[Fiction] ♱ The Girl With Ribbons In Her Hair

[MeasinToday]

Chapter 1

Thursday, 5: 46am
I couldn't believe it was here already. I still was in shock that it could happen. A Cruise! I'd never been on one before, especially with school peers. I had no idea who had signed up, but I knew it would be fun. I pulled on my jeans, a purple tank, and put on some cute sandals. I put my hair up in a ponytail with a dark/ light purple striped ribbon. I love wearing ribbons. I put in my contacts, brushed my teeth, quickly checked my email, and logged onto get dare. I had been a user for a short while now. I didn’t like doing dares, or being a slave/ master, I just liked roaming around the site. It had been a week since my sophomore year ended, and I loved relaxing. My parents insisted I go on this trip; they were really big supporters of me seeing the world.
Knock Knock
I slammed my laptop shut and flew to my hairbrush and pretended to be brushing my ponytail.
“Come in” I said loudly
“Good morning sweetie. Are you ready?”
“Yes Mom, I’ve been packed for 4 days.”
“I’m going to miss you honey.”
“Me too, Mom” I lied. I couldn’t wait to get out. My parents are way over protective.

“We need to leave in 10 minutes, bring your stuff downstairs. Do you need help?”
“I’m fine Mom. Be down in a sec.”
“I love you.” She said on her way out.
“I love you too Mom.”

I wondered who would be on the trip. I wondered whom I would sit by. Where would my room be? Would HE be there? He. Walker. My life long love, Walker. I hoped he would. If he were, the next month I’d be spending on a boat would be a LOT more interesting.
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There's Chapter One! Hoped you liked it! Chapter 2 Comming soon!

[BettyBoop]

This sounds like something I'll like, I love first hand stories from a teenage girls POV, I find I can relate to them and this sounds like it has great potential.
I hope you carry on.

[MeasinToday]

Thank you so much! I <3 your storiess so that means a lot to me coming from you!

[firenight]

good can not wait for more

[MeasinToday]

Chapter 2

Thursday, 9:04am
“I will be passing out boarding passes when we get on the tram” Miss. Hill announced as we piled on the escalator. As we walked toward the tram I looked at our group. There was Sara and Sadie. They were both in my math class last year. They were pretty, but nothing special. They were like chocolate and vanilla; Sadie with dark hair, dark eyes, and Sara vice versa. Sadie was moved down a class for failing, and Sara moved up to a higher level, both in the middle of sophomore year. I couldn’t wait for next year, junior year. I was smart, and made good grades but I hated science. It was my worst grade. It wasn’t a bad grade, just my worst. I saw Brandon, Trevor and Mark. They were nice and good athletes; everyone at school knew them. I saw some other girls and boys, mostly strangers. I didn’t know many people around school. We piled on the tram.
“Concourse C is our stop!” Shouted Miss. Hill. She was stressed, that poor lady. She was a pretty, young teacher. I don’t think she wanted to be a teacher, I think her parents wanted her to be a teacher. She was too young to worry about all of us, she needed to figure herself out first.
“Hold on!”
I ignored her; I had to worry about my bag first.
SCREACH
The tram started and I toppled over onto someone. Everyone laughed at me.
“I’m so sorry-“ I turned; It was HIM. Walker. His mesmerizing blue eyes stared down at me. He put a hand down to help me up.
“Are you ok?” His deep voice took over me. I couldn’t talk. I opened my mouth but my throat was too dry to talk.
“I’m Walker, I don’t think we’ve met.”
I could’ve told him I’d known that for years and we were going to have an outdoor wedding by the sea, but instead, I chose the shorter answer:
“Walker? I’m Vivian. Nice to meet you”
“The pleasure is mine.” He smiled. He had perfect teeth too.
“Vivian, Walker, your boarding passes” Miss. Hill interrupted
33- C
“I’m 33-B,” He said nonchalantly
I screamed inside. This was going to be an AMAZING month

Thursday, 9:46am
“Good morning and welcome aboard.” The pilot mumbled through the speaker.
Walker sat by me in the back. We were all alone back there. I couldn’t stand it. I couldn’t believe this was happening.
“I’m going to take a little nap,” He yawned, “care to join me?”
“Sounds like a plan” I smiled
I watched him fall asleep and smiled to myself. I thought about all my fantasies about him, and the long plane ride we had ahead.
Then, I slowly let my thoughts drift and my eyes close…



Hope you liked it! PLEASE COMMENT OR GIE ME FEEDBACK!

Until next time,

[1nesself]

Fun story. I'd like to hear more about what happens betwen them.

[MeasinToday]

Trust me, IT will.

[The Judge]

excellent structure and timing. keep it up

[MeasinToday]

Thank You! Ch 3 soon!

[MeasinToday]

Chapter 3

Thursday, 10:47pm

I opened my eyes. It was dark outside the plane. How could I have slept so long? Everyone on the plane was asleep. I looked over and saw Walker staring at me.
“Good afternoon, Sleeping Beauty.”
I blushed. He was perfect. Everything about him was perfect.
“How was your sleep?”
“Good. How long have you been awake?” I asked
“Long enough to hear you sleep talk.”
My eyes got as big as coconuts.
“Um, what did I say?”
He chuckled, “Enough.” Walker winked at me.
I froze. What did I say? I grabbed my bag and started rummaging through it. I pretended to look for something, but I was really trying not to look at him.
“It’s okay! He said, as his hand raised my chin to look at him. Walker leaned closer and whispered in my ear,
“I feel the same way.” He pulled me in and kissed my lips. I couldn’t believe it. We kissed for at least 7 minutes. I’d kissed a guy before, but it wasn’t this amazing. He slowly pulled away
“Want to know what else you said in your dreams?”
Then, I remembered. I had dreamed of us playing truth or dare on the plane.
“Truth or dare?” He asked with a smile
“Dare” I risked
If only I had known what was coming next…


PLEASE HELP ME THINK OF GOOD DARES Y'ALL!

[MeasinToday]

Thanks, any dare ideas? I don't want him to be mean, no blackmail or s/m, but any just fun naughty dares?

[Rachie]

Nice story. If you are stuck just brain storm all ideas you can think of eg messy, toy, bondage, slave, master, blackmail, horror, suprize, sweet, lazy etc etc.

Then just pick a few of these and let the story flow.

Other than that pick things you are interested in or read what others fantasies are. People often like to put themself in your characters positions.

Hope this helps

love rachie
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[maddy09]

This story seems like it will be good, you have had h good start. And if i was in that position I would have picked dare too. lmao

[MeasinToday]

Thank y'all for the ideas, Next Chapter soon

[MeasinToday]

Hope to have chapter 4 up tonight, we'll see...