Fiction: Slave for a Slave

Epick · 10-26-2010, 04:54 PM

Part One: The Unexpected

Before I tell you my story, let me introduce you to myself. My name is Tom Brink. I am in eleventh grade at Clear Waters High School. I am on the swim team, average build, brown hair, and green eyes. I am, to but it simply, average. Nothing extemely good ever happens to me, but niether does anything extremely bad. I date a girl here or there, but am single most of the time. Now, to the story.

Like any good story, this one starts with a girl. Mara Fauk. If I was in the middle of the tower of life, she was standing on the lightning rod. She was the hottest girl in school, with all the friends, all the parties, everything. She was the kind of girl who never talked to average guys. She was flawless, and I was less than so.

Now, to be clear I did not like her. In fact I hated her. Ever since freshman year, she had taunted me, made my life hell, simply by being inescapably better than me. But she was still hot as hell. All I wanted was one good chance to make her less than me, to let her kno what it felt like. And I would get my chance. I never expected to, but I would.

************************************************** *******

It was monday. As the bell rang for lunch, I made my way to the lunchroom and took my usual solitary place at the end of the second table from the door. Halfway through lunch, I looked up from checking my texts to find Brittany staring at me. I blinked. Bittany was Mara's best friend. The were almost creepy close. Why was she here?

"Um...hi?" I ventured. She grinned. It was a little freaky. "I know how you feel about Mara." She stated.

Okay, really freaky. "What do you mean?" I asked tentatively.

"If I told you that I could give you the chance to make her do whatever you wanted, what would you say?"

"Uh...I would love it....but why? And how?"

"If your really interested, meet me in the library after school."

"Ah, okay but..."

Before I could finish, she had disapeared. I was stunned. I thought it was probably a trick. Brittany and Mara were both huge teases. But still, I couldnt pass up the opprotunity.

After the bell rang for the end of school, I had to stop myself from spriting all of the way to the third floor library. For fifteen minutes, I searched for Brittany, with no luck. Then, as I was about to write it off and leave, a tap on my shoulder.

"Sorry, I had to fight hallway traffick." Brittany said.

"Fine, just tell me what this is all...."

I stopped as, behind her, I saw Mara. She was kneeling, hands behind her back, looking at the floor. Brittany gave me a devious grin.

"I have to be home soon, so i'll make this quick." She said. "About a month ago, Mara here was over at my house for a sleepover. After a game of truth or dare, I managed to get a few snapshots of her in, ah, comprimising postions. As you can imagine, she promised to do anything to stop those snapshot from circulating. As such, she has been my slave for the past month."

I tried to interupt, but she shushed me.

"Now," She continued. "Where you come in. My parents are moving across the country in eight days. Obviously, This means i'll have to give up my toy. However, I think she makes a good slave, and she needs a new owner. So, my deal is this: You be my slave for the next seven days, and on day eight, i'll give you every bit of dirt I have on her. She'll be all yours for as long as you want to keep her."

I was stunned into silence.

"Do we have a deal?"

I nodded. "Yeah." I said, looking still at the kneeling Mara.

"Good. You start tomorrow." She said, then turned to leave. Mara rose and scurried after her, like a pet dog, leaving me to anticipate.....and worry.

zabuza · 10-26-2010, 04:59 PM

really good cant wait till part 2

dragonator · 10-26-2010, 05:00 PM

I too am intrigued by this, looking forward to the next part.

Ozpossum · 10-27-2010, 01:58 AM

keep posting please

Adelaide_guy · 10-27-2010, 03:50 AM

i might just say that i liked this story.... and will keep tuned...as long as it is fairly regular ..

however Admiral Ackbar and i have a theory ...still we will be quiet and see what brittany has in store for our little hero....

anonimousbob · 10-27-2010, 06:30 AM

interesting start, I can't wait for more

firenight · 10-27-2010, 03:55 PM

sweet go on i like it

WowwieGoesWoof · 10-27-2010, 07:36 PM

Nice way you got into that with 2 - 3 possible outcomes

daremaster118 · 10-28-2010, 01:15 PM

I LOVE IT :P I DEMAND MORE MWHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHA

lol.. im high lol

CarolineT487 · 10-28-2010, 02:09 PM

LOVE IT!!!! Please continue

fitzy · 10-29-2010, 09:51 AM

great start really hope you continue with this

SAMaster · 10-29-2010, 10:23 AM

please continue the story, can't wait for the next part!!!!

Epick · 10-29-2010, 11:19 PM

Ill be posting the next part later today. Thanks for all the feedback

ursoweird123 · 10-30-2010, 04:02 PM

Awesome start! I'm liking where this is going. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Shade622 · 10-30-2010, 07:51 PM

Now this does look interesting... I have an idea of what may happen, but I'll keep my mouth shut and wait.

10-26-2010, 04:54 PM	#1
Epick Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 10	Slave for a Slave Part One: The Unexpected Before I tell you my story, let me introduce you to myself. My name is Tom Brink. I am in eleventh grade at Clear Waters High School. I am on the swim team, average build, brown hair, and green eyes. I am, to but it simply, average. Nothing extemely good ever happens to me, but niether does anything extremely bad. I date a girl here or there, but am single most of the time. Now, to the story. Like any good story, this one starts with a girl. Mara Fauk. If I was in the middle of the tower of life, she was standing on the lightning rod. She was the hottest girl in school, with all the friends, all the parties, everything. She was the kind of girl who never talked to average guys. She was flawless, and I was less than so. Now, to be clear I did not like her. In fact I hated her. Ever since freshman year, she had taunted me, made my life hell, simply by being inescapably better than me. But she was still hot as hell. All I wanted was one good chance to make her less than me, to let her kno what it felt like. And I would get my chance. I never expected to, but I would. ************************************************ ***** It was monday. As the bell rang for lunch, I made my way to the lunchroom and took my usual solitary place at the end of the second table from the door. Halfway through lunch, I looked up from checking my texts to find Brittany staring at me. I blinked. Bittany was Mara's best friend. The were almost creepy close. Why was she here? "Um...hi?" I ventured. She grinned. It was a little freaky. "I know how you feel about Mara." She stated. Okay, really freaky. "What do you mean?" I asked tentatively. "If I told you that I could give you the chance to make her do whatever you wanted, what would you say?" "Uh...I would love it....but why? And how?" "If your really interested, meet me in the library after school." "Ah, okay but..." Before I could finish, she had disapeared. I was stunned. I thought it was probably a trick. Brittany and Mara were both huge teases. But still, I couldnt pass up the opprotunity. After the bell rang for the end of school, I had to stop myself from spriting all of the way to the third floor library. For fifteen minutes, I searched for Brittany, with no luck. Then, as I was about to write it off and leave, a tap on my shoulder. "Sorry, I had to fight hallway traffick." Brittany said. "Fine, just tell me what this is all...." I stopped as, behind her, I saw Mara. She was kneeling, hands behind her back, looking at the floor. Brittany gave me a devious grin. "I have to be home soon, so i'll make this quick." She said. "About a month ago, Mara here was over at my house for a sleepover. After a game of truth or dare, I managed to get a few snapshots of her in, ah, comprimising postions. As you can imagine, she promised to do anything to stop those snapshot from circulating. As such, she has been my slave for the past month." I tried to interupt, but she shushed me. "Now," She continued. "Where you come in. My parents are moving across the country in eight days. Obviously, This means i'll have to give up my toy. However, I think she makes a good slave, and she needs a new owner. So, my deal is this: You be my slave for the next seven days, and on day eight, i'll give you every bit of dirt I have on her. She'll be all yours for as long as you want to keep her." I was stunned into silence. "Do we have a deal?" I nodded. "Yeah." I said, looking still at the kneeling Mara. "Good. You start tomorrow." She said, then turned to leave. Mara rose and scurried after her, like a pet dog, leaving me to anticipate.....and worry.

10-26-2010, 04:59 PM	#2
zabuza getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: why do u want to know Posts: 300	really good cant wait till part 2 __________________ likes:x dressing,minor anal,bdsm,slight pain, minor public limits: major public,major pain,pictures, videos,my diabetes pm me if you want dares or pm me dares if you want

10-26-2010, 05:00 PM	#3
dragonator getDare Devil Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 1,477	I too am intrigued by this, looking forward to the next part. __________________ male likes: sexual public humiliation, sexual, public, and humiliation i also like anal as long as its safe. limits: family, and illegal to the point il get caught i must do any dare that i get as long as this is a part of my signiture I was dared to post my full erect length. my full erect penis length is 3 inches.

10-27-2010, 06:30 AM	#6
anonimousbob Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: UK Posts: 918 Blog Entries: 5	interesting start, I can't wait for more __________________ 27/M/GMT Ask me anything http://anonimousbob.tumblr.com/ask yes: secluded public, crossdressing,, chastity sexual, anal (including enemas if you want), slight pain, anything else not on the above list I can't think of right now no: openly public/involving others, bodily waste, extreme pain Add me at [email protected] Check out my profile and album on Kinktalk I am looking for a mistress to serve right now

10-28-2010, 01:15 PM	#9
daremaster118 Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: up your bum, round the corner, all the way to california :L (UK) Posts: 38	I LOVE IT :P I DEMAND MORE MWHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHA lol.. im high lol __________________ PM me dares Love u Dylan and i love u Bangin! great story writers :P 13/m/uk - bi

10-27-2010, 01:58 AM	#4
Ozpossum Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 130	keep posting please

10-27-2010, 03:50 AM	#5
Adelaide_guy Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Adelaide, Australia Posts: 119	i might just say that i liked this story.... and will keep tuned...as long as it is fairly regular .. however Admiral Ackbar and i have a theory ...still we will be quiet and see what brittany has in store for our little hero....

10-27-2010, 03:55 PM	#7
firenight getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: mi Posts: 370	sweet go on i like it

10-27-2010, 07:36 PM	#8
WowwieGoesWoof getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 415	Nice way you got into that with 2 - 3 possible outcomes

10-28-2010, 02:09 PM	#10
CarolineT487 Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 13	LOVE IT!!!! Please continue

10-29-2010, 09:51 AM	#11
fitzy getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: ireland Posts: 297	great start really hope you continue with this __________________ Likes: masturbation, humiliation, piss, light pain, light bondage limits:family , major pain, permenant, shaving, public,poo i have been a very naughty boy and deservie to be punished

10-29-2010, 10:23 AM	#12
SAMaster Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: South Africa Posts: 94	please continue the story, can't wait for the next part!!!! __________________ Luvs: Edging, Milking Likes: Nudity, masturbation, semi public, light pain Limits: Family, scat, blood, needles, fire, illegal Everything else is prob a soft limit, which I like to see how far I am willing to go...

10-29-2010, 11:19 PM	#13
Epick Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 10	Ill be posting the next part later today. Thanks for all the feedback

10-30-2010, 04:02 PM	#14
ursoweird123 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: New York, NY, US Posts: 243	Awesome start! I'm liking where this is going. Can't wait for the next chapter.

10-30-2010, 07:51 PM	#15
Shade622 Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: USA Posts: 69	Now this does look interesting... I have an idea of what may happen, but I'll keep my mouth shut and wait.

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