My fucking hot babysitter

[storymaester]

Please tell me what to fix and what you want


"mom im 15 i dont need a babysitter"
" i dont care now you will listen to her"
Dingdong
"ah shes here open the door for her"
I unwillingly go to the door and open it for her
"hello" i said like an annoyed teen
but then i figured something out.
there she stood in a pink tight sweater and black tight jog pants with the perfect smile and blond hair
"Hi"
i stirred my throat and tried to play it cool and hung by the door
"oh can i go in"
"of course sorry" i said with my voice cracking,
she giggled,and walked past me with a jiggiling ass that i could follow of a clif
fucking hell i thought to my self.
ah Cindy your here, pleasure to meet you"
"nice to meet you to"
"well you two have fun"


to be continued

[itsFuzzz]

Go back over it and check for things you have not spelled correctly. Look into your punctuation and for areas where you could maybe make things a little longer. You don't have to go directly into the action, you can take a bit of time to put some detail into it. Where are your parents going, who you are and what you look like, the name of your babysitter and his/her name and what he/she looks like. It's the small things that you don't think would help, but a good story starts with the small things like all of that.

[storymaester]

thanks great tips backstory will happen in the future

[storymaester]

"well Mark what do you want for dinner"
i just stood there with my mouth wide open
"ohhhhh"
"hello, Mark are you there" she snapped her fingers in front of my eyes
"oh yes yes, oh mom prepared soup"
"ok then lets get some"
We walked to the kitchen me slouching and following her tight ass, she took her sweater, off and put it on her chair reveling her beautifully tanned skin. Of course the first thing i did was start staring at her cleavage.
she whistles "hey horny, dont watch tits while eating"
"i wasnt "
"yeah your eye just happend to bend 30° and stop there" she stands up and bends over the table
"look im staring 60° down not at your crotch i just want to watch 60° down, not at your crotch just down there in that general area. oh is wittle Horny blushing maybe wittle hard (she said in a baby voice)
she sat down again gloating to both ears.
"sorry"
"its ok you were just staring 30° down "
"hey you stared at my crotch "
"no i would never,(she said with an innocent face, i chuckle)
so Horny do you have a girl or do you just watch tits"
"maybe i do maybe i dont "
"thats a no then"
i awkwardly try to ignore her while she just gloated, short time later i started feeling something stroking my leg and then i felt it, her leg was touching my dick,it was ticklish wich made me accidentally kick back, making her spill her soup.
"you fucking idiot!!!, hot, hot ,hot fuck i got to change."
I started banging my head against the table immediately,
"you fucking idiot a hot fucking babysitter started stroaking your dick with her foot " i mumbled on the table

[Wills]

Please write more I am enjoying this

[storymaester]

do you want this story to good or bad for Mark

[BlaBlaBlubb]

I say good. After all these rape and humiliation and forced/blackmail stories I would like to read a happy story in between. ^^

[Wills]

Originally Posted by BlaBlaBlubb

I say good. After all these rape and humiliation and forced/blackmail stories I would like to read a happy story in between. ^^

I agree I would like to see the story go well for him.

[storymaester]

k it is decided next part goes up tomorrow sry for the wait i didn't want to choose something that wouldnt be well accepted

[storymaester]

I think i can hear my dick screaming idiot i scream a muffled scream on the table, i turn my head as i hear the sound of a shower turning on. Should i go to her try and make her forgive me. she must be willing to forgive me i mean she was willing to touch my dick she must be willing to forgive me, right?

"Mark!! can you come in here!!!"

I jump up immediately my dick soon follows, i run to the bathroom, blast trough hard as hell, and the first thing that is pointing, straight towords me as she is bending over to pick something up see is her butt .I see her petite elegantly tanned butt, shining in front of me blessing me with its holy grace. That is the ass of a perfect 19 year old so elegantly curved and beautiful not a big but the perfect size and right in front me, my first and most beautiful ass that i have seen and will see and i mean it was beautiful in tights but wow.

"oh yes"i mouthed please turn around turn around i felt my dick pressing so tightly against my jeans, as if it was about to pop out.

then it it happend she turned around and blessed me with her holy tits and cutely trimmed vagina.
Somewhere between a b and c breast high up pointing straight towards me young and firm.
i stare there gawking like an idiot not relizing that she is pissed as fuck at me. i get disrupted by a slap in the face.

" what the fuck are you doing in here!!!"
"oh mub oh you asked me to come"
i answered like a scared litlle boy.
"yeah, but the fuck outside!!" she slapped me again,
"and stop staring at me "
"oh yes sorry"
i pretended to be covering eyes, my with a small peak hole so i could just see her tits
" your still staring!!!" she said with a squeaky voice and started beating the fuck out of my head.

"get out and clean this up!!!"
she threw her dirty t-shirt and tights.
I left smiling like fuck not even thinking about the fact that she beated the fuck out of my head.

[storymaester]

do you want more people to join in

[BlaBlaBlubb]

I vote for no. only the two of them.

[subsen]

yeah keep it at two. i want to know how the story ends

[Wills]

Keep it at two it is going well so far just like this.

[dare girl567]

more please and keep it at two I like how it's going PLEASEEE