Jess and Taylor - Page 2

anon06923 · 02-18-2014, 11:07 AM

This is a seriously amazing read. Keep it up!

Ethan2cu · 02-18-2014, 01:17 PM

yes, it is quite the read. Very detailed and thorough. very enjoyable.

jklivin · 02-19-2014, 12:48 AM

Wow... Great update loving this turn of events.

anon06923 · 02-28-2014, 08:35 AM

Requesting more! Hope you are able to write more soon.

jklivin · 02-28-2014, 09:40 AM

I loved this last chapter hope more is in the works

bdsmchick · 02-28-2014, 09:24 PM

Very good story.

deswill · 03-20-2014, 07:25 PM

This is the last chapter in this story because i am getting a little bored with it and started to lose interest so i will be starting a new story soon.

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As Jess and Taylor stood there in the middle of the room waiting for the girls to finish their conversation Taylor reached over to Jess and proceeded to hold her hand and gave her a little kiss on her cheek.

Once the girls had finished Kim walked over to the old cupboard and gathered all their clothes and placed them into two plastic shopping bags and tying the tops. “Ok girls there is only one more task and you are members of our club” Kim said as she handed the bags with their clothes in it to another girl on a bike then she road off leaving them scared and naked.

Kim proceeded to tell them “all you have to do is go to the park naked and your clothes will be under the bushes near the toilet block. Now run before I make you do other tasks as well”.

It was just after dark so Jess and Taylor hurried out of the clubhouse and picked up their bikes for their short ride to the park. They both knew nobody was around that time of night and they were making the most of the opportunity of having the cold wind on their naked bodies as they both rode to the park and found their bags and got dressed.

As they finished getting dressed Taylor picked up a note that was in the bag and read it aloud. It said Welcome new members we enjoyed your initiation and now you are full members. We will see you soon and go horse riding.
Taylor and Jess were excited about being new members and talked about it all the way back to their house.

THE END.

anon06923 · 03-22-2014, 03:53 AM

Thanks for wrapping it up, at least. Though I think is might have been the hottest story I've ever read. thanks again.

molten man · 07-25-2014, 09:30 AM

Sad that you decided to end it abruptly.. It was a certainly good story one which had pontential..

I do wish someone takes this up and tries to complete..

02-18-2014, 11:07 AM	#16
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02-18-2014, 01:17 PM	#17
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02-28-2014, 08:35 AM	#19
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02-28-2014, 09:24 PM	#21
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03-20-2014, 07:25 PM	#22
deswill Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Posts: 92	This is the last chapter in this story because i am getting a little bored with it and started to lose interest so i will be starting a new story soon. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- As Jess and Taylor stood there in the middle of the room waiting for the girls to finish their conversation Taylor reached over to Jess and proceeded to hold her hand and gave her a little kiss on her cheek. Once the girls had finished Kim walked over to the old cupboard and gathered all their clothes and placed them into two plastic shopping bags and tying the tops. “Ok girls there is only one more task and you are members of our club” Kim said as she handed the bags with their clothes in it to another girl on a bike then she road off leaving them scared and naked. Kim proceeded to tell them “all you have to do is go to the park naked and your clothes will be under the bushes near the toilet block. Now run before I make you do other tasks as well”. It was just after dark so Jess and Taylor hurried out of the clubhouse and picked up their bikes for their short ride to the park. They both knew nobody was around that time of night and they were making the most of the opportunity of having the cold wind on their naked bodies as they both rode to the park and found their bags and got dressed. As they finished getting dressed Taylor picked up a note that was in the bag and read it aloud. It said Welcome new members we enjoyed your initiation and now you are full members. We will see you soon and go horse riding. Taylor and Jess were excited about being new members and talked about it all the way back to their house. THE END. __________________ My ad looking for a slave. http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=183098

02-19-2014, 12:48 AM	#18
jklivin getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2012 Location: Indiana Posts: 450	Wow... Great update loving this turn of events.

02-28-2014, 09:40 AM	#20
jklivin getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2012 Location: Indiana Posts: 450	I loved this last chapter hope more is in the works

03-22-2014, 03:53 AM	#23
anon06923 Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 68	Thanks for wrapping it up, at least. Though I think is might have been the hottest story I've ever read. thanks again. __________________ 22,m. bi-Straight Accepting the next 5 PM dares! PM me EDGE and a number and I'll do that many edges Likes: being instructed/controlled, masturbating, joi, edging, minor public, mild embarrassment/humiliation Limits/dislikes: permanent/dangerous, blood/scat/piss, face pics/social suicide/family, illegal, extreme pain, messy, moderate humiliation, moderate embarrassment, moderate public, cam/pics I don't have any toys, but I want a chastity device. Skype: anon06923

07-25-2014, 09:30 AM	#24
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