06-08-2015, 11:16 PM | #1 |
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Coming Home
(First short story, augh)
I was already excited for tonight. My master and I had texted each other whenever he could sneak it in at work. It had been a stressful day for him, and being horny all day hadn't helped that. We'd only been in a relationship for two weeks. I'd never tried bdsm before him, and was still in training. Even though I tried my best, progress seemed slow. Today, he wanted to come home to a nice surprise waiting for him. This was my chance to impress him. I started about an hour before he'd be home. My idea was to be tied up nice for him, already tired from struggling (one of his complaints was that I struggled too much), and be ready for him to take me to the bedroom or fuck me right there, whatever he wished. At that point I'd be weaker and easier to drag around. to be continued (when it isn't so damn early)
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06-08-2015, 11:21 PM | #2 |
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You've got a good start. Perhaps a bit more character development, as we know little to nothing about "I".
Otherwise, keep it up.
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06-08-2015, 11:32 PM | #3 |
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Thank you for the advice! I've never done something like this before, so I'm kind of learning as I go. The encouragement means a lot!
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20/female Likes: Self bondage, light pain, spanking, sensory deprivation, gagged, nipple play, forced orgasms, teased, being helpless Dislikes (for punishment): some pain, orgasm denial, anal, longer than a 2 hours Limits: Excessive pain, other people, long time (4+ hours), toothpaste/icy hot/etc, public, eating, anything messy/gross, photos, personal info toys: clit vibe, 6in dildo vibe, soundproof headphones, blindfold, tape |
06-09-2015, 12:18 AM | #4 |
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Great start, keep going
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06-09-2015, 11:48 AM | #5 | |
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To read 5 or 6 sentenc full of information about a character is very boring :-/ |
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