Old 08-24-2010, 10:39 PM   #46
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:O this is 18 story jst noticed :O srry but I'm no longer gonna read this :P
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Old 08-26-2010, 11:08 AM   #47
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great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!
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Old 08-26-2010, 06:16 PM   #48
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Thanks guys. I'm sorry I havn't posted the other chapter yet,but I will soon. School has been keeping me busy.
I can promise you that I will finish this story.

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Old 08-26-2010, 08:44 PM   #49
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I hope so I really like this story alot. Please continue
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Old 08-27-2010, 11:10 AM   #50
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Old 08-30-2010, 04:58 PM   #51
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I'm now in my room, and I walk into my closet. My closet is a 337×450 walk in closet. Since Logan helped by unzipping my dress, I didn't have any problem with taking my dress off. I slid the dress,and the panty hose down, steped out of it, and kicked it against the wall. I grabbed my old karate shorts, that I bought from my martial arts teacher, and put them on. The shorts are black,on the right side of the front leg is a picture of a girl kicking(all in red), on the left side of the front is a ninja symbol,and on the back across the butt,in white letter reads "i Ninja". I then grabbed a t-shirt that James bought me,and put it on. The shirt is white,has a heart on the front that has Jack and Sally on the middle of it, right above the heart says"Togeather Forever." on it, and on the back of the shirt reads,"Nightmare Before Christmas". I then finde my flip flops that my dad gave to me,and put them on. My flip flops are LSU Tigers, purple and gold, ComfyFlops(Indoor flip flops).
I'am now dressed into my normal clothing, and feel alot better than I did before. I unlock the door to my closet, and walk out,into my room. Because I'm still mad at Jeremy I decide to stay in my room for awhile. I did't care what to consequenses were, I just wanted some time to myself for awhile. I plugged my itouch into my ihome,i selected Owl City and started playing "Vanilla Twilight", and turned up the music.
I was just going to lay down for awhile,but as I was getting on my bed,I steped on something. I looked under my bed to see what it was, and it was a photo album that my mom gave to me before she pastaway. I never actually got a chance to look at it,so I thought that maybe now would be a good time. I grabbed the photo album, and sat on my bed,laying up against me pillows.
I opened the photo album,and the first pictures I saw was a group family photo that we took infrot of our house. It was just a couple of days before I was born, because my mom and I just came home from the hospital. As I flipped pages,there were alot of pictures of Jeremy and I from when we were just babys,and continued on as we were growing up.
I kind of started to feel guilty from when I told Jeremy that I hated him. The truth is,that I would never hate him. Hes my brother,and I should be thanking him for letting me stay with him. Remembering that my dad was going to make me move-in with my Uncle who lives all the way out in Kansas,and if it wasn't for Jeremy convinving our dad to let me saty with him, I wouldn't be at where I'am now. Eventhough Jeremy can sometimes be a pain in the ass, I will always love him no matter what. I really hope he doesn't hate me for the way I've been treating him.

[Back in the living room...]

James: Logan,why did you do that. You really went too far that time.

Logan: It was just a joke.I wasn't going to really do anything to her.

James: (talking to Jeremy) So much for protecting your sister.

Jeremy: I knew that Logan was just joking around.

Logan: Yeah,shes the one that can't take a joke. Whats her problem?

James: From the way I saw it,she thought you were serious.

Logan: Whatever, I really don't care.

Jeremy: I can't believe she said,she hated me. Shes never said that to me before. I guess I may have gone too far myself.

Kaiden: Jeremy,knowing Cat she was probably just saying that out of anger.

Trey: What did she do to deserve that?

Jeremy: Its a long story.Lets just say,that she lied to me,and to my dad.

Trey: Oh.Well,I hope shes okay.

James: Yeah,it usually doesn't take her this long to change clothes.

Jeremy: I guess I'll go see if she okay. (Jeremy gets up from the couch,and starts walking to my room)

James: Can I come?

Jeremy: No,sorry. I would like to talk to her alone.

James: Oh okay.

Jeremy: I'll be right back.

Kaiden: K.

Still in my room laying on my bed,looking at the photo album. "Vanilla Twilight" was now over, and "I'll Meet You There" also by Owl City, started playing. Just as I was wishing that I could take back what I said to Jeremy, he walks into my room,closing the door behinde him.

Jeremy: Hey, are you okay?

Cathryn: I guess.
(Jeremy comes sits beside me on my bed)
Jeremy: (he sees the photo album that I'm looking at) Where did ya get that at?

Cathryn: (The way Jeremy asked,made it seem like I wasn't suppose to have it,and it made me kind of nervous) I found it under my bed. Mom made this for me.

Jeremy: Oh okay,cool. Can I look at it?
(I knod my heaad yes,and hand him the photo album. He starts chuckling abit,as if the pictures were bringing him back good old family memories.)

Cathryn: Jeremy, I'm really sorry about what I said. I don't hate you,I love you.
(I give Jeremy a hug,and he wraps his arms around me)
Jeremy:I'm glad to here you say that. I love you too. (He kisses the top of my head) I'm also sorry for embarrassing you like that.

Cathryn: Its okay,I forgive you. Does this mean that I'm not grounded?

Jeremy: I guess you could say that your humiliation awhile ago,was enough punishment. So yes,your un grounded.

Cathryn: (I give Jeremy another hug,and kiss him on the cheek) Thank you.

Jeremy: You're welcome. Do you want to come back to the living room now? James is worried about you.

Cathryn: Okay, I guess I'll go.

I turnd off my ihome, and my itouch. Jeremy and I got up from my bed. He left my room waiting for my in tha hall way. I turn my lights off,and leave my room,closing the door behinde me. Jeremy and I now leave the hallway, and walk into the living room. I go sit back on the couch next to James and Trey, and Jeremy sits back down next to Kaiden.)

James: (puts his arm around me) Hey baby,you okay? (he kisses my cheek)

Cathryn: Yes,I'm fine. (I kiss Jsmes on his lips)

Kaiden: So are you still playing with us?

Cathryn: Yeah, I guess.

Kaiden: Okay. Then James,that means its your trun.

James: Okay. Logan, truth or dare?

Logan: Dare.

James: I dare you to be nice to Cathryn fo the rest of the night.

Cathryn: Yeah,lets see if thats even possible.

Logan: Fine, whatever.

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Old 09-06-2010, 08:36 PM   #52
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Don't let this die!!!!!!! Pretty please O
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Old 09-09-2010, 09:27 PM   #53
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Hey readers,I'm sorry I havn't posted another chapter yet. My laptop broke, so I probably wont be able to be back on in a while. (The reason that I'am on now is because I'm using my friend's computer.) Hopefully I'll be able to get a new computer soon. I promise that I wont let this story die,& that I will FINISH it.
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Old 09-09-2010, 09:55 PM   #54
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Don't let this die!!!!!!! Pretty please O
Lol,don't worry the story didn't die,just my laptop. The story must go on,& will continue until I'm at the end.
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Old 09-27-2010, 09:43 AM   #55
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I'm looking forward to the next part ^_^
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Old 10-01-2010, 09:55 PM   #56
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I wish you would post soon. This is one of my favorite stories at the moment, and I can't STAND waiting for the next chapter.
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Old 10-02-2010, 03:56 PM   #57
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please hurry up with the next parts i really like this story !!!
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Old 10-14-2010, 08:46 PM   #58
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So it has died??
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Old 10-15-2010, 01:16 AM   #59
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NO! it cant die! I love this Story!
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Old 10-15-2010, 03:39 AM   #60
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This is probably the best story I've read on here, please let it continue
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