus on Jarred asking him truth or dare, Jarred confidently said dare and it took a few seconds before Aaron thought of a dare. Eventually he was dared to strip to his underwear until his next dare. Jarred then asked James what the gayest thing he had ever done was and surprisingly he said he had revived oral from a guy but wouldn't say who from.
James then dared Aaron to flash everyone. He did the dare without any issues and sat back down before daring me to make out with Jarred for 1 min. This was an easy dare for Jarred and I but was still a lot of fun because when we had finished all 3 guys had noticeable erections.
I next dared Chad to kiss James and after some convincing and letting him know that we wouldn't tell anyone they both lent forward and started kissing. Aaron was clearly stroking himself while Jarred and I just looked on and smiled at them and each other.
When they stopped Chad dared James to strip Aaron down to his underwear. Aaron protested but gave in eventually. Watching James strip Aaron was amazingly hot. They both were hard and when Aaron had his pants ripped down his tight briefs did very little to hide his erection. James and Aaron whispered between each other and came up with a dare for me. I was dared to make Jarred cum. I asked if he was ok with it and he nodded so I reached down and started stroking him, I ignored the others and focused on pleasing Jarred the best I could. I was slowly stroking at first and gently squeezing his balls. It wasn’t long before he lent back and let out a few moans and his cum plastered my hand and his abs. I lent in as kissed him as he sat back up and wiped the cum off him and my hand using my t-shirt. This was the first I noticed the other 3 were masturbating too. Aaron came first, shooting forward and hitting James’ leg. Chad was the next to cum and never took his eyes off James and just after he finished James came onto his chest. We were all breathing heavily with me the only one not to have cum in the last 2 minutes. Jarred laid back into my arms and we all just sat there for a few minutes Aaron was the first to speak simply saying that was hot! We all laughed and somewhat nervously all broke apart and went back to our rooms.

As soon as we walked in Jarred jumped on me and we spent 15 minutes just kissing and hugging. We eventually laid down to sleep staring at each other. Jarred fell asleep first and all I could do was smile, before this trip I had a steady girlfriend some good friends and my best friend, now the girlfriend is gone which whilst it was sad it has made everything 100x better, my best friend is now my boyfriend, wow his my boyfriend! My soccer friends are even better friends then before and I'm in England! I fell asleep with thoughts of Jarred and was woken up early by him kissing me. What a perfect way to wake up.

We went to play another tour game and after an uneventful warm up and 1st half we were down by 1 goal and coach was going mad. We went back out for the 2nd half pumped up and ready. In the first 5 minutes we had hit the upright and forced 2 saves from their keeper. I lined up to take the corner and had a set move in mind, I play short to Jarred, run around him for the tap back then chip to the far post. As I ran around Jarred faked the pass and went himself sliding the ball past their keeper 1-1 and massive celebration! We yelled between each other to “keep going, we haven’t won yet” the next 30 minutes were a battle in midfield, the ball spilt to me on half way, I beat my defender with a couple of step overs and ran down the touch line, I crossed in and James headed at the goals but it was cleared off the line. A few minutes later Jarred got the ball in our half and ran through 5-6 guys before being fouled in the penalty box. He calmly sent the ball low and to the right, not long after the siren went. We won!

The dressing room was so loud so much hugging, high fiving it was just crazy. We all needed showers to clean the mud off and warm up from the rain and surprisingly the guys didn't avoid Jarred and I and it was just a normal shower for everyone. We grabbed our gear and all piled into the van. Of course I sat next to Jarred and as we were leaving I whispered that I truly love him and watched his face light up as I said it, he even gave me a quick kiss, luckily the coach wasn’t looking, and he told me he loves me too. I was looking out the car window staring at the rain when the sounds of car horns and scratching tires took over time seemed to go into slow motion as I saw headlights and a car coming straight at my side of the bus, I pushed Jarred against his seat to try brace him for impact....

[dirtylittleboy]

awww. i hate cliff hangers. dont stop writing

[Mr. Fun 21]

I just absolutely love this story! It is so amazingly cute! Great job!

[daremaster 1]

Great chapter, really enjoyed reading it.

[Royboy91]

Awesome story!!!

BUT... that cliffhanger.... watch glee much?

[freshmilk]

Hey guys Sorry for the cliff hanger! (okay, I'm not really sorry) I should have the next chapter up this week

RoyBoy, I think I've seen maybe 1 or 2 episodes? I'm not sure what similarities there are but its all a coincidence haha

Thanks again for the replies and feed back, it makes me want to keep writing You guys are awesome!

[freshmilk]

Hey all. This next part of the story is in the point of view of Jarred not Brad anymore.

(brads POV) I was looking out the car window staring at the rain when the sounds of car horns and scratching tires took over time seemed to go into slow motion as I saw headlights and a car coming straight at my side of the bus, I pushed Jarred against his seat to try brace him for impact....



Jarred.

All I could hear were screams coach yelling out to everyone, the team was all yelling out to each other and running out of the bus all sore and some bleeding. Coach was yelling everyone’s name and that's when I noticed brad wasn’t out yet, I remember him holding his arm on my chest to brace me but he wasn’t out of the bus.
I panicked and ran towards the bus and was tackled by coach, I kicked and punched yelling brad was trapped on there but he kept saying it wasn’t safe to go on. I screamed and cried and punched and kicked. Beau and Aaron ran to me and coach let go of me so Aaron could hug me and help but I ducked under his arms and ran onto the bus.
I felt a pain on my leg but kept going, I found my seat and that's when I first saw brad he was a mess, his arm was bent the wrong way, probably from him saving my life, his eyes were closed and he was covered in blood. I tried to feel for a pulse but I was shaking and crying and couldn't tell if I felt anything. Aaron had chased me onto the bus and just stood there in shock, I yelled at him to help brad but he couldn't, he ran off crying and threw up. Coach got unto the bus and tried making me get off but I refused to leave not until the emergency crew got here I couldn’t control myself I was crying harder then I ever have before, screaming to no one, only stopping to breath in. I took brads limp hand and held it telling him over and over that I love him and that he can't die, that's when I first looked down and saw all the blood on the floor I screamed thinking it was brads and was actually relieved to see that my leg was cut open and the blood was mine. I knew this was bad for me but I didn't care I just wanted brad to be ok.

Just then the sirens rang and I tried to stand to walk out of the bus but it hurt too much, coach carried me as I yelled again to brad that I love him and he can't die. The ambulance officer rushed to me and I yelled demanding the help brad before me. One ran onto the bus and the one that helped me got abused for not doing the same as the first officer. I held pressure in my wound and the officer said he would help brad only if I promised not to pass out.
Well I couldn't keep my end of the deal and slowly started to drift off, I remember lights and lying staring at a roof and then bright lights again then nothing until now. I just woke up, laying in a hospital bed in an empty room I tried to get out of bed but had trouble putting pressure on my right leg without pain so I sat on the edge of my bed trying to figure everything out and that's when I thought of brad. How could it take me this long to remember was all I could think, I was so angry at myself and started to cry again, I had to go find him. He had to be alive I'd feel it if he wasn’t.. Wouldn't I?.. I got out of bed ignoring the pain and walked around the room I was in. Nothing, no one else here. I left the room and walked into the next one. Someone I'd never met, I went into 4 more rooms to find no sign of brad I walked to the desk where the nurse was chatting away to another nurse or doctor about some guy named John dating Sarah, I couldn't take it, I screamed, "CAN SOMEONE FUCKING HELP ME"

[Royboy91]

Another great update!!! Keep em coming!

To clarify my question: about one or two days before you posted your previous chapter, the latest episode of Glee was aired. This episode (On my way) ends in almost an identical situation with a shot in which the headlights of an incoming car are seen rushing towards the side of the car. Way the last minute of that episode and you'll see what I mean since the airing here (in the Netherlands) is always delayed, I usually watch the show online. I finished watching the episode within an hour of reading your latest chapter, so you can imagine my surprise in getting cliff hung twice identically