Fiction: ♱ The Girl With Ribbons In Her Hair - Page 2

MeasinToday · 11-21-2010, 08:48 PM

Chapter 4

Thursday, 11:12pm

“You have to say yes to every dare for the rest of the game” He dared with a devilish smile
“What if I say no to that dare?” I asked, knowing full well that I would say yes anyways
“Then you must suffer the punishment.” He has the cutest dimples.
“And what would that be?” I smiled back at him
“No underwear until we get off the plane”
“I accept your dare. Are there any other rules?”
“Nothing that could get you caught/ sent home from this trip”
“Alright, Truth or Dare?” It was my turn.
“Umm, truth” he surprised me
I worried about what I would ask. I came up with a good one that was a little too far but I was so horny I asked anyways.
“What is your sex fantasy, and are you a virgin?”
“That’s 2” he caught me
“Not if I use a coma” I smiled
“Alright then,” he sighed, “This is sort of embarrassing, but I’ve liked you for a long time, so it’s… about you. Is that weird?”
“No, I’ve kind of done the same thing…”
“Really! Oh, and yes I am a virgin, well not a “mental” virgin, but…”
“Same here” I replied.
We took a moment to smile at each other before continuing.
“Dare” I said
“Take off your top” He said deviously
If I weren’t so horny and Walker, my love wasn’t asking, I would’ve never done it, but under the circumstances, I did.
“Wow” he studied me in my purple bra. He looked into my eyes and kissed me again.
“You are perfect, in every way.” He whispered to me
I unbuckled my seat and jumped into his lap
“So are you.”
We made out again, for longer this time, and then we heard a noise. I jumped back and grabbed a blanket and pulled it over me.
“Well, Well, Well. I never would’ve guessed.” It was Trevor
“Shut up” Walker warned
“I don’t think I will. Unless your little girlfriend here shows me her tits!”
I pulled the blanket up more.
Walker got out of his seat and formed a fist
“Or you can shut the hell up and stay alive, meat.” Walker threatened
“I can take you any day” Trevor pulled a fist up
Walker threw him on the seat and pinned him down
“OR YOU CAN SHUT THE HELL UP AND LEAVE IS ALONE!” Walker shouted
“Chill dude! I was, uh, kidding?”
“Get out of here!”
Trevor scampered back to the front of the plane.
“I’m so sorry,” Walker apologized “He is a total douche sometimes.”
“It’s okay, Walker.”
“Are you sure babe? I can beat the crap out of that kid if you want me to.”
“No, It’s really okay.” He was so sweet to me.
“Vivian, I guess this is sort of obvious, but do you want to be my girlfriend? Like officially?” He turned pink
“Yes, I thought you’d never ask!”
“Good” He sighed of relief as he put his arm around me. I leaned into him. I decided what I should do next.
“Walker, I want to show you something.” I slowly unhooked my bra and let it fall with the blanket.
He look at my breasts then my eyes, and back and forth. Then he slowly brought his hands to my chest and began feeling my breasts. I leaned in and kissed him until we were hitting first and second base. He looked at me and smiled, then, we hit third.

Hoped you liked it!

rchard2scout · 11-22-2010, 02:27 PM

I love it! Please don't let it die!
I do think the characters might need a bit more development...

MeasinToday · 11-22-2010, 03:22 PM

I agree, Thanks!

MeasinToday · 11-22-2010, 09:37 PM

Chapter 5

Friday, 3:57am

I woke up leaning on Walker. Everyone on the plane was still asleep but us. I looked up at my boyfriend. He was looking down at me stroking my hair. He had blackish hair that was slightly in his face, and those extraordinary blue eyes. I poked his stomach to see if he had abs, which, of coarse, he did. He pulled his shirt up to reveal his amazing 6-pack. He was so perfect; perfect abs, perfect hair, perfect smiles, perfect eyes, perfect body, he was simply perfect in every way. How could I be so lucky?
“So babe, I was thinking we just talk, about us. Get to know what each other likes and stuff like that. Like a “date” I guess.” He softly said down to me.
“Well, I wear contacts, not to change my eye color, they aren’t even colored, but so I don’t have to wear glasses. I hate my glasses. I’ve always had this brown color hair; it gets all light in the summer and dark in the winter. I hate using product on it, and have never dyed or used fake colors. I love all food, and think I’m way too fat. I love romance and am a sucker for a love story. As you know, I’m a virgin and I have been in love with you since the beginning of sophomore year. And I guess… That’s me.”
“Wow. Well now I know who I’m in love with.” He kissed me again.
At this point I was wearing a nothing on top but a blanket and everything was on the bottom. I grabbed my bag and pulled out a deck of cards.
“Want to play gin?” I asked,
“I’ve never played.” he confessed
“Then this will be fun! What about strip gin?”
“Okay, It can’t be too hard, I guess.”
I taught him how to play. (IF you aren’t familiar with gin see http://www.pagat.com/rummy/ginrummy.html)
“Okay so we will play a couple hands, and if you lose you take off an article of clothing. In the end whoever has the most points gets to be the other’s “master” until we get off the plane”
We played 7 rounds:

1: W- lost shirt
2: W- lost pants
3: V- lost pants
4: W- lost shoes and socks
5: V- lost shoes and socks
6: V- lost ponytail holder and ribbon (had to fight for that to count)
7: V- lost blanket

Walker surprisingly won, and we were both in under wear only- his plaid boxers and my purple thong. He was to be my master. This couldn’t be good…

I know, short chapter, sorry

MeasinToday · 11-23-2010, 02:55 PM

UPDATE: My "v" key barely works, I have to MASH it down to type- urgg takes FOREVER to write. I have been writing a lot lately, and I'm wondering: do y'all like the story and the direction its going? What do you want to see from it? I really don't want them blackmailed. What do you think? PLEASE help me, I want to make this story great! PLEASE comment with your feelings! THANK YOU! -Me as in Today

Rachie · 11-23-2010, 03:21 PM

Owwww STRIP GIN lol (may have to get an idea of this lol)

Chapter is Perfect

just like his
perfect abs,
perfect hair,
perfect smiles,
perfect eyes,
perfect body,
This is just simply perfect lol

Keep up the good work- would recomend you to describe how the game has gone, quite slowly as a lot of people are still unsure how to play and if you have altered any rules etc.

Is he faking the fact he dosent now how to play, or is he terrible

Love Rachie
x x x

2horny2sexy · 11-23-2010, 03:41 PM

Don't worry.... You are going pretty fine... Just give some time for a thought and carry on.... You ll make a good story..

firenight · 11-23-2010, 06:00 PM

go on please hopeing for more

MeasinToday · 11-23-2010, 10:05 PM

Chapter 6

Friday, 4:34am

I was lucky, the plane was landing at 5am and everyone was waking up. Walker re-dressed and gave me my blanket. He put some sort of fabric over my eyes so I couldn’t see. I felt my thong slowly be pulled down. I was glad I had shaven the night before. I felt warm fingers reach back up my legs and slowly reach up towards my thighs. Then he slowly but swiftly put 2 fingers in. He slid them in, and out, and in, and out until I was almost there- then he stopped. I whimpered. After about 30 seconds he started again and stopped. He did it one more time and stopped again. He pulled his fingers to my lips and whispered
“Open”
I opened my mouth as he stuck his fingers in. I licked his fingers clean. He took off the blindfold and said,
“You’re done” as he smiled at me.
I kissed him and began to re-dress. He helped me dress, and hook my bra, which was helpful for me as well as a positive for him. The pilot announced 15 minutes to landing. I looked at him with a devilish grin, grabbed his pants and yanked them down. Before he could protest I grabbed his “junk” and gave him a quick hand job. Right before he came, I grabbed the barf bag in the seat pocket and let him do his stuff in that. We didn’t need a mess on the plane. He laughed when he was through and ran his fingers through my hair and said
“She’s smart too.” He kissed my lips and smiled before helping me pack up my bag. I was so happy. I was in love.
“I love you.” He said. Could he read my mind?
I grabbed him, pulled him close, and kissed him again.
“I love you too.” And, I really did.

firenight · 11-24-2010, 12:52 PM

more please but make each chapter long its to short

MeasinToday · 11-24-2010, 02:38 PM

Sorry, I like writing lots of short ones vs. few long ones

MeasinToday · 11-24-2010, 10:18 PM

By the way, I have no idea why there is a cross on the title, I had a star there and somehow it changed.. I dont know...

MeasinToday · 11-25-2010, 11:08 PM

Sorry guys, but it will probably be a LONG time until I get to writing again, SO busy. Sorry! I will finish though... eventually...

black out · 11-26-2010, 09:38 AM

good imagination, i like where it is going and how it gives good backround. overall a pretty dam good story

misspiggy7 · 11-29-2010, 06:09 PM

i love it!
it moves slowly enough not to rush, but quickly enough to stay interesting.
He's so great!
i love that he stands up for her (mostly because the Trevor I know is just like the one in the story!)
PLEASE WRITE

11-21-2010, 08:48 PM	#16
MeasinToday Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: A House Posts: 50	Chapter 4 Chapter 4 Thursday, 11:12pm “You have to say yes to every dare for the rest of the game” He dared with a devilish smile “What if I say no to that dare?” I asked, knowing full well that I would say yes anyways “Then you must suffer the punishment.” He has the cutest dimples. “And what would that be?” I smiled back at him “No underwear until we get off the plane” “I accept your dare. Are there any other rules?” “Nothing that could get you caught/ sent home from this trip” “Alright, Truth or Dare?” It was my turn. “Umm, truth” he surprised me I worried about what I would ask. I came up with a good one that was a little too far but I was so horny I asked anyways. “What is your sex fantasy, and are you a virgin?” “That’s 2” he caught me “Not if I use a coma” I smiled “Alright then,” he sighed, “This is sort of embarrassing, but I’ve liked you for a long time, so it’s… about you. Is that weird?” “No, I’ve kind of done the same thing…” “Really! Oh, and yes I am a virgin, well not a “mental” virgin, but…” “Same here” I replied. We took a moment to smile at each other before continuing. “Dare” I said “Take off your top” He said deviously If I weren’t so horny and Walker, my love wasn’t asking, I would’ve never done it, but under the circumstances, I did. “Wow” he studied me in my purple bra. He looked into my eyes and kissed me again. “You are perfect, in every way.” He whispered to me I unbuckled my seat and jumped into his lap “So are you.” We made out again, for longer this time, and then we heard a noise. I jumped back and grabbed a blanket and pulled it over me. “Well, Well, Well. I never would’ve guessed.” It was Trevor “Shut up” Walker warned “I don’t think I will. Unless your little girlfriend here shows me her tits!” I pulled the blanket up more. Walker got out of his seat and formed a fist “Or you can shut the hell up and stay alive, meat.” Walker threatened “I can take you any day” Trevor pulled a fist up Walker threw him on the seat and pinned him down “OR YOU CAN SHUT THE HELL UP AND LEAVE IS ALONE!” Walker shouted “Chill dude! I was, uh, kidding?” “Get out of here!” Trevor scampered back to the front of the plane. “I’m so sorry,” Walker apologized “He is a total douche sometimes.” “It’s okay, Walker.” “Are you sure babe? I can beat the crap out of that kid if you want me to.” “No, It’s really okay.” He was so sweet to me. “Vivian, I guess this is sort of obvious, but do you want to be my girlfriend? Like officially?” He turned pink “Yes, I thought you’d never ask!” “Good” He sighed of relief as he put his arm around me. I leaned into him. I decided what I should do next. “Walker, I want to show you something.” I slowly unhooked my bra and let it fall with the blanket. He look at my breasts then my eyes, and back and forth. Then he slowly brought his hands to my chest and began feeling my breasts. I leaned in and kissed him until we were hitting first and second base. He looked at me and smiled, then, we hit third. Hoped you liked it! __________________ No, I won't Me as in Today

11-22-2010, 03:22 PM	#18
MeasinToday Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: A House Posts: 50	I agree, Thanks! __________________ No, I won't Me as in Today

11-22-2010, 09:37 PM	#19
MeasinToday Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: A House Posts: 50	✰ Chapter 5 Chapter 5 Friday, 3:57am I woke up leaning on Walker. Everyone on the plane was still asleep but us. I looked up at my boyfriend. He was looking down at me stroking my hair. He had blackish hair that was slightly in his face, and those extraordinary blue eyes. I poked his stomach to see if he had abs, which, of coarse, he did. He pulled his shirt up to reveal his amazing 6-pack. He was so perfect; perfect abs, perfect hair, perfect smiles, perfect eyes, perfect body, he was simply perfect in every way. How could I be so lucky? “So babe, I was thinking we just talk, about us. Get to know what each other likes and stuff like that. Like a “date” I guess.” He softly said down to me. “Well, I wear contacts, not to change my eye color, they aren’t even colored, but so I don’t have to wear glasses. I hate my glasses. I’ve always had this brown color hair; it gets all light in the summer and dark in the winter. I hate using product on it, and have never dyed or used fake colors. I love all food, and think I’m way too fat. I love romance and am a sucker for a love story. As you know, I’m a virgin and I have been in love with you since the beginning of sophomore year. And I guess… That’s me.” “Wow. Well now I know who I’m in love with.” He kissed me again. At this point I was wearing a nothing on top but a blanket and everything was on the bottom. I grabbed my bag and pulled out a deck of cards. “Want to play gin?” I asked, “I’ve never played.” he confessed “Then this will be fun! What about strip gin?” “Okay, It can’t be too hard, I guess.” I taught him how to play. (IF you aren’t familiar with gin see http://www.pagat.com/rummy/ginrummy.html) “Okay so we will play a couple hands, and if you lose you take off an article of clothing. In the end whoever has the most points gets to be the other’s “master” until we get off the plane” We played 7 rounds: 1: W- lost shirt 2: W- lost pants 3: V- lost pants 4: W- lost shoes and socks 5: V- lost shoes and socks 6: V- lost ponytail holder and ribbon (had to fight for that to count) 7: V- lost blanket Walker surprisingly won, and we were both in under wear only- his plaid boxers and my purple thong. He was to be my master. This couldn’t be good… I know, short chapter, sorry __________________ No, I won't Me as in Today

11-23-2010, 02:55 PM	#20
MeasinToday Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: A House Posts: 50	UPDATE: My "v" key barely works, I have to MASH it down to type- urgg takes FOREVER to write. I have been writing a lot lately, and I'm wondering: do y'all like the story and the direction its going? What do you want to see from it? I really don't want them blackmailed. What do you think? PLEASE help me, I want to make this story great! PLEASE comment with your feelings! THANK YOU! -Me as in Today __________________ No, I won't Me as in Today

11-23-2010, 03:21 PM	#21
Rachie I am the cutest butterfly ever Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: In my Bed, Posts: 6,606 Blog Entries: 2	Owwww STRIP GIN lol (may have to get an idea of this lol) Chapter is Perfect just like his perfect abs, perfect hair, perfect smiles, perfect eyes, perfect body, This is just simply perfect lol Keep up the good work- would recomend you to describe how the game has gone, quite slowly as a lot of people are still unsure how to play and if you have altered any rules etc. Is he faking the fact he dosent now how to play, or is he terrible Love Rachie x x x __________________ RACHIE'S GETDARE USER GUIDE / MANUAL STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST (Story) BED HABITS LOLA.FOX WISHES SHE WAS MY FAVORITE USER <3

11-22-2010, 02:27 PM	#17
rchard2scout Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 12	I love it! Please don't let it die! I do think the characters might need a bit more development...

11-23-2010, 03:41 PM	#22
2horny2sexy Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: India Posts: 24	Don't worry.... You are going pretty fine... Just give some time for a thought and carry on.... You ll make a good story.. __________________ Loves to be sub... Likes: orgasm denial, bondage, pain, bathroom control, ice, toothpaste May do: soft anal, cum eating, pee, enema, shaving, messy Don't like: long time dares. Limits: Poo, involving other people, permanent.

11-23-2010, 06:00 PM	#23
firenight getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: mi Posts: 370	go on please hopeing for more

11-23-2010, 10:05 PM	#24
MeasinToday Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: A House Posts: 50	Chapter 6 Chapter 6 Friday, 4:34am I was lucky, the plane was landing at 5am and everyone was waking up. Walker re-dressed and gave me my blanket. He put some sort of fabric over my eyes so I couldn’t see. I felt my thong slowly be pulled down. I was glad I had shaven the night before. I felt warm fingers reach back up my legs and slowly reach up towards my thighs. Then he slowly but swiftly put 2 fingers in. He slid them in, and out, and in, and out until I was almost there- then he stopped. I whimpered. After about 30 seconds he started again and stopped. He did it one more time and stopped again. He pulled his fingers to my lips and whispered “Open” I opened my mouth as he stuck his fingers in. I licked his fingers clean. He took off the blindfold and said, “You’re done” as he smiled at me. I kissed him and began to re-dress. He helped me dress, and hook my bra, which was helpful for me as well as a positive for him. The pilot announced 15 minutes to landing. I looked at him with a devilish grin, grabbed his pants and yanked them down. Before he could protest I grabbed his “junk” and gave him a quick hand job. Right before he came, I grabbed the barf bag in the seat pocket and let him do his stuff in that. We didn’t need a mess on the plane. He laughed when he was through and ran his fingers through my hair and said “She’s smart too.” He kissed my lips and smiled before helping me pack up my bag. I was so happy. I was in love. “I love you.” He said. Could he read my mind? I grabbed him, pulled him close, and kissed him again. “I love you too.” And, I really did. __________________ No, I won't Me as in Today

11-24-2010, 12:52 PM	#25
firenight getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: mi Posts: 370	more please but make each chapter long its to short

11-24-2010, 02:38 PM	#26
MeasinToday Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: A House Posts: 50	Sorry, I like writing lots of short ones vs. few long ones __________________ No, I won't Me as in Today

11-24-2010, 10:18 PM	#27
MeasinToday Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: A House Posts: 50	By the way, I have no idea why there is a cross on the title, I had a star there and somehow it changed.. I dont know... __________________ No, I won't Me as in Today

11-25-2010, 11:08 PM	#28
MeasinToday Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: A House Posts: 50	Sorry guys, but it will probably be a LONG time until I get to writing again, SO busy. Sorry! I will finish though... eventually... __________________ No, I won't Me as in Today

11-26-2010, 09:38 AM	#29
black out Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: colorado Posts: 84	good imagination, i like where it is going and how it gives good backround. overall a pretty dam good story __________________ likes: masterbaition, cross dressing ok with: anal, piss, refuses to do: shit, family, public, illegal i am a male Leadership is not magnetic personality—that can just as well be a glib tongue. It is not "making friends and influencing people"—that is flattery. Leadership is lifting a person's vision to higher sights, the raising of a person's performance to a higher standard, the building of a personality beyond its normal limitations.

11-29-2010, 06:09 PM	#30
misspiggy7 Account Banned Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Not sure, there's a wheel, and a nozzle i lick for water, and lots of wood shavings to snuggle in Posts: 142	i love it! it moves slowly enough not to rush, but quickly enough to stay interesting. He's so great! i love that he stands up for her (mostly because the Trevor I know is just like the one in the story!) PLEASE WRITE __________________ LIKES: pee, pantie stuffing, wedgies, semi-public with small chance of getting caught I RANDOMLY burst into dance, so of you don't mind that, I don't mind you laughing at me! My name? all I know is that it isn't "Hell" "Stacy" "her" "Jane" "Quiet Girl" or "Mary Jo Lisa" My saxophone's name is Lewis! RAWR IMA EAT YOU