Old 04-26-2016, 11:36 AM   #16
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Lol, you about to orgasm? Is that your issue or something else?

And more is written.
Yes very close. I keep having to stop reading because I am almost having orgasms while I'm doing so.
And yes you can continue to enjoy the fact that your story continues to cause issues.
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Yes very close. I keep having to stop reading because I am almost having orgasms while I'm doing so.
And yes you can continue to enjoy the fact that your story continues to cause issues.
Awesome and I'm enjoying.
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Chapter 10

Jake grabbed his hand, "Leave her alone!"

"You payed, you don't get her forever."

"What are you talking about? I mentioned no such thing!"

"I doubt it. I heard you. How did that slut convince you? No man would want to take her with them or brand them."

"I asked her."

"I doubt it." He untied Isabelle, then grabbed her by her hair, "You are in trouble. How dare you use people!"
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Chapter 11

She cried as she was pulled outside by her hair. Her guardian pinned her against the tree.

Isabelle's eyes grew wide at the site of children walking around.

She squirmed trying to get her arms free to no avail. She closed her eyes. "Maybe if I pretend the children aren't there, they will go away." She thought.

She knew the thought was useless but one could hope. She didn't want all the children to see her vagina. She knew it was more than likely many have seen vaginas and boobs as there were no laws restricting them to be covered in public.

She knew, most places required a females vagina and boobs to be exposed.

She did not acquire this information from going out in public as she was rarely aloud in public. Her guardian always said he didn't want embarrassed of her.

The guardian smiled, as the officer walked towards them with rope wrapped around his arm, "I hope you learned your lesson."

Isabelle cried as the officer and her guardian tied her to the tree.

The children and their fathers crowded around the tree.

Surrounded my a bunch of men who were undoubtedly turned on by her situation, Isabelle screamed.

The officer covered her mouth with his hand while her guardian forcefully took off his tie and shoved it into Isabelle's mouth, "Shut up, slut!"

Her guardian called a tattoo artist on the phone in front of her.

Isabelle knew what was coming, she did not want to be a deranged man's property.

She fought against the ropes, but they would not give her any wiggle room.
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Chapter 12

Tears flowed down Isabelle's face as she saw the man, carrying needles, ink and everything needed to give a tattoo.

The man looked at her guardian, "Branding her?"

"Yes. I would not have had to, if she would have not been a ungracious slut."

Isabelle stared at the crowd watching as her flaws were shown.

"I will enjoy my name on her arm."

The artist freed her arm prompting Isabelle to swing at him. The officer grabbed her arm, "You will be punished for swinging at the nice man."

Isabelle nodded. She shivered unknowing what the punishment would be.

The officer slammed her arm against the tree, "Do your job."

Isabelle bit down onto the tie that gagged her, as the pain shot through her arm.

After what felt like a year, her arm was tattooed with the name, Clark.
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I update once a day, you'll just have to wait until tomorrow to see more of it.

The reason for this is so I can edit and make sure it flows nicely. And as one can tell by now, I assume, the narrator's voice is a different voice than I usually use in typing as it makes it even harder.

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I don't know if no touch is going to make this harder or easier to read. Thanks for the 3 chapters now be good and write more!!!
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Chapter 13

Isabelle stared at the cars driving on the road.

She refused to relive that day.

She cuffed her hands together behind her back ignoring her natural instincts which prompt her to cover her vagina and boobs.

Isabelle shivered when the clouds darkened. She was not pleased with the weather attempting to change.

She eyed a green truck as it stopped in front of her yard.

She held her head down, "Maybe he didn't notice or maybe the driver is female." She thought.

She understood a female driving was unlikely as except in rare cases females were to walk everywhere unless instructed.

"Hello." She jumped. "I can have a good time."

She turned towards the voice. She wished she hadn't when she saw a man, "No, you can't." she thought.

"I will enjoy anything you plan." She held her hand out.

The man did not move, "We both know that is not true.

My son told me about you, Isabelle."

She took two steps backwards, "How do you know my name?" Thoughts of screaming and pleading to enter her guardian's house flowed through her mind.

"Jake is my son. You met in prison."

Her cheeks were red, "I am not proud of my decision to misbehave."

She felt she was being tricked. She made the conscious decision to continue to talk in her forced graceful, happy to please way.

"You're telling me you have no problems with being punished for lack of sexual activity by sexual activity? That does not make sense."

"I did at the time, sir. I know better than to refuse sexual activity again. I should have not refused sexual activity at the time."

"You are saying the words but not acting on them. Talk to me as an individual. That is an order."

The man did not want to order her to reveal her feelings to him but, he knew she was going to be extra careful around him if he did not command her to reveal her feelings.
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Probably harder as we established, you get turned on by this story.

(Makes you feel better, no touch makes this harder to write.....)

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Probably harder as we established, you get turned on by this story.

(Makes you feel better, no touch makes this harder to write.....)
I'm glad I'm not the only one having issues with things then. Though you know who is making it even more worse for me at the moment!
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I'm glad I'm not the only one having issues with things then. Though you know who is making it even more worse for me at the moment!
Trenho? He makes everything worse.

Yeah, got suffering together.

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Chapter 14

"I am going to ask you something, you will answer honestly, understand?"

Isabelle stared at the ground, "I understand." Ignoring the sir at the end made her uneasy as she was trained to say sir when talking to a male after her first "disobedience".

"I can free you from your guardian. I can convince him to hand you over to me.

All you would have to do is agree to be Jake's."

"Jake can do whatever he pleases to me. I have no choice in what a male wishes to do to me. I obey. I do not see how being Jake's would matter."

"I see it this way, if you are Jake's, only he uses you, if you are not then the whole population uses you.

Your choice. I will come back tomorrow."

The man walked two steps before turning around, "Isabelle, there is a right choice."

She watched as he leaved. She was curious about what the man meant by there is a right choice.

Her thoughts were interrupted by her hair forcing her head backwards, "Why did that man not do anything to you!? You are not to stop offering until they do at least something to you! You know better!"
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You know what I'm going to say here! Maybe be back reading on Monday it all depends on what happens tomorrow. but yes still an awesome story. if reading it has this affect cant wait for more!
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