Old 12-19-2015, 05:56 PM   #31
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Her brown hair is now bleach blond we thought it fits her new theme better. As always hair colour changes are permanent due to our patented coloring gel which changes the root of the hair. Since she is a bunny now we just had to drill her skull to root a nice white pair of bunny ears, sorry Nad. The once brown eyes are now blue, needles to say why. A bit more attention was given to her mout arya: her lips are now fuller, as a good buddy of mine would say BJ Lips. Her tongue sadly had to be slit up to implant a sensor about wich i will talk more later. She now also produces more spit given to a shot we gave her but that's not even the highlight! We did surgery on her jaw bone so now she can't fully close her mouth, infact it's open wide enough that a standard penis could be inserted at any time! We also used our experimental texture changer to change the flesh of her mouth to feel like pussy.

Moving on to her Boobs you will notice that they grow quite in size from 70b to roughly the size of watermelons. Her right breast now also features a playboy bunny tattoo. and her nipels have been pierced with permanent studs.

Since she had a pretty good body build to start with we didn't had to change much about her weight, so we didn't. We did used our gel to change the color of her finger and toe nails to a nice pink!

Quite some work had to be done to her pussy. First we needed to shorten her lips to make it look more compact and clean.We then added a clit piercing that is connected to the sensor i mentioned earlier, So here is what it does; the piercing vibrates and keeps her wet constantly but it's not enough for her to cum, if her tongue feels the presence of sperm she has a 20% chance that it will go of and bring her to an orgasm, it also works with pussy juices in that case her chance is 30%.

We also payed some attention to her ass. It was pretty nice to start with but we made it a bit rounder and also widened her asshole so a normal penis can penetrate her easily Over her but she now features a white little bunny tale that is attached to her spine.

Her pretty conservative wardrobe was changed out with the classical playboy bunny suite as well with a wide range of sexy underwear and swimwear!

Due to the jaw bone breaking we had to do she sadly can't talk right now but we hope you enjoy her anyways!”

The camera shows a shy girl with big fluffy ears and tears in the corner of her eyes.

“We Surely will interview her once she held up! For today we have to end it sadly. As always leave your suggestions and ideas and don't forget to rate this makeover! If you are breath enough why not apply yourself? Maybe you will end up as fluffy as Nadine! I am Clara and this is TM Episode 5, See you next time!”.
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Old 12-19-2015, 06:14 PM   #32
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Thank you for the next chapter and for this awesome bunny makeover. She would love it even if she didn´t know herself now
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Old 12-20-2015, 01:22 AM   #33
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Sounds good
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Old 01-03-2016, 10:49 AM   #34
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Yet another Story writen for a friend hope you like it:
I am as always happy to get feedback.

“Hello everybody Christmas season is over and the new year is upon us! What better time to get a makeover then now? We are more then happy to help with that new year's resolution! Today's contestant is 19 year old Caro, we have to say she isn't completely voluntarily here she lost a bet with a former BF of hers. Since she isn't here on her own behalf she didn't wanted to have the post ™ Interview so we made an exception and skipped right to the wheel of transformations. So if you might want to spin it Caro?”

The black haired girl that measures about 1,77m promptly spins the wheel she hasn't said anything yet. right as the wheel starts to get slower the drugs take effect and she blacks out. the crowd laughs load as the wheel stops even Clara smiles as she takes a glimpse to the wheel.

“well it looks like we are going kawaii again as this time the wheel have chosen “Kawaii Yaoi “Boy”” I think this will become extremely entertaining, so stay tuned to see what we will do to her.”

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“Welcome back everybody! we had a blast transforming Caro it was really funny. So as always here are the things we changed:

At first we made her hair less girly it's now just long enough to cover her ear, with our special dye we also made sure it will stay a bright blonde color over time or better said for eternity. We didn't changed anything on her face since we want the boy to be girly.

But we had to remover her C sized boobs to ensure that she in theory could pass as a boy.
We also changed her voice it's not rly deeper but it sounds more boyish it's hard to explain if you can't hear it yourself.

we also made her a bit more chubby not fat but not as slim as she was before.

Now for the hard part we had to replace her pussy with a small little penis that when erected measures in at 5 cm. However she is not able to cum pleasuring her dick since it is for show only but she is able to cum to assure that we also attached balls and made her ass her new sexual organ, we changed her g spot to be deep in his ass we also loosened up the hole just a bit because we are sure she will scratch it in no time.

Unfortunately that's all for today little changes but big effect as we will see in the follow up where she will try out her new sexual organs.

I am Clara and this was Episode 6 of total makeover stay tuned for the follow up. As always feedback is welcome! Merry christmas and a happy new year. Clara out.
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Old 01-03-2016, 11:15 AM   #35
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Your show is great
I'm glad you are continuing it

And hopefully there will be a lot people coming to Clara for a makeover
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Old 01-03-2016, 11:17 AM   #36
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I am sure ther will.
If i get more detaild feedback

and who know maybe someday Clara herself will spin the wheel xD
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Plzz continue!!!!
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I would be so cool if Clara did the wheel herself next time and got something really degrading!
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Please continue, this is fantastic! Can you be any more sadistic with the next contestant-maybe constant pain unless they're fucking?
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So i got motivated to write again!
I rly look forward to reviews!

“Hello again everybody, and welcome back to ™ todays participant was a bit of a desperate application, you see 23 year old Kiki almost gave up on live because she, with 90kg, is a bit more on the heavy side she also is a small girl measuring in at only 1,6m.. That said her overall style is also pretty basic. The only thing that really spoke to us wear her almond brown eyes. Like last time we will skip the pre makeover interview since we don't think it adds anything of value to the show and it seems that our audience thinks the same. So let's get right to it!”

The picture shows a small but heavy girl spinning the makeover wheel, like usual her eyes are bound so she can't see her possible fates. After some time the wheel starts to slow down and stops at “Baby Girl”.

“Oh it looks like this Collage grade educated girl will be reduced to a little baby girl who shits her nappis all day!”

The joy on Clara's face is clearly visible but just as she closed her mouth the wheel took a sudden thrust to the left and so the outcome was quickly changed to “Statuette”

“Seems like fate is on her side this time! Stay tuned for what changes we have in mind for Kiki!” Clara closes the first segment of the show with a disappointed face she looked forward to reducing this girl to a baby but the wheel had another thing in mind for her!

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“Welcome back everybody we are finally done with Kiki! So without further ado let's jump right in:

SO first of all we needed to decide, if we think of female statues we usually think of sexy sleek girls but it would not be right to degrease Kiki so we decided on the opposite thing!
You know in medieval times heavy girls wear adored and desired nowadays that's not so much of a thing but for the sake of art we decided to buff her up even more! So the first thing to do was add roughly 100KG to her petite body we went carefull on her boobs so they won't end up to big but in the end the 52C boobs ended up two sizes larger.We also needed to cut down her dark brown hair since it was to long, we decided to go with a pixi cut. The color was changed to a platinum gold with black insides.
We first thought of breaking her nose to make her more sphinx like but not even ™ is so evil so we decided to do a little work on her mouth instead. We fixed and shortened muscles and bones so her mouth stays permanently opened a bit depending on who you ask it looks really artsy or dumb.
The rest of her face remained unchanged.
We moved further down and noticed her new body mass gets in way with her pussy, so we decided to do a drastical thing and inject hardening wax into her lips and vulva it will make it hard like stone so penetration will be impossible but our tests showed she masturbates at least two times a day so we thought this might get her more productiv.
We are pretty sure she will have a hard time finding a Boyfriend but we don't want to ruin it completely for her so in exchange her fat ass recieved a change her sphincter got replaced with a artificially one, it reacts if her boobss are fumbled if you fumble the right breast it will open wider and the left one will make it go tighter. Sadly we still have a bug that won't allow changes from the carrier of that device so for now she won't be able to change it herself we left it at smallest setting to begin with.
Since she is a statue we also decided to lighten her skin color to marble whit her closet was also equipped with greek cloth to cover her new body in. Her new mass will make it pretty hard for her to walk so i think we fully achieved the theme or what do you think?!”

The picture shows the remains of what was once Kiki she cries nonstop as she knows she is even fater now and it will be pretty hard to get back to her 90KG which she once hated so much!

“Anyways i am your host Clara and this was ™ stay tuned for the next episode and make sure to leave feedback!”
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Old 07-07-2016, 11:51 AM   #41
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Thanks for all the episodes, I enjoyed reading them (although I can't imagine why any mentally sane person would apply for participation on your show after the first episode^^). May I suggest another male contestant? :-D
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Wow. I've read a few of your others, so I knew it was going to be a bit morally questionable, but that was so cringey to imagine... the poor girl. It makes me shudder to think your mind is what's going to be controlling the porn I watch for a week.

My favorite thing about your writing is the charismatic dialogue. Nothing they say seems unrealistic, which makes the characters feel real. This gameshow host is very cruel and takes joy in ruining the lives of people who participate in the show and that comes across really well. The body modifications are honestly pretty clever. (even if they are really fucked up)
My only negative thing is that the topic isn't my cup of tea haha. Obviously the spelling too, but that's not really your fault.

All in all, good job!
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Thanks for all the episodes, I enjoyed reading them (although I can't imagine why any mentally sane person would apply for participation on your show after the first episode^^). May I suggest another male contestant? :-D
First of all thank you if you want you can give me a more detailed insight on what things you liked/disliked.
The thing with male contestants is i dont like them i think a girls body is way more erotic to toy around with.
If you have any great idea however feel free to pm me!

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Wow. I've read a few of your others, so I knew it was going to be a bit morally questionable, but that was so cringey to imagine... the poor girl. It makes me shudder to think your mind is what's going to be controlling the porn I watch for a week.

My favorite thing about your writing is the charismatic dialogue. Nothing they say seems unrealistic, which makes the characters feel real. This gameshow host is very cruel and takes joy in ruining the lives of people who participate in the show and that comes across really well. The body modifications are honestly pretty clever. (even if they are really fucked up)
My only negative thing is that the topic isn't my cup of tea haha. Obviously the spelling too, but that's not really your fault.

All in all, good job!
Htanks for the very polished critisisem is sombody a bit afraid?
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Hey!

First of all excuse me, english is not my first language so i'm really sorry for my mistakes.

This story is fantastic you should definetly continue it as soon as you can. I just love every episode, you are a really talented, great writer. I hope you will write a lot more chapter, and you enjoy writing it as much as i enjoy reading it.

The body modifications are really creative and fun (for reading, maybe the participants doesnt enjoy them much ). In my opinion you can be a bit (or a lot) more sadistic, i would enjoy some really sadistic modifications.
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First of all thank you if you want you can give me a more detailed insight on what things you liked/disliked.
The thing with male contestants is i dont like them i think a girls body is way more erotic to toy around with.
If you have any great idea however feel free to pm me!
Thank goodness it's all just fantasy, but I like how you manage to turn things to the worst possible result. When I start reading I'm always like 'Well, how bad can that episode possibly end' - but your twisted mind always finds it's way. Also your characters appear authentic, although your description of them is rather short most of the time. They could spend some more sentences explaining their personal situation to the host, and why they decided to sign up for the show. Another suggestion: It would be interesting to read an episode where someone gets some serious makeover but somehow still likes the result - how would the host react etc....

Concerning male candidates: If it's so much easier and more fun for you to imagine female makeovers, than of course stick to it. I have to admit I'd also have problems to come up with a funny one, except the rather obvious feminisation things....
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