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Old 01-31-2011, 07:57 PM   #31
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Way to go man. Both updates were fantastic! I love the pace and I love the amount of detail that you put in!!
Awesome and wonderful story!! Looking forward to more!!!!
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Old 02-01-2011, 09:01 AM   #32
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Thanks for all the comments people, probably won't be able to do another update tonight unless what I have arranged is cancelled (it was yesterday)

Feel free to send me a friend request or whatever! Jack xx
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Old 02-01-2011, 12:13 PM   #33
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hey jack
I've been reading this story since the first chapter was posted and really like it.

The last chapter was not what I expected though... how to describe.... :S

The way they act... that with he just asks him if he is gay, they just go to the toilet, having sex and leave hm... I don't know... it feels kinda rushed to me...
I expected they'd do something at the sleepover, not before.

That they do something before is okay to me, but hm.. to me it sounds a little like there is no prob... I mean... when I ask someone if he is gay, and also tell I am bi-curious, I think I'd have doubt about it before, wonder about it or whatever... or if I go to toilet with a boy, and have first time experience with him, ain't there any strange feelings? Or any special nice feelings? Thoughts?
The last chapters gave me a feeling that they'll be rather curious/careful(/shy?).

After all that philosphy xD I read the chapter third time now, and think the point I am complaining about is, there is less feelings or thoughts... to me it let the part in the toilet sound as if they'd just have another fuck - what I didn't expect after the first chapters... (it's okay to write in that way probably^^ but I didn't expect it for how the characters were in the chapters before..)

Anyways, I like your story and I will continue reading it
Maybe you get what I mean and think of it, or otherwise I'm maybe just babbling xD

All the best


Ps: I love that with German lesson xD Gestern, ich saw Ryan's cock. xD
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Old 02-01-2011, 02:17 PM   #34
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this is a pretty good story
write soooon!!
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Old 02-01-2011, 02:25 PM   #35
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Thanks Saphir, it did happen though so had to write it, just seemed to happen that way :P

And LOL about the German lesson.

Thanks immaeatu!
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Old 02-01-2011, 02:48 PM   #36
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That's okay

And despite all of that, good story, keep writing! :P
I want the next part
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Old 02-01-2011, 03:14 PM   #37
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Tehe, thanks all!xx
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Old 02-02-2011, 09:20 AM   #38
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Gonna try my best to get the next part up later tonight, no promises but I'll try people
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Old 02-02-2011, 11:52 AM   #39
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hurrryyy!!!!!!!! D:
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Old 02-02-2011, 02:26 PM   #40
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Sorry, so much revision, gonna have to leave it a day or 2
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Old 02-02-2011, 03:46 PM   #41
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woaah. mate, that was amazing.
unnnnnnf.
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Old 02-03-2011, 06:59 PM   #42
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Sorry, so much revision, gonna have to leave it a day or 2
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"Slugger: woaah. mate, that was amazing.
unnnnnnf."

i agree 100% :3
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Old 02-03-2011, 09:10 PM   #43
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Mr. Logan here stole mah line ;D
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Old 02-04-2011, 10:17 AM   #44
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Thank you very much people, I'm really gonna try and get the next part up tonight!x
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Old 02-04-2011, 03:31 PM   #45
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My POV again guys I promised you an update, but this is just a very short one, linking the last chapter and preparing for the next part. Not great, but necessary!

Part 4 - Of course it's ok!

Ryan had been ill the next day, leaving me worrying even more about him. I knew he'd enjoyed what we did, but was he thinking it was wrong or dirty? The whole day had gone VERY slowly, with friends mentioning us leaving them at lunch, asking where we went.

"To ask our German teacher what to revise!" I told them.

"What, and she took half an hour to answer?"

"Evidently..."

I knew that I would do something with Ryan again, but the question was, what?! Had I ruined what could have been great by taking it too fast? He did come back to school the day after, but we didn't have German or French so I could only speak to him at break or lunch. Of course i wasn't expecting him to walk right up to me, and at the various occasions I spotted him, he walked straight away to a different location!

"Ryan!" I shouted at lunchtime, as he walked through the tennis courts where, just a few days ago, we'd discussed all this.

"yeah mate?" he replied.

"Umm, need to talk." I said, shocked he'd not ignored me!

"Ok then, hit me with it."

I told him how I'd been worrying, how I didn't mean to hurt him, how he didn't have to do what he didn't want to, how I enjoyed it so much! I rushed through, wanting to say everything I needed to before he walked off.

"Chill man," he replied. "I'm fine with what we did, I fucking loved it. I just remembered what happened to me when I was 'hurt' and couldn't carry on. Let's leave it for a bit, but I can't wait for that sleepover!"

I was shocked. I'd got it all wrong! Later that day I ran home, and jacked off over the thought, a massive truth or dare game, seeing Ryan's hard, big knob squirt cum all over his muscular six pac. This would be heaven, heaven!
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That's all I have for now, sorry it was short but I'm pretty busy and didn't want to rush the good parts of the story

I have plenty more non fiction and fiction stories to tell, so I'm aiming to finish this one by the end of Febuary and start another soon, but depends how busy I am.

love you all, Jack xxx
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