Fiction: ✖✖ The Tomboy ✖ - Page 2

LadyCeleste · 04-08-2011, 11:54 AM

Another excellent addition. Very sweet and innocent thus far. I look forward to reading more of this Leo.

Krystal · 04-08-2011, 12:27 PM

Awwww cutest story ever!

Rachie · 04-08-2011, 12:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Leopard

‘Thanky, mew,

FOR WRITING ANOTHER PART

Wonder what they will get upto at home or on the bus journey?

Keep writing
and please message again when there is more

Thank You
Love Rachie
x x x x

Leopard · 04-08-2011, 12:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rachie

Wonder what they will get upto at home or on the bus journey?

Was actually thinking about keeping bus quiet, or not - haven't decided yet.

Any opinions?

Vela · 04-08-2011, 12:39 PM

That's pretty frisky ^^.

firenight · 04-08-2011, 01:21 PM

please hurry up like it

katebabe21 · 04-08-2011, 01:57 PM

great update!

wonder what they are going to do once they get to Katie's house? can't wait to find out

Star Shadows · 04-08-2011, 02:16 PM

Your story is wonderful as usual. Keep up the awesome work!
even if i did get confused by it being kate and katie, thats just cos im daft though/

fitzy · 04-08-2011, 04:58 PM

really great story leo cant wait for the rest of it

Aivey · 04-08-2011, 11:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Leopard

Was actually thinking about keeping bus quiet, or not - haven't decided yet.

Any opinions?

I'd say let them get home before doing anything more... or else it might get a bit... too sidetracked

Beautiful :3 I really like it, keep it up :3

Leopard · 04-09-2011, 12:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aivey

I'd say let them get home before doing anything more... or else it might get a bit... too sidetracked

Beautiful :3 I really like it, keep it up :3

I can't help but think that you're thinking of my other story where two girls got sidetracked for 40,000 words or so

<3 thanky for all the compliments! More soon!

elwynesgirl · 04-09-2011, 12:23 AM

I used to just lurk around the forums, but your story has made me get an account cuz I feel I need to say how awesome it is

G.J. · 04-09-2011, 02:47 AM

This story is FANTASTIC, it's so superbly written. I'm envious of your ability to write so beautifully.

You could use the bus journey to develop the characters even further, expanding on the cutesy chemistry that they've got going on!

ShinyDemon · 04-09-2011, 04:54 AM

Absolutely astoundingly excellent ! These aren't three words you could usually string together, however it seems the only fitting way of summing up this story so far !

ffgamer · 04-12-2011, 03:36 PM

great story cant wait for the next part i wonder what will be done at home

04-08-2011, 11:54 AM	#16
LadyCeleste Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 173 Blog Entries: 5	Another excellent addition. Very sweet and innocent thus far. I look forward to reading more of this Leo. __________________ Psychological Domme Confidence 101 I will NOT under any circumstance dom you. I will not punish your slave/submissive for you. I DO NOT PARTICIPATE IN TORD. I AM NOT HERE FOR THAT. DO NOT ASK.

04-08-2011, 12:27 PM	#17
Krystal getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: U.S.A Posts: 349 Blog Entries: 10	Awwww cutest story ever! __________________ dumdadoodadee ♥♥♥ My FormSpring ♥♥♥

04-08-2011, 12:39 PM	#20
Vela getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: In your socks. eatin' your lint. Posts: 398	That's pretty frisky ^^. __________________ rawwwr.

04-08-2011, 02:16 PM	#23
Star Shadows Prodigy Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Uk Posts: 4,707 Blog Entries: 13	Your story is wonderful as usual. Keep up the awesome work! even if i did get confused by it being kate and katie, thats just cos im daft though/ __________________ Do not ask me for to be your slave, your mistress, or to give you truths or dares. You're wasting your time. Informative threads: Anonymous S/M advice service Threads of note PM MEGET S/M ADVICE WORSHIPS RACHIE**

04-08-2011, 04:58 PM	#24
fitzy getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: ireland Posts: 297	really great story leo cant wait for the rest of it __________________ Likes: masturbation, humiliation, piss, light pain, light bondage limits:family , major pain, permenant, shaving, public,poo i have been a very naughty boy and deservie to be punished

04-08-2011, 01:21 PM	#21
firenight getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: mi Posts: 370	please hurry up like it

04-08-2011, 01:57 PM	#22
katebabe21 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 194	great update! wonder what they are going to do once they get to Katie's house? can't wait to find out

04-09-2011, 12:23 AM	#27
elwynesgirl Baby Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Never Never Land Posts: 1	confessions of a former lurker I used to just lurk around the forums, but your story has made me get an account cuz I feel I need to say how awesome it is __________________ I'm a lesbian. What can I say? I love girls hehehehehehe I take dares but nothing public please I already have a Mistress, so don't ask. I won't send you pictures or video chat with you.

04-09-2011, 02:47 AM	#28
G.J. getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Ireland Posts: 289	This story is FANTASTIC, it's so superbly written. I'm envious of your ability to write so beautifully. You could use the bus journey to develop the characters even further, expanding on the cutesy chemistry that they've got going on! __________________ Likes: Wedgies, Underwear, Bladder Control, Putting Things in Underwear, Wetting, Orgasm Control Limits: Public, Involving Other People, Illegal, Poop, High Risk of Getting Caught, Extreme Pain, Anal, Too Messy, Cross-dressing Internet married to meeacaroline as of 12:08:33 am GMT on June 1st 2011

04-09-2011, 04:54 AM	#29
ShinyDemon getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 277	Absolutely astoundingly excellent ! These aren't three words you could usually string together, however it seems the only fitting way of summing up this story so far ! __________________ Check out my stories... Sister's Sleepover - T or D - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=11496 COMPLETE Sister's Sleepover - The Sequel - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=28060 COMPLETE Sister's Sleepover - The Sub Plot - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=31635 COMPLETE Sister's Sleepover - The Trilogy Concludes - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=107154 - IN PROGRESS

04-12-2011, 03:36 PM	#30
ffgamer getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 287	great story cant wait for the next part i wonder what will be done at home __________________ Likes: Age play, Pet play, orgasm denial,Cross dressing,pee maybe more. dislikes: Public, pain, family, anal, scat, messy