Fiction: Slave for a Slave - Page 4

MeasinToday · 11-22-2010, 09:50 PM

Please continue!

kearns · 11-28-2010, 06:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Faust

OK, back on subject. how bout talking about the story instead of how "amazing" someone's knowledge of the world is. Geez.

Exactly, nobody's impressed you can't identify hyperbole and actually took the time to nitpick about such a tiny detail. Especially when it's obvious you looked that useless tidbit of knowledge up in an online encyclopedia.

misspiggy7 · 11-29-2010, 05:01 PM

The twist was huge!
amazing! I LOVE this story CONTINUE!!!!!!!!! please =)

stupidchloe13 · 12-04-2010, 07:46 AM

First story ive read here and ....wow O_O

HushedNoise · 12-06-2010, 03:17 PM

Wow. This is surprisingly good. I thought this would be creepy or weird but for some reason I'm twinging with anticipation. Don't stop now, you're on a roll!
(Oh and that was a great place for a "FOURTH-WALL'D!")

daremaster118 · 12-07-2010, 01:38 PM

about 3 weeks and no update .. dont keep me waiting any longer... i might explode! lol

lordbob · 12-11-2010, 07:11 PM

please please please please post or i will go KA-BOOM

Epick · 12-14-2010, 08:09 PM

I hung my head. There was nothing else to say.

Alexis smiled. "Now, the last thing you need to know before I get my fun. The Rules." This seemed to be some sort of que, because both girls came and stood beside me.

"Rule one," Alexis announced. "Unless otherwise directed always kneel in your mistresse's presence.

Before I could think it through, both Brittany and Mara grabbed my collar and used it to force me to my knees, after which they joined me. Alexis smirked.

Rule two," She continued. "You will do what I say, when I say it, or you will be punished."

Mara gestures to her breasts, which had large red streaks indicating a whip. I gulped.

"Rule three, you are a toy, nothing more. Your body is mine, and I will do with and to it anything I wish."

Mara agained pointed, this time to her lower stomache, where tatooed in cursive was the word Slut. I gulped again, wondering how i had missed that before.

"Rule four, dress only in what I tell you."

The two other slaves indicated our collars.

"And rule five," Alexis said, looking satisfied. "No playing with yourself, or you'll get a neat little belt."

Brittany directed my eyes toward a corner, where some home-made chastity devices lay, looking more than painful. I gulped for a third time.

Alexis looked thoughtful. "Oh!" she cried suddenly. "The Order."

That didnt sound good. Then again, not many things do when you're only wearing a collar.

"When I told you you had inherited the low spot on the totem pole, I wasnt joking." Alexis explained.

"You are also going to be used n=by your fellow slaves."

I began to wonder just how much planning she had put into this.

"The order of subserviance," She continued. "Is as follows:Brittany first, because she's so obediant and helpful, Mara after her, because I really dont like her. Then you, because I really, really dont like you. You will do what either of them say, as long as it doesnt contradict me, or allow you to cum."

She looked at me expectantly. I supposed I should nod, so I did.

"Good!" Alexis said sunnily. "Then let's get started!"

I gulped for a last time as my fellow (and apparently superior) slaves hauled me to my feet, cuffed my hands behind me, attached a leash to my collar, and began to pull me along a dark hallway behind my new mistress.

Ozpossum · 12-16-2010, 02:51 AM

p;skeep gonig it is really good

anywedgiedareido · 12-18-2010, 01:48 AM

doing good carry on

hhewp · 12-18-2010, 08:37 PM

I really love this story, its brilliant!

hykee · 12-19-2010, 01:15 PM

This story gets me going so quick

lordbob · 01-07-2011, 02:34 PM

i hope this thread didn't die it is an awsome story

Slave girl Ramesy · 01-08-2011, 01:57 PM

when is the 2nd comming out?

WowwieGoesWoof · 01-08-2011, 06:17 PM

Oh my I haven't checked this in awhile but very nice ^.^ three thumbs up!

11-22-2010, 09:50 PM	#46
MeasinToday Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: A House Posts: 50	Please continue! __________________ No, I won't Me as in Today

11-29-2010, 05:01 PM	#48
misspiggy7 Account Banned Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Not sure, there's a wheel, and a nozzle i lick for water, and lots of wood shavings to snuggle in Posts: 142	The twist was huge! amazing! I LOVE this story CONTINUE!!!!!!!!! please =) __________________ LIKES: pee, pantie stuffing, wedgies, semi-public with small chance of getting caught I RANDOMLY burst into dance, so of you don't mind that, I don't mind you laughing at me! My name? all I know is that it isn't "Hell" "Stacy" "her" "Jane" "Quiet Girl" or "Mary Jo Lisa" My saxophone's name is Lewis! RAWR IMA EAT YOU

12-04-2010, 07:46 AM	#49
stupidchloe13 Account Banned Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Kruela Lleh Posts: 51 Blog Entries: 1	First story ive read here and ....wow O_O __________________ Message me wiff a dare x] pweeez xD EEP!! ~hides me face~ O///O ERRMMMHAI me name ish Chloe but my friends call me Peanut ^//^^ IM 13 almost 14 ummm im sweet and cuddlie & i lurve shnuggles xDDD..I like uhm- kissing random stuff (windows/walls/random ppl LOL ) ice, fingerss...FRUIT or any weird thing that can fit THERE like crayon,coins & stuff o.e. MMMM cupiecakes,HK,skinny dipping HMMM idk OH lookie a butterfly!! ~chases~OH & im actually rellly reallly shy irl >//< Last edited by stupidchloe13; 12-04-2010 at 07:51 AM. Reason: x3

12-06-2010, 03:17 PM	#50
HushedNoise Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 10	Z-oooh my goodness Wow. This is surprisingly good. I thought this would be creepy or weird but for some reason I'm twinging with anticipation. Don't stop now, you're on a roll! (Oh and that was a great place for a "FOURTH-WALL'D!") __________________ Loves Roleplay, willing slavery, truth or dare, stripping Likes: flirting, interesting people, funny or sexy stories Doesn't like but can put up with: Pain-based stuff (not too much though.) Hates: obnoxious people, bondage/BDSM, anything fecal (that's just nasty), gay/bi stuff (Bi girls, on the other hand is another story ;D) Can not: Public stuff (that includes family, losers), cams (unless I know you well and/or trust you (unlikely))

12-07-2010, 01:38 PM	#51
daremaster118 Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: up your bum, round the corner, all the way to california :L (UK) Posts: 38	CONTINUE ! lol about 3 weeks and no update .. dont keep me waiting any longer... i might explode! lol __________________ PM me dares Love u Dylan and i love u Bangin! great story writers :P 13/m/uk - bi

12-11-2010, 07:11 PM	#52
lordbob Account Banned Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: The place where kittys are. Posts: 440 Blog Entries: 4	please please please please post or i will go KA-BOOM __________________ 15-Male-bi-Transgender likes: bondage crossdresing mild pain nudity bondage BDSM pee anal pet play limits: illeagl blood poo messy public sending pictures I adopt Reshiram [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC] ask me anything www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?p=466389 I have been dared to do every dare PMed to me for the next month Mean Little Kitty Song:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qit3ALTelOo

12-14-2010, 08:09 PM	#53
Epick Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 10	Part 5: The Rules I hung my head. There was nothing else to say. Alexis smiled. "Now, the last thing you need to know before I get my fun. The Rules." This seemed to be some sort of que, because both girls came and stood beside me. "Rule one," Alexis announced. "Unless otherwise directed always kneel in your mistresse's presence. Before I could think it through, both Brittany and Mara grabbed my collar and used it to force me to my knees, after which they joined me. Alexis smirked. Rule two," She continued. "You will do what I say, when I say it, or you will be punished." Mara gestures to her breasts, which had large red streaks indicating a whip. I gulped. "Rule three, you are a toy, nothing more. Your body is mine, and I will do with and to it anything I wish." Mara agained pointed, this time to her lower stomache, where tatooed in cursive was the word Slut. I gulped again, wondering how i had missed that before. "Rule four, dress only in what I tell you." The two other slaves indicated our collars. "And rule five," Alexis said, looking satisfied. "No playing with yourself, or you'll get a neat little belt." Brittany directed my eyes toward a corner, where some home-made chastity devices lay, looking more than painful. I gulped for a third time. Alexis looked thoughtful. "Oh!" she cried suddenly. "The Order." That didnt sound good. Then again, not many things do when you're only wearing a collar. "When I told you you had inherited the low spot on the totem pole, I wasnt joking." Alexis explained. "You are also going to be used n=by your fellow slaves." I began to wonder just how much planning she had put into this. "The order of subserviance," She continued. "Is as follows:Brittany first, because she's so obediant and helpful, Mara after her, because I really dont like her. Then you, because I really, really dont like you. You will do what either of them say, as long as it doesnt contradict me, or allow you to cum." She looked at me expectantly. I supposed I should nod, so I did. "Good!" Alexis said sunnily. "Then let's get started!" I gulped for a last time as my fellow (and apparently superior) slaves hauled me to my feet, cuffed my hands behind me, attached a leash to my collar, and began to pull me along a dark hallway behind my new mistress.

12-16-2010, 02:51 AM	#54
Ozpossum Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 130	p;skeep gonig it is really good

12-18-2010, 01:48 AM	#55
anywedgiedareido Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 4	doing good carry on

12-18-2010, 08:37 PM	#56
hhewp Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Stoke, UK Posts: 54	I really love this story, its brilliant! __________________ 22/m/uk/Dom

12-19-2010, 01:15 PM	#57
hykee Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 140	This story gets me going so quick

01-07-2011, 02:34 PM	#58
lordbob Account Banned Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: The place where kittys are. Posts: 440 Blog Entries: 4	i hope this thread didn't die it is an awsome story __________________ 15-Male-bi-Transgender likes: bondage crossdresing mild pain nudity bondage BDSM pee anal pet play limits: illeagl blood poo messy public sending pictures I adopt Reshiram [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC] ask me anything www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?p=466389 I have been dared to do every dare PMed to me for the next month Mean Little Kitty Song:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qit3ALTelOo

01-08-2011, 01:57 PM	#59
Slave girl Ramesy Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: California, US Posts: 6	when is the 2nd comming out?

01-08-2011, 06:17 PM	#60
WowwieGoesWoof getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 415	Oh my I haven't checked this in awhile but very nice ^.^ three thumbs up!