Old 05-31-2011, 01:16 PM   #76
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Wow, this story is really good! I hate when I find a story that's this good and it runs out before it ends! I rarely read past the first part of most stories before stopping, so to make it to page 5 on one, all in one sitting, means it's def. awesome!
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Old 06-01-2011, 12:17 PM   #77
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Thank you all for the praise, votes, and views! This story now has over 10,000 views, which, allthough nothing compared to Rachie and Shiny Demon, makes me very excited and proud. The voting has now become basically a two person race, but I am not going to whose the competitors are! Send in your vote! I should have another chapter up tommorow, unless I get caught up playing Tiger Woods 2012. Good game!
Chapter Twenty Two

The dares were heating up and so was the atmosphere. Now losing mattered. I once again had another a good hand, a two pair of kings and nines, but I expected that someone would beat me when I laid them down. But no one did! They all stared at me, grimaced, and went back to looking at each other! I had won! Unless Lola was faking again... but I thought that unlikely with the stakes being so high.

Without even knowing who had lost, I began to think about what I would dare them. If it was Anna, definitely something to do with her ass. Jade... well, I would be nicer to her since she had just had to do a dare. If it was Ella or Lola... I didn't want to give them an overly sexual dare since they were my cousins, but I needed to make them squirm. Especially if Lola lost.

Much to my dismay, she didn't. She actually came in second with two aces. Ella flopped down her hand next... a high card queen. She had just barely lost to Anna who had two threes, and Jade with two tens. So, it was now my turn to give out my first dare, and to my cousin no less.

She had been particulary embarrassed about the unveiling of her pussy, so I decided to so something with that.

"Ok Ella," I began, "Go to the sink in the bathroom and splash some water on your pubic hair, so it becomes completely soaked."

The dare wasn't intended for my voyeristic purposes (Sure, she was hot, but she was my cousin!) but rather for just humiliation. The water would probably make her vagina a tad more visible, and it's never comfortable to have your vagina wet!

She got up to do it without hesitation. Hmm... maybe it was too easy. Oh well, next time I would just make up a harder one.

She came back in the room with her pubic hair completely soaked, water running down her legs, and sure enough, her vagina lips were just slightly poking out now. I thought about telling her to be careful about spilling the water on the floor and seats, but I decided against it as I had been the one to order her to get it wet in the first place.

She didn't seem that embarrassed, which made me very disappointed, but I was even more dejected when I saw my next hand. Nothing! I did have an ace though so I kept that, hoping it would be enough to safe me from doing another dare.

I got a pair of fours among the three new cards, and my hopes started to raise. Just as quickly though, they sank again. Lola revealed her hand first, and showed a flush. No one could beat that, and so now whoever lost would be given a dare by Lola, who ALWAYS gave hard dares.

Anna showed her hand next. Three sevens. It was just me, Ella, and Jade. Until Jade declared that she had Anna beat with three tens. Now it was just me and Ella. Ella smirked at me, confident in her hand. And she had reason to be as with a pair of kings she crushed me.

"And the revenge is mine!" chortled Ella.

"Your not even the one giving me the dare." I retorted.

"Yeah but Lola is, and she gives harder ones than me." she snickered, and then turned to Lola, "Dear sister, please make him pay."

Lola thought for a bit. "Well, Ella, he didn't actually give you a hard dare. Hell, I hope my first dare is as easy as that. But James has been a naughty boy tonight, and naughty boys get punished. James, please go pretend to hump the end of the couch. And make sure your... penis... touches it. For thirty seconds."

Like the dare I had given Ella, it wasn't particually voyeristic, but just embarrassing. I mean, who wants to pretend to screw a couch?

I got up and walked over to the end of the couch that Anna was sitting on. I would rather hump her end than Lola's end. Anna stared at my full blown hard on and giggled.

I started humping, making sure I touched the couch. I didnt want to have to redo the dare like Jade had to. Anna giggled even more as my dick bounced up and down, and then crashed into the couch, before pulling away. I felt ridiculous, with my hips moving back and forth, humping a couch.

But I had to admit it felt good. When I swung my dick forward into the couch, I tried to drag to contact out a little bit, moving my dick upwards so the couch would caress the underside of my penis. I was so horny after seeing four hot girls strip completely naked that I just wanted to cum now.

After thirty seconds Lola called time, and I had to admit I was a little disappointed; I was now more horny than before. I made my way back to my seat, panting slightly.

"Someone got into that!" laughed Ella.

I just shook my head and dealt the cards.

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Old 06-01-2011, 08:03 PM   #78
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I can't vote it is to hard for me lol
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Old 06-02-2011, 12:03 AM   #79
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awesome addition dude. I have to say though, I am a bit disappointed that James doesn't want to do anything sexual with his cousins. That's what is making this story unique and better than most others here on the site (besides it being well written).
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Old 06-02-2011, 07:57 AM   #80
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I had a bunch of free time today since it's a national holiday... Can anyone guess where I'm from? And EB32, I am sorry to disappoint you, but remember that there are two other hot girls there too! The voting is now tied up between two people, so send in your votes to break the tie!
Chapter Twenty Three

Karma is a bitch. I of course had heard that expression before, everyone has. But I had never experienced it happening. The only time I saw someone who did something bad getting paid back for it later was in the movies. When a bully steals a little kids lunch money, it's not like someone comes along and steals his money. No, he gets away scotch free.

But now I experienced it up close and personal, expescially since I was doing the paybacking. As you may remember, Lola gave me a dare the turn earlier. Now, not only did she lose the hand with a high card king, but I won the hand.

My second win, my second dare. Of course, I had already lost twice too, so it's not like I was having good luck.

I remembered the dare I had given last time to Ella, and how it had been to easy. I was determined to give Lola a tough one, even if she was cousin.

"Hey Lola, ready for some payback?" I grinned.

"Bring it on. You've already had to do two dares, which means the next time you lose you have to do a Level Two dare. So have fun with that, loser."

Crap. I had forgotten about the Level Two dares, which could involve another person. At the rate this was going, I would have to do one in a few hands. Not good.

I pushed that to the back of my mind though and set about thinking up a good dare for Lola.

"Ok Lola, I bet you are proud of your body. Especially your breasts, which I have to admit, even though I am your cousin, are quite spectacular."

"Perv." She interrupted, but she looked flattered.

"Sorry, I'm a guy." This got a lot of laughs. "By the way Lola, and this isn't part of your dare I was just wondering, what size are your breasts?"

"34 C,"she responded blushing.

"Oh. I thought they were D cups." This got another round of laughs, and I was glad to see the atmosphere was still light. "Ok Lola, here's your dare, and yes it does involve those 34 C's of yours. Stand up, and place your hand behind your back. Then shake your chest side to side for ten seconds."

She blanched, but got up with only a little hesitation. She had been preparing for worse, and even though this was hard, she had thought of other, harder dares that she might have been made to do.

She clasped her hands behind her back, jutting out her delightfully large breasts. Then, slowly at first, she began to pick up speed. They were like pendulums of sexiness, jiggling back and forth. Everyone was staring entralled, as if under a hypnotist's spell.

This went on for a ten seconds, which seemed far to short, before Lola stopped at sat back down. My cock had been tortured by this sensual sight, almost painfully, and so absentmindedly I moved the back of my hand up the shaft, intaking a sharp breath.

I then realized what I was doing, and stopped before anyone noticed, and looked around. Jade was her normal polite self, looking interested but not overly so. Ella actually looked a little embarrassed for her sister.

But Anna looked nearly as captivated as I had, and I saw her pointer finger slowly trace the opening of her slit, sending shivers up her. She then realized what she was doing, as I had, and stopped, looking around to see if anyone had seen her. I quickly adverted my eyes so she wouldn't know that I had been watching.

Lola reached for the cards, but I stopped her.

"How long is your mom going to be occupied for with Judge Judy? I mean, it has to end at some point. And it's already nine fifteen."

"Yeah well Judge Judy goes until nine thirty, so theres still fifteen minutes left. Besides, she probably won't even come over, she'll just call. And then if we're not done yet we can just ask to stay over a bit more. We'll say that we're playing a game. She'll say yes." Lola stated this all very matter of factly, as if she had already though of it.

"Stop trying to get out of losing!" Anna scolded me.

I laughed. "I was trying to spare you girls the humiliation of losing, but if that's what you want, bring it on!"
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Old 06-02-2011, 08:45 AM   #81
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Very nice! Man I swear, some of these stories I wish they would make a porno of cause reading it isn't enough! This is hot!
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Old 06-02-2011, 01:41 PM   #82
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Another well written chapter. I especially like that you included the dose of reality to your "fictional" story. It had seemed that the game had lasted a while and needed that "sense of concern" about being discovered.

I hope you plan for many more chapters -- I would hate for the game (and the overall story) to end on a single dare when all the characters seem eager to declare a "loser".
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Old 06-02-2011, 07:00 PM   #83
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I just spent an hour reading this and i think i might be in love with you!!!
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this is just a GREAT story... raise your hand if you are touching yourself while reading... <raises hand> hehe
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BEST STORY I HAVE READ ON HERE BY FAR!!!! please post more!!!! and if its not too late i pmed you my vote
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Hey guys sorry for the delay I havent been feeling very well and still aren't, but I managed to crank this out. If there is some spelling or grammar issues, I'm sorry, but I don't have the energy to proof read 100 percent. I will probably edit it though when I am feeling better. And no, it's not too late to vote, so send them in!
Chapter Twenty Four
I backed up my big talk with a strong hand, getting two aces in my first five cards and then in my three replacement cards I got a pair of twos. Pretty good.

I beat everyone but Jade, who, ironically, had been the only one not trash talking. She had three sevens which won her the hand. Coming in last, having to do her second Level One dare, was Anna. I grinned; moments earlier she had been so sure of herself but now she was looking worried.

Jade wasn't too mean to her with her dare, which was nothing compared to what Lola or I would have given her.

"Ok Anna, here's your dare. Do the crab walk for fifteen seconds."

For those of you who haven't heard of the crab walk, it is quite simple. A person gets on all fours, but with their back facing downwards so their abdomen is jutting upwards. They then 'walk' around by moving a foot, then a hand, then the other foot, then the other hand, and so on.

If Anna was doing it clothed, it would have been quite boring. But seeing as how she was naked, it was more interesting, since her pussy would be arched upwards giving everyone a good view, and her breasts would also be in plain sight.

Allthough, it would have been even more embarrassing had I had to do it, as my dick would be jutting upwards like a flagpole.

By now we were past the point of complaining or evening grimacing about dares, and Anna did it with nary a complaint.

Sure enough, her pussy was now in prime viewing position, but with all her blonde hair covering it up you still couldn't make out the slit. When she walked towards me with her legs spread apart though, I could see the shadow of her lips. The sight was already incredibly sexy as it was, and this was just an added bonus.

*Her breasts, not as large as Lola's but still substantial, spilled backwards, down towards her face. If she had had to lick her nipples for a dare as Jade had had to, it would have been no problem.

Finally after fifteen seconds of the sexiest crab walking I had ever seen, she stood up, her face flushed for the slight exertion, and walked back to her seat, treating me to a nice glimse of her swaying ass in the process.

She dealt out the next hand as I sneakily wiped away yet another drop or precum from my dick. Jade, who had won the last hand, had a reversal of fortune and lost the next. I barely beat her (she had two fours and I had two eights) and most unfortunately for her, Anna, whom she had dared the hand before, won it all!

Anna laughed evilly. "Now this is time for revenge!"

Jade looked a little worried, as well she should, for even though Anna had not given out many hard dares recently, that was simply due to a lack of winning rather than a lack of a devious mind.

"Hey James," said Anna, "Do you happen to have any ice cubes in that mini fridge of yours?"

"Yeah, there should be." I replied reluctantly, not wanting to help give Jade a hard dare.

"Could you be a dear and get some?" Anna asked sweetly.

I stood up and walked over the mini fridge, mouthing 'I'm sorry!' to Jade as I passed her. Sure enough, there was a small tray of ice cubes, with five of them remaining. I brought them back over to where Anna was sitting with a malicious grin on her face.

"Thank you very much. Now Jade... time for your dare! You are going to lay on you back, and then I will place an ice cube on your slit and on each of your breasts. You are to stay like that for fifteen seconds, if an ice cube falls off, you must start over. Understand?"

Jade looked around for help, but no one stepped into save her. It wasn't involving another person (besides Anna, but all she was doing was placing the ice cubes so that didn't count) so by definition it was a valid Level One dare.

Slowly, reluctantly, still looking for help, she moved to the middle of the circle and laid down, exposing herself completely, which was, for me, a delightful sight.

Anna got up and snapped three ice cubes out of the tray and into her hand. She then walked over to Jade, still grinning. When Jade saw her coming, she just shut her eyes.

Anna bent down and placed one of the ice cubes on Jade's pussy first. Jade inhaled sharply, but just grit her teeth and kept her eyes close. Next, the two remaining ice cubes were placed on her breasts, and Anna shouted, "Time starts now!"

Jade, after getting over the intial shock, lay as still as a rock, trying her best not to dislodge the ice cubes. Although on Lola's or Anna's breasts the ice cubes might have slipped off rather easily, Jade's small breasts didn't present much of downward slope when she was laying on her back.

I took this opportunity not to watch the ice cubes but to check out Jade's body. Although her breasts and hips were small, she was still very cute. She didn't have much fat on her, and her athletic frame showed off an impressive amount of muscle for her size. She didn't look like a body builder or anything (and it's a good thing she didn't!) but she looked very athletic.

Finally when Anna called time she sat upright with a squeal and shook the cold ice off her. We all laughed at her reaction, and she proceeded to jump up and down to try to shake off the cold. This again let me get in some nice glances of her petite body. Finally she went back to her seat and sat down.

"Hey pick up the ice cubes!" I said jokingly, but actually serious.

"You pick 'Em up," responded Jade, "They're yours."

Everyone laughed and I reluctantly went and picked up the ice cubes, got the tray from Anna, and brought them back over to the mini fridge. I pondered what to do with them; I couldn't put them back in since they were dirty, but there was no sink nearby to throw them away in. Finally I just tossed them on the bottom of the fridge and went back to my seat, where I found my next hand waiting for me.
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Nice addition bro and here's hoping you feel better.
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lovely addition as ever...get well soon! x
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great... can't wait for more..
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Very nice I would suggest to let the ice cubes just melt
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