Old 07-17-2016, 02:29 PM   #1
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This is my first time ever writing an erotic story so any feedback would be greatly appreciated although please try to keep it either positive or constructive. This is not true but its something I thought of.

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Meghan 18 years old average height blonde 34 D boobs works at hooters

Patricia 21 years old 5'6 blonde 32 C boobs

The 2 characters went to high school together but Patricia was a senior when Meghan was a freshman and they didn't know each other that well

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Meghan left work frustrated after a long night of drunk guys staring at her rack and flirting with her, and checked her phone to see the usual twitter and instagram notifications that she was familiar with seeing on her phone and a few texts from close friends and family members. But at the top was a message from an unknown number. Meghan ignored it until she got home and the same number called her. She picked it up and the voice was familiar but she couldn't quite figure out where she remembered it from. She thought it might have been someone from high school but nobody that she remembered had a voice that resembled the one of the girl on the phone who in one sentence perplexed, and intrigued Meghan. "You are going to be my new slut" Then the line went dead. Meghan went back to look at the text to see what she said and it wasn't there anymore. Assuming it was a prank call or just some drunk hoe that she didn't remember she ignored it and went to sleep. And as she woke up all she could see was black and she heard a menacing laugh that was all too familiar. Patricia.
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Chapter 2

She woke up drowsy and unsure of where she was, with a blindfold over her eyes. It smelled musty and damp as if she were in some sort of basement. She felt a needle enter her arm and she was paralyzed. The barbiturates didn't allow her to move but the blindfold was removed and her eyes were locked with Patricia, a girl who was a senior back when she was a freshman. Patricia had been kind of an outcast so they hadn't interacted much seeing as how Meghan was one of the more popular kids in the school with guys ogling at her. Meghan was forced to lay there and feel as Patricia pulled her clothes off and exposed her breasts playing with her nipples making Meg start to tingle with excitement, and moved down to slide Meg's shorts and panties off while Meg had to watch. But deep down, Meg knew she liked this and that she actually told someone about this being a fantasy of hers. But how could Patricia have known that?

Patricia slid a finger inside of Meg's pussy feeling how she was starting to get wet and said "Hmm my little slut likes this doesn't she? Don't worry you don't need to talk I already know this turns you on. You fantasize about this everytime you touch yourself."

Meg knew it was true but was unable to speak due to the barbiturates and even if she could she was not going to tell this psycho that she loved the fact that she had no control. Meg was turned onto her back and she saw Patricia take out her phone and take some pictures of Meg's boobs and cleanly shaven pussy." Now unless you want your father to see this I suggest you do what I tell you to." The effect of the drugs were starting to wear off and Meg actually thought about leaving and just dealing with that later. But nothing had turned her on like this in a long time so once she was freed she crawled over to Patricia on her hands and knees and said "What is your command Miss Patricia?"
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Old 07-17-2016, 03:23 PM   #3
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Whilst hardly a nightmare, it is quickly paced and simple to read. Keep going please.
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Great start, keep it up
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Whilst hardly a nightmare, it is quickly paced and simple to read. Keep going please.
To a normal person that would be a nightmare lol but shes just a dirty girl, ill post more soon.
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To a normal person that would be a nightmare lol but shes just a dirty girl, ill post more soon.
I think the phrase nightmare is being used more in a tongue in cheek kind of way. It's something that should be a nightmare for the average person but maybe not for her.
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Damn - I like this. Can't wait for the next few parts to be posted.

Wonder what your future stories will focus around.
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much much more this is freaking awesome concept.
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Please continue this! so good, I love it so far
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Love the start, please continue!
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Very nice, you have a good flow with your words it makes it easy to get into it.
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Hope there is part 3 coming soon.

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