Old 07-15-2014, 11:07 AM   #1
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I've always just read the stories but i finally got some good ideas for one so i hope you enjoy mine!


my name is Anastasia, and no 50 shades of grey was not based on me. So don't ask.My parents kicked me out when i was 16. I'm 18 now and I live with my friend Vicky. But i have a secret side to me.... that only she knows about.But one day a man i don't know brushes past me and as he walks by he whispers "i know your secret" into my ear. i freeze and turn around seeing him look back and give me a devilish smirk. Who is he? And how did he find out?


hope you enjoyed the teaser ill have the first chapter up soon!
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Old 07-15-2014, 01:33 PM   #2
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hope you enjoyed the teaser ill have the first chapter up soon!
"Soon". How soon is that? S = 19th alphabet character, twice an O = 2 times 15 makes 30 and N = 14. All summed up is 63. 63 Hours, or maybe 63 days? Or maybe the clue is hidden in your name, which means 277 minutes later. That could be possible, because right now only ... minutes passed by.

Actually, instead of finding out when your story begins, I want to be surprised. Maybe tomorrow, maybe the day after that or maybe even a week later. When will you post the story? Kinda exciting, don't you think?

What could her secret be? Maybe she has a secret stash of money beneath her bed. Or, or, or, maybe... she secretly has a boyfriend and that man was his father. Who knows.

I'm looking forward to hear more.
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Old 07-15-2014, 06:36 PM   #3
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"Soon". How soon is that? S = 19th alphabet character, twice an O = 2 times 15 makes 30 and N = 14. All summed up is 63. 63 Hours, or maybe 63 days? Or maybe the clue is hidden in your name, which means 277 minutes later. That could be possible, because right now only ... minutes passed by.

Actually, instead of finding out when your story begins, I want to be surprised. Maybe tomorrow, maybe the day after that or maybe even a week later. When will you post the story? Kinda exciting, don't you think?

What could her secret be? Maybe she has a secret stash of money beneath her bed. Or, or, or, maybe... she secretly has a boyfriend and that man was his father. Who knows.

I'm looking forward to hear more.
haha just wait and see but i love you enthusiasm idk when but soon
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Old 07-16-2014, 06:56 AM   #4
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This is way too short. Write more please.
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