Fiction: After School Swimming [Fiction]

kenshi46 · 03-19-2010, 07:59 PM

PART I: Wake up

‘’wake up Mr. Davis, if you fall asleep again in my class, I’ll be sure to send you to the principal’s office.

I wake up

‘’of course, sorry mam’’

It wasn’t long after the bell rang signalling the end of his math lesson and he was sprinting to the door, not only because he hated math, but because he knew today was Monday, and he knew that on every Monday, he had swimming.

You see Alex Davis had always been a ‘’weird’’ kid, but he felt unbelievably comfortable in the water. He could put everything aside when he was inside a pool and just relax.

After changing he got inside the pool and started his daily routine, but something was different today. Alex wasn’t alone, another person was there too. Henry Parker. Alex looked a little at Henry and a bulge formed in his pants.

Being the shy kid he was, Alex decided he wouldn’t present himself and instead would just come back another day when Henry wasn’t there. So he went to the locker rooms to get changed, when suddenly he heard the door open.

Moments later, Henry walked. It wasn’t long after he laid out his hand and said...

‘’Hey... I’m Henry’’

PART II: New beginnings

‘’Hey... I’m Henry’’

‘’Hi... I’m Alex’’

Even though he knew he shouldn’t, Alex couldn’t help but look at Henry’s beautiful, wet body. Soon after, a bulge formed in his pants. It was obvious at this point that Henry had seen the bulge in Alex’s pants so he tried to turn around to hide it.

Alex took off his bathing suit and looked behind him seeing Henry in the showers, cleaning his hair, leaving his lower body, his dick more particularly, completely revealed. Alex felt his dick reach full mast. He just wanted to jump on Henry, but instead he just walked to the showers as if nothing was.

‘’Any reason you have a boner?’’ Henry said laughing.
‘’Um... it happens sometimes’’ answered Alex.
‘’Oh so you don’t find me attractive?’’

As Henry said that he walked towards Alex and passed his hand on his body, starting from his chest all the way down to his dick. When he finally got to his dick, he got on his knees, and began sucking Alex’s dick until Alex came in his mouth. At this point Alex was so horny he began kissing Henry’s lips while he was rubbing his dick.

When Henry knew he was going to cum, he gave Alex a look and Alex got on his knees and swallowed everything. Henry then got up, and left as if nothing was. Leaving Alex alone with only his thoughts on what just happened...

maxim · 03-19-2010, 08:39 PM

I liked it.. Is there going to be more
Had great potential alhtough you did rush things just a little but overall great poterntial! 8.5/10

Demon Thief · 03-20-2010, 01:17 PM

I agree with maxim. I would really like to see more come out of this.

kenshi46 · 03-20-2010, 05:25 PM

PART III: Rude Awakening...

That very night, Alex laid in his bed pondering on the previous events. How he had felt so close to Henry, how he was so horny when he was with him, how much he wanted to touch him...

I’m not gay... I can’t be, but how can I deny... oh god, I hope he doesn’t tell anyone... I have to talk to Henry...

***

Alex’s alarm clock rang, signalling it was time to wake up and face Monday... and Henry. He got up, brushed his teeth, took a shower and went to catch the bus. He took a few steps inside and sat down beside Tyler, his best friend since elementary school.

‘’hey, dude’’ the boys said to each other...
‘’check this out man’’ said Tyler, pointing out a picture from an ‘’X-Rated’’ porno.
‘’Um... yeah... it’s hot’’

Why don’t I find her hot... oh god am I... I’m probably exaggerating things...

When a bulge formed in Tyler’s pants, Alex couldn’t help but look. And every time here did, a part of him felt like he was betraying himself.

***

The school bell rang as Alex planned out what he would say to Henry. He hurried to the locker room, only to find Henry, once again alone.

maxim · 03-20-2010, 05:27 PM

OMG!, I can't wait untill we get to see what happens next!
Although why the short post?
Nevrmind that I WANT MORE

03-19-2010, 07:59 PM	#1
kenshi46 Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Canada Posts: 47	After School Swimming [Fiction] PART I: Wake up ‘’wake up Mr. Davis, if you fall asleep again in my class, I’ll be sure to send you to the principal’s office. I wake up ‘’of course, sorry mam’’ It wasn’t long after the bell rang signalling the end of his math lesson and he was sprinting to the door, not only because he hated math, but because he knew today was Monday, and he knew that on every Monday, he had swimming. You see Alex Davis had always been a ‘’weird’’ kid, but he felt unbelievably comfortable in the water. He could put everything aside when he was inside a pool and just relax. After changing he got inside the pool and started his daily routine, but something was different today. Alex wasn’t alone, another person was there too. Henry Parker. Alex looked a little at Henry and a bulge formed in his pants. Being the shy kid he was, Alex decided he wouldn’t present himself and instead would just come back another day when Henry wasn’t there. So he went to the locker rooms to get changed, when suddenly he heard the door open. Moments later, Henry walked. It wasn’t long after he laid out his hand and said... ‘’Hey... I’m Henry’’ PART II: New beginnings ‘’Hey... I’m Henry’’ ‘’Hi... I’m Alex’’ Even though he knew he shouldn’t, Alex couldn’t help but look at Henry’s beautiful, wet body. Soon after, a bulge formed in his pants. It was obvious at this point that Henry had seen the bulge in Alex’s pants so he tried to turn around to hide it. Alex took off his bathing suit and looked behind him seeing Henry in the showers, cleaning his hair, leaving his lower body, his dick more particularly, completely revealed. Alex felt his dick reach full mast. He just wanted to jump on Henry, but instead he just walked to the showers as if nothing was. ‘’Any reason you have a boner?’’ Henry said laughing. ‘’Um... it happens sometimes’’ answered Alex. ‘’Oh so you don’t find me attractive?’’ As Henry said that he walked towards Alex and passed his hand on his body, starting from his chest all the way down to his dick. When he finally got to his dick, he got on his knees, and began sucking Alex’s dick until Alex came in his mouth. At this point Alex was so horny he began kissing Henry’s lips while he was rubbing his dick. When Henry knew he was going to cum, he gave Alex a look and Alex got on his knees and swallowed everything. Henry then got up, and left as if nothing was. Leaving Alex alone with only his thoughts on what just happened... __________________ Please leave comments!

03-19-2010, 08:39 PM	#2
maxim Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: UNITED STATES Posts: 1,121 Blog Entries: 33	*I liked it.. Is there going to be more* *Had great potential alhtough you did rush things just a little but overall great poterntial! 8.5/10* __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

03-20-2010, 01:17 PM	#3
Demon Thief getDare Devil Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: In the US Posts: 1,011	I agree with maxim. I would really like to see more come out of this. __________________ "How many seconds in eternity?" And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it. Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain. And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed." You must think that's a hell of a long time. Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird. 14 years on GetDare!

03-20-2010, 05:25 PM	#4
kenshi46 Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Canada Posts: 47	PART III: Rude Awakening... That very night, Alex laid in his bed pondering on the previous events. How he had felt so close to Henry, how he was so horny when he was with him, how much he wanted to touch him... I’m not gay... I can’t be, but how can I deny... oh god, I hope he doesn’t tell anyone... I have to talk to Henry... * Alex’s alarm clock rang, signalling it was time to wake up and face Monday... and Henry. He got up, brushed his teeth, took a shower and went to catch the bus. He took a few steps inside and sat down beside Tyler, his best friend since elementary school. ‘’hey, dude’’ the boys said to each other... ‘’check this out man’’ said Tyler, pointing out a picture from an ‘’X-Rated’’ porno. ‘’Um... yeah... it’s hot’’ Why don’t I find her hot... oh god am I... I’m probably exaggerating things... When a bulge formed in Tyler’s pants, Alex couldn’t help but look. And every time here did, a part of him felt like he was betraying himself. * The school bell rang as Alex planned out what he would say to Henry. He hurried to the locker room, only to find Henry, once again alone. __________________ Please leave comments!

03-20-2010, 05:27 PM	#5
maxim Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: UNITED STATES Posts: 1,121 Blog Entries: 33	OMG!, I can't wait untill we get to see what happens next! Although why the short post? Nevrmind that I WANT MORE __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]